Vajra An Elven Tale Updated chapter 23 B pg 4 (18/12/17)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#281

Swara is Aruna's Daughter ?? But isnt Aruna Sanskaar's mother ? Was it supposed to be Arya?

But Whoa I loved this update . All 4 of them at one place. The clash between Laksh and Sanskaar and the conflicting emotions of Aithne👏⭐️.Suvanna is yet to figure out things. Didnt she recognize Sanskaar or is he in some disguise?

That was one hell scheme by Pratula to get Swara and Suvanna/ Ragini Face to face . Cant wait to read further ..waiting

Advance Happy birthday .May all your dreams and wishes come true.

Loads of Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Sakura24
There was a typo in chapter 21B, where I had put Aruna instead of Arya, sorry about that, I was in a bit of hurry [:p]

Got it 😛

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Swara is Aruna's Daughter ?? But isnt Aruna Sanskaar's mother ? Was it supposed to be Arya?
But Whoa I loved this update . All 4 of them at one place. The clash between Laksh and Sanskaar and the conflicting emotions of Aithne👏⭐️.Suvanna is yet to figure out things. Didnt she recognize Sanskaar or is he in some disguise?

That was one hell scheme by Pratula to get Swara and Suvanna/ Ragini Face to face . Cant wait to read further ..waiting

Advance Happy birthday .May all your dreams and wishes come true.

Loads of Love
Lucky

Yes Lucky I've made a typo there. It's Arya not Aruna. I always get the two confused nowadays effects of being away from Elven Lands for too long🤢

It's lovely to hear you love it, this is really where everything starts to go south, now that they are all in one place, this can be the edge of chaos too.

Aithne had escaped Sanskar's rigid watch after so long, so it may not wanna go back, but again the chance of tasting his blood is once in a life time moment, right?

I'm glad you liked the little plan Pratula came up with, it's going to backfire on him big time **Spoiler alert**

Thank you so much dear!!🤗

Loads of love back,

Saku

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

Hi saku...

Happy birthday and thanks for the lovely surprise in the pm..

See the battle is about to commence and all have been drawn together for this show down...

What a unexpected twists but loving it...read it several times already and must say I am hooked...

Of I though Lords of the rings was good then this is way better...

Update soon as I cannot wait for the next phase in this twisted tales of plots and mystery and revenge...god who knew love could be so dark yet so toxic...

Afterall family and is life but a promise is worth fighting for...and this is what makes your stpry vajra so unique...Each character makes you go...no they didn't do that did they...

Beautifully scripted as always...

Take care...

Razia

P's. Like.button doesn't seem to be working so will like the post later and apologies for the late response :)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

Yet to read chapter 41.. Gosh I am an horrible addicted fan.. But I treasure your updates so so much that I want to read it when I can fully concentrate on it so I can read it more time than I can count..

But I want to be at least an okay friend.. So I have to wish you a very happy birthday.. Hope you have an awesome day.. Have fun.. Maybe this day be special to you as you are special to me..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#286

Hi Saku dearest,

I have read it finally and girl If possible I am getting more addicted to this lovely tale.. Words will never do justice to how much I loved reading it.. I love love love the vajra.. Seriously Saku you are an marvelous writer and vajra will always remain my favorite.. I know enough not to push for the next update but I will wait for it forever.. That how much I love vajra

And I have to say a million thanks for you to continue writing vajra .. I know it is hard when you are busy and I understand how much effort and time vajra needs yet you are doing this for us and I can't thank you enough for it.. Thanks dear for giving us vajra..

Lots of love

Nita

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dimaag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#287

Loved it Sakura 😃. As always u portray all the characters so well there's nothing much to point. Do update soon. Sorry for replying late 😉. And thanks for the PM 😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#288

Chapter 22 A updated😃

Running away into hiding once more. Enjoy the update! Will see you somewhere in the elven lands!

Love,

Sakura

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#289

unres for chapter 22A. and YIPPEE!!!😃😃😃 me first.

Dearest Saku,
I've a pile of res to sort out, yet could not resist to ramble about this one.😃 So finally the story is heading towards the climax /intro scene. All faour main characters are finally in the same land.Suvanna has been accomplished her goal to some extent. it looks like Laksh was only a bait to lure the Yuvraj of Vajra.

The gruesome fight between the princes of Vajra was a treat to read. In a previous chapter analysis I wondered what would happen if Aithne was in Laksh's hand but the opponent was Sanskar, who owned it. I guessed a scenario something like this, but you penned it down in a way only a seasoned writer would do. Hat's off buddy!👏

For Swara this return to her mother's home is not comforting at all. She has this fear to lose everything. That vision is now more vivid and terrifying for her. Her convo with Megha, her only confidante at the moment, reflected the angst, the ordeal she's going through.

You know what, surprisingly I found Swara-Laksh convo painfully beautiful. It felt like their own tragic love story. Love triangle should be written like this. Obviously I ship Yuvraj and his Eye, yet feel bad Laksh, a tragic hero who is doomed by destiny.

Looks like Suvanna will be jealous of Swara as well, just like Ragini was. but Pratula's admiring look was born from some ulterior motive, right?

Okay, my reaction turned out to be an essay.😆😉 But this chapter had so many points to cover. I think I still left few things.

Hope you'll be patient enough to read this!

love,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago