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Posted: 8 years ago

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

It is a very different idea I loved it I got confused when everything was going well but suddenly everything got changed but it is a nice os

When people are in coma their mind works yet they remain unconcious the matters regarding coma is not very clear in medical science in coma the mind works yet they are not conscious that is where the belief started that when people slips into coma the soul goes to some other world there are many movies telifilm made in this concept I had seen a telifilm where a girl and a guy meets both in coma they talks, gets to know each other ,goes to many places but as far as I remember it had sad ending only one person had came out of coma the other had died

But we have happy ending here both came out of coma and remember each other very well

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Viji dear,

The dreams or visions... wow! Steamy, scorching, hot like the sun! I was drooling literally.. 😳 you should've added their real life bits and pieces.. If the dreams can be so sensuous , I can't imagine what would be the real life pictures! Or are you afraid you'll need to call fire brigade? 😉

Unusual concept .. currently reading a story on dream themes on Swasan in wattpad... but the plot is entirely different.

Keep it up! 😃

Love,
Dyuti

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear Viji,

What a wonderful way to wake up. I am glad you gave in wrote this story. It has faint echoes of "Just Like Heaven" but your story is way better. Indeed a true soul mate union if it were, after all they were destined to meet - and even death threatened to steal them, they did fight and win.

Who cares if those were dreams (common ones which they both saw) or glimpses of the possible life together, it did keep them for each other.

I loved it, I will come back for a detailed take but just had to let you know.

love,

Nyna

PS - You have missed out marking it as "Nocopy"?

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanya17
It is a very different idea I loved it I got confused when everything was going well but suddenly everything got changed but it is a nice os
When people are in coma their mind works yet they remain unconcious the matters regarding coma is not very clear in medical science in coma the mind works yet they are not conscious that is where the belief started that when people slips into coma the soul goes to some other world there are many movies telifilm made in this concept I had seen a telifilm where a girl and a guy meets both in coma they talks, gets to know each other ,goes to many places but as far as I remember it had sad ending only one person had came out of coma the other had died

But we have happy ending here both came out of coma and remember each other very well

Hey Sanya my dear pal 🤗

So very glad to know you loved it. It was an almost random thought which came to me and refused to go away until I write it down. 😆

I think the movie you are referring to is Awaken? That was a lovely movie, I really enjoyed watching it. I was inspired by a few plot elements in both Awaken and Just Like Heaven, as I mentioned in the prologue; but I had written this OS to follow a different path.

Really touched by your words. 😊 🤗

Love,

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Viji dear,

The dreams or visions... wow! Steamy, scorching, hot like the sun! I was drooling literally.. 😳 you should've added their real life bits and pieces.. If the dreams can be so sensuous , I can't imagine what would be the real life pictures! Or are you afraid you'll need to call fire brigade? 😉

Unusual concept .. currently reading a story on dream themes on Swasan in wattpad... but the plot is entirely different.

Keep it up! 😃

Love,
Dyuti

Thanks a lot, Dyuti 🤗 Very happy to know that you loved this piece.

I was going all 😳 ☺️ when I wrote their dreams/ visions about their time together, so I am very glad you found them scorching and sensuous. 😳 The way I see it, those dreams are actually real life snippets---their visions of their life together, of moments yet to come.

So you read/ write on wattpad as well as here? I'm not on wattpad at all; how is the level of activity there? But I am way too emotionally attached to this forum; its like my second home. I've made such amazing friends here; I doubt if I would ever get on to another platform.

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Viji,
What a wonderful way to wake up. I am glad you gave in wrote this story. It has faint echoes of "Just Like Heaven" but your story is way better. Indeed a true soul mate union if it were, after all they were destined to meet - and even death threatened to steal them, they did fight and win.

Who cares if those were dreams (common ones which they both saw) or glimpses of the possible life together, it did keep them for each other.

I loved it, I will come back for a detailed take but just had to let you know.

love,
Nyna

PS - You have missed out marking it as "Nocopy"?

Nynu 🤗🤗

Yes, I finished writing this late into Friday night (wee hours of Saturday morning), so forgot the codes for members only and No Copy. 😆 Added those now, you are a sweetheart for dropping in that heads up. Well---you are a sweetheart anyway. 😊 🤗

Am so very glad and immensely touched, to know you loved this. It was more of one of my random OS ideas, that strike me when I am lying awake, trying desperately to sleep. 😆 😉

Yup, I was inspired a little bit by some plot elements from Just Like Heaven as well as Awaken, as I had mentioned in the prologue. Awaken is the better movie, Nynu---have you seen it? Much better than Just Like Heaven, I would say---though Awaken is far more filled with melancholy, pathos, and a sense of loss.

I did love to think in this OS, that the dreams SwaSan both saw, were in actual fact, visions of their future together, of their lovely moments yet to come. Thrilled that you loved that. 😳

I will be dozing this afternoon for a few hours, I am certain! 😆 Both Thursday and Friday nights have been insomnia ridden, having visions of SwaSan having visions of each other. 😉 😳

P.S: Sunny and Swara's favorite song---rings a bell, no? 😉 Rafi saab's rendition of Ehsaan Tera Hoga Mujhpar--- One of the greatest, immortal odes to love...I've always felt, that just listening to him singing that song, makes one believe in a love which is so pure and divine...

Loads of Love and Hugs,

----Viji

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kojagorimalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

I m absolutely in love with ur one shot it was beautiful ...the true meaning of soulmates can be visioned ...sunny's shona and shona's sunny...awww...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik
I m absolutely in love with ur one shot it was beautiful ...the true meaning of soulmates can be visioned ...sunny's shona and shona's sunny...awww...

Thanks so much Moumita 🤗 Very glad to know that you loved it. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi Guys 🤗🤗

Immensely moved by all the likes and comments, even before I sent out PMs. 😳 ☺️ Please bear with me, will be sending those out later today.

I am making good progress on the final proof of Chapter 6 of 'The Maheshwari House Murders' as well, for those who were asking. 😊 I do plan, all going well, to post that by mid week. That chappie would wrap up the mystery; depending on length, there might be a final chapter to round off the tale and conclude the story arc. No epilogue planned.

Wish you and yours a Very Merry Xmas. 🤗🤗 All my pals on the forum: you have filled my life with so much joy, warmth and cheer, over the past year and a half. Love you all. 🤗 🤗

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