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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: BookWormV
Dearest Viji,
I love you for writing this! I am processing all of it. THIS is what I want sooo freaking desperately with the current track. Who the bloody hell possessed the CVs of this show that made them believe that a jealousy track from Sankaar's end would be brilliant at this stage.? For once I want Swara pining, Swara jealous, and Swara saying sorry! Will write more later but I have to say Viji if you were here you would be loaded with tons and tons of jhappies from my end for writing this.
Res.
-V
P.S.: Are there more colours in the making? *hopeful puppy eyes*

Vrinda dear!! 🤗🤗

When I was writing this, I was actually grinning to myself, thinking that you just might love it a lot, since you had liked "The Color Black" so much. 😳 😆

I agree completely----I just don't know why Sanskaar has to be the one shown feeling jealous at this stage, when it was actually Swara's decision to literally walk out, 6 months ago. 😕 The only reason I can think of, is that VK completely, completely rocks the anguished/ angsty/ jealous scenes. His eyes, facial expressions and voice modulation...😳 ☺️

I don't normally become a fan of a serial actor as opposed to being a fan of the character...I keep analyzing quite a bit, even while watching the serial. 😆 But with VK, man, that guy really is a powerhouse of talent. After a long time, I have become a true blue fan of the actor, apart from just the amazing layered and intricate character, which he brings to such compelling life on screen. Sanskaar is just such a compelling portrayal----replete with multiple shades, facets, angles, layers, edges and what have you. 😆

Am so thrilled with all the jhappis, and I am sending them back to you, too. 🤗🤗

Loads of Love,

----Viji

P.S: I just might write 'The Color Red', but that's after I wrap up my SwaSan 4S: 'Games People Play'. I've just started that one----the Prologue, Synopsis and Chapter 1 are up.

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Res Viji. 😳
Unresed. 😃
U know what?? I want this type of track for the current situation in the serial too. 😃 How I wish that u write the script instead of the CV's! 😉 I hate AP for her partiality!! 😡 Though I liked Ragini for taking her stand. 😊 Swara. Aww! I loved her for supporting Sanskar. 😳 Laksh also realized his mistake and asked for forgiveness. 😊 Woohoo!! I think Deepika is inspired by Deepika Padukone. 😛 And someone was burning watching Deepu and Sanky together. 😉 So much that she spilled her tea on her leggings. 😆 And finally SwaSan alone in their 'own room.' 😃 I could totally feel Sanskar's pain and agony bcoz Swara left him. 😭 And their 'Oh so close moment' and their ever yarning kiss. ☺️ ☺️ Sanskar jealous of Swara and Nikhil friendship and Swara jealous of Sanskar and Deepika friendship. 😉 And finally Swara gently made Sanskar understand by not repeating her past mistake. 😳 And her requesting him not to wear that torn button shirt and to wear the one she gifted him was so sweet. 😳 And Sanskar accepted her request and wore the cerulean blue shirt she gifted him. Just imagining him in that shirt! I think Deepika's visit is planned by Uttara and Ragini to make Swara jealous and to bring SwaSan close. 😉 And when Sanskar told Deepu that he likes the shirt he's wearing (Swara's gift), I loved it so much. 😆 Also loved how close he was standing near Swara. 😉 Its really good to see that there is still hope for their reunion. 😃 And Sanskar's lopsided smile to Swara! Haayee!!! I'm dead! 😛 U wrote this OS so wonderful dear and will eagerly wait for ur "The Clour Red" OS. 😉 Thanks or the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res Viji. 😳

Hey Aheli 🤗🤗

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1005068

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

call her piku sanskar😆 and marry her or some other amazing girl😃

don't able to like any progress in swara or future possible reunion. i so hate the way they start the separation track. sanskar never thought to kill anyone even in kavita revenge days. they did bakwas job in starting this track🤢

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: soumya04
call her piku sanskar😆 and marry her or some other amazing girl😃
don't able to like any progress in swara or future possible reunion. i so hate the way they start the separation track. sanskar never thought to kill anyone even in kavita revenge days. they did bakwas job in starting this track🤢

Piku 🤣 😆

Aooww Gaaawwwd, that was too funny yaar, Soumya 😆🤣

Waise I am so glad you loved my description of Deepu aka Deepika 😉

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Viji 🤗 this story of your is so beautiful and for me its my favorite now...frankly I have my reason... I always wanted see green eyed monster working its magic on swara...and that to by childhood friend of sanskar...(1 of my swasan wishes. 😉 ) and the way she behaved was cute and the conversation which followed was just perfect... 😳 and the outcome beautiful... As u said wounds of heart can not be magically healed one need nurture it with love care and adoration...and the end which is not happy or sad but the hope that it will be more than fine someday...

Lots of love...

Stay blessed... 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Helee
Viji 🤗 this story of your is so beautiful and for me its my favorite now...frankly I have my reason... I always wanted see green eyed monster working its magic on swara...and that to by childhood friend of sanskar...(1 of my swasan wishes. 😉 ) and the way she behaved was cute and the conversation which followed was just perfect... 😳 and the outcome beautiful... As u said wounds of heart can not be magically healed one need nurture it with love care and adoration...and the end which is not happy or sad but the hope that it will be more than fine someday...

Lots of love...

Stay blessed... 😳

Hey Helee my dear 🤗🤗

So very touched to know that you loved this both "the Color Green" and "The Color Black" 😊😳.

I also really wanted to see Swara getting possessive of Sanskaar , burning with jealousy at some childhood pal of his/ Uttara's , being all pally with him. 😆 😉

So happy to know that you loved the portrayal of their emotions, and Swara's reaction. Of course she became like a sherni 😉. And I feel really blessed to hear you say that loved the dialogues and their conversation. Those dialogues are very close to my heart. 😳

I truly feel that wounds of the heart take a lot of time and careful nurturing to heal. It doesn't happen by magic. One needs to devote adoration, faith and nurturing care.

The end of this OS, as you said, is one of hope, a gentle, cautious and yet glowing feeling that things should get gradually better. And relationships are like that...they take their own time to heal back to their original closeness and intensity.

But I am sure, SwaSan can do it, can restore their relationship and move forward. 😳

Loads of Love

Viji

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Hi viji,

U r amazing ... and your writings on swasan are even more amazing ..

Thanks a lot

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810
Hi viji,
U r amazing ... and your writings on swasan are even more amazing ..

Thanks a lot

Hey Annie 🤗🤗

Wow yaar...thanks so much for those wonderful words. 😳🤗 So very touched that you loved this OS and my other SwaSan fics...and as for your lovely, generous words about me...I am going completely 😳☺️

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ishanita
perfect

Hey Ishita 🤗🤗

Nice to see you here. ...hope all well with you. Long time yaar...I'm so happy to 'see' you after ages, on both "The Color Black " and "The Color Green" 😳🤗

Wish you and yours, a Very Happy, Peaceful and Prosperous Diwali 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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