Sail Through Styx A SwaSan SS complete pg 1 (12/20) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Dear Sakura,

Sometimes u find u sympathize with characters u never expected to and guess that is what I'm feeling now... I expected to feel for Swara, feel for her Lakshya, well at least feel for Sanskar but the only thought remaining at the end of this chapter is my sympathies towards Kavitha... Well unless she does something drastic, I guess I will remember the kavi in ur fic for a long tym...

Lovely SS dear... Wanted to comment on ur 1A chapter especially but missed the deadline. Somehow the beautiful descriptions of Himachal had weaved a beautiful dream in my mind. For a moment there I wanted a perfect love story of 'that' Laksh n that Swara amidst the Losar festival. Well I guess 'that'Laksh might turn out to be someone more dear now after reading the current chapter but nevertheless I had imagined the good ol' lucky getting lucky so to say! ;)

Well lemme end my long pending rant by saying, tragedies are always remembered for their 'what ifs' and somehow I have a feeling I'm going to end up reading one such wonderful 'what if' come into reality...

-Luv Niki

Originally posted by: suwas

That was surprise. What is Lakshya's mystery?

Poor Kavita. But Sanskar is just like in the show. Straight forward, practical & kindhearted. It was painful for Kavita right now but better for her in the long run.

Wondering how Swara & Sanskar come together? Is Swara going back to Perth?

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Saku,

I guess Real Laksh(dead one) had never met Swara. May be Laksh and the other guy , the 2nd Laksh (sunny/ Swara's love) were friends, had common interrest in mountaineering. 2nd one came next year in Himachal remembering Friend's death. He was from Perth originally... A lot of theories I have in mind.. Saving for the next chapter. May be 2nd Laksh just wanted to remember his friend,..

May be we are missing Sunny badly, that's why we're searching him in other guys. 😊

I felt bad for kavita she seems to be a good girl in this story by the way I felt sanskar is not being entirely truthful when he told kavita that he don't love anyone else

Originally posted by: Sanya17

I felt bad for kavita she seems to be a good girl in this story by the way I felt sanskar is not being entirely truthful when he told kavita that he don't love anyone else

you write in such a way that sometimes we start wondering over the unsaid words and unsaid feelings that is a great talent you have as a writer

This story is getting more and more interesting

Hi Saku dear, the eternal confusion you cause by 3rd person narrative.! I have a guess here... Swara and Rags both were Sunny's case. I mean He handled both sister's illness. But he fell in love with Swara. And Ragini perhaps did something ( e.g. accident ) that caused Swara to slip into coma... that's why he told,"I couldn't save her." Now both the girl is searching him.Rags-he hates her. And Swara can't remember his identity or face .. Probably Kavita's drunken curse had worked in a twisted way. So He is leaving and not looking back.

That was an extremely wild guess, I think! But you've surprised me with Munchausan syndrome! That was totally uncalled for! ⭐️ 👏

Dyuti

Originally posted by: iamreader

Res

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Thank you, but what do I owe this pleasure?😳

Your late PM. 😕 I didn't even check which chapter. 😆
Hehe but booked for the next one! 😉

Originally posted by: iamreader

Your late PM. 😕 I didn't even check which chapter. 😆
Hehe but booked for the next one! 😉