SWASAN OS - ROMANCE PERSONIFIED

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I dedicate this OS to all the lovely friends I found on this forum. I am not going to take names as I fear I might forget anyone as there are so many😳


So just dedicate to ALLšŸ¤—


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Romance Personified



She leaned more on to the window, gazing out, enjoying the chill and cold weather at the midnight. "It's so beautiful na Sanskar" she slightly tilted her head towards Sanskar sitting on the driver seat, moving car with a smooth speed. "Hmm" he replied adoringly, with a heart-warming smile crept to his face.


"Stop stop" she made a high-pitched shout resulting him to halt his car applying immediate brakes. "What was this?" he asked, adjusting his hairs properly, in disbelief of how loudly she screamed.


She stepped out, removing her seat belt without giving any answers to him. Sanskar couldn't help but shook his head at the crazy antics of his wife. He saw her, standing in the middle of road, looking above at the sky.


Seeing no other option, he got out. "What is this Swara?" he asked, as he made a quick walk towards her. The moment he stood in front of her, his eyes couldn't leave her face. She looked so divine in the middle of night. Her closed eyes, which were indicating the feel she was taking. Her soft smile showed how much she was enjoying.


"What are you staring at?" the moment she opened her eyes, she found him in front, totally lost in her. The mischievousness in his eyes did not go unnoticed by him. She stared at him with her wide eyes when he circled his hands around her waist and before she could understand anything, he pulled her towards him in a swift. She lifted her hands towards his neck, wrapping them around, adjusting herself properly in his arms.


"Can't even I adore my beautiful wife now?" he replied, answering her to the question which he left unanswered. A sweet pinkish blush heated up her cheeks, hearing his complement. "Of course you can my dearest hubby" she lovingly said, before she planted a kiss on his cheek which left him amused.


"Someone is being damn romantic" he mumbled leaning forward towards her. She pushed him a little, placing her palm on his chest, which caused a cute frown on his face. "Not so soon Sanskar" she giggled seeing his annoyed face. She took off her hands from his neck, trying to get out of his hold but he tightened it. It seemed like Sanskar Maheshwari was in no mood of leaving his darling wife.


"Why you always try to get away from me? Don't you love me? Its been almost six months to our marriage and you have time for everybody in my family except for me, right?" he asked her, narrowing his eyes at her. They had been married before six months. Their marriage was love cum arrange. They knew each other from their childhood and so did their parents. Before they could realize how much they were in love with each other, their families sensed it and tied them in sacred bond of marriage for the rest of their lives. Their life had been beautiful. Being a joint family, Sanskar didn't really get much private time with his dearest wife and Swara always had been busy with home stuffs and all. So basically this had frustrated Sanskar that whenever he tried to spend some romantic time with his wife, she always ran away for some work of his family.


She laughed hearing his cute complaint. "So my dearest hubby is angry on me?...aww...you look so cute when you get angry Sanskar" she asked pinching his cheeks.


"No I am not"he said hitting his forehead lightly with hers. "You are the best thing happened to me. I can never be angry at you be it for whatever reason" he added more, getting back to his original position. "I am just very lucky to have you in my life and I am very grateful for that" love and only love was there, which made his eyes to shine with a great twinkle. She smiled over his words. "But that doesn't mean you will royally ignore me like this" now a serious demand came from him. Gazing at him for a while, she burst out laughing while on the other side; he kept staring and enjoying the eye pleasant sight in front of him, witnessing her innocent laughter. "As you say" she nodded while giggling. "Now come" saying so, she pulled his hand, holding it as she removed it from her waist. "But where? Wait let me take the car" he made her stop, not understanding where she was taking him. He asked her to wait so that he can bring the car and then they can go.


She slapped her forehead, hearing him. "No need of car my stupidly innocent hubby...we are going to reach our destination by walking" she explained him, making things clearer for him.


"What?" he exclaimed. "You can't be serious" he said, ignoring what she just said, presuming that she must be kidding. But when he looked at her, he found her standing there, crossing her arms to her chest. She didn't seem to be joking. "Oh my god, are you serious?" he once again asked, not ready to believe.


"Yes I am. I am very serious Sanskar...now come" she just held his hand and started walking."Jaisa aap kahe biwi sahiba" he said, in a very polite way, adding a spark of little funny tone making her feel delighted. She loved being addressed as his wife. That was the reason, most of the times they used hubby' and wifey' for each other than calling each other with their names.


They were walking on the empty streets of Delhi, in the chilly month of January at around 2 AM. They had merely walked few steps when she felt a tug on her hand and she stopped. She turned towards him, with her questioning eyes. "Just a minute, I'll be back" he ran back to their car. She kept staring at his retreating back to see what exactly made him go back and the next moment he was standing next to her, with a sweater in his hand, which he forwarded towards her.


She quietly took it from him and wore it. He knew, she could not bear much cold. She always felt sick with cold. "You are the most caring person I have ever met" she complemented him, while closing the buttons of the sweater.


"Madam, only I officially have the right to love you, to care for you and to protect you" he voice out his feelings. She rolled her eyes at his dramatically romantic line which dropped sheer possessiveness from it. "After our families" he added more, shutting her mouth which she had opened to exactly mention this.


"You just know everything before I say, don't you?" her most obvious statement came, which she herself didn't know how many times she uses it. A smirk played on his lips, before he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and started walking, without answering to her question. Sometimes, some questions aren't questions but complements wrapped inside.


"You know Sanskar, this was my dream from my childhood...to roam out in night with my better half" she told him, while they continued walking.


"I know my dear wife...that's why we are here today, aren't we?" his ever so loving tone was making their journey even more beautiful. They were truly going to cherish it life time. His hand slipped from her shoulder and he entwined their finger, clasping them. It was probably the most beautiful night of their life. Silent interactions are the most powerful interactions. The relation reaches to some another level when you starts accepting and understand the unsaid words of the other one.


They finally made it to the end-point of their journey. They had stopped towards a tree where a bench was kept near-by it. They both stepped in front. "Sanskar Swara...Forever Together" she repeated the words which were carved on the bench. Her fingers unknowingly caressed that portion of bench, where she herself had carved 10 years before, when they didn't even know what love is. The only fact they knew was, they are each other's life lines and they are meant to be together forever.


He sat down on the bench, making her sit beside him, holding her. She rested her head on his shoulder, while he lovingly planted an affectionate and lingering kiss on her forehead. No words exchanged between them for a while but still everything was conveyed and understood between two souls which apparently weren't two but one.


"I love you Sanskar" she whispered, in her usual tone which she always used to express her love for him. "I love too Swara" he took no time to confess her back. Some people don't need words to convey their feelings to each other, to express how much they love each other but sometimes, some gestures are necessary to let your loved one, what and how much they mean to you.

He slightly pulled himself away. She turned towards him and like always, their eyes met taking them in the world of love they had in each other's eyes. His hand reached towards her cheek, cupping it gently. He was always much careful and gentle with her. She was his delicate doll whose comfort always was his priority before anything else. Leaning forward, he rubbed his nose with her. She closed her eyes or it would be more appropriate to say, her eyes got closed. People say your eyes are always closed in love and in prayer as both are equally sacred. He always had that effect on her. What he made her feel, was out of the imagination, was something no words would be adequate to describe. Their figures leaned towards each other with a soft flow. He placed his lips over hers and rest was done gradually, automatically. They let themselves melt in that moment, with each other, in each other. Stars twinkled more brightly that night. Cold wind ran all over, spreading its chillness that night. Love was redefined that night. Romance was personified that night.

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The End

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So yes, like everyone else I am feeling really restless as well, as the serial ended. But anyway, the show wasn't running good but still its hard to digest that the duo I used to adore, could no longer be seen on screen. Hope we'll someday get a chance to relive Swasan again [ I am still praying for a season 2😳 ]


Do leave your thoughts. I would be really glad to have them.


Love

-Harshada





Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved ur os...it was beautiful serene and magical...completely effective I could actually visualize swara and sanskar walking on the street so happily...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ohhh wow it was soo beautifully written...very cute and romantic!!
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I loved it it was so sweet and cute
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Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

Loved ur os...it was beautiful serene and magical...completely effective I could actually visualize swara and sanskar walking on the street so happily...



Thank you so much dear😊
Glad you enjoyed reading it.

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just amazing. I could completely visualize the scenario. Thanks for writing such a master piece. By the way r u my harshu 😳. U seem to be her šŸ˜†
Love u loads
Nivi
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Originally posted by: kriti_atharv

ohhh wow it was soo beautifully written...very cute and romantic!!


Thank you so much dear Kirti😳
Glad you enjoyed reading it.😊

love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanya17

I loved it it was so sweet and cute



Thank you so much Sanya😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OmG harshu...
U changed user name i did not know that...??

Update was swasanliciously sweetest ever...enjoyed it

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you😳

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