Sanskaar Mini Shot - BLACK HOLE

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Res.. Happy dance.. I love it.. Will be back with unres..

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Hi Lucky dear..

I loved it ,I loved it and i loved it..I was waiting for Viji OS since she told us and when i stumbled upon this one...Imagine my happiness.. I hate this track..I cant rant enough about it on twitter but i am so glad it gives me lot new OS to read..

Because guys you all are amazing writers and you make me really happy with this amazing OS. Lucky i really think you are gifted .The way you wrote this one was splendid and i got no words to express how awesome it really was and you would have know that by now ,So just letting you know..I read it almost four times because the way your interwoven the dialogues from show to depict Sanskar Pov was so amazing

I had an OS idea but going to drop it ..As reading is more fun than writing.. Do write more.. I would love to read them 😊...

Love

Nita

Hi Nita🤗🤗

Like I mentioned before this track definitely seems to be inspiring many of us 😆 and I second that reading is much more Fun .. though We all love writing 😆

Ok now you are making me float .. any form of creative expressions i think is a gift and we have many in the forum but thank you so much .. I intend to get better ..loads to improve😛

Sanskaar in his new avatar seems to be working wonders on my brain😆😳

Why drop OS idea? .. Pen it down na .. Would love to read ..Loads of hugs🤗 for all lovely words said

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Unres on page 2 Lucky dear

Replied on 3 nita🤗

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: srividhya87
Superb..
Black Hole - Name suits its best..
This is obviously much much better than CV's track..
Love it..
Advance Diwali...

Hi Srividhya

Thanks a lot for dropping by and letting me know your views. Glad you loved it😛

Happy diwali to you too and your family

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: raaz19
Awesome...understatement...loved the mini one shot...
Like you said they are each others air...They are each other soul and most importantly they are the perfect example of ☯️ hence with the darkness will come light...

Loved the warrior in sanskaar truly the magic is back ...

In your words just totally fida with this piece...and nyna quotes make your journey just a little more magical 😛...

Thank you for sharing...

Razia

Hi Razia

😳 Thank you so much .. And Yes Swasan are inseparable and can't exist without each other . Like you have aptly put darkness comes with light

Sanskaar is always magic ..isn't he ?😳

😆 Thanks for being Fidaa ..and Nyna's quote completes this piece

Love

Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😳 me too🤗

Lucky sweetheart...This delectable little piece of magic dedicated to me 😳 I feel completely touched, over the moon with delight. 😊

I was enthralled by how you used the analogy of Black Holes, to describe what Sanskaar is going through now. The agony, the pressure and force of an emotion so intense, his world is literally collapsing down on itself. Pulling everything else towards this vortex, even the very light itself. 👏👏

That imagery for how powerful Sanskaar's raw emotions are, was really awesome.

The concluding sentence gave me goosebumps: ""We will see - this time - If you would be the light or I would be the darkness engulfing you. We would survive together or annihilate each other -Either way there is no escape - For you, for me and for us."' 👏👏

Now I am waiting for Fitoor. 😆 😳 I had replied to your comment on my "The Color Green" thread; asking some further clues to what you had (ahem ahem! 😉😳) hinted! Check and let me know, put me out of my suspense! Else I am going to badger and badger you for updates!!

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Oh jeez Lucky!! This was awesome!!
Me loved it<3<3

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kamila.

@Seriously.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Hey lucky darling.. 🤗.. soo true.

I always relate Sanskaar with blackhole..

Black holes are nothing but a stars which bursted out and turned into a black hole.. Stars are filled with equal or equivalent part of helium and hydrogen.. Helium get burned and turn into a hydrogen.. Then there will be no helium to.burn the star burst.. and become ablackk hole then you mentioned above.. it absorbs everything... I know I bored you... When it comes to Sanskaar.. you know what my mind is not working properly.. I started to blabber...

You brought my sweet and bitter moment in front of my eyes again.. mmmuah for that.

This is such a wonderful piece.. again I tortured you... Hereafter you'll get afraid of my comment on your post..

Love you dear... Sorry for boring you..

Kam...

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Nivedita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Res lucky. OMG my res are increasing. Don't know when am I going to Unres them 😭
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Lucky dear,
Wonderfully penned down story. I'm totally fida over ur this ada 😉. And ever since this track has started there is rain of stories from so many people.
I was really spellbound by this fact that u brought out a striking similarity between a black hole and sanskar's condition at present. He is neither able to hate swara nor accept her back. But we can't help it, can we? Like a black hole he has absorbed everything that came in his way but he is a human. And he exploded one day which every human does. While reading this mini shot, all the scenes were coming infront of my eyes like a reel. Those moments where they promised to be with each other at any cost. Those moments which we cherished along with them. And the last line was marvelous.
Dark and light are two sides of the same coin. Without either there is neither. We do see our shadow in dark. That means there is a light, right. And I sincerely wish for the reunion of this dark knight and light princess.
Love u loads
Nivi

Unressed in blue.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Tho its mini shot bt it touch direct heart..
Kuch stry aise hote ha jise sirf mehsus karte ho,define nh kar sakte..
Ths z same.i cn feel the pain thru ur writing,bt cnt define in wrds..

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Lucky sweetheart...This delectable little piece of magic dedicated to me 😳 I feel completely touched, over the moon with delight. 😊

I was enthralled by how you used the analogy of Black Holes, to describe what Sanskaar is going through now. The agony, the pressure and force of an emotion so intense, his world is literally collapsing down on itself. Pulling everything else towards this vortex, even the very light itself. 👏👏

That imagery for how powerful Sanskaar's raw emotions are, was really awesome.

The concluding sentence gave me goosebumps: ""We will see - this time - If you would be the light or I would be the darkness engulfing you. We would survive together or annihilate each other -Either way there is no escape - For you, for me and for us."' 👏👏

Now I am waiting for Fitoor. 😆 😳 I had replied to your comment on my "The Color Green" thread; asking some further clues to what you had (ahem ahem! 😉😳) hinted! Check and let me know, put me out of my suspense! Else I am going to badger and badger you for updates!!

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

Viji🤗

Of course to u and nynu .😛. Your OS the Colour Black is Inspiration behind this .. and I am 😳 You liked it .

Black holes are formed when a star collapses .Here in this case Sanskaar .. With each moment I guess he is being drawn towards darkness as his light left him . Thinking about his pain 😭 It seems to evoke some raw emotions in all of us ..

Again in physics .. for every particle, there is an antiparticle, a particle with the same mass and opposite electric charge. When they meet, particle-antiparticle pairs can annihilate one another.

If a particle-antiparticle pair is created just beyond the reach of the event horizon of a black hole, it is possible to have one drawn into the black hole itself while the other is ejected.

Sanskaar and Swara standing against each other ... Reminds me of the above mentioned theory ..😆 Both Stubborn Heads , Leaving aside who is right and wrong this is bound to happen

Clues .. no clues .. 😆😳 I have not yet started on Next chapter .. Will try start of today

Love

Lucky

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