SwaSan 3S 'Games People Play'-Chapter 1 Pg 1 [16/10/16]

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sneharay
Brilliant.. 👏

Thanks a ton, Sneha 🤗🤗

Glad to know that you loved this chapter 😊

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: tr_eta
Awesome update,loved swasan moments & who was that person who was observing them at the last is it ragini or laksh continue soon

Thanks so very much. 🤗🤗

Very touched to know that you loved the SwaSan moments. 😳 As a SwaSan fan, that means a lot. 😊

As to who was observing them...that will be revealed in the forthcoming chapters. 😊😉

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well destined by choice is something I am so eagerly waiting to read as well.. So no problem either if I get second chapter of this one or the most awaited sixth chapter of DBC.. I am gonna be one happy reader..

True.. How come you and Nyna both make me go to swasan dreamland with your updates.. Actually I am so happy you both write about swasan..

Nita 🤗🤗

Yaar you are making me feel as if I'm floating somewhere, with all your warm words. And I'm not even allowed to say thanks. 😕

Really touched that you loved the chapter so much. It means a lot. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Sakura24
They just had to lay their hearts out beneath a Sakura tree...❤️❤️ and I go sailing in to my dreamy waters.
I guess the clue was Sanskar being ambidextrous huh...? This would probably play a part in a finale match in a future part.
This one needs a good lengthy reply which I fully intend to write so res for that. Meanwhile I might just have lost my heart to this tennis player Sanskar too. You always do it with your writing dearest, again and again I'm compelled to fell in love.
Will be back.
Loads of love,
Saku

Unres,

Hey again sis, 🤗

You know I just finished reading this for the third time a few minutes earlier and still the sheer allure of the plot has me in a grip as tight as it was in the first reading. Just how brilliant you are is far far beyond my ability of expression ❤️

Firstly I really appreciate the effort you put behind each of your works making them true outcomes of meraki than anything else. Here, in a matter of few short paras you give us an absolutely perfect description of both the play and the player...then his friends and foes. I know nothing of Tennis but still I gripped the setting well...All thanks to your masterful writing 😳

Now that we move past that...as always your secondary characters are as enlightening and layered as your protagonists and you know that is one thing I adore. Here the dream chasing father...The mother living in the thin line of pursuing that dream and loving her child and the brother in the shady realms of envy was as solid to me as the dedicated super player Sanskar and the sweet young lady Swara.

In the first chapter going beyond the image of the player you built earlier I was in awe of the man you portrayed Sanskar to be. His gentle manner, the deep longings, fleeing desires, unspoken feelings all expressed wonderfully within the span of your beautiful wordings :)

Then Swara and the sneak peeks we had to her schedule, memories, heart and conscious was delicate and pure threads tying the story nicely.

Now we come to the lone figure of the spy (der)? Who was that and whose happiness is exactly bothering them? For both our lovebirds I can make too guesses...Two of our absolute favorites of all time and some wildlife reference would top my list...you see what I mean huh? But for now I will keep that to myself.

On side notes,

I find Sanskar being DP's son far more enthralling than the actual case. I guess it has something to do with RamTa never being fully explored on screen. And the two has some striking similarities to boot!

I am on mobile so over look the obvious typos. Can go on...and on and then some more. But will leave this here for now. Waiting for the journey to continue...soon hopefully?

Loads and loads of love,

Saku

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Saku 🤗🤗

What a way to wake up to Tuesday morning, with a lovely comment from you. As analytical and insightful as it was filled with sparkling wit. I loved that sly reference to our favorite fauna 😆😉 And that pun on spy(der) 😆🤣

I shall revert in detail, later today. Will we have Vajra coming up sometime this working week?

Lots of love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Unres on page 7

Nita dear 🤗🤗

Loved your comment, shall reply in detail later in the day. 🤗 So very touched to know how much you loved it. 😊 😳

Yikes...I know, I know, the way things are going in the real world now, Novak might well slip to No.2 behind Murray. 🤢😕 But not in the world of Games People Play. 😉😆 Here, Novak and Rafa are No 1 and 2, as of end 2017. 😊 Sanskaar is No.6, let's see how that changes after Australian open 2018, huh? 😉😳

Loads of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
lovely update

Thanks 😊 Glad to know you loved it.

Cheers

----Viji

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Saku🤗🤗

What a way to wake up to Tuesday morning, with a lovely comment from you. As analytical and insightful as it was filled with sparkling wit. I loved that sly reference to our favorite fauna😆😉And that pun on spy(der)😆🤣

I shall revert in detail, later today. Will we have Vajra coming up sometime this working week?

Lots of love

Viji

Glad I could make your day sis, hope it gets brighter and brighter :) I will see about Vajra all though with these mobile typing I can't promise anything:) Reading this once more...for the fifth time! Aren't I in love, hopelessly? 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Glad I could make your day sis, hope it gets brighter and brighter :) I will see about Vajra all though with these mobile typing I can't promise anything:) Reading this once more...for the fifth time! Aren't I in love, hopelessly? 😳

Thanks, I need it. 😊 Have made some progress on final proof of Destined by Choice, Chapter 6. But some more to go. Need all the brightness in the day, and easing of workload possible. 😊

I am just completely thrilled 😳 and going all ☺️ 🤪, when you say that you have been reading this chapter 5 times. 🤗

Lots of Love,

---Viji