NEW SR HP FF: Frozen! (year 1) The Philosopher's Stone! (Ch 4 up) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Very wrong...it ended too early it's so interesting😉 something wrong with lucky... Is he voldemort maybe😛 his son or something 🤔sss...naginiii...🤣

Please... please update sooner😒


Tani
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Its awesome! HP/Swasan crossover?! This is a dream which I never even knew I had come true! 🤗

Cont soon!

-Luv Niki
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Yaayyy fanfic on HP...
Totally loved d 1st 3 parts...
Eagerly waiting for ragini's intro...
Please update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waise... what's your name dear😳

One question...will we have chamber of secrets also after the philosopher stone😛 yaa I know greedy me😃


Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: elsanna

Waise... what's your name dear😳

One question...will we have chamber of secrets also after the philosopher stone😛 yaa I know greedy me😃


Tani


My name is Riya, but u can call me just Ri.

Yup! After this part finishes...there will be chamber of secrets too...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was fabulous!

update soon!
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Originally posted by: swaragini7


My name is Riya, but u can call me just Ri.

Yup! After this part finishes...there will be chamber of secrets too...😊

So we are on a ride till deathly hallows🥳 by the way I will call you riyu... chalega na😛

Tani
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it's like back Hogwarts. Back to golden era of Harry Potter days. Yaay it's just awesome. I luv the story. Read all the parts in one go waiting for next update. So post it asap n plz do pm me. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for your update
Please pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Chapter 4: The Threesome Fight!

Sanskar is about to enter the dorm when he looks out of the window and gets shocked.

Specks of snow were falling and the strange thing was that, it was the month of September.

Sanskar- it is impossible! How can it be so cold in this month?

On the other hand, Laksh too looks out of the window and gets shocked to see the same scene.

Laksh- something is wrong with this place? How can it snow in this month?

Both the boys get involved in deep thoughts.

The next morning, the first years have their first class with Professor Snape. SwaSanLak enter the class and sit on their respective seats.

Professor Snape enters the class. All the students immediately get quiet as they have already heard that Professor Snape was the most strict teacher at Hogwarts. Snape comes and picks the register and starts calling out the names.

Snape- Sanskar Oberoi

He reads the name and stares at Sanskar with an expressionless face.

Sanskar flinches a little while SwaLak look on curiously.

Snape stares at Sanskar for sometime and then again starts calling out the names. He stops at Laksh's name and stares at him curiously.

Snape- where are you from?

Laksh- London

Snape- I know that! But what blood are you?

Laksh- Half blood.

Snape- Really?

Laksh looks at Snape bewildered. After Snape has finished calling out the names, he comes to Swara, who is busy writing something.

Snape- what are you doing?

Swara- I was just...hmm...

She gets nervous while Sanskar looks on disinterestedly.

Snape- you seem like a studious student. Did you go through the potions books?

Laksh interrupts.

Laksh- no Sir, she is not studious. It's Sans.

Snape gives a angry look to Laksh.

Snape- did I ask for your opinion?

He looks at the other students.

Snape- who is Sans?

Sanskar- I m here, sir!

Snape looks at him and comes to his desk.

Snape- so we have a celebrity here?

Sanskar looks shocked and looks at the other students who are smiling at him.

Snape- let me tell you boy that in my class your fame will not save you, only your sincerity will.

Sanskar- I am sorry sir, but you must be mistaken, I am not a celebrity. I am just me, Sanskar Oberoi.

Snape gives a smirk and goes to the other students enquiring about each of them while Sanskar looks upon bewildered.

After the class, SwaSanLak are walking together, Sanskar behind SwaLak.

Swara- that was the most disastrous class. How can Professor Snape give us so much homework on our first class.

Laksh- yes Sur, looks like we will be having a tough time with him.

All of a sudden, a girl comes to them, she passes SwaLak and goes to Sanskar.

The Girl- Hi Sans! My name is Mia.

She forwards her hand for him to shake. Sanskar is surprised while SwaLak stare at him annoyed.

Swara- hey! Who are you to call him Sans? Only me and Lucky have that right!

Mia turns to them.

Mia- And girl, who are you to say me that? Didn't your mom and dad taught you to speak?

Swara is hurt hearing that.

Swara- who are you to question that?

She gives back to Mia.

While SwaLak and Mia are busy arguing, Sanskar sees Hagrid on the garden. He leaves them and runs to Hagrid.

All three of them are shocked.

Swara- see! Even he doesn't want to be friends with you!

Mia stomps of her foot and goes away.

Swara- Where did Sans go?

Laksh- don't know! Let's go to the common room.

On the other hand, Sans runs to Hagrid.

Sanskar- Hagrid...I need to...speak to you.

Hagrid turns to face him.

Hagrid- Oh relax Sans...calm down and say.

Sanskar- Hagrid! Did you have a talk with dad?

Hagrid- no Sans, why?

Sanskar- don't know Hagrid, he isn't replying to my letters!

Hagrid- maybe he is busy.

Sanskar- yes Hagrid, maybe.

He makes a gloomy face.

Hagrid- wait Sans, can you help me take this woods to my hut?

Sanskar- sure Hagrid.

He picks up the small pieces of wood and both of them walk towards the hut.

Sanskar is at Hagrid's hut when he opens the door and finds Swara sitting there.

Sanskar- What are you doing here?

Swara- Hagrid is my friend, you can't question me for being in his hut.

Hagrid- Stop fighting you two!

Sanskar looks on irritated.

The three of them sit together and have a chat.

Hagrid- Where's Lucky?

Swara- Well Lucky was quite fascinated by the potion books. So he sat down to complete his homework. And then...

Sanskar- Then what?

Swara- well! He slept!

Hagrid and SwaSan both burst into laughter.

As they chatted, they didn't realize that it was already night.

Hagrid (Looks out of the window)- looks like you're gonna be late. Want me to accompany you to the castle?

Sanskar- No Hagrid, it's OK ! We will go by ourselves.

Swara- Bye Hagrid! (Hugs him)

Sanskar- Bye Hagrid!

Both SwaSan go out of Hagrid's house.

After walking some distance.

Swara- Hey Sans! Have you ever came this way before?

Sanskar- No!

Swara- What? Then how will we go back?

Sanskar- don't know! (Casually walking)

Swara hears some noises, goes and clings into Sanskar.

Sanskar- Hey what are you doing?

Swara- it was good if Hagrid came along with us!

Sanskar- then who told you to stop him?

Swara (leaves Sanskar)- that means you knew that we would never reach the palace?

Sanskar- yes!

Swara- this is horrible Sans! Why didn't you stop me?

Sanskar- if I had stopped you, you would have started arguing then and there.

Swara- But...

Sanskar- Shut up Swara! Come along.

Swara instantly shuts up as she knows that Sanskar calls her by her full name only when he is angry.

They both start walking, unknown where they will reach.

After walking for almost an hour, both SwaSan are unable to reach the location.

Swara- Sans, this is crazy! Why have we not reached till now?

Sanskar- I don't know! It's your fault that we are stuck here in the middle of nowhere.

Swara- it's not my fault! You should have asked Hagrid to accompany us.

Sanskar- I was about to, but you are the queen bee, always making her own decisions.

Swara gets upset and comes infront of Sanskar.

Swara(walking backwards as Sanskar keeps on walking forward)- you are the one who didn't stop me and now you are blaming me. What if we never reach the school? What if we get caught outside the school and are thrown out? Do you even...AHHH!!!!!!!!!

Swara topples over a wood and is about to fall. Sanskar shouts her name and holds her hand but he loses balance and they both fall inside a hole which was covered by snow.

Sanskar lands with a 'thud' and Swara falls on top of him.

Swara- oh! That was horrible!

Sanskar- Get up Sur! You are over me.

Swara gets embarassed and gets up. Sanskar too gets up and stands.

Swara- what kind of place is this?

Sanskar- someplace really dangerous!

Swara looks at the direction where Sanskar was staring and they both freeze at the scene.

On the other hand, inside the school, Laksh is trying to sleep when all of a sudden he hears a strange sound and wakes up with a jerk!

Laksh- what's that?

He slowly creeps out of his bed and decides to look around. He tip toes and stealthily creeps out of the Slytherin Common Room.

On the other side, SwaSan are staring at a huge troll fast asleep on the ground and are frightened at the scene. Swara holds Sanskar's arm but he jerks it away.

Swara- Sans! It's a troll.

Sanskar- I know what it is! But the point is how we will get past this troll?

Swara- get past? Why will we need to get past this troll?

Sanskar- can't you see? a troll is sleeping here!

Swara- So?

Sanskar- A troll wouldn't have gotten inside from that small hole. There must be some way inside this cave otherwise how would have the troll entered here?

Swara- yes! That's true! That means there is a way inside this cave! A way to reach Hogwarts!

Sanskar- did I say something different?

Swara looks at Sanskar embarrassed.

Sanskar- C'MON we have to find a way to reach the castle!

Sanskar takes a step forward towards the troll and takes out his wand. He points the wand at the troll.

Sanskar- INCARCEROUS!

All of a sudden, ropes appear from either slides of the troll and the troll gets tied up.

This sudden movement causes the troll to wake up and he looks at Sanskar and with anger in his eyes tries to get up but the ropes stop him. He fights hard to untie himself. Meanwhile, Sanskar signals Swara to follow him and after he jumps above the trolls legs, he forwards his hand to Swara. Swara grabs him and jumps and lands right besides Sanskar.

They both start to run but are shocked to notice that the troll has untied himself and is chasing them. They run faster but Sanskar trips over a log of wood and falls down. Swara gets scared and tries to help him up when she is shocked to see the troll right in front of them holding his weapon in a ready to strike position.

They both close their eyes in fear as they wait for the weapon to hit them.

"STUPEFY!"

Both SwaSan open their eyes to see the troll lying on the ground and Laksh standing there sheilding them with his wand held out at the troll.

Swara gets super happy and stands up. Sanskar too stands up. Laksh turns around and Swara hugs him.

Swara- Thank you so much Lucky! You saved our lives today!

Sanskar on the other hand looks on disinterestedly.

Swara- Thanks Lucky!

Sanskar- well I think it's over! Can we proceed?

SwaLak release their hug and look at Sanskar.

Swara- You are so bad Sans! Lucky saved our lives today and you didn't even thank him!

Laksh- Sans, are you OK?

Sanskar looks at them disinterestedly and all of a sudden his expression changes to horror stuck!

Laksh- what's wrong Sans?

Sanskar points out behind Laksh and SwaLak turn back to see the troll up on his feet and staring at the three of them angrily.

SwaSanLak- RUNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The three of them start running while the troll follows them. They keep going on the twisting and turning paths of the cave as the troll follows them. When at last,

Sanskar- Look! There's a door!

Laksh and Swara look at the direction Sanskar is pointing and see a huge metallic black door infront of them.

Running fast, they reach the door only to find it locked!

Laksh- no this isn't good! Why it's happening with us only today?

Swara- move back you both!

She pushes both of them and takes out her wand.

Swara- ALAHOMORA!

The lock opens instantly and all the three of them rush inside and close it before the troll could get in.

After closing the door they turn back and give a sigh of relief. They clam down and look around the room and walk a bit when all of a sudden Laksh stops them.

Laksh- Who's that?

He points towards a wall.

SwaSan look at the wall and are frightened.

On the wall, they see the shadow of someone with hands up on the air muttering something.

The three of them get frozen right on the spot!

Precap-

Swara- who was she?

Sanskar- don't know but she was something really amazing!

...

Laksh- I have seen her that girl somewhere before! But where?

...

Swara kisses Sanskar on the cheek! Sanskar gets surprised.

Sanskar- Girl, you are crazy!

...

So here I am with the next update! Sorry for that long wait! But I promise that I will not leave this FF in the middle so plz don't stop commenting on it!


Edited by swaragini7 - 8 years ago

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