Vajra An Elven Tale Updated chapter 23 B pg 4 (18/12/17)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#311

And the wait ends .. with wicked lady of Elven Lands taking pity upon on poor dwellers😆

The perks of being late ... I can soak in two updates ... Res will be back soon .. off to read😉🤗

Quote

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: lucky.m
And the wait ends .. with wicked lady of Elven Lands taking pity upon on poor dwellers😆

The perks of being late ... I can soak in two updates ... Res will be back soon .. off to read😉🤗

22B

First of all few big hugs for updating🤗🤗 ... had been waiting like hell to read 😳

Now The air of mystery about Megha's mother ..I am sure its going to be a game changing revelation may be .. and hint of Yuvraaj to look in noble lines ..had got me thinking. I absolutely loved their conversation ...How it started and was led...to Swara. Some gems out of them

Priceless people don't seek price - He knows her too well ..I would say they 😊

I cant like people .. That's so sad 😭.. he wants to, he does but he cant ...My heart goes for both Sanskaar and Laksh too .. since I read the next update too

A book may teach one all about fire but pain of burn only a flame can teach - I loved Loved loved this lines👏⭐️ and The convo and the scene between yuvraaj and eye ..It was bliss..The sparks underplayed ..yet they could be felt strikingly ..and their care and concern for each other too⭐️

An mysterious and magical update 😊

Love

Lucky

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: lucky.m
And the wait ends .. with wicked lady of Elven Lands taking pity upon on poor dwellers😆

The perks of being late ... I can soak in two updates ... Res will be back soon .. off to read😉🤗

23 A

Truly uncharted Waters..

The scene between Suvanna and Swara ..but what caught my interest was the vision at the end when Swara leaves .. Was it Pratula and Arya?😲 and blossom ball ..So we will have 3 champions left .. so we have laksh yuvraaj and may be one more

Now coming to Laksh and Swara/ Kalyani

Doesn't Laksh know that Swara is eye? the one who predicted future? Did I miss something and his pain can be left when he said about his opinion never being asked and Swara calling him friiend and he being used as pawn . When he said 'wretched witch' is he referring to suvanna .. and Is Swara going to seek Sanskaar's help to deal with Aithne to help Laksh to get out from its hold ?

and the last scene ... esp the last line .. gave me goosebumps

So now somehow I am reminded of a vision which Swara had about Aithne.. Silver eyes watching her ..and when she says you love him too and the holder replies I love you more something of that sort ..its Laksh..Isnt it ? This is just getting more interesting and intriguing mysterious..👏⭐️

Quote

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: lucky.m

23 A

Truly uncharted Waters..

The scene between Suvanna and Swara ..but what caught my interest was the vision at the end when Swara leaves .. Was it Pratula and Arya?😲 and blossom ball ..So we will have 3 champions left .. so we have laksh yuvraaj and may be one more

Now coming to Laksh and Swara/ Kalyani

Doesn't Laksh know that Swara is eye? the one who predicted future? Did I miss something and his pain can be left when he said about his opinion never being asked and Swara calling him friiend and he being used as pawn . When he said 'wretched witch' is he referring to suvanna .. and Is Swara going to seek Sanskaar's help to deal with Aithne to help Laksh to get out from its hold ?

and the last scene ... esp the last line .. gave me goosebumps

So now somehow I am reminded of a vision which Swara had about Aithne.. Silver eyes watching her ..and when she says you love him too and the holder replies I love you more something of that sort ..its Laksh..Isnt it ? This is just getting more interesting and intriguing mysterious..👏⭐️

Lucky,

A short reply to solve your doubts. I've made an error in one of the past chapters however the more solid truth to the matter is that Lakshya has no idea the eye and Swara are the same people. There had to be a point which confirms This, which I had missed while writing. Might add it once I start editing.

Secondly he is referring to Suvi of cause. She is the only witch in this tale as for now.

The vision, I'd keep mum on that as it may give away the secret.

Swara is thinking about approaching Sanskar to ask about Aithne.

The silver eyes is Lakshya.

Will get back in detail later.

Lots of love,

Sakura

Quote

Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#315

Hi saku

Wow. ...is all I can say it's getting so heart gripping and exciting...

The mystery I deeper and the depth far greater and wow the passion is amazing...

Never knew plotting and revenge could be so magical...

Loving swasan so much...

Your spark is always perfect and this is why is just cannot put it down. ...waiting already for more...

Apologies for the delay in revert...

Have missed you all a lot. ..

How studies are going well...

Razia

Quote

blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#316

Saku

I had given up my Hope on Vajra being completed and was immensely jealous of DB toO forum for having the good luck of reading your e wonderful stories...I even considered reading few of them changing the protagonists name in my mind to swara and sanskar but the attempt turned futile since the backgrounds were entirely different...but I will surely read them after understanding the series bcause you have written them...

Coming to Vajra I had delayed reading them to savour each and every word...and intezaar ka phal meetta hotha hai...the chapters were worth the wait...what dialogues you make the characters speak dear...take a bow Saku... the couple doesn't meet till the penultimate chapter but in every chapter we feel their closeness...that's your brilliance dear...every line each character speaks has so much depth...would like to go on and on but my phone has a problem with it's screen...so limiting my words...and waiting eagerly for next update..

Veena..

Quote

Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Saku
I had given up my Hope on Vajra being completed and was immensely jealous of DB toO forum for having the good luck of reading your e wonderful stories...I even considered reading few of them changing the protagonists name in my mind to swara and sanskar but the attempt turned futile since the backgrounds were entirely different...but I will surely read them after understanding the series bcause you have written them...
Coming to Vajra I had delayed reading them to savour each and every word...and intezaar ka phal meetta hotha hai...the chapters were worth the wait...what dialogues you make the characters speak dear...take a bow Saku... the couple doesn't meet till the penultimate chapter but in every chapter we feel their closeness...that's your brilliance dear...every line each character speaks has so much depth...would like to go on and on but my phone has a problem with it's screen...so limiting my words...and waiting eagerly for next update..
Veena..

Dearest Veena,

Don't you worry dear! I'm gonna complete vajra no matter what. Haan, it'll take some time since I have exams in October...actuallt in just two more weeks!

But it felt so good to know you liked the progress as much as you said! Keep reading. Will see you again soon!

Love,

Saku