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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
Awesome nice and good terrific

Do update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2b nd part 3 is awesome.. Words r less to describe ur writing skills... 👏 👏 😊 update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update,good that uttara too had leave that mad house continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow..great chapter.
Uttara did the right thing..

Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nivi...
Awesome update...good job

First time felt sujju thought well n let swasan live alone away from this house...swasan part was awesome...she smiled after long time of pain.hurt..deceit..this showsthat their time is changing for good..wondering what you willpresent next...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey nivi 🤗
Thanks for your pm

Sorry I am responding very late 😆

Just finished with the first chapter. And its awesome.

Will read the second chapter and reply soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg omg
Nivi !! 🤗

Finished chapter 2 fully and I am amazed.

That small scene of Sanskaar giving swara hanky 😳

Wow , each and every dialogue of Swara was so good.👏

Shomi getting the jewels back, Swara's kangan and as chain . Loved this 👍🏼

I wish this was actually aired , I am sure TRPs will be much better !!

Superb work !! 👍🏼
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I didn't wait longer to read the third chap 😆
Nice update !!
Uttara leaves the house. Poor RamTa , they will be missing their children.

Waiting for the next chap :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone. Back with the second last chappy. I am ending this story. There are actually two reasons for it. First and the foremost I have a very packed schedule. I do not want to give any false hopes because I myself don't know when I will be updating the other one. Secondly, this track has already ended in the serial. So there is no use of writing on something which is already over. Now all that I wait is for the upcoming track. Hopefully will be back with a new story on the ongoing track. Let us see what is held in store for me in the upcoming days.
Chapter 4a

Swara's pov
4 years. 4 damn years since we left Kolkata and settled here in Mumbai. 2 years since I have opened a music school. S&S is the name of my school. The first S stands for my maa and second one for my husband. Both of whom who have been my strength all these years. And 1 year since sanskar has opened a company. And to our surprise, all the staff who were working in the karma and co came back here and asked us to let them work here. We were very apprehensive especially sanskar. But they assured us that they were really willing to work here. And we are now settled almost in every way. Financially we are reaching heights. Socially we are one among the respected ones. Emotionally not tht much but still we try to do. But sometimes it is better to let the emotions flow out rather than storing them within ourself. And for sanskar and maa I am an open book. I don't need to say anything but they understand everything. Life is all perfect. And I pray to god that it should always be like this.
Pov ends

Swara was just lost in these thoughts when two arms snaked around her engulfing her in a bear hug making her come out her thoughts.
San- kya soch rahi ho shona ( what are u thinking Shona)
Swa- nothing much sanskar. Was thinking how our life has become so peaceful and beautiful after coming here. Hain naa
San- haan swara. Bas I just hope ki ab koi is khushi ko nazar na laga ye. (yes swara. And now I just hope that no one keeps an evil eye on our happiness)
San- but what are u doing in the kitchen. I told u not to work, right. Aisi halat mein bhi u r working right.
Swa- offo sanskar I am pregnant for 4 months not stricken by any disease that u r talking like this.
San- so what. U know naa what doctor has said. The initial months of pregnancy are very crucial. If proper care is not taken then there are high chances of miscarriage. And last time yaad hain naa kya hua tha.
Flash back
Swara has completed almost her 3rd month. She was just roaming in the garden lost in some thoughts when all of a sudden have stepped on a stone and fell on her stomach.
Swa- sanskaaar she screamed loudly
Sanskar who was in home that day ran outside to see swara on the ground with one hand protecting her abdominal region.
San- swaraaa

He immediately rushed towards the hospital. Swara was taken on a stretcher in to a ward. After sometime the doc comes out
San- she is fine naa doctor.
Doc- yaa nothing much to worry about. But plz take care of her as even a small problem can lead to great consequence. I hope u understood what I mean mr maheshwari.
San- sure doctor. Can I plz meet her
Doc- sure u can meet her.

Sanskar entered the room where swara was lying on the bed.
San- tum theek hona swara
Swa- haan Sanskar I am absolutely fine.
San- I was so scared for a moment. What if something had happened to u or the baby. But tum garden mein kya kar rahi thi ( what were u doing in the garden)
Swa- kuch nahi. Bas aise hi I was roaming in the garden when I tripped.
San- promise me swara ki jab tak 9 months poore nahi ho jate u will not do any household work.
Swa- par sanskar
San- nahi swara. Promise me
Swa- theek hai. I promise
After coming back home she got good scoldings from shomi also for being careless.
Flashback ends

San- and u promised ki tum ghar ka koi kaam nahi karogi.( u promised that u will not do any house hold chore)
Swa- acha baba sorry. Ab main nahi karungi. ( acha baba sorry. I will not do from now onwards)
She washes her hands and both of them go to their room. After coming to Mumbai, they renovated the house totally. Now their room resembles that of their blue room in the maheshwari mansion. Because both of them thought that it was the place where they had so many beautiful moments.
Both sat on the bed cuddling each other when swara asked Sanskar.
Swa- sanskar tumhe kya lagta hai ladki hogi ki ladka hoga
San- maybe ladki. Jo bilkul tumhari tarah ho. Full of life. But haan ek cheez nahi honi chahiye usme. Tumhare jaise naak pe gussa. ( maybe girl. Who just resembles u. Full of life. But I don't want one thing in her. That is anger in peaks like u)
He says with a mischevious smile on his lips.
Swa- aww sanskar. Main gussa karti hoon. Bolo when did I do last time ( aww sanskar. I get angry. Tell me when was the last time when I got angry)
Swa- but I want a boy. Just like u. Sweet cute little boy.
San-stop calling me like that swara. I am not a boy. With an irritated face.
Swa- acha par mujhe to tum ek sweet cute little boy hi lagte ho ( is it. But for me u look like a sweet cute little boy)
San- main tumhe dikhana janta hoon ki ye sweet cute little boy kya kya kar sakta hai but sadly I can't do it right now. ( I would surely like to show u what this sweet cute little boy can do but sadly I can't do it right now)

There was a knock on their door which made them to break their eyelock.
Swa- maa door is open.
Shomi comes inside with a glass of milk. Seeing milk swara makes yuck expressions making sanskar and shomi chuckle at her childishness.
Swa- maa phir se doodh. Subah se aap mujhe de rahe ho. Yuck ( maa again milk. From mrng u r giving me this only. Yuck.)
Shomi- aisa nahi kehte shona. Doodh sehat ke liye acha hota hai. And especially during pregnancy. Chalo ab good girl ki tarah pee lo. ( u should not say like this shona. Milk is good for health. Especially during pregnancy. Now come on drink it like a good girl)
Swa- maaa
San- maa mujhe di jiye. I know how to make her drink.
Shomi gives the glass to sanskar.
San( in a fully cajoling voice)- Shona. Chalo doodh pilo. U know if u drink milk I will give u dairy milk bubbly. So come on drink it.
Swa- sachi sanskar.
San- haan Shona
Swa- give me
She takes the glass and drinks the milk in seconds. And hangovers the glass to shomi.
Swa- my chocolate.
San- abhi mere paas nahi hai. But will bring it afterwards.
Shomi- chalo ab batao kya khaoge lunch mein
Swa- paneer butter masala
San shomi- are u serious
Swa- Arre u both don't shout. And what happened if I ask for paneer.
Shomi- Lekin tumhe to paneer pasand nahi hai naa ( but u don't like paneer naa)
Swa- but mujhe paneer khane ka bohot man kar hai ( but I badly want to eat paneer)
Shomi- oh... Ok aaj paneer butter masala hi banaungi.
She leaves the room. Swasan again get back on deciding the gender of the baby.
San- chodo na swara. Kya fark padta hai ki ladka hoga ki ladki.i just want ki baby safe ho. What say. ( leave it swara. What is there between a boy and a girl.)
Swa- wo to hai sanskar. Any ways tumne koi naam decide kiya kya for our baby.
San- bilkul I decided a name for my cute upcoming princess.
Swa- par princess to main hoon naa ( but I am the princess)
San- u were the princess but abhi tumhara promotion ho gaya hai to queen.
Swa- k


By the time shomi prepares the lunch.
Shomi- Shona sanskar aa jao niche ( Shona sanskar come down)
San- ji maa
Swa- chalo. I'm damn hungry
Both of them go down. Swara's mouth was watering smelling the aroma of the paneer butter masala. She quickly sat down on her chair and started gorging the paneer with the roti. Shomi and sanskar were seeing her with shocked faces because swara was eating like a bhukkad.

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Done with this chapter. Most probably the next one would be the last one. Thank u so much all of u for taking a few mins from ur time to read and comment on this story. This means a lot to me.
Hope u all have a great day
Loads of love
Nivi



Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Will read n reply after 12

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