Kosmos Connection (Guardian Angel II) - A SwaSan OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Nyna,

I am reading your stories after long time. Some way, this piece compelled me to not just leave an "it's nice" comment.

And I am glad that this tale made you leave a comment.

After Raz's comment on my update, I read the written updates briefly and they really made me want to watch the show once again for my beloved SwaSan.

I still have not worked up the courage to watch the show, I read the updates and then catch up the episode online, if I find it interesting. I am so frustrated with Swara that I do not want it to cloud my magical SwaSan

Now coming to your one shot, saying I loved it would be understatement. The much required mirror for Swara came from her childhood. It's magical and yet far away from the light heart we expect from magical elements. The use of colors to reflect Swara's feelings has been truly brilliant.

The use of colours - I did that in my earlier GA tale too - I felt that if colours could influence our emotions then it could be extended to have the guardian angels (who are beings of light) change hues to reflect our emotions. I am glad you found it nice.

I completely agree with you that Viji is an inspiration for all of us. The level of her writing is very deep and well supported. She makes the whole scene come alive. That reminds me it has been long time I read her works. I think I need to read her work for a restart boost to completw my stories.

You should read her stories - she has been on a quite a roll in the recent times. Do catch up, they are not to be missed.

The quotes at the start and end were that perfect opening and closing with a bang. I particularly loved the opening quote and have added to my quote library for inspiration.

I simply love collecting and using quotes, glad to know you share a similar passion. That closing quote, I had earlier used it for replying to Viji's OS - Black and she really liked it. So I repeated it here😳

I noticed that you never mention Sanskaar (Until last two paragraphs), yet narrate all his sacrifices for his love and countless times that he stuck to his faith than the facts.

Well, it was not really needed right, both of them knew very well, Swara could deny till she is blue in the face but then deep down she knew, there was and would only be one person in her life, who would stick to his faith rather than believe facts.

The stark contrast between "sparkling kaleidoscope spectrum of orange and carrot" and "dull grey with deep slate eyes" just got me into overdrive of thoughts. Just reading that sentence reminded me of Sanskaar's drunken confession outside their tent. And you write about exactly that state of Sanskaar, albeit a recent one.

That drunk confession - one of the best, I simply love that. And his recent words, were also a confession of sorts, even if she walked out of his life, she would always be in his mind and heart. He would never let her go.

That dialogue has me eagerly waiting how he would punish her. Call me sadist, however last time Sanskaar took offence to Swara's lack of trust in him, we did get a pleasing treat. So my expectations are running high now.

I, unfortunately, do not hope much - I was witness to how the ML track was spectacularly ruined - I cannot take the disappointment again. I so want Swara to suffer, what she did to Sanskaar is a little unforgivable, but then I doubt it😕

"You change color... You dont deserve him. "

Surely Swara has disappointed him again however their good times being compared to colors is what make me read that paragraph again and again.

Sanskaar was and is the joy of her life, her sunshine and starlight, whether angry with him or overflowing with love for him, her thoughts would have all the possible positive and happy emotions. And when you write that this makes you read and re read, I am quite overwhelmed.

The childhood acquaintances with Kosmos and the way she closed him from her eye, established why Kosmos had the right and position to reason with Swara. Swara's realization that to do her sister right, she had done so much wrong to the single soul who stood by her in worst of circumstances was amazingly penned.

Swara had to understand that her fantasy of having a family would come true, just not the way she imagined it, she had to realise where she went wrong, doing right by one person does not give her the right to do so wrong with Sanskaar, especially when she should have realised that he would never ever do anything to hurt her. His transformation into a person who now goes out of his way to hurt her, should be an eye opener, or are we expecting too much?

I will stop here with this long comment but please continue writing. I am very much excited to see Kosmos and Vini appearing when SwaSan reconcile. Will that dream become true through you?

Thanks for this piece of writing and keep writing.

Comments are what keep me going on, there are times when I so adore them that I read and re read, trying to convince myself that this beautiful comment is about something that I have rambled about.

Regarding Kosmos and Vilasini, I have a few ideas, let me see how it shapes out. Will pm you.

Cheers

Sharon

Originally posted by: elsanna

Awesome OS nyna di...she must realise the mistake she had done and regret for it😔

Tani

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

You deserve a Nobel Prize, for these hitting-right-at-the-point emojis. 😆 😉

Those pics really are very tantalizing, no? 😉

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Tani,

Thanks. I do agree, she has to realise the mistake (I have called it a crime, I am so angry with her😡) and instead of regretting it, she and her sister go about dancing in weddings.😡😡😡

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I do????????

How can anyone refuse you!🤗🤗🤗

Here it is:

And do not even get me started on those pics - I am finding it a little hectic now and I do not need any additional temptations.😊

Originally posted by: elsanna

That's the worst part...🤢 she is not working this time to mend things...she had left every burden on sanskaar...😕

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nyna dearest...

What a brilliant concept...first we got guardian angel...vilasini ,guardian of sanky...n now kosmos...angel for swara...i just loved this whole concept..i was speech less...swara innocent mind created n imaginary friend which comes to her..it was sweet...

Kosmos comes to her and she believes him to be her friend and her mother is worried about his imaginary friend of hers. She would always call him till he told her that she would never have a father in her life. Swara did not like it and kicked him out

After very long time kosmos again return to bring some sense in swara...kosmos change colour was icredible idea...according to feeling...the question he asked n answered were bang on..jolted swara within...n she realised her mistake..she wronged sanky by not trusting him...her determination to set everything right..for which she has to bear any pain..it was amazingly handled...loved it loads dear...

Someone had to teach Swara where she is wrong, she irritates me so much now a days, convinced she is always right, trusts everyone but Sanskaar and...well you know.😕 It was nice to read she realised and it does stay for some time, I have written the final one in this trilogy, where she realises what it means to really trust someone, and how hard it is going to be for her.

Sorry im late...but enjoyed alot...you always bring something different n exciting...learning alot from u guys...

Never say sorry, sweetheart, I love your comments and wait for them, so do not worry about the time you take.

Talia

Originally posted by: srividhya87

amazing..

Swara must relaize her mistake eventhough its too late..