Twinj 3shot: Controlling Desires part 3b page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

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amazing update Ian ☺️ it was hot

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Amazing part ian
Omg bathroom scene was too funny
Kunj convo with bebe was hillarious
I think both twinj will lose the bet no one will win

Thanx Anam

Glad u liked it

U will have to wait and see what happens not revealing anything yet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: RukkEe
Awesome update,Ian. Can't wait for the next one 😊

Thanx dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: 3dancelover
Thanks for the update
Bathroom scenes were lovely and hilarious 😆. Especially with Bebe and Yuvi
Awaiting ur next part

Ur welcome dear

Glad u liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Zawra
Ian yar its awesome... loved loved it specialy bathroom scene...😳
Sory for being late aj hi dono chap pary hain... u rocked my girl
Next update plzzz😆

Thanx Zawra bathroom scene to apna highlight tha na lol

Thank you so much sweetie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Ian uff...this story has my heart racing.
It is fantastic. I really want to see this happening in the show and Chapter 2 had me blushing😳
Great job honey👏

So glad to hear that

Thank you so much

How I would kill to see this happening in the show it would be dream come true

Sidmine chemistry will rock this scene

Thankyou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Aalina.
Where is part 3?
Dhere dhere mar rhi hai..ek sath mar de

Shirtless kunji only in towel..mere gutter mind ke ghode daur rhe hai..

Ian... Amazing yar.

Itna asaan nahi Aalina

This is slow torture. Waisay bhi u deserve it lol

Let ur horses run freely.dont tie your imagination. Don't forget wet kunj in towel lol

Thanx

Glad u liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: mahadev07
Funny update
Loved it!!!!
Cont. Soon

Thanx dear.

Will do

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
amazing update Ian ☺️ it was hot

Thanx jerry.

Abhi to next update ka wait karo it's gonna be slow burn romance for u guys and twinj aswell

I plan to fully torture u all

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Ian! Coffin chod tu mujhe seedha seedha dafna de kahi!

Christmas ke liye kya kya socha tha and now i'm good for nothing, like cherry says... Kunj stammering while talking to bebe was hilarious! And karate champion wala line toh i could actually imagine him say 🤣

Kitna amazing tha yeh.. I was just half way through the chapter when i had to stop reading and pace my heart... It was insanely fast, for a moment i thought it'll rip open my chest and fall out.. Thats the effect this part had on me..

Dekh ian abhi tak shaadi bhi nahi hui meri.. Reham kar.. Abhi shaheed mat kar mujhe...

P.s i love you 🤗

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