Raglak/Swasan ff Love in Air chap10 in pg 10

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Aishwarya

@Aishu08

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi hello frnds.. This is Aishu with a new story totally different ftom storyline... Hope so everyone will enjoy it...

Character Sketch

Ragini Rathore :- A sweet,lovable,beautiful , innocent girl who lives in orphanage ... Have a terrible past... Loves to sing Nd dance... Best frnd of Sanskaar...

Swara Bose :- A bubbly , fun-loving , jovial and beautiful girl who's lives with father Shekhar and mom Sharmistha... A guitaeist and dances well.. Best frnd of Laksh...

Sanskaar Gadodia :- A smart , handsome, intelligent, caring boy who lives with his parents... He is a dancer and studying MBA.. best frnd of ragini.. he knows abt ragini's past..

Laksh Maheswari :- A smart ,cool , fun loving boy who lives with his parents... He is a dancer and studying MBA.. best frnd of Swara..

Shekhar Bose :- father of Swara.. loves his daughter a lot... Frnd of durga prasad... Likes Laksh too

Sharmistha:- mother of Swara.. loves her family a lot..

Durga prasad Maheswari :- father of Laksh.. frnd of Shekhar.. loves swara and Laksh...

Annapurna :- mother of Laksh.. loves her family a lot...

Ram prasad Gadodia:- father of Sanskaar.. loves him a lot.. business partner of Shekhar.. likes ragini too..

Sujatha :- mother of Sanskaar... Loves Sanskaar and ragini a lot..

Janaki :- Runs the orphanage... Care taker of Ragini.. loves her a lot...

These are the main characters... So let me start the story..

Index

Chap 1 :- Below

Chap 2 :- below

Chap 3 :- pg 2

Chap 4 :- pg 2

Chap 5 :- pg 3

Chap 6 :- pg 4

Chap 7 :- pg 5

Chap 8 :- pg 8

Chap 9 :- pg 9

Chap 10 :- pg 10

Edited by Aishu08 - 8 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aishu08

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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 1

In this story Shekhar and Durga Prasad lives in same house as they are family frnds for years...

Shekhar:- Good morning dp...

Dp :- good morning Shekhar.. come lets have tea..

Annapurna serves tea to both of them..

Shek:- Still both are sleeping it seems??

Dp :- haan.. of course..

Sharmistha:- they both na when they will grow up.. it's because of you both.. pampering them a lot..

Ap:- haan bilkul..

Shekhar and dp smiles...

In Swara room

A girl is sleeping and smiling .. she is dreaming abt her prince..she his dancing with her prince and when the prince is abt to turn someone pours water in her face..

She screams and finds her mom laughing..

Swara :- maa.. it'd unfair.. I was abt to see my prince but you foiled it... And pours

Sharmistha:- arrey.. why to dream dear.. jus get ready and find ur prince by yourself.. before that wake up Laksh also...

Swara :- what? He is still sleeping!!

Swara runs to his room with a bucket of water..

In Laksh room

Laksh is also dreaming abt hiz princess.. he got mesmerised by seeing her eyes... When he was abt to see her face a bucket of water with swara standing...

Laksh :- Nooo Nd wakes up.. sees swara standing with the bucket... Shona.. You come to dream to disturb... I was about to see her...

Swara :- Shut up Laksh.. We need to go to college.. drop me in my college and today are you willing to meet her??

Laksh :- who?? Ohh that girl whom you say that never mingle with anyone.. Her name is what??

Swara :- Ragg.. Ragini..

Laksh :- whatever.. no mood yaar.. you know abt me rite!! She won't be suitable for me to flirt..

Swara :- okay okay.. but Laksh poor girl she is.. not talking with anyone...

Laksh : leave it shona.. lets get ready and leave...

In Gadodia house

Sujatha:- Sanskaar.. your getting late... Come fast..

Sansky:- coming mom..

She serves him breakfast and he eats..

Suju:- Sanskaar is ragini okay with that college??

Sansky:- haan maa she is but not talking with anyone maa..

Suju:- let God be with her...

Sansky:- ok maa.. bye.. I will drop her in college and then I will leave..

Suju :- drive slow dear..

In orphanage

A girl is seeing singing in front of God idol and doing aarthi.. it's Ragini...

Janaki :- beta are you comfortable with ur college??

Rag:- maa.. you know rite! I'm going there because of you and that idiot...

Voice :- are you saying me ladoo??

Rag:- of course sansky.. it's you...

Sansky:- it's getting late let's go..

Ragini and Sanskaar leaves...

Lucky drops Swara and leaves after that Sansky drops ragini and leaves...

( Swara and Ragini in same college nd Sansky & Lucky in same college)

Precap :- Lucky and Sansky talk and Swara & Ragini friendship

Please comment your views frnds...

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neilofar

@neilofar

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Aishu its interesting yaar plzz post next part soon

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Aishwarya

@Aishu08

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Posted: 8 years ago

ks for your likes and comments frnds... sorry for the late update...

Chapter 2

Swaragini College

Swara was about enter her class and finds some guys are teasing ragini.. Ragini is frightened and crying...

Swara was feeling for her and went to save her..

Boy1:- arrey!! Y do you cry? Don't act innocent..

Boy 2:- look here!! Now u have to kiss him otherwise we call wil kiss you.. you okay with that and laughs..

Ragini is terrified and cries..

Boy1 was about to kiss ragini but felt a sharp pain in his cheeks.. Swara gave a tight slap and Ragini looks at her

Swara:- you fools!! How can you treat a girl like this!! Shameless!! Wait let me call the police...

Boys ran away from there..

Swara finds ragini crying and comforts her... Ragini thanks her

SansLak College

Sansky was about to park his bike but suddenly a bike comes& dashes... Sansky was angry and shouts " Arrey!! Are you blind"

The other man turns to be Lucky...

Lucky:- Your blind.. this parking place is more

Sansky:- is ur name written here..

Lucky:- look.. I used to park my bike here always and it was you who caused the mistake

Sanskaar was about to shout him but finds him bleeding in his head..

Sansky:- hey ur bleeding!! Let's go to hospital..

Lucky:- what?? I'm bleeding!!! Omg!! Save me save me.. u gonna kill me!!

Sansky was amused by his behaviour and smiles :- hey you.. I dont have any idea like that..but if you act like this maybe I can

Lucky smiles and says :- hey I'm Laksh.. people call me Lucky

Sansky:- I'm Sanskaar and people call me Sansky

They both smile and head towards to class...

Evening

Till Ragini can't able to forget and cries.. swara is consoling her..

Lucky enters and finds Swara consoling a crying girl.. he calls out "Shona" swara sees lucky with bandaid and runs to him..

Shona:- lucky!! Wat happened?? How did you get hurt??

Lucky:- nothing shona.. small accident.. I'm fyn and by the way who is she ??

Swara:- lucky... She is her.. Ragini..

Lucky didn't see her face as she covers her face and crying..

Lucky:- y she is crying?? Swara says the matter to him..

Lucky:- brave shona.. but y still she is crying for it..

Shona:- don't know lucky.. she is crying from morning.. she is waiting for her frnd let him come..

Sansky enters the campus and finds her ladoo crying.

Sansky:- Ladoo..

Lucky & swara turns and find him.. lucky is shocked to find Sansky.. Lucky turns when he hears a sweet voice "Sansky"

Lucky is mesmerised to see her.. same eyes he used to see in his dreams and thinks god she is an angel..

Ragini hugs Sanskaar and cries.. Lucky feels hurt seeing them hugging..

Sansky:- Ladoo.. what happened?? Y r u crying?? Please say..

Ragini:- Sansky.. they.. me.. she.. help..

Sansky:- don't cry.. first say what happened..

Shona:- let me say..

Sansky turns and finds a girl.. Sansky jus forgot to blink his eyes..

Shona:- I'm swara.. her classmate.. Sansky then ask about Ragini and Swara explains..

Sansky got angry... "Ladoo.. show me who are those idiots.. I will teach them a lesson"

Lucky:- no need my shona taught them a lesson..

Sansky was surprised to see lucky and ask you here?? How??

Lucky:- Swara is my dearest frnd and I'm here to pick her up..

Sansky:- and Ragini is my dearest friend and me too came here for picking her up..

Swara:- so u both in one college and we both in one.. wow!! Let us be frnds then and gives her hand .. Sansky smiles and shakes her hand.. Lucky goes near Ragini and says " hey hi.. so frnds??" But Ragini runs to Sansky and says let's go home.. lucky is hurt and Swasan notices..

Ragini leaves and Sansky goes to lucky and says " sorry lucky.. usually she won't mingle with anyone.. that's y.." and leaves

Swara :- to lighten the mood lucky comr let's go I need ice cream.. lucky smiles and goes and thinks "one day surely u will talk with me.. I'm waiting for it"..

So frnds that's the end of chapter 2.. please give ur likes and views..

Precap:- swara and Laksh in Ragini's orphanage..

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neilofar

@neilofar

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Aishu its awesome yaar

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Aishwarya

@Aishu08

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Posted: 8 years ago

Frnds sorry for the late update... Was not well... So let's go to the story.. and ur comments & likes are the appreciation...

Chapter 3

Sanskaar dropped Ragini in orphanage..

Sansky:- Ladoo jus forget abt that incident.. keep smiling ladoo..

Ragini nods..

Sansky:- Ladoo and that girl named Swara rite? I find her brave and be frnd with her ladoo.. she will be with you..

Ragini nods her head and walks way..

Sansky :- Ladoo I find that boy his name is Lucky, that is Laksh hr is from my college.. and I don't find him too bad.. and today u shouldn't have come like that..

Ragu:- but Sansky

Sansky:- I know ladoo but everyone are not same..bye ladoo take care..

Ragini waves bye and goes inside thinking abt Sanskaar's words..

In Ice cream parlour

Shona:- Lucky, how was the day?

But Laksh is lost somewhere.. Shona shakes him and ask what happened?? Lucky says nothing shona..

Shona:- are you thinking abt Ragini??

Lucky:- haan!! Noo noo y should I think abt her..

Shona:- really.. ok.. and I feel that guy Sanskaar is good..

Lucky:- teases her.. ahh!! Falling for him ah??

Shona:- shut up Lucky

Lucky:- shona.. I find weird with Ragini

Shona:- lucky.. I think something is bothering her and that's why she is behaving like that.. don't get hurt as she didn't talk with you..

Lucky:- (feeling hurt but smiles) y do I care if shr didn't talk with me.. let's go its getting late..

Orphanage

Ragini is thinking about Sanskaar's words.. She closes her eyes and gets the image of Laksh..

Ragini pov

Whats happening to me?? Today when he came and stood near I was feeling different... His eyes.. spoke a lot.. I wasn't able to handle it.. that's y I ran from there.. may br I hurted him.. Swara saved me but I hurted her frnd.. I need to apologise..

Sansky pov

What happened to you Sansky.. y do you always think abt her.. she is not going out from my mind.. but she will surely take care of ladoo.. and this Laksh must be hurt due to ladoo..

Next Day

In MS(Maheswari Shekhar) mansion

Dp calls lucky and Shona

Lucky:- yes Papa

Dp:- beta... Today me and Shekhar is having a important meeting.. usually we both will go to that orphanage but today we can't go.. so better u and Shona go there..

Lucky/Shona :- okay Papa

Orphanage

Lucky and Shona enters the orphanage.. laksh is feeling something different today.. when they were abt to enter they hear a familiar voice

Voice:- Lucky.. Swara

Lucky/Swara :- Sansky..

Swara:- hi Sansky.. u here? Do u visit here always..??

Sansky:- haan yes because..

Lucky:- and ur alone..

Sansky:- yes and whom ur searching for..

Lucky :- none.. jus like that I asked..

Swara glares at him..

Sansky:- actually y I came here means

But they are interrupted by sweet melodic voice..

Lucky gets attracted towards the voice..

Swara:- whose voice is this? It is so melodic

Sansky:- smiles and says come inside and see

Lucky and Swara follow him

They see a girl doing aarthi and singing a song..

Lucky is attracted towards her..

She completes the song and turns..

Lucky and Swara are shocked.. Sansky smiles seeing them..

Lucky:- Ragg.. Ragini...

The episode ends..

Precap :- Raglak facing each other

Comment ur likes and views frnds..

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neilofar

@neilofar

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Its awesome yaar nd haa take care yaar

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Aishwarya

@Aishu08

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Posted: 8 years ago

@neilofar thank you so much for ur comment.. ur the one who is commenting in my ff.. I feel like others doesn't like my ff..

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing ff ...
Waiting for the next part! Plz plz update soon!
Aww my poor Ragini...what happened with her in past?
Aww SanLak meet was good!
Swara the brave girl!

Don't feel disappointed... As the show has ended, less ppl cm here...u ll get a good response...jz wait..