SwaSan OS -- LOST!!

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pakh

@pakh

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 8 years ago

Res Kirti 😳

Unres

Kirti dear,

Glad to see u back on the forum. Long time. Busy?

This is amazing. Swara's pain and longing was 👏. Glad she found sanvi. Just as swara is passionate about music sanvi is passionate about dance. Her monologue in the last part was marvelous. Glad she realized that she was also at fault ( no bashing). I want sanskar's pov too. Hope u give that also. Of course, only if u r free. 🤗 For the pm.

Love u loads

Nivi

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

kirti it was amazing dear do write next part from sanky POV n his cravings for her.

it was well written.

long time where did u go?

ishita.

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

👏👏👏

This was awesome. A perfect ending, I seriously want Cvs to see this for swara's punishment. Please continue it and show how will they solve this blunder.

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elsanna

@elsanna

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Kritu... awesome os... loved it..

I like the song too...

She must know what does it feels like when someone you love with heart and soul ignore and give step treatment to you without any reason...😭

Tani

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shee91

@shee91

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

No words..

Tears are making its way..

What to say..

Hats off..

I hope will see like this in serial too..

Heva will nail the scene..

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Gayathri

@Gayathri93

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

this is awesome👏👏

plz continue dear .

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Kirtu it was damn good...no long comment for u as I couldnt res first... 😛

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Pari

@Pari_1995

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Its too good Kriti, loved every bit of the os.
Specifically loved ur version of dua dialogue...
Seriously i hv lost my words...
& now i am waiting for d swasan confortation...

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

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Res Kirti. 😳
I'm so sorry dear, I was out of town during Durga Puja vacation, so couldn't read it. 😭
Unresed dear. 😃
Awesome update! 👏 U penned SwaSan's pain and agony so perfectly! 😳 Now that they have suffered so much, plzz bring them together, make them confront each other and make them reconcile their lost love with the help of li'l Sanvi. 😭 Plzz make a sequel of this part with SwaSan union plzzz... 😭 Show mein toh they r separated for now, but stories mein bhi SwaSan separation is hurting me to much! 😭 😭 Hope u didn't mind Kirti dearest. 😳 Plzz plzz its a request to make a sequel of this OS with SwaSan reunion. 😭 😳 Will wait for it. 😳 Thanks for the pm dear. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

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