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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice update

usha is so nice here
thanks for the update
eagerly waiting for the next update

Thnx sooo much bro😊
Yup usha seems nice here
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: kusharberry

awesome update

precap seems scary
hope both twinj reunites soon
thanks for the pm dear😊

Thank u soo much lina chechi😊
Really ??? Is it scary?? I was thinking wht an idiot precap i gave...poor me
Didi actually saying we forumwasis r very sensitive about twinj cant bear anything bad happening to them...
They will reunite soon in present but i have got to mention the past 😛😉
U r welcome😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
It was beautiful...
The bonding between usha and twinkle.😳
Worry for the precap😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
awesome update
i am excited for next part
pls update soon
sorry for late comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Zawra

It was beautiful...

The bonding between usha and twinkle.😳
Worry for the precap😲

Thnx didi😊
Something should happen for the story to continue...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

awesome update
i am excited for next part
pls update soon
sorry for late comments

Thank u sooo much didi😊
Sure will update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Read both chapter dear, loved it beatifully written.
Part one was so emotional , hope the will unite soon.
liked the scene between usha and twinkle . Do continue soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: hailly

Read both chapter dear, loved it beatifully written.
Part one was so emotional , hope the will unite soon.
liked the scene between usha and twinkle . Do continue soon.
Thanks for pm.

THNX SOO MUCH😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
AFTER CENTURIES I AM BACK WITH AN UPDATE😆😆😆

CHAPTER : 3

THE BEGINNING:

Twinkle, puttar jaldi aa,sir ne kuch bhej diya he,leela called out.Abhi aayi maa,she replied...she took the steps downstairs.We can now see twinkle in a black tracksuit...she came running and took the package...
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twinkle puttar,tum itne pareshaan kyu lag rahe ho???leela asked.kuch nahi maa ,bas thoda aur mehnat lagaana padega,twinkle answered,with clear determination shown in her eyes.tum chintha mat kar,saara sach bohoth jald saamne aayega,leela supported.maa mujhe abhi office jaana hai,bohoth saari kaam hai jinhe poora karna behath zaroori hai,twinkle said.leela was about to interrupt,par twinkle...puttar.maa mei naashta baahar se kar loongi aap fikar mat karo,she convinced her.tike hai puttar tu jaa aur apna dhyan rakk..wahe guru ji sab teek kar dega,leela gave in.jee maa,she reassured her.twinkle took her blessings and went out,she got into her tavera and drove off to the office...
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she assured herself that she could do it while driving the car back home...a screech of brakes could be heard.ohh.god damn it!!!twinkle said annoyed.as expected the duties and responsibilities of a citizen evoke in her.she opened the door and rushed to the needy and hospitalized him.there was nothing too serious just two stitches on the forehead.she had informed the police by then and had filed a case against him for not wearing a helmet and following traffic rules.the man had just opened his eyes and right infront of him he saw the most beautiful sight.twinkle was busy answering to the police.she is breathtaking, he whispered.his eyes were glued onto her.excuse me,twinkle said clearing her throat.ohh..ya,he just made some sounds indicating her to continue.i just wanted to say that you have to pay the fine for not following rules,mister...i dont know ur name,twinkle said in an serious yet enchanting voice.YUVRAJ..he replied still not removing his eyes from her.ok mr.yuvraj,..ermm.you have not followed the rules so my inferference was necessary..and i hope you understand.and just one more thing be careful next time.he couldnt help but look at her face .the doctor was about to call twinkle for something but he stopped.anything else ,doctor??twinkle enquired.i just wanted to inform that there are no more complications,he can be discharged,he said.twinkle could sense something but left it.thank you doctor,she said with a smile .she went out of the room ,yuvraj followed her and said to her in a very sweet tone ,thank you for coming in my life..he got lost her in her eyes.what???she asked with a jerk.i meant..ermm..that because of you my life got saved.he replied coming back to his senses.ohhh...i see,twinkle replied with a wide smile over her lips.She made her way out..by the time he paid the fine and settled the hospital bill and rushed behind her.ek minute ke liye rukh jayiye plss,he shouted from behind .twinkle was about to open her car's door hearing him she turned back.ab kya hua??she asked.may i know your name??he asked.twinkle gave it a thought and replied,TWINKLE...Ms.TWINKLE TANEJA,she gave him a smile and drove off.
He repeated her name,TWINKLE...and smiled to himself


PRECAP : Yuvraj and twinkle meets in the park.


NOTE : UV THE PAGAL IS THERE IN MY STORY PLZZ COOPERATE
THE DOTS INDICATES THAT THERE ARE SOME SCENES(NOT 3 OR 4 DOTS,THOSE R SIMPLY SHOWN FOR CONTINUATION)

PLZZ DONT THROW ANY ROTTEN TOMATOES


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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice update...but off course I'm a little bit mad.
Mujhe kissi bhi haal pe mera Twinj chahiye.
Keep Yuvi as long as Twinj is endgame.
I trust you and you better not break that.
Nahi toh I'll hunt you down.🤣
Sorry yaar. Pagalpan thoda zyada ho gaya. 😳
I have a habbit of being too dramatic.
Anways lovely story.
Will be waiting for the next chapter.
Plzzz update soon.
Thnx for the PM

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