twinj ff Deal done..... part 1 pg 2

ambishika thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
prologue

46 boys ..
..yes i twinkle taneja here is sitting in this hell n heaven restro to meet the 47 boy...
a suitable groom for me.why mom cant understand i dont want to marry...i just hope this guy also reject me..
.*u all must be wondering ki why i want the guy to reject me... i love some one.. my yuvraaj.. but he has complete his studies n do job for which he has to go to london for next 3 years...n i cant tell mom abt our relationship bcz he is moms enemies son.. here i am agaian waiting forthis dumb guy whi is by the way late...*****


kunj look at hell n heaven restro..
.so here is the girl whom i have to reject... gosh i ahte doing to all girls but how can i agree when i love alisha...but for her right now her modelling career is imp... i wished how much i loved her she did same...but kya karrn... chalo kunj beta to reject another girl...

but what they both dint knew was destiny had something else for them...this hell n heaven restro bar will make there life hell n heaven together...
Edited by ambishika - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

10

Views

4.6k

Users

8

Likes

18

Frequent Posters

ambishika thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
index.

part 1 ... pg 2
Edited by ambishika - 9 years ago
Sherni_Jerry thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
this is amazing
continue soon
hailly thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Interesting start, Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
Iansomer1 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Interesting start plz continue son
Heaven and he'll concept was nice
ambishika thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
PART 1

Twinkle is sitting n waiting when a guy approaches her...

guy:hi iam shivam
twinkle gives him a beautiful smile n says hi
shiv:i am sorry that i am late. aunty told me ko u dont like late commers
twinkle:no issue
shiv:so... how are u doing?

twinkle:dekho let me be straight main tumse shaadi nhi kar sakti. i love somebody else..
.shiv starts laughing
twinkle:are i gone mad?
shiv:dekho i knew tum khuch aisa hi bologi. aunty ne mujhe warn kia tha that u dont want to marry issiliyeh u gonna lie... dekho i like u..
twinkle ::i am not lying. . wait lwt me call him n she tried yu number.. but it was switch off
shiv::kya hua cal nhi laga.. dekho twinkle u dont need to lie.. i know tum abhi shaadi ke liyeh ready nhi ho.. hum wait karlenge...
twinkle: in mind **ajeeb cheap hai.. maan hi nhi rha.. think twinkle think**,

n she saw a guy entring the restro alone...n a idea striked in her mind...
twinkle:dekho tum maan jao mera bf yahan aagya hai...
shiv::kahan hai??
twinkle:dekho woh rha...n points towards the boy...
shiv::accha call him ..how can i believe u...
twinkle::phas gyi...n goes towrds the boy... twinkle::baby.
boy:what??n thn a girl comes there...
girl :i am sorry i kept u waiting.. natasha here...
boy stands n says :hi
n the girl eye to twinkle...till then shivam also comes there...
shiv::twinkle now toh tell the truth
twinkle:i am telling u truth.. he is my bf.. just bcz main yahan tumhare sath hun iss liyeh he is here with this girl... baby tell na u love me...plzzzn
twinkle looks at the guy n mouth help me plzz
natasha:kunj is this true... issiliyeh tum milne ke liyeh itne bahane bana rhe the... seriously.. mujhe phele bol dia hota.. main aunty ko manna kardeyi... n goes frm there...
twinkle thinks so his name in kunj
twinkle:: shivam plzz beleive me.. me n kunj love each other woh kya hai na kunj family n my family dont like each other issi liyeh we have hided our relation... plzz reject me...
shiv ::looks sad.. n says to kunj take care of her...n leaves...

twinkle 48 bhi rejected yess..

.twinkle::thanks... but soryy bcz of me she rejected you...
kunj::no issue i wanted to reject her ..twinkle::why?
kunj::i love somebody elese but she need some time for her carrer...
twinkle::same meri jaisi kahani...chalo thnx for the help vaise... bye...
kunj::byee...n both goes to diff path...

but didn't know that they are gonna meet soon..

.precap::leela sees kunj twinkle...
Edited by ambishika - 9 years ago
Aalina. thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Syappa queen!!!😆😆...twinkle tere syappe no to kunj ka kaam asan kar diya.😆😆😆.wonderful.

i rok thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Nice update...Please continue soon. Wanna know more about their love story...
Duumps thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
This is very interesting.
Waiting for the next part, want to know what happens ? Is Twinkle in trouble with her mom ?
Please update soon.
.Ragini. thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
I loved it..
Too good
Do continue soon.. Siyappa queen does it again...

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".