|| TWINJ OS: Unknown paths ❤️ || Updated Part 5 Page6 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys, I will update before I sleep tonight :)
Thank you for all the lovely comments, I really appreciate them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing!!! Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As promised, Part 4


The sunrays were very bold to enter through Mr and Mrs. Sarna's windows. Kunj felt the scorching sunlight very heavy on his eyes, and tried to open his eyes but only managed a squint. He suddenly realised the position he was in and felt awkward. From Kunj's position, he could only manage to see Twinkle's gorgeous hair as she was facing him in her sleep. She had managed to turn in her sleep from where she had her back to him to facing him. Like a little baby, she was all curled up and fitted exactly in his arms. Oh the sight! Kunj didn't want to move as he knew he would wake her up, but he was also scared that she might accuse him again of something. So, he tried very hard to get up but failed.

"Hmm...why should I bother about how she wakes up when she treats me like her servant all day? She doesn't even speak nicely to me...oh what the hell?"

Kunj was facing a dilemma. His nice humanitarian side didn't want him to ruin this beautiful girl's sleep, yet the invisible husband in him wanted to treat her like she treated him - badly. His devil side took over and with a jerk, he got up dropping Twinkle off the sofa-cum-bed.

"OUCH!...What the hell...I could have died" Twinkle said looking at her husband while holding her head which she barely saved from crushing into the floor as she fell.

"Oi dramebaaz! Stop your drama! You haven't fallen from 6ft height! Even a cockroach wouldn't die from that height!" Kunj replied while grabbing the towel from his cupboard. Without saying anything further, he went to shower whilst Twinkle was still gathering her thoughts...It was too early for her to comprehend what was going on, what she had thought about last night.

"I had thought he would get pleased as I gave him a sign that I was comfortable with him. Instead he just threw me off the bed without caring about how I would feel. He is so annoying! Why did I even think I should start caring about him? Why did I think I could start treating him like a husband? This shaddi was meant to be a tashan-e-shadi so it will remain one." Twinkle also had the honest Abe on her other shoulder telling her "yeah but you promised your mom to be a good daughter in law and a wife. What about the fact Kunj has done so much for you? What about the fact he cared for you despite all your stupid actions? He cared regardless...so should you! Just give up your ego for sometime, would you?" and she was back on track. Mrs. Kunj Sarna had taken over!

Twinkle was pacing the floor as Kunj walked out wearing a towel. Just a towel. Nothing else but a towel. Twinkle stopped midway in her step as she laid her eye on kunj, who was drying his hair with another tower around his neck. Oh those white towels! Oh those water droplets falling from his face...making their way from his chest to...well ahem ahem!! Kunj's cough made Twinkle come back from her dreamland! She realised her mouth had been wide open, her eyes set tight on her husband's body and boy was her legs giving away! She was mesmerised at her own husband.

Kunj was enjoying watching Twinkle. His wife was literally gobsmacked! And he was enjoying every bit of it. He was now proud of all that time spent in the gym. This made it all worthwhile. He mentally kicked himself for contributing the worthiness of his gym to Twinkle's reaction. "Why does everything have to go back to her? Why cant anything in life be without her? Ugh!" He continued drying his hair and moving towards the cupboard to get his clothes while Twinkle also moved towards the cupboard.

As kunj's hand landed on the handle to open the door, Twinkle's hand overlapped Kunj's and as Kunj was about to object, Twinkle put her finger over his lips. She felt the wetness of those lips. He felt the warmth of her finger. they both had strong eye contact going on. Kunj felt weird as Twinkle took her finger off his lips, but he was still silent. He felt like the warmth of her finger went perfectly with his cold wet lips and he missed that sensation. He found it so weird missing something he never even knew could do something like this. Without breaking the eye contact, Twinkle bent under his arm and placed herself between Kunj and the cupboard. She placed her finger back on Kunj's lips so he wouldn't talk. The idea was for her to let it all out and let him know how she feels.


She started to speak...TBC in Part 5

Edited by pkaur92 - 9 years ago
DarkPhoenix93 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update but the cliff hanger though...
Looking forward to reading the next update and Twinkle's apology.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg plz cont. soon!!! thank u!! loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
loved it
pls cont. soon
its really amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

nice update
loved it
pls cont. soon
its really amazing


Thank you 😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NICE STORY...Keep Continuing...😊😊
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Wow
please continue soon
i would love to know the conversation
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pslove

Wow

please continue soon
i would love to know the conversation


Thank you :) Will continue sometime tonight :)

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