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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the
next update and it has the BIGGEST TWIST OF Swara S LIFE which will mark the
successful beginning of her new start I hope each one of u will like my twist
Tongue

Love-Yasmin

Chapter: 31

The plane lands in California (Los Angeles) United States

Prem, Swara, Adi and Sanjana take their first step into this
new world

Swara was totally unaware about the significance that this
place would have in her life

Like Sanjana even she was thinking that they were here for a
vaccation but Prem and Adi were waiting for the moment when they would give
Swara the biggest surprise of her life

They knew that Swara's life would take a complete U turn with
their plan and this was what both of them wanted

They had taken special care not to leak out any information
about their visit to Los Angeles to the media as none of them wanted any
unnecessary attention

There was a guy called Rox who was waiting for them at the
airport

Prem recognizes him and after some exchange of pleasantries
Rox requested them to sit in his car and from there they drive to their new
destination which was one of the most expensive resort of Los Angeles

Rox: Prem Sir all the formalities are completed; here are the
room keys the meeting is scheduled after 1hour till then u guys take some rest
and if at all there is any problem then do inform me

Prem: Thanks Rox see u after 1 hour

Rox: Sure. Take care

Prem: You too

Rox goes away from there

Prem: Swara ye tumhare aur Sanju k room k keys hai [Swara
this is the key of the room that u and Sanju would be sharing]

Swara takes the key

Swara: Prem ye Rox kis meeting ki baat kar raha tha? Tum yaha
koi business deal k liye aaye ho kya? [Prem are you here for some business meeting?]

Prem: Nahi ye meeting tumhare liye hai [No this meeting is
for u]

Swara: Kya? Par yaha meri kaunsi meeting hai? [But I don't
have any meeting over here]

Sanjana: Haan maine bhi diary mein koi meeting nahi likhi
infact mujhe toh laga tha k hum yaha chuttiyaan manane aaye hai [Yes even I
have no clue about this meeting as I have not written anything in my diary
infact I was thinking that we are here for some vacation]

Prem: Sanju jo cheez tere paas hai nahi tu uska use karne ki
koshish kyun karti hai? [Sanju why are u trying to use ur brains when u do not
have one]

Sanjana: Kya tum ye
keh rahe ho k mere paas dimag nahi hai aur aur maine tumse kitne baar kaha k
mujhe Sanju sirf mere dost bulathe hai tum toh mere dushman ho issliye tum
mujhe Sanjana hi bulau warna.. [What are u trying to tell that I am a duffer
and by the way how many times have I told u to call me Sanjana and not Sanju as
u r my enemy and not friend]

Prem: Main toh tumhe Sanju hi bulanuga kya kar logi tum [I
will continue to call u Sanju let me also see what will u do]

Sanjana was going to say something when Adi interrupted

Adi: Guys guys guys aap dono apne chuhe billi ka khel
baadmein bhi khel sakthe ho filhaal aaj ki meeting important hai kyun
Prem?[Guys you'll can continue with your cat and mouse game after sometime but
right now this meeting is our topmost priority isn't it Prem?]

Prem: Haan sahi keh raha hai tu; achha Swara tum aur Sanju
apne kamre mein jau aur jald se jald ready ho jau tab tak hum bhi humare kamre
mein jaate hai aur yaad rahe hume meeting k liye bilkul bhi late nahi hona hai
[Yes u r right; okay Swara u and Sanju go to your room and get ready as soon as
possible we will also do the same and yes do remember we have to attend the
meeting on time so no delay]

Swara: Par Prem ye toh batau hume milna kisse hai? [But Prem
atleast tell me whom are we going to meet?]

Prem and Adi look at each other and give a mischievious smile

Prem: Sabar rakho Swara kuch hi der mein tumhe pata chal
jaayega [Have patience Swara u will get to know about it in a while]

Swara makes a baby face but Adi and Prem were in no mood to
leak out their surprise; the girls had no option they went to their room
without asking any further questions

Adi and Prem's room

Adi: Bus jaldi se ye ek ghanta nikal jaaye phir apni Swara ki
zindagi ka naya suraj ugega [I hope this one hour passes away soon so that the
new morning of our Swara's life can start]

Prem: Haan aaj k baad humari Swara ki zindagi mein bus
khushiyaan hi hongi; kamiyaabi toh uske pair chuengi [Yes from now onwards the
life of our Swara will be full of happiness; success would kiss her feet]

Adi: Par ye sab tere bagair ho hi nahi saktha tha iss plan ki
kamiyaabi ka pura credit tujhi ko jaata hai [But this woudn't have been
possible without u infact the whole credit of the success of this plan goes to
u]

Prem: Maine kya kiya hai Adi wo toh bus kuch purane dosto ke
contacts k wajah se ye possible ho paaya hai warna Hollywood mein meri itni
kuch khaas pehchaan nahi hai [What have I done Adi its just due to some of my
old friends that this has been possible or else I really didn't have great
contacts in Hollywood]

Adi: Wo jobhi ho par ye idea toh tera hi thana warna Swara ki
halat dekhkar main toh kafi darr gaya tha par ab meri saari pareshaniyaan hawa
mein udanchu ho gayi hai dekhna; tere ek idea ne Swara ko Bolywood se seedha
Hollywood paucha diya [Whatever be the reason but u were the one who came up
with this idea to be frank enough I was really scared after seeing Swara's
condition but now all my insecurities have vanished in thin air as your one
idea has brought Swara to Hollywood from Bollywood]

Prem: Haan Swara ko yaha tak laane mein hum kamiyaab ho gaye
aur ab mujhe yakeen hai humari Swara apne mehnat aur lagan se kamiyaabi ki unn
bualndiyon tak pauchegi jahah koi bhi aira gaira uske jasbaatho se toh dur uski
parchayi k saath bhi khilwaad na kar paaye [yes we were successful in getting
Swara upto this level and I am sure our Swara will reach the peak of success
with her sincerity and dedication; infact the level would be so high that no
useless fellow would be able to touch her shadow forget alone hurting her
feelings]

Adi: Haan aisa hi hoga [yes we will make sure that this
happens]

Prem: Chal jaldi se taiyaar ho jaate hai [Okay let's get
ready fast]

After one hour

Rox picks up Prem, Swara, Adi and Sanjana from the hotel and
starts driving towards northwest downtown of Los Angeles where the district of
Hollywood was situated

Swara and Sanjana were surprised as they entered the
entertainment capital of the world

Sanjana: Adi bhaiya ye toh Hollywood haina? [Adi this is
Hollywood right?]

Adi: Haan Sanju [Yes Sanju]

Swara: Par hum yaha kyun aaye hai? [But why have we come over
here?]

Prem: Tumhare iss sawal ka jawab kuch minto mein tumhe mil
jaayega waise Swara tumahara favourite Hollywood actor kaun hai? [U will get ur
answer within few seconds Swara by the way who is your favourite Hollywood
actor?]

Swara was just about to answer his question when the car
stopped in front of the biggest movie studio of Hollywood

Like a true gentleman Prem opened the door of the car and
requested Swara to step out; Adi did the same for Sanjana

All of them entered the studio and they continued walking
behind Rox

Swara and Sanjana were mesmerized by the beauty of this
studio

Rox leads them to a large room

Rox: Please have a seat guys I'll just inform Sir about your
arrival

Prem: Sure

Swara: Ab toh batadu Prem hum yaha kisse milne aaye hai
[Common Prem tell me who are we going to meet?]

Prem: Swara ye tumhare pehle Hollywood movie ka set hai aur
tum yaha apne Director cum Male lead se milne aayi ho [Swara this is the set of
your debut Hollywood movie and we r here to meet your Director cum Male lead of
your movie]

Swara was speechless as she could not find any word to
express her feelings

Prem and Adi always made her feel extra special but today
they had done something extraordinary

She separated her lips slightly to voice her feelings when
Rox returned back with the Director cum Male lead of Swara's debut movie

Prem: Wo dekho Swara yahi hai wo jisse hum milne aaye hai
[Swara he is the one whom we have come to meet]

Swara felt dizzy; she couldn't believe that she was standing
in front of this man and moreover was she really going to make her Hollywood
debut opposite him?

It took some time for her to register this fact; yes she was
standing in front of her favorite Hollywood star

It was none other than Brad Pitt

Precap: "Nothing's going to change my love for u, u
ought to know by now how much I love u

So a guy how was my twist? Did u like my decision of sending
Swara to Hollywood?

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the
next update I have tried to mix the pics so that you'll can visualize the
scenes properly. Besides this let me make it clear once again that it won't be
easy for Sanskar to win back Swara again Swara won't forgive him so easily at
least I won't allow her do so Ouch Sanskar is going to suffer and Swara is
going to touch the skies of success

Love-Yasmin

Chapter:32

Yes this was the new start of Swara's successful journey as
Prem and Adi had provided her with the first step to take her career to the
heights of the sky

It took some time for Swara to get acclimatized to the
situation but after that there was no reason for her to look back

She expressed her happiness and informed Brad that he was her
favourite Hollywood star and she is thankful to her destiny as it gave her an
oppourtunity to meet her idol

Brad was a true gentleman and a great professional he
welcomed them with open arms and all of them start discussing the details of
the script

Swara took keen interest in the procedures and Brad was
impressed with her personality and her professional attitude in the first
meeting itself

Brad's directorial debut was a musical and Swara was playing
the female lead in his movie

He was explaining every minute detail of the script as this
was his baby venture

The meeting was a big hit and Brad was impressed with his
decision of casting Swara; he wanted a fresh Indian face for his movie and one
of his very close friends Ryan had recommended Swara's name

Ryan was a mutual friend of Brad and Prem and it was just
because of Prem that Swara had got this lifetime oppourtunity

The meeting continued for sometime and by the end of the
meeting Brad, Swara, Prem, Adi and Sanjana became good friends

Brad wanted to keep the media away from his directorial debut
during the initial days of the shooting as he wanted to give a surprise to his
fans and wanted to launch this movie on a grand scale so he offered the entire
gang to stay in one of his bunglows which he had purchased recently as the
media were still unaware about the location of his new bunglow and moreover the
location of the shooting was also very near from that place

Prem and Adi agreed immediately as they too wanted to keep
Swara away from her past as long as possible

They looked at her and asked her permission before giving the
approval; Swara did not hestitate even for a second and gave an affirmative
response

Brad decided to begin the shoot from the next day itself

He requested Rox to shift the belongings of the entire gang
to his new bunglow and make all the arrangements for their comfort

Prem, Swara, Adi and Sanjana go with Rox to the bunglow

The shooting of the movie begins from the next day itself

Prem and Adi used to accompany Swara and Sanju to the sets
and every moment of the shooting was a beautiful experience for them

Prem was managing his entire business from here whereas for
Adi it was a great experience to polish his directorial skills as he was
getting to learn how things work in Hollywood

Swara was back to her normal self and she had found a great
friend in Sanju; both of them would find out new ways to trouble Adi and Prem

In short they were living a very happy life and most
importantly Swara was climbing the ladder of success in both her professional
life as well as personal life

It was yet another day of shooting but today Brad was upset;
he was holding some papers in his hand and was talking to the lyrist and music
composer of his musical movie

Brad: Is this what u call romance?

He threw the papers on the floor

Brad: There is no life in the words that you'll have written;
these words express lust and not love

Brad: I did not expect this unprofessional behaviour from
both of u; do u realize the importance of this particular scene in my movie?

Brad: This is the entry scene of the lead actress and u want
me to ruin her entry by using this sh*t piece of words? I want a blend of
innocence and a sweet romance in this song and not a hungry desire of sex did u
get that?

Brad: Take this crap and come in front of me only when u
start doing justice to ur work

The lyrist and the music composer go away

Adi: What's the matter Brad?

Brad tells him the problem

Brad: I wanted to shoot Swara's entry scene today but it
seems that we have lost a day of our shooting

Adi: Hmm' I have a solution to this problem it may not be
full proof but u can give it a try I am confident that my idea will work

Brad: What's the plan dude?

Adi: U need a romantic song which depicts the true meaning of
love and also a song on which u can do a romantic close dance

Brad: Yes

Adi: The solution to ur problem is Prem

Brad: Prem?

Adi: Yes Prem; he is a great dancer and moreover he is an
expert in composing and singing romantic love songs and since this is the entry
scene of Swara I am sure u won't be coming into the scene right now u would
surely be using some dancer as the male partner for Swara so why not Prem?

Brad: As it is today's shoot is almost cancelled so I think I
can take this risk if at all this gamble pays off then it can fruitful to the
movie

Adi and Brad walk towards Prem who was busy working on his
laptop

Initially Prem was reluctant but after some convincing from
Adi he agreed

Adi: Prem aaj Swara ke liye tere dil mein jobhi hai sab bayan
kar de iss mauke ko haath se jane mat dena Brad k liye shayad ye ek movie ka
scene ho par tere liye ye teri zindagi ka sabse bada sach hai iss baat ko yaad
rakhna [Prem use this opportunity to make Swara realize the depth of your love
maybe for Brad this is just a scene of his movie but remember for u this is the
biggest truth of ur life]

The shooting starts

Brad had given Prem full liberty to do the scene as per his
wishes as he wanted to see a natural chemistry between Swara and Prem

Music

Prem starts playing the piano; he was not sure how should he make
Swara realize the depth of his love by putting down his feelings in terms of
words but all his doubts were suppressed as soon as his eyes fell on the angel
who was sitting in front of him

Oh'she looked so pure so adorable she was a beautiful
reflection of his true feelings; Yes his love was also as divine as her angelic
form and now he had no doubts he knew exactly what he wanted to say

If I had to live my life without you near me

The days would all be empty the nights would seem so long

He looked directly into her eyes and got up from his seat; He
slowly started approaching Swara and with every step of his the fragrance of
his unconditional love was making its existence felt in the entire surroundings

With u I see forever oh so clearly I might have been in love
before

But it never felt so strong

He went on his knees and extended his hand in front of the
princess of his heart and in a very simple way he confessed his love in front
of her

Our dreams are young and we both know

They'll take us where we want to go

Swara could read and understand his emotions; she knew that
Brad was considering this as a scene for his movie but in real Prem was
actually confessing his love and that too in a very simple yet heart touching
manner

His feelings were so geninue that Swara could not deny him;
she immediately placed her hand in his and decided to go with the flow of his
love

Hold me now; touch me know

I don't want to live without u

Prem locks his eyes with Swara's magical mirrors and guides
her to the dance floor with utmost love

Nothing's gonna change my love for u

U ought to know by now how much I love u

One thing u can be sure of

I'll never ask for more than your love

He placed his hand on her waist and pulled her closer; Swara
rested her arms on his shoulder and tried to register the golden words that
Prem was singing for her

Every word was the mirror of truth for Swara yes it was true
that Prem's love was always unconditional and also the purest thing that she
had ever seen

Nothing's gonna change my love for u

U ought to know by now how much I love u

The world may change my whole life through

But nothing's gonna change my love for u

Her hands slowly made way to his neck and encircled them
completely; she wanted to tell him that every word of his simple confession was
making her feel so special

If the road ahead is not so easy

Our love will lead the way for us

He twirled her giving rise to a beautiful dance step

Like a guiding star

Prem changed the step gracefully and now Swara's back was
resting on his chest; she was now partially in his warm embrace when Prem
brought his lips close to her ear and whispered these lines

I'll be there for u if u should need me

He promised her that in every phase of her life he will be
there for her

You don't have to change a thing

He caressed her face lovingly

I love u just the way u are..

He rested his face on her shoulder and innocently confessed
that she is the best and the most perfect creation of the Almighty; Swara
started smiling as Prem was successful in writing every word of his feelings
beautifully on Swara's heart

So come with me and share the view

He turned around and held Swara's face between his face and
his hand; Swara started blushing in response to Prem's compliments

I'll help u see forever through

Prem and Swara change their dance step and strike an
extremely romantic pose

Hold me now; touch me know

He gracefully guides her back and both of them share a
romantic close dance

I don't want to live without u

Nothing's gonna change my love for u

U ought to know by now how much I love u

One thing u can be sure of

I'll never ask for more than your love

He lifts her high by holding her waist protectively

Nothing's gonna change my love for u

U ought to know by now how much I love u

Prem puts her down carefully and once again Swara gets drowned
in the magical spell of his sacred love

Music

Meanwhile, in India

Sanskar was trying to contact Naintara as Sanskar was being
awarded a really prestigious award and he wanted to share the biggest happiness
of his life with her

But everytime Naintara would reject his call and this action
of hers was increasing Sanskar's restlessness

He continued to call her and finally an irritated Naintara
answered his call and without giving him any chance to speak she started

Naintara: Sanskar aapki befusul baato ke liye mere paas waqt
nahi hai filhaal hum busy hai aapko agar koi bhi important baat karni hai toh
humari Secretary Shikha ko bata dijiye par ab hume dubara phone mat kijiye
[Sanskar I can't waste my time on useless talks; right now I am busy if u
really want to discuss something important then pass on the message to my
secretary Shikha but don't disturb me by calling me again and again]

She switched off her cell without hearing Sanskar's reply

Sanskar's heart crushed into a million pieces

Nothing's gonna change my love for u

U ought to know by now how much I love u

Meanwhile in Hollywood

Prem scooped Swara in his arms and continued to shower her
with his love

One thing u can be sure of

I'll never ask for more than your love

He placed her on her feet and once again their eyes meet

Nothing's gonna change my love for u

U ought to know by now how much I love u

Swara slowly started shifting her body weight on his chest by
submitting herself in his loving folds

Prem hugged her back and both of them stayed in this position
trying to capture some precious gems of these passing moments

PRECAP: Naintara has no time for Sanskar and Sanskar's heart
starts remembering Swara

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Love-Yasmin

Chapter: 33

Swara slowly started shifting her body weight on his chest by submitting herself in his loving folds

Prem hugged her back and both of them stayed in this position trying to capture some precious gems of these passing moments

After few minutes

Brad: Fantastic shot guys

Prem and Swara come out of their hug

Brad shakes his hand with Prem and pats his shoulder

Brad: What a way of portraying the meaning of true love; Hats off to u dude it seemed that this wasn't a simple musical scene of a movie it felt as if u were pouring out your feelings in front of Swara

Prem did not want to create any awkward situation for Swara as he respected her and loved her beyond imagination

Prem: Brad I am a trained singer and I have good knowledge of composing and writing lyrics and being a professional I personally feel if ur song has to be impactful u need to portray the feelings properly and that's exactly what I tried to do

Brad: But Prem somehow I could read the emotions in ur eyes and it felt as if every word was a reflection of ur true feelings it felt so real and moreover both of u were so comfortable with each other that anyone would be forced to think in this direction

Swara was about to say something when Prem stopped her by holding her hand

Prem: Both of us were comfortable because we know each other very well infact we are great friends who respect and trust each other to a great extent and this is the biggest truth of our relationship

Swara looked at him with immense respect

Prem: But Brad I think there is some serious problem with ur eyes or else how could u find emotions oozing out from my expressionless mirrors?

Brad: Haha u have a great sense of humor Prem common let's cut this topic I just wanted to thank u for ur contribution; it was just because of u that I was successful in getting exactly what I wanted for this particular scene

Prem: I am pleased that I could contribute in a small way for your dream project

Brad: Okay guys after 1 hour we will resume our shooting till then if anyone wishes they can take a break but make sure to come back at the location exactly after an hour

Brad walks towards the script writer and starts discussing the next shot

Swara was looking intently into Prem's eyes

Prem: Swara tum aise kya dekh rahi ho? [Why r u looking at me so keenly Swara?]

Swara: Tumne Brad se jhooth kyun kaha Prem? [Why did u hide the truth from Brad Prem?]

Prem: Tum iska jawab jaanti ho Swara? [U already have the answer Swara]

Swara: Prem'

Prem: Swara kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai main tumhse pyar karta hoon ye meri khushkismati hai tum mujhe apnao ya na apnao mujhe iss baat se koi farak nahi padtha kyunki mere liye mera pyar ek dua ki tarah hai jisse main har din pujhta hoon aur har dua puri ho ye zaruri toh nahi na? [There is no need to say anything Swara I am proud that I love u it doesn't matter to me if u accept me or reject me as I consider my love for u as a holy prayer and it is not necessary that every prayer gets answered]

Swara had no answer to his heart touching statement

Every word of Prem had a healing touch

Prem: Aur waise bhi Swara humare rishte ki sachhayi hum kisi begane ko kyun bataye? Humara rishta toh kafi anokha haina isse sabke saamne bayan karke usse sadharan kyun banaye? [There is no need to leak out the reality of our relationship in front of some stranger as it is our relationship is special and we won't make it ordinary by narrating the beauty of our relationship to every second person we meet]

Her respect for him touched the heights of the sky

Prem: Jaanti ho humare rishte ki speciality kya hai? [Do u know what is the speciality in our relationship?]

Swara was waiting for his reply

Prem caressed Swara's face lovingly

Prem: Humari dosti itni special hai ke hum ek dusre se koi bhi expectations nahi rakhte par bhi hum jaante hai k zarurat padne par hum ek dusre ke saath honge aur yahi humare rishte ki sabse anokhi baat hai [The speciality of our relationship is that we don't have any expectations from each other yet we know that we will be there for one another whenever required isn't this something unique?]

Swara took his hand and placed a small peck on his palm

Swara: Main humare rishte k iss khoobsurati ko humesha barkaar rakhungi Prem aur koshish karungi ke tumhe wo saari khushiyaan mile jo tum deserve karte ho [I will try to maintain the beauty of our relationship Prem and will try my level best to give u ur share of happiness]

Prem: Mere liye yahi kafi hai [This is enough for me]

Their sweet moment was broken by Sanju

Sanjana: Swara chal na shopping ko chalthe hai ek ghante ka off mila haina toh kyun na uska fulltu fayda uthaya jaaye [Swara let's go for shopping we have got an off for an hour so why not take full advantage of it]

Prem too wanted to divert the topic

Prem: Haan Swara Sanju thik keh rahi hai tum dono kuch der ghum aao [Yes Swara Sanju is right]

Sanjana: Mr. Richie Rich tumse kitne baar kaha hai ke tum mujhe Sanjana kehkar pukaro par tumhe ye baat samaj mein nahi aatina? [Mr. Richie Rich how many times have I told u to address me as Sanjana but I guess u cannot understand my simple statement]

Swara knew the cat and mouse fight was going to begin just in a matter of seconds

Swara: Bus kijiye aap dono mujhe yaha koi chuhe billi ka jhagda anhi dekhna Sanju tujhe shopping jana haina to chal agar tu Prem se uhi ulajthi rahi toh ho gayi humari shopping [Stop it u both as I am not interested to be a witness in your cat and mouse fight; Sanju u want to go for shopping na so lets go if u continue to fight with Prem on silly topics then our shopping will end even before it started]

Sanjana: Tu thik keh rahi hai chal chalte hai [Yes u r right common let's go]

Swara extends his hand and Prem gives the key of his car to her

Prem: Jaldi lautna [Come back soon]

Swara gave him an assuring smile and left with Sanju

Swara and Sanju were busy with their shopping when Prem messaged Swara and informed her that the shoot has been called off for the day due to some technical reasons hence they could continue with their shopping

The girls were super excited with the news and started taking full advantage of the oppourtunity

Meanwhile,

In India

It was night now and Sanskar was desperately waiting for Naintara's arrival

All of a sudden he was feeling all alone as there was no one with whom he could share his happiness of winning a prestigious award and that too at a very young age

He was lost in his own thoughts when the door bell rang and Naintara entered her bunglow

Naintara: Raji humare rose water bath ki taiyaariyaan kijiye [Raji arrange my rose water bath quickly]

Naintara was going to her room when Sanskar stopped her by calling her name

Sanskar: Tara

Naintara: Sanskar aap yaha iss waqt kya kar rahe hai? [Sanskar what r u doing here at this time?]

Sanskar: Kyun mujhe tumhare ghar aane k liye tumhara appointment lena padega? [Do I have to take an appointment for meeting u?]

Naintara could smell some frustration in Sanskar's behaviour and she did not want to ruin this fake relationship atleast till the time Sanskar was famous hence she tried to control the situation before it went out of her hand

Naintara goes and hugs Sanskar

Naintara: Aap apni Tara se naaraz hai Sanskar? Hum jaante hai aaj hum aapse baat nahi kar paaye par sach kehthe hai hum wakai mein kafi busy the warna aap toh jaante haina k koi bhi kaam aapse pehle nahi aata humare liye [It seems u r angry on ur Tara but Sanskar I swear I was really busy today or is it possible that I would have ignored u? U r aware that u are my top most priority everything else is secondary]

Sanskar breaks the hug and both of them sit on a sofa

Sanskar: Thik hai maaf kiya maine tumhe par mujhse vada karo ke kal ke function mein tum mere saath zarur chalogi [Okay I forgive u but u need to promise me that u will accompany me in tomorrow's function]

Naintara: Function?

Sanskar: Haan tumhareSanskar ko best male actor ka sabse bada award mil raha hai [Yes ur Sanskar has won the best male actor honor in one of the most prestigious award functions]

Naintara: (thinking) Bus itni chothi baat par itna bada dindora peeta jaaraha hai disgusting par agar maine isse ye bata diya k main kal iske saath nahi jayungi toh ye mujhe emotional blackmail karne ki koshish karega aur majburan mujhe iss gadhe ke saath jana padega aakhir sone denewali murgi jo hai ye Adami'hume iss mushkil ko kuch alag tareeke se suljhana padega [Such a small thing and so much excitement this is disgusting. If I tell him now that I won't be able to accompany him then he might try to blackmail me emotionally and he might even succeed to take me with him as he is the man who is giving me golden eggs so I need to tackle this situation properly]

Sanskar: Kya soch rahi ho Tara? [What r u thinking Tara?]

Naintara: Hum ye soch rahe the k kal ke function mein hume kya pehenna chahiye? [I was deciding my outfit for tomorrow's function]

Sanskar: Iska matlab tum aa rahi ho? [That means u r coming with me?]

Naintara: Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai jaha aap jaayenge aapki Tara bhi wahi apne kadam sajayegi [Is there any need for this question u will find ur Tara with u wherever u go]

Sanskar: Main jaanta tha issliye maine organizers ko yeh baat pehle hi keh di thi ke ye award hum dono milkar collect karenge [I knew it hence I have already informed the organizers that both of us will collect his award together]

Sanskar hugs Naintara

Sanskar: Oh Tara kal subah kab hogi [Oh Tara I can't wait for tomorrow morning]

Naintara: (thinking) Hum bhi wahi soch rahe hai aakhir kal ki subah humare liye bhi kafi important hai huh aise award functions toh aate jaate rahenge par jo mauka hume mila hai usse hum itne aasani se gawa nahi sakthe [I am also waiting for the arrival of the next day as I have grabbed a golden oppourtunity which I can't afford to lose and that too coz of such a stupid award function]

Sanskar: Tara main kal tumhe pick karne aa jaaunga hum ek saath function mein chalenge [Tara I will come to pick u up tomorrow we will go to the function together]

Naintara: Nahi Sanskar hum khud aapke ghar aa jaayenge [No Sanskar I will come to ur house]

Sanskar: Thik hai jaise tumhari marzi [Okay as u wish]

Sanskar bids her Good night and left her house

Naintara: Aapki khushi se sau guna badkar humare sapne hai Sanskar aapke iss doh kaudi ke function mein hum kya humari joothi bhi nahi aayegi [My dreams are more important to me than ur happiness Sanskar don't even think that I will attend that stupid award function with u as my sandals also don't like to roam in such places]

Next Day

Sanskar was waiting for Naintara's arrival

He had chosen his best suit for this special occasion

Everything seemed perfect for him till the time he heard a message alert on his mobile

Sanskar: Tara ka message [Tara's message]

He opened the message with a smile on his face but his smile lasted only for few seconds as he felt insulted and rejected with the words that were flashing on his screen

The Message

Naintara: Sanskar hum aapke saath award function mein nahi aa sakthe kyunki aaj hume Karan Johar ke movie ki shooting ke liye jaana hai jismein hum Om Shanti Om ke title song ki tarah ek aur song mein ek cameo role play kar rahe hai[Sanskar I can't attend the function with u as I have to go for the shoot of Karan Johar's movie wherein I am playing a cameo similar to the song Om Shanti Om]

Niantara: Aap toh jaante hi haina k K. Jo ki movie mein ek scene bhi karna kitni badi izzat ki baat hai aur hum itna bada honor aapke uss award function k liye kho nahi sakthe[U r aware that it is a matter of Pride to be a part of K.Jo's movie and I can't reject this honor for the sake of ur award function]

Naintara: Aap hume galat mat samajiyega par samajdaar wahi hai jo sahi mauke ka fayda uthaye aur hum apni ginti samajdaaro mein karna chahthe hai aap fikar mat kijiye hum aapse vada karte hai k jis din aapka award function TV pe telecast hoga hum wo zarur dekhenge par filhaal hum Delhi jaa rahe hai K. Jo k saath [Do get me wrong but a smart individual will grab a golden oppourtunity with both his hands I promise to watch the telecast of ur award function when it airs on TV but right now I am going to Delhi with K.Jo]

Naintara: aapki zarurat ka saara saaman hum Shikha ke haath bhijwa rahe hai jo aapko humari mohabbat ki yaad dilatha rahega aur haan ho sake toh hume contact mat kijiyega kyunki K.Jo kafi professional hai unhe kaam ke waqt SECONDARY cheezo ko importance dena zyada pasand nahi [Shikha will give u all the things that u require which will remind u of my love but if possible don't contact me during my shooting schedule as K.Jo is professional and he doesn't like the interference of any SECONDARY thing]

The message ends

Sanskar felt completed dejected.

He threw his mobile onto the mirror expressing his anger

The mirror broke into thousands of pieces but there was something else that he could see in those shattered pieces

There was some red color that was stretched on those broken elements; it was Swara's sindoor which she had kept secured in one edge of the mirror stand

When Sanskar had thrown his mobile accidently it had touched the sindoor dibbi resulting it to fall down

Sanskar's feet automatically moved towards the broken glass pieces as he could see Swara's face in it

Her face was looking so pale so tired and completely shattered exactly like the broken pieces of glass

It seemed that he was not alone Swara's soul was still there with him to share his grief and to lend him a shoulder where he could cry

She was crying because she could feel his pain atleast this is what his heart believed

His heart started dominating him and requested him not to allow her to go away from him this time

He tried to touch her face but before his thoughts could cross this barrier the doors of his imagination were closed and blood started oozing out from his fingers which was a proof that he was all alone

Knowingly or unknowingly the true words of his heart made way to his mouth

Sanskar: Swara,Swara.

PRECAP 1: It was strange she was praying for the safety of a man whom she hated the most but was this the truth? Does she really hate him or was she trying to hide her love behind the curtains of hatred?

PRECAP 2: Sanskar admitted in hospital...

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Chapter: 34

Music

Sanskar's feet automatically moved towards the broken glass pieces as he could see Swara's face in it

Her face was looking so pale so tired and completely shattered exactly like the broken pieces of glass

It seemed that he was not alone Swara's soul was still there with him to share his grief and to lend him a shoulder where he could cry

She was crying because she could feel his pain atleast this was what his heart believed

His heart started dominating him and requested him not to allow her to go away from him this time

Jab jab tere paas main aaya ek sukoon mila

Jise main tha bhooltha aaya wo wajood mila

He tried to touch her face but before his thoughts could cross this barrier the doors of his imagination were closed and blood started oozing out from his fingers which were a proof that he was all alone

Jab aaye mausam gum ke tujhe yaad kiya

O'Jab sehme tanhapan se tujhe yaad kiya

Knowingly or unknowingly the true words of his heart made way to his mouth

Sanskar: Swara'.Swara'

Dil'samal ja zara

Hollywood, Late night

Brad had planned to shoot a late night scene for the movie and Swara was all ready to give her best shot when all of a sudden she started feeling restless

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

There was a strange uneasiness in the air which was forcing her heart to skip a beat

Dil yahi rukh ja zara

She placed her hand on her bracelet and for unknown reasons a shiver ran down her spine

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Brad called the shot but Swara was lost in her own world, she was drowned in someone's thoughts' a person whose name was imprinted on her soul

Music

Sanskar picked up the box of sindoor from the floor as slowly realization struck him

He was so happy till the time Swara was with him, but today he was a body without soul

Was his biggest gamble his greatest loss?

Aisa kyun gar hua

Jaanu na main jaanu na

All of a sudden he could sense Swara's fragrance in the air

He could hear the beats of her anklets in his room

Her angelic smile, her innocent face, her cute naughty antics started haunting his mind and heart

He wanted her back maybe not to gain something but because he had realized that he had lost a gem'

Dil'samal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

This was the first time that he, the great SK was rejected by someone

By tasting his own medicine he got to know the silent cries of Swara which she covered through the mask of her beautiful smile whenever he gave her pain

Dil yahi rukh ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

He was shattered as Naintara ignored him and showed him the true place that he possessed in her life through her actions but'Swara was great as she always supported him in every decision of his and showered him with love and contentment but instead of loving her back he pushed her in an ocean of remorse

Oh'why was he realizing his mistake? Why was he feeling ashamed of his actions? Why was he remembering Swara?

Music

Brad was repeating his words "Action" but his words had no effect on Swara as she was paralyzed for few seconds

She removed her trembling hand from her bracelet and started observing the bracelet intently

Tears threatened to flood her cheeks as she realized he was remembering her

Yes'he had taken her name but his voice sounded so painful?

Her breaths became uneven as an unknown fear passed through her senses

"Was he fine?"

Jis raah pe hai ghar tera aksar waha se haan main hoon guzra

He entered his room and tried to find answers behind his guilt by understanding the words of his soul

The sunbeams were giving him a prickling sensation and were trying to remind him of the tortures that he gifted Swara

He was burining in guilt as he recollected every cruel act of his which added to his sin'a sin of crushing the feelings of an innocent soul'of his Swara

Shayad yahi dil mein raha tu mujhko mil jaaye kya pata

Oh'it sounded perfect his Swara'yes Sanskar's Swara for a second his heart was at peace but this did not last long as, the wind started moving dramatically forcing the the curtains of his window to dance to an angry beat which showed him the mirror of his cheap nature

Once again he was ashamed as he heard an echo of some cruel and disgusting words "Mrs. Swara Sanskar Singh Khurana sounds so funny"

He wanted to kill himself for stooping so low'he realized he is selfish but for the first time he was not able to meet his gaze

He only knew he wanted her back'he was missing her but what was the reason behind this sudden realization?

Kya hai ye silsila

jaanu na main jaanu na

He was confused but, he knew he was wrong

He had commited a sin'yes a sin of destroying someone who loved him unconditionally

He started hating himself and without thinking twice he banged his head on the wall non stop in an attempt to reduce his guilt to some extent but the burden kept on increasing as now he knew he had disrespected a divine relationship by naming it as a GAME

Blood started oozing out from his head but he failed to find solace

His guilt reached its peak and he smashed his head on the glass of a nearby mirror in an attempt to punish himself

Dil'samal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Swara felt as if someone had stabbed her heart with a sharp knife

She placed her hand on her chest as she could feel the pain

She knew her Sanskar was in some danger without thinking twice she started running outside as if trying to reach Sanskar before he lands in some trouble

Dil yahi rukh ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Brad and Sanju were totally confused with Swara's behaviour.

Sanjana tried to stop Swara but her eyes could see only one man her Sanskar'she had to find him yes she had to find him'

She could feel his pain and she had to do something to soothe him

Music

Blood was dripping from Sanskar's head and was giving signals that he might be approaching to a dreadful end but this realization gave him some peace as he knew death was also a small punishment for his unforgivable sin

How could he insult the light of his life in his ignorance?

He believed a witch (NT) and killed the love of his angel (Swara) by accusing her and questioning her love?

But today he knew he was wrong his feelings were shaky'She had submitted herself completely'she wrote her dignity to his name and gave him the most divine moment of his life but he destroyed it's essence and purity by terming it as a weak moment

He crushed a glass in between his hands and punished himself by allowing the glass pieces to penetrate his palm

Kuch bhi nahi jab darmiyaan phir kyun hai dil tere hi khwab bunta

He tried to open a shelf wherein he had seen a bottle of Honey few days back..Naintara had bought this bottle for herself and by mistake she had left it in Sanskar's house

Sanskar was finding it difficult to stand but he had to punish himself he emptied the entire content of the honey bottle in a jar and took out some sleeping pills from the adjoining shelf

He introduced all the sleeping pills in the honey and was just about to drink it when he felt a strange force that was requesting him to go ahead

He could see Swara in front of him with a glass of almond milk

Chaha ke de tujhko bhula par ye bhi mumkin ho na saka

Her eyes were depicting love, Sanskar wanted to hug her but he did not find the strength to go ahead as all his confusions vanished

He knew he loves her but today he won't be selfish as, he was aware he was a devil and he did not deserve the love of an angel

His Swara deserved all the happiness of this world but his sins were not allowing this right

Yes he knew what he wanted to do

He had to die as he did not deserve Swara but before dying he wanted to confess one thing

Kya hai ye mamla

Sanskar: I love u Swara'I love u

There was no deceit, no hidden element, no fraud in this confession of Sanskar

This time he understood the depth of these sacred words but alas the owner of his heart was not there in front of him

He deserved this 'yes he deserved this

He closed his eyes and picturized Swara's face for one last time and invited death to take him in its folds by drinking the honey and sleeping pill mixture in one go

Jaanu na main jaanu na

After some time, Nakul saw Sanskar lying in a pool of blood'some traces of honey and the undissolved parts of the sleeping pills were also lying in this blood pool

The sight was horrible but Nakul somehow managed to act quickly and with the help of the other servants he took Sanskar to the hospital

Dil'samal ja zara

Swara felt as if someone had snatched her breath away'she could see the messenger of death knocking the doors of her heart

No, this can't happen, she won't allow this to occur but what was she supposed to do?

It seemed God cleared her confusion as she saw a church

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

She entered the church and with all sincerity and honesty she bowed down in front of the Almighty

She joined her hands and closed her eyes

There was only one prayer that her heart voiced

Swara: Unka khayal rakhna Babaji [Pls take care of him O Almighty]

Dil yahi rukh ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

It was strange she was praying for the safety of a person whom she hated the most'but was this the truth?

Does she really hate him or was she trying to hide her love behind the curtains of hatred?

Dil'samal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Destiny had once again started playing a game with Maaneet's life

Swara was pretending of forgetting him but the truth was her heart was still affected by his name or else how was it possible for her to understand his pains when they were miles apart'

Sanskar had finally realized his love for Swara but the main question is will Destiny give him another chance to get back his soul, his Swara or would he lead his life like a living dead?

Only time can answer this question but there is another truth that acts as a silver lining in this situation'the one and only truth

"TRUE LOVE ALWAYS FINDS A WAY"

PRECAP: Will Sanskar survive?Will God answer Swara's prayers?😕😭

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Chapter: 35

Destiny had once again started playing a game with Swasan's life

Swara was pretending of forgetting him but the truth was that her heart was still affected by his name or else how was it possible for her to understand his pains when they were miles apart'

Sanskar had finally realized his love for Swara but the main question is will Destiny give him another chance to get back his soul, his Swara or would he lead his life like a living dead?

Only time can answer this question but there is another truth that acts as a silver lining in this situation'the one and only truth

"TRUE LOVE ALWAYS FINDS A WAY"

Meanwhile, Sanju and Brad had informed Prem and Adi about the sudden disappearance of Swara

The foursome were tensed about Swara's whereabouts

Brad knew about the professional attitude of Swara and hence he could figure out that the situation was something serious or else Swara would have never behaved in this manner

He was not angry with Swara infact he was worried for his friend but the problem was none of them knew where Swara would be at this point of time

Sanju was getting nervous and was praying for the safety of Swara

Prem remained calm as he knew Swara would never do any wrong act and if they need to find out about Swara they had to use their brains rather than wasting their time by getting emotional

Prem: Sanju Swara ka mobile chal raha haina? [Sanju is Swara's mobile still working?]

Sanju: Haan par wo call accept nahi kar rahi [Yes, but she is not picking up the call]

Prem: Koi baat nahi humare liye itna hi kafi hai [No problem this clue is enough for us]

Prem: Brad Swara's mobile is working so we can trace her location if we take the help of the police officials. Can u pls use your contacts and complete the necessary formalities quickly?

Brad: Offcourse dude

Brad dials a number from his mobile and makes the necessary arrangements

The official informs them that Swara's mobile was at the church

All 4 of them get into the car and straightaway head for the church

As soon as they enter the church they find Swara kneeling on her knees and praying sincerely for someone

They decided not to disturb her and all 4 of them bowed down in front of the Almighty thus giving Swara their support in her prays

Meanwhile,

In India,

The situation was tensed in the hospital as the doctors were struggling to cure Sanskar

Sanskar had lost tremendous amount of blood because of which his body had become weak

Besides this the heavy dose of the sleeping pills and his allergy to honey were acting as a lethal combo in successfully defeating the medical treatments that the doctors were giving to Sanskar

Since Sanskar was a superstar, all the best doctors were carrying out his operation but their skills were not bearing any fruit as Sanskar was not responding to the treatment maybe, because he himself didn't want to survive.

The operation went on for several hours and finally the doctors came out from the OT

The journalists pounced on them to know about Sanskar's condition

The doctors informed them that they tried their level best and to some extent they were successful however they could not prevent Sanskar from entering the state of coma

This news was a shocker

The great SK was now in coma. Was this the end of his super stardom status? Till what time would he remain in coma? Will he ever wake up? Or was this the end?

These were some of the headlines that were flashing on the TV screens

The doctors were hoping for the best but their assurance was too weak to be true

Sanskar is taken to the ICU on a stretcher; it appeared as if he was dead.

Hollywood,

Swara felt as if someone was snatching her breath away

She could see the messenger of death knocking the doors of her soul and trying to get an entry into it so that it could take her soul, her Sanskar away from her forever

But, Swara's love was strong enough to face this storm she knew she had to reach Sanskar and her love had the power to get him back

India,

Sanskar's condition was deteriorating

He couldn't feel the cool breeze of the wind neither could he hear the dreadful sound of destiny

He had accepted defeat; his eyes were closed and were lost in the mysterious tunnel of darkness where there was no entry for any source of light to disperse its radiance

His neck was aligned to one side of his shoulder as if waiting for the moment when the Lord of Death would cut his head with his sword thus punishing him for his sins

His face was pale and it seemed every drop of blood was slowly getting removed from his body

His lips were dry thus giving signals that his life was like a desert wherein the shower of rain can never make an entry

His hands and legs were paralyzed making it evident that he was all alone and this was his fate, to die a lone death

The darkness intensified and he could see fire clad arms inviting him in his embrace

His body was already dead and now it was time for him to submit his soul to the folds of death

His soul started to take the first step towards his closing stages when all of a sudden a powerful light started dominating the darkness as if trying to compete with it in a battle

Sanskar's soul could not move any further it seemed it recognized this light, yes the angelic light which was fighting with the terror of dead and was ensuring his survival

There was a strange strength in this light, it was pure and full of love and slowly Sanskar sould visualize the outline figure of this angel

Her innocence gave a new life to Sanskar's eyes

The touch of her divinity gave a new strength to his shattered self

Her fragrance took the form of blood and started running in his body

Her unconditional love and care gave Sanskar the pleasure to be wet in the most magical rain of his life

The darkness had vanished completely and now he could see brightness dispersed around him which allowed him to see the most beautiful face of this world

The face of his angel, his Swara, yes she was here to save him, she was here to make him realize that his life was her possession and he had no right to destroy it without her permission

Their love was way beyond the imagination of this universe, today they might be physically away but this did not prevent them to meet each other

Sanskar wanted to hug her, to kiss her, to go down on his knees and plead for forgiveness but he was unable to gather the courage, the only word that he could utter was'

Sanskar's soul: Swara'

Swara closed her eyes as if trying to live this moment

She had forgotten the way her name appeared from Sanskar's lips'Oh it still seemed magical

Sanskar's soul: Swara'

The breeze touched her soul lovingly and requested her to talk to Sanskar

Swara's soul: Mera naam ab tak aapko yaad hai? [U still remember my name?]

Sanskar's soul was set ablaze by this question of Swara

Swara's soul: Kya hua? Mere sawal ka jawab nahi denge? [What happened? Won't u give an answer to my question?]

Sanskar's soul: Tumhara naam toh humesha se hi meri dhadkano mein samaya hua tha par afsoos ye hai ke main apni dhadkano ki sachayi samaj nahi paaya aur tumhe sada k liye kho baita [Your name was imprinted on my heartbeats right from the beginning but alas I was a fool as I failed to understand this truth and I lost u forever]

Swaras soul winced in pain

Swara's soul: Aapko sach mein lagta hai k aapne mujhe kho diya? Kya itna hi bharosa karte hai aap apni Swara par? Shayad ab bhi aapko lagta hai ke mera pyar ek dhikhawa hai [Do u really think that u have lost me? Is this the trust u have on your Swara? It seems u still think that my love is fake]

Sanskar's soul: Mujhe aur sharminda mat karo Swara, main janta hoon maine gunha kiya hai par ho sake toh mujhpar bharosa karo [Don't increase my guilt Swara. I am aware that I have commited a sin but if possible pls trust me]

Swara's soul: Bharosa? Kaise karlu main aappar bharosa jab ke aaj phir se aapne mere vishwas ka katal kiya hai [Trust? How am I supposed to trust u Sanskar when once again u have murdered my faith with your own hands today]

Sanskar's soul: Nahi Swara ye galat hai maine tumhare vishwaas ko nahi toda balki aaj maine khud ko saza di hai taaki apni zindagi apni Swara ko thes pauchane ke gunah ka bhoj kuch hadh tak main kum kar saku [No Swara this is wrong I have not destroyed your trust infact today I tried to punish myself for accusing my life, my Swara, so that I could reduce some portion of my guilt]

Swara's soul: Bhoj kum hua Sanskar? [So did ur guilt reduce?]

Sanskar's soul: Nahi [No]

Swara's soul: Hoga bhi kaise aaj jo harkat aapne ki hai uss harkat se toh aapki galtiyaan gunha mein tabdeel ho chuki hai [This had to happen as today your stupid act has converted your mistakes into an unforgivable sin]

Sanskar's soul: Swara maine toh khud ko saza deni ki koshish ki hai iss aas mein k shayad mujhe tumhari maafi mil jaaye [Swara I tried to torture my self in the hope that u might just forgive me]

Swara's soul: Jhooth keh rahe hai aap, agar aapko meri maafi chahiye thi toh aap mujhpar, APNI Swara par apna haq jatate [U r a liar, if u wanted my forgiveness then u would have claimed UR Swara by showing your authority on her]

Sanskar looked at her unbelievably

Swara's soul: Agar aap mujhe apni baho mein sach mein sametna chahte toh iss maksad ko pura karne k liye aap mujhe, APNI Swara ko duniya ke har ek kone mein jaakar dhundthe aur badi hi shaan se mujhe apne aaghosh mein lekar humare pyar k ghar mein mera ghrahpravesh karwate [If u really wanted to take me in your embrace then u would have searched for me in every corner of this world to accomplish this mission, and after we met u would have scooped me in your arms and would have taken me to our love nest where the arrangements of my ghrahpravesh would be welcoming me]

Swara's soul: Agar aap wakai mere zakhmo par apne pyar ka malham lagana chahte toh aap bade hi pyar se mera sar apne godh mein rakh apne hotho se mere hotho ko chumkar mujhe ek nayi zindagi ka taufa de dethe[If u really wanted to heal my wounds then u would have placed my head on your lap and would have sealed my lips with your loving lips thus giving me the boon of a new life]

Swara's soul: Agar aap APNI Swara ko wakai mein apni zindagi mein shamil karna chahte toh aap usse maafi maangne k bayage usse ye kehthe ke Swara main tumhse pyar karta hoon aur meri zindagi tumhare bagair adhuri hai [If u really wanted UR Swara to enter ur life again then instead of asking for forgiveness u would have confessed, Swara I love u and my life is incomplete without u]

Sanskar could see an unsaid pain in her eyes'Oh he wanted to wipe her tears there and then

Swara's soul: Aapki kasam Sanskar aapki Swara momm ki tarah aapki baho mein simat jaati par afsoos aapne aisa nahi kiya [I swear by your name Sanskar I would have melted in your arms with this confession of yours but alas u did not do this]

Swara's soul: Aapne khud ko thes pauchayi ye jaante hue bhi k aapki takleef mujhe saido maut de jaati hai [U tortured yourself inspite of knowing the fact that ur pain gives me thousands of death]

Sanskar's soul: Nahi Swara aisa nahi hai main tumhe takleef nahi pauchana chahta tha [No Swara this is not the case I did not wish to give u any pain]

Swara's soul: Par aapne aisa kiya Sanskar aapne khud ko saza di ye jaante hue k apko saza dene ka haq sirf AAPKI Swara ka hai. Kya ye haq bhi aapne cheen liya mujhse ? [But u did this Sanskar, u knew only YOUR Swara had the right to give u a punishment but it looks like u have snatched this right from me]

Sanskar's soul: Nahi Swara main tumhe dubara kho nahi sakta [No Swara I can't afford to lose u all over again]

Swara's soul: Aapne mujhe pehle toh nahi khoya tha par ab lagta hai aap mujhe kho doge kyunki aaj aapki iss harkat se mere pyar ko thes pauchi hai aur shayad iske liye main aapko maaf na kar saku'main jaa rahi hoon Sanskar par shayad aapko isse koi fark nahi padega kyunki aapko toh apni shahi neend pyari hai'Swara ka pyar nahi [U had not lost me before but I guess u have lost me forever with the stupid act that u committed today. I cannot forgive u as today u have wounded my love . I am going Sanskar and I sure my absence won't affect u as u are happy with your royal sleep'Swara's love is not important to u]

The intensity of the light started to reduce

Swara's soul was slowly walking away from Sanskar with the movement of the wind

Sanskar could not let this happen. He had to stop her. He had to find his life back, his Swara, she was his possession and he will not allow her to go away from him.

Swara was almost gone by now the last traces of her duppata was flying in the air

A sudden fear of losing Swara again became dominant in Sanskar's mind and all of a sudden he got a strange strength, the strength of Swara's love which gave him a new life

He opened his eyes and extended his hand to hold the duppatta as the 3 magical words made way through his mouth thus bringing him to reality

Sanskar: Swara I love u'.

Hollywood,

Swara opened her eyes and a lone tear escaped her eyes as she knew her Sanskar was safe and sound

India,

The doctors were surprised to see a new life in Sanskar, they termed it as a miracle but Sanskar knew it was the magic of Swara's unconditional love'a love which could never be explained in terms of words but which belonged only to him'

PRECAP: Sanskar tries to find information about Swara...

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Wow finally sanskaar in to senses

Lovely update

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi Yasmin...

Apologies for the late reply and thanks for the episode dedication that was really sweet...

Do getting back to the updates from chapter 19 - 21...

Wow so it seemed that there journey was taken a beautiful turn and both swara and sanskaar souls were healing and joining each other beautifully...seemed he was to scared to let her go and her love was bringing out a softer man in him...what worries me is will he really change?

The gestures form the hugs to the kiss to the dress and her trying to cook for him all.showed the direction of a bond of love but I see there was a twist at the end. ...afterall she confessed she loved him but he didn't...I agree he loved her but she lover him.with her soul as he was not just her lover but also her prayer...

And at this time I see that sk is too week to understand this...He values her friendship bit does he value himself a little bit more? Only time will.tell... and how will tara react after all he is her money bank a golden egg...? As they say love is gained slowly and sk I am sorry to say has not fully learnt yet what people are really like a dream what swara is to him...

Yes he loved her and showed her through his actions what he felt but that night maybe magical for both both but I feel that sk soul is still dark and weak..

And I see that happen just like I expected from reading the updates 22-35...seems tara reentry and her words made him once again forget his friend and bring to front his ego...Once again he failed to see care and the value of true companionship before his desire of fame...she played him well...

It's true what people say...The actions we take are a direct reaction from the company we keep but what we do is directly the actions of our own inner conflict...and I see he held his fame or ego higher then the value of care shown by his wife. ...poor soul was waiting for her surprise hope for a simple declaration of love...

I see he gave her rose but they say the colour of red defines love but...I see for her it defined the end of her soul..

She held the sindoor hoping he would make her his for life and there he came like a storm to destroy the one little dream she had...

I see she dreamed a simple dream of having a soul mate yet all he saw was money...as he handed her the paper did he fail to read her eyes...did he not see her pain. ..yes he has an ego but he was in her company for so long..If she wanted money she would have gone a got it herself..

But he failed to see that and that what I loved when at the end she spoke and told him to go to he'll and hence not only her dream was broken but the pure bond was also shattered...The significance of that was shown by the breaking of her wedding chain...

The whole process was beautifully written and was a soulful update that not every shining star has is magical some give light and some just create darkness just like he did..

Loved the bond of prem adi and sanju...lovely entries and I love the twist too...Make her a legend but I see even today she may claim she hates him but her love for him is still there...This is why when he tried to harm himself she knew and prayed...

A simple prayer for his well being it will he be able to heal her...

I see she was wearing a bracelet was this a gift from sanskaar? It seems special...

As for the tara sk twist...loved the way he was shown that he holds no value I her life form the rejection of the party too the gift being given to the dog...

Like the contrast shown between both woman..

One that lived to make him smile and one that was using him for her own gain...

Like all wise men and woman have said wealth doesn't aways bring us happiness sometimes the greatest wealth we can have is to be happy with what we have but poor guy failed to see that after all he was blind with pride. ..

Hate to say it but sk deserved to see these reality checks of only he had been shown earlier...

I really do hope in the future that sk goes back to there old flat and sees what he did to swara...Will he ever see those yellow roses or the diary at the start that she kept...

So many questions but one thing is for sure you conveyed it beautifully love can bring smiles but love can bring pain. ..buy each journey has its share of thorns that have to be crossed before forgiveness can be attained...

Always waiting to read more...update soon...

Take care

Razia

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. I have planned a special update on the 50th part of Jaane tu I am sure each one of u will like it

Love-Yasmin

Chapter: 36

Hollywood,

A lone tear escaped from Swara's eyes as she knew her Sanskar was safe and sound

The wind was giving her this message, her BRACELET was dancing in happiness giving her an indication that her love had brought him back from the clutches of death and now there was no need to worry

Prem: Tumhare ye aasu tumhari dil ki sachhayi bayan kar rahe hai Swara lagta hai ab sab thik hai haina? [Your tears are narrating the truth of your heart Swara it seems everything is under control now right?]

It was only at that particular moment when Swara sensed the presence of the foursome

Swara tried to wipe her tears but Sanju stopped her

Sanju: Inn aasuo ko behne doh Swara kyunki ye uss khaas insaan ke liye tumhare paak rishte ki khoobsurati bayan kar rahe hai jisse ke main aaj tak nahi mili, par aaj itna jaan chuki hoon ke badi shidat hai tumhari wafha mein aur wo insaan behet hi khushnaseeb hoga jo ke tumhare khoobsurat dil ka devta hai [Let the tears flow Swara as it is showing the divinity and loyalty for that special person with whom u share this beautiful relationship, I have not met that person but I am aware that there is an angelic intensity in your devotion towards him. The person is indeed lucky as he is the God of such a golden heart]

Swara felt a strange pain with Sanju's innocent words. She preferred to remain silent

Brad: Swara what type of behaviour is this?

Swara: I am sorry Brad I shouldn't have left the shooting

Brad: Oh my goodness. Swara who is talking about the shooting u r my friend dear and I was worried for u. U should have atleast informed one of us. Do u even realize what mental trauma did each one of us go through?

Swara held her ears like a small baby

Swara: I am sorry my strict Director oops I mean my dear friend pls forgive me

All of a sudden the tension vanished and everyone started smiling

Sanju wanted to ask some questions to Swara but Prem requested Sanju to close this chapter here itself

Sanju understood and this was for the first time when Prem and Sanju agreed to a particular issue

Brad cancelled the shoot and requested Swara to take rest

Brad dropped his collegues to their residence and he left for his house

Swara went to her room as she wanted to spend some time with herself

She sat at the window and kept looking at the moon, her best friend.

Meanwhile,

In India

Sanskar was perfectly fine now but the doctors wanted him to stay at the hospital for some more time

But Sanskar could not afford to waste a single moment sitting idle

He had to find his Swara by any means

He was ready to beg for her love, to kneel down on his knees and accept the punishment that she would give to him

He was ready to sell every possession of his just to get a glimpse of his soul, his Swara

Without giving a second thought to the doctor's advice Sanskar got up and started his preparations to leave the hospital

The doctors were trying to convince him that his body is weak but he knew that he was mentally strong due to the gracious touch of Swara's love

Sanskar: Doctor saahab main apna pura khayal rakhunga kyunki aaj se Sanskar ki zindagi Sanskar ki nahi kisi khaas heere ki amanat hai'ek aisa heera jo ke mere zindagi ki roshni hai [Doctor I will take full care of myself as from today onwards my life is the belongs to a special pearl'a pearl who is the light of my life]

He payed a check for his treatment and walked out of the hospital to find the soul of his life

As soon as Sanskar stepped out of the hospital the journalists pounced on him with his questions

Hollywood,

Sanju's words were still ringing in Swara's mind

Swara: (looking at the moon) Sanju ko lagta hai k main unke liye khaas hoon aur wo mujhe ab bhi yaad karte hai kitni galatfaimi hai usse [Sanju feels that I am an integral part of his life and he remembers me, she has so many misconceptions in her mind]

India,

Journalist: Ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai Sanskar? Aapne itna bada kadam kyun uthaya? Aapne ek baar bhi apne chahnewale khaas logo ke baare mein nahi socha? [How r u feeling Sanskar? Why did u take such a drastic step? U did not think of your loved ones even for a minute]

Sanskar: Ye sach hai meri bewakhoofi se ek paak ruh ko thes pauchi hai par aaj main jaan chukka hoon ke wo meri zindagi ki wo leh hai jo mere seene mein dhadakthi hai ab main usse kabhi koi thes nahi pauchaunga [I agree that my stupidity caused a tremendous pain to a divine soul but today I have realized that she is the wave of my life which flows in my heart and from now onwards I will not be the reason for her pain]

Hollywood

Swara: Sanju keh rahi thi k wo khusnaseeb hai jo unhe meri wafhao ki dua mili par afsoos main jaanti hoon ki meri parchayi bhi unhe baddua lagthi hai'[Sanju considers him lucky as he got the prayers of my loyalty but alas I am aware for him my shadow is also a curse]

India,

Sanskar did not wait for any further questions he continued

Sanskar: Aaj tak ek badnaseeb zindagi jeeta aa raha tha main par ab jald hi main apni khushnaseebi ko puri izzat se apne maathe ki lakeer banauga, usse hi nahi balki uski parchayi ko bhi apne sachhe pyar ki khushboo se mehkaunga [I was living an unfortunate life till today but now I will wleocme my fortune with due respect in my life by decorating her as my destiny, I will decorate not only her but also her shadow with the fragrance of my true love]

Hollywood,

Swara: Kaash atteeth ke panno se main wo khoobsurat pal chura paathi toh shayad aaj apne adhurepan ka mujhe ehsaas nahi hotha [I wish I could steal some beautiful memories from my past life then maybe this feeling of lonliness won't have haunted me]

India,

Sanskar: Mere ateeth k khoobsurat lamhe ussi din chut gaye jab maine tumhe beizzat ki par ab nahi main aa raha hoon tumhare har aasuo ko apne pyar ki kashish se ubarne, tumhare seene mein jalthi hui aag ko apne mohabbat ki thandak se mitane humari aanewali zindagi ko sapno se bhi zyada khoobsurat banane [I had lost the precious chapters of my past the day I insulted ubut now this won't happen I am coming to wipe yours tears with the mesmerizing touch of my love, to suppress the fire of your heart with the coolness of my unconditional love, to make our future life more beautiful than a fairytale]

Hollywood,

Swara: Kaash kabhi unki nazre mere intezaar bein bhichthi [I so wished his eyes would lay a carpet for my arrival atleast once]

India,

Sanskar: Ab toh zindagi ki aakhri saas tak tumhara intezaar karunga shayad tum mujhe kabhi maaf na kar paau par aaj se meri zindagi ki har ek khushi tumse hai aur marte dum tak tumhi meri sabse anmol darohar rahogi, tum mujhse nafrat kar lo par main tumpar pyar ki bauchar kar dunga wo pyar jispar sirf tumhara haq tha aur rahega wo pyar main tumhe launane aa raha hoon [I will wait for u till the last breath of my life, maybe u won't be able to forgive me that easily but fro mnow onwards I write every happiness of my life on your name, u will be my most priceless possession till I breathe my last, U can hate me but I promise to shower u with my love, the love that belonged and belongs to u. I am coming to gift u your most precious possession your love.]

Sanskar entered his car leaving the puzzled journalists behind

Some of the journalists assumed that this was some dialogue of Sanskar's new movie, some started speculating the entry of a new girl in SK's life

One journalist could not control his anxiety

He asked one final question to Sanskar by knocking the glass of his car

Journalist: Kya SK ki zindagi mein koi nayi ladki aa gayi hai? [Is there a new girl in SK's life?]

Sanskar: SK ki maut toh coma mein hi ho chuki thi aap jisse baat kar rahe ho wo toh Sanskar hai ek saadaran sa insaan jise ek asaadaran ladki ne badi shidat se apnaya hai main toh bus apni ussi amanat ki taalash mein nikal pada hoon. SK ki zindagi mein shayad kayi ladkiyaan aa jaa sakthi thi par Sanskar ki zindagi mein bus ek hi naam sunehre aksharo mein likha hai aur uss naam par sirf Sanskar ka haq thik ussi tarah jaise Sanskar par sirf uska haq hai [SK had died in the coma itself, u r talking to Sanskar who is an ordinary man but is blessed with the love of an extraordinary angel. I am going in search of my soul and I will get her back soon. Many girls must have entered in SK's life but there is only one name that is imprinted with golden letters in Sanskar's life. She is mine only mine exactly the way I am hers only hers]

Sanskar asked the driver to start the car

He asked the driver to go to the director's house who had directed Swasan for the last time together

He was sure that the director would know about Swara's whereabouts as he was very close to Swara

He rushed out of his car as soon as he reached the bunglow

He had full hopes that he would find a way to get back his love very soon

The servant opened the door and asked Sanskar to take a seat

The servant goes to call the Director

Sanskar was desperate to get some information about his Swara

He was so restless that he started pacing here and there in the room

Director: SK aap yaha kaise? [SK what r u doing here?]

Sanskar: Director saahab mujhe aapse Swara ke baare mein kuch baat karni hai [I need to talk to u regarding Swara]

Director: Kaun Swara? Main kisi Swara ko nahi jaanta. Lagta hai aap kisi galat pate par aa gaye hai [Who is Swara? I don't know anyone by this name. It seems that u have landed at a wrong address]

The director had a very special connection with Swara and he didn't want Sanskar to pose any problems for her hence he decided not to divulge any information

The director started to walk to his room when Sanskar stopped him

Sanskar: Rukhiye Director saahab [Pls wait Sir]

The director was shocked to see the sight in front of his eyes

PRECAP: Sanskar trailed a slow path to her bre**t teasing her hardened nip**e as his wife pulled him closer by entangling her fingers in his hair

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Chapter: 37

The director had a very special connection with Swara and he didn't want Sanskar to pose any problems for her hence he decided not to divulge any information

The director started to walk to his room when Sanskar stopped him

Sanskar: Rukhiye Director saahab [Pls wait Sir]

The director was shocked to see the sight in front of his eyes

******

The sun rays slowly knocked the doors of their privacy bringing in the message of a new morning

The breeze was making the curtains to dance to the tunes of their love perfuming the surroundings with the fragrance of their blissful and magical journey that they lived last night

Their life was more beautiful than a fairy tale now, after every passionate night they would open their eyes in each other's arms

His hands started roaming shamelessly on her silky smooth back teasing her senses and asking her to place her legs into a paradise which was decorated with the flowers of their love

She cuddled securely in his embrace allowing her soul to get intoxicated with his manly cologne

He crushed her possessively and marked her heart with his name by gifting a passionate love bite on her chest making her realize that she belonged only to him

Hmm'Sanskar she moaned his name

Sanskar: Good morning Mrs. Khurana

He moved her tresses to one side and nuzzled his nose on the border of her neck drugging her to an unlimited extent

She bit his earlobe as her hands moved to the lower part of his body trying to gift him the same dose of sweet torture that she was experiencing right now

Oh her sensuous touch was making him insane; his focus got diverted as her fingers gracefully touched his manhood paralyzing his entire existence killing him within a matter of seconds

She let out an innocent chuckle as she felt proud to see her effect on him; she had the power to murder him with her gentle touch as well as to gift him a new life by kissing him so sacredly that their souls would get united till eternity spreading the shine of their love in all directions

She placed a quick peck on his lips and was about to run away when Sanskar trapped her beneath him by getting on top of her

His eyes took a seductive approach as he started relishing on her perfect and mesmerizing feminine form in the early morning rays of the sun

Her cheeks adorned a beautiful pink blush as he started fanning her tender lips with his warm breath

She parted her lips and expressed her desire to be claimed by the man whom she loved beyond sanity; her charming husband; yes her only dream, her Sanskar

She gasped as Sanskar bit the tip of her nose instead of kissing her

She expressed her displeasure by hitting him playfully on his chest

Sanskar got hold of her wrist and took her hand to his mouth

He placed one finger of hers into his mouth and started sucking it with immense care and love

Her breaths became heavy as Sanskar's finger trailed a slow path to her bre**t teasing her hardened nip**e

Unable to resist her desires any longer she pulled him closer by entangling her fingers in his hair and captured his lips within her territory giving rise to a soul searing kiss

Oh this was the sweetest way of welcoming a new day for him, he was just about to respond back with equal passion when his innocent seductress, his darling wife pushed him playfully and escaped from his loving folds and entered the washroom leaving him unsatisfied

He rushed behind her but she was successful in closing the door before he could join her in

Sanskar: Swara darwaza kholo Swara [Swara open the door]

Swara: Bada maza aa raha thana janab ko mujhe chedthe hue ab pachtayiye[U were enjoying the teasing session now bear the fruits of your act]

Sanskar: Jaan tum jaanti hona hum humesha ikathe shower lethe hai[Darling u r aware that we both share the shower together]

Swara: Ji haan aur uss shower ke dauran aap jo mujhe chedthe ho aaj ussi ka badla main aapse lungi aaj aap shower bagal wale bathroom mein lenge kyunki aaj aapki Swara aapki pyari baato mein nahi aanewali [Yes and u tease my senses to a great extent during the shower so today your wife has decided to punish u and ur punishment is to take the shower in the adjacent bathroom as today your Swara is not in a mood to fall for your sweet talks]

Sanskar: Swara kholo na Jaan [Swara pls open the door darling]

Swara: Aapki Jaan ka ye hukum hai Sanskar kya aap humari baat nahi manenge? [This is the order of ur wife Sanskar won't u listen to her?]

Sanskar: Tumhare liye toh main kuch bhi kar saktha hoon Swara [I can do anything for u Swara]

Swara blushed as her heart understood the depth and truth of his words

Sanskar entered the other washroom and both of them had a quick shower

Sanskar had decorated the entire room with yellow rose flowers, their relationship might have changed but they were still best friends

Swara's love had changed Sanskar

He was now a down to earth person, who had a heart of gold

He was a man who could read and understand the language of unsaid words

Every pore of his skin was a slave of Swara's unconditional love

Every corner of his huge Mansion had the fragrance of Swara in it

Every wall of his house was a reflection of her inner beauty

The color of the curtains reflected the purity of her soul making him feel the luckiest person of this universe

His life had changed a lot in these 3 months

He understood the magic that true love possessed and this magic gave him the power and strength to name his life on her name

He knew she might have dressed up by now and she must be waiting for the greatest ornament that he was holding in his hands right now which would glorify her beauty to an unimaginable level

This was the most precious moment of his day

He started approaching their room with a beautiful smile on his face

He entered the room and as expected she was waiting for him desperately

She lowered her eyelids as he started approaching her

He went on his knees and kissed her forehead lovingly thanking her for decorating his life with the folds of her love

He took the sindoor and beautified her soul with the colors of their love

Sanskar: I love u Swara

He looked deep into her eyes and saw the traces of a hidden pain in it

Before he could wipe away her pain, an unwanted guest knocked the doors of their privacy as his cell started ringing

He placed the sindoor on the table and attended the call

Sanskar: Kya wo waha bhi nahi hai khair madat ke liye shukriyaan [What she is not there? Thanks for ur help]

He looked at Swara

Sanskar: Aaj pure 3 mahine ho gaye hai Swara par aaj bhi main wahi khada hoon jaha pehle tha. Par in teen mahino mein jaanti ho mera hausla kyun nahi tuta kyunki tumhara pyar mere haath thame mere andhere rasto ko ujagaar kar raha hai' aur ek din humara yahi pyar hume milwayega [It has been 3 months now but I am still standing where I had been 3 months back; still my hopes are standing high and the credit of this goes to ur love as ur love is guiding me in every dark road that I have to face and I am sure one day this love of ours will help us to get united]

He kissed her statue; yes this was a living dream of Swara

Sanskar had tried his level best to get information about Swara but everywhere he had to face failure

He still remembered the day when he had met the director

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Sanskar: Rukhiye Director saahab [Pls wait Sir]

The director was shocked to see the sight in front of his eyes

Sanskar bowed down in front of him

Director: Sanskar ye aap kya kar rahe hai? [Sanskar what r u doing?]

Sanskar: Main jaanta hoon ke maine jo kiya wo maafi layak nahi par aaj mujhe apne sachhe pyar ka ehsaas ho gaya hai aur main usse uske hisse ki khusi dena chahtha hoon'.meri baato par aapko shayad yakeen na ho par main Swara se beshuma mohabbat karta hoon ho sake toh uski mohabbat ki bheek mujhe de dijiye meri Swara ka pata mujhe bata dijiye [I am aware I have commited a sin which cannot be forgiven but today I have realized the sacredness of my love and I want to shower her with the love that she deserves. I agree it will be difficult for u to trust me but this is the truth I love Swara to a great extent I beg in front of u pls tell me the whereabouts of my Swara]

Director places his hands on Sanskar's shoulders and requests him to get up

Director: Tumhari aakhon mein mujhe sachhayi nazar aa rahi hai Sanskar par afsoos tumne aane mein kafi der kar di main tumhari koi madat nahi kar satha kyunki Swara kaha hai ye baat main khud nahi jaanta par aaj jo pyar mujhe tumhari aakhon mein nazar aaya ussi pyar ko apni takat banakar apni Swara ko dhundo wo tumhe zarur milegi [I can see true love in your eyes Sanskar but u r late as I have no idea where Swara is but the love that I can see in your eyes today make this love your strength and search her sincerely I am sure u will get your life back very soon]

FLASHBACK ENDS

From that day Sanskar had used all his resources to find the whereabouts of Swara but everyday he had to face failure

He decided to dedicate every breath of his life to Swara right from that day

He renamed his Mansion as "Swasan" and changed every small and big thing of his life and house as per Swara's likings

He decorated the walls of his house with Swara's portraits and himself carved a beautiful statue of Swara and placed it right in the middle of his bedroom

This was his living dream, he knew Swara was not there with him but he made it a point that he sensed her essence in every phase of his life

He was a superstar, he had money, fame, status but still he longed to see the face of his angel, his Swara

His failures were increasing the love that he possessed for Swara

He prayed for her safety and wellbeing

He took care of himself as he knew he was her possession

He imagined her in every gust of wind that flew

He knew she was not there with him but his love had now taken a divine form and he was confident that one day his Swara would be in his arms

It was time for his shoot. He took his stuffs and kissed her portrait once again

A melodious sound echoed in the breeze as he made way from to his car

Sanskar:

"Nahi saamne ye alag baat hai

Nahi saamne ye alag baat hai

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai mere saath hai mere saath hai"

[In your absence such a strange thing happens

In your absence such a strange thing happens

U're close to me I have u here with me"]

Love had changed Sanskar and Destiny was planning to bless him by giving him a clue of his Swara'.

PRECAP: Sanskar gets a glimpse of Swara...

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it. Since majority of u told me to update Jaane Tu I decided to go with it. From today the second major part of the story has started and this marks the beginning of a journey wherein Sanskar will prove his love in front of Swara to win her back, loads of Swasan moments both emotional as well as romantic is in store for each one of u😳 Besides this most of u were asking about Naitnara well guys if you'll remember NT got a movie with Karan Johar and according to her rules she does not pay attention to her personal life when it comes to opportunties that make her famous, Sanskar was always a secondary option for her and hence she is least bothered about him as far as Sanskar is considered he has already thrown NT from his life so there is no need for him to know about her whereabouts. Many of u were asking me to give NT a solid punishment I have already decided her PUNISHMENT but it will take some few updates before she gets what she deserves.

Love-Yasmin

Chapter: 38

A melodious sound echoed in the breeze as he made way to his car

Sanskar:

"Nahi saamne ye alag baat hai

Nahi saamne ye alag baat hai

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai mere saath hai mere saath hai"

[In your absence such a strange thing happens

In your absence such a strange thing happens

U're close to me I have u here with me"]

Love had changed Sanskar and Destiny was planning to bless him by giving him a clue of his Swara'.

Los Angeles

The media was welcomed on a grand scale to Brad's new bunglow

All the media people were confused regarding the motive behind this sudden invitation as this was totally unexpected

Everyone had questions in their mind and all of them were waiting for Brad's arrival to get an answer

After few minutes

Brad made his presence felt in his usual charismatic style

Without wasting any further time he decided to come directly to the point

Brad: I am sure this was an unexpected call as none of u had anticipated this

The journalists nodded their head in approval

Brad: So let me clear the purpose of this conference. I have called this meet to announce the movie which marks my directorial debut

There was absoulute silence for few seconds

Brad: Surprised?

Brad: I think I can read your minds; each one of u might be thinking why this news of me turning a director didn't leak before?

Brad: Well the answer is very simple since this is my directorial debut I wanted to announce this news in a grand fashion and that too only after the completion of the movie and hence I made it a point that every element of this movie right from the cast to the plot remains a secret till the last moment

The journalists were getting shock after shock

Brad: Yes, the movie is complete and I have called this conference to show the first ever promo of my movie but before that let me introduce one of the rare and priceless treasure associated with this movie without whose contribution my dream project wouldn't have been successful

Brad: Please welcome the girl with a golden heart who is an epitome and reflection of true beauty, the actress of my movie, my friend and my colleague

The spotlight shifted to the stairs and a beautiful princess descended down in a royal style

Meanwhile,

In India

Sanskar was busy with his shooting when all of a sudden he got a call from a trustworthy source

Sanskar attented the call and got to know about the biggest news that was spreading like fire in the entire glamor industry

He requested the director to switch on the TV as he wanted to give the wings of reality to his dreams

Hollywood,

Like a true gentleman Brad welcomed Swara and guided her to the center of the hall

The media started clicking photographs of both of them

Brad: Meet the gorgeous Swara Handa; the leading actress of my movie.

Dekho chodke kis raste ko wo jaate hai

Saare raste wapis mere dil ko aate hai

Sanskar's eyes were transfixed on the giant screen; all of a sudden the suffocation that was present in his breath started vanishing. His curse got converted into a boon as he got a glimpse of his angel'His Swara

Oh'oh oh '

His heart started beating rapidly as he allowed his trembling fingers to move towards the TV screen, emotions were flooding his heart but a lone tear that escaped his eyes was enough to narrate the loneliness of his soul

A smile made way to his face as he realized that his Swara was safe and sound. He started touching the area on the TV screen wherein Swara was standing; as if caressing her face with the purity of his love'.

Nahi saamne

Music

Swara's heart skipped a beat and she started looking hear and there, she could never forget his touch yes she could feel the warm touch of his hand on her soft and rosy cheek

Nahi saamne ye alag baat hai

Sanskar could read her eyes; yes he had learned the language of silence in her absence he could now understand the tale of every breath of hers and hence realized that she was still his'

Mere paas hai

Yes she was his possession only his'

He looked at his SPECIAL RING with utmost love and placed a kiss on it

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Swara immediately touched her BRACELET as she got scared of losing control on her emotions'Why was it getting so difficult for her? Why did she get the feel that he kissed her tenderly just few moments before?

Music

Hmm'.hmm'

Sanskar kept on admiring his angel; she was still unchanged, pure and divine

With every love filled look of his, Sanskar was making several promises to his lady love

Swara was almost lost in the message that the wind was carrying with it but before she was totally drugged Brad helped her to come back to reality by requesting her to answer the questions of the press

There was a slight movement of her lips giving indications that very soon the atmosphere would dance to the tunes of her musical voice

Tera naam maine liya hai yaha

Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai waha

Sanskar was dying to hear her melodious voice

Sanskar: Kuch kaho Swara'.[Pls say something Swara]

Swara drank her saliva as soon as he took her name

Tera naam maine liya hai yaha

Mujhe yaad tune kiya hai waha

Swara started speaking to the press and briefed them about her debut Hollywood movie. Her face was the center of attraction for the entire world but Sanskar's eyes moved towards her hand, she was trying to hide something yes she was hiding her BRACELET

Bade zor ki aaj barsaat

Sanskar was unable to make out what exactly the thing was but the slight presence of dew in her eyes was enough to tell him that this thing was a major part of their life'a life which was blissful and like a paradise but which had turned into a hell just coz of his foolishness

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai

Swara was unable to cry in front of the world but Sanskar did not stop himself from crying, he allowed the unshed tears of Swara to flow through his eyes trying to give some relief to the queen of his heart

Music

It was strange but the burden of Swara's heart started reducing with every tear drop that made way through Sanskar's eyes

Sanskar moved his ear next very close to the TV screen and closed his eyes to engrave every musical pearl that his Swara uttered permanently in his breath

His beautiful moment was disturbed as Brad welcomed Prem, Adi and Sanjana on the stage and all 5 of them gave a green signal to the first promo of their dream project

Sanskar sat on the ground as the chaor on which he was sitting had a height which was more than the height of the TV screen he wanted to make an eye to eye contact with his life

Everyone present on the set was shocked but Sanskar was least bothered today the greatest truth of his life was Swara the rest of the world was nothing in front of her

Bichad ke bhi mujhse juda tu nahi

Khafa hai magar bewafa tu nahi

The promo was a beautiful blend of music, passion and true love reminding Sanskar the moments that they had shared together.

Those were the golden moments of his life, he still remembered the day Swara had submitted herself, her complete existence to him without any expectations but'.

Bichad ke bhi mujhse juda tu nahi

Khafa hai magar bewafa tu nahi

But' a feeling of guilt crossed his face as soon as he remembered the harsh and heart breaking words that he had uttered "WEAK MOMENT THAT MATERIALIZED BETWEEN 2 YOUTHS"

How could he do this with a pure soul like Swara'he looked at the TV screen once again and analysed the pain that his angel was hiding behind the plastic smile that she was carrying on her face

Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai

Yes he was wrong but now he won't allow his foolishness to destroy their life, he looked towards the sky and thanked destiny for giving him a clue of his Swara. He was now ready to rewrite their love story with such perfection that their bond will become eternal

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai

He kissed the TV screen once again and took a snap of Swara on his mobile

He moved his lips close to her ear and whispered

Sanskar: Main aa raha hoon Swara sari duriyon ko mitane tumhare paas. I love u [I am coming Swara to erase all the distances between us. I love u]

Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai

Mere saath hai mere saath hai

The tears that Swara had controlled for so long crossed the boundaries of her eyes as soon as she heard this message. The promo ended and the press was invited for lunch and all of them started moving towards the hall

Swara was moving slowly it seemed she was sure that he is going to come and once again her eyes had started to weave a dream but this time along with her heart her dreams had to take the permission of her mind before going ahead.

The TV screen blurred but there was a determination in Sanskar's eyes, Swara's one glimpse had given him a new hope and this time he was all set to convert this hope into a reality which was more magical than a paradise

Sanskar contacts his secretary and orders him to book the tickets of Los Angeles

PRECAP: Sanskar at Los Angeles

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Edited by kashaf789 - 8 years ago