Swasan ss limits part 4b page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This story is set after the truth revelation of aadarsh, parineeta and dadi.


Swara - sanskar chale
Sanskar- haan swara chalo. Tum car mein baitho main suitcase leke aata hoon.
Badi maa- hum sab ko chodke tum dono kaha jaa rahe ho. Hum sab ek parivar hain naa beta. Phir aise kaise jaa sakte ho hum sab ko chodkar.
Ragini- swara tum kaise jaa sakti ho. Tum janti ho naa swara ke bina ragini adhuri hai
Laksh- bhai plz mat jaa

Swara and sanskar say everyone somethings which make them shocked.
They both turn and leave the house to start a new life with each other. Only them both.
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Hello guys I'm back. I know u all are angry with me for not completing the previous story but I really wanted to write on the current track. This is just a trailer. Aage aage dekho kya kya hota hai!
Plz do support this story as well.
Part 1- page 1
Part 2(A)- page 5
Part 2(B)- page 9
Part 3- page 11
Part 4a- page 12
Part 4b- page 13
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The trailer was good, something that caught my interest & now i won't let u live in peace till u complete d whole story...😆

Eagerly waiting 4 u 2 continue & please if tme permits do complete ur last story too 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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nivi prologue is super...
conitinue this and update first part soon..
waiting for ur first part now.. prologue is nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice...
I can't wait more to read further story...
Update first part asap,...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Continue nivi
Long update plz😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 1
The big day finally came. All plannings all plottings everything ended today. This is what everyone was thinking. Yes finally swara and sanskar managed to prove that aadarsh, parineeta and dadi the culprits and themselves as innocents. Whole house was filled with apologies and forgiveness but amongst all this were two people who were in another world. Yaa they are our swasan. They both knew that whatever they were going to do right now will cause immense pain for the members. But they also knew that it was high time that they should stand up for their self respect. Yaa self respect which was humiliated too much to forget.
Ragini goes to swara taking baby steps.
Ra- swara Hume maaf kar do. Hum jante hain hum ne bohot galat kiya hai par tum janti ho naa halat aise the ki hum majboor the. Dadi maa ne shart lagai thi ki agar hum tum se rishta tod denge to hi wo Hume paise dengi. Hume tab laksh ko bachane ke siva aur kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha. Plz swara Hume maaf kar do. Hum ainda aisa kuch kabhi nahi karenge. Plz swara.( swara plz forgive me. I know I have done wrong but u know naa how circumstances forced me to this. Dadi told that I have to break all relations with u and in return she will give me money. That time I was not able to think anything else other than laksh. I will never do anything like this again. Plz swara)
Laksh goes to sanskar
La- I'm so sorry bhai. Mujhe pata nahi tha ki ye log itna ghatiya khel khelenge. Us video ko dekhne ke baad mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki main uspe vishwaas karun ya tum pe. Plz bhai mujhe maaf kar do.( I'm really sorry bro. I never thought that these people will play such disgusting game. After seeing the video I did not understand that should I believe the video or should I beleive u. Plz bro plz forgive me.)
But swara and sanskar were un affected by their pleadings and standing numb for some time. Swara broke the silence which prevailed in the hall
Sw- sanskar Maine humare bags pack kar diye bas unhe car mein rakhna hai.( sanskar I have packed our bags. We just have to keep them in the car)
San- theek hai swara. Tum jaake car mein baitho main saman leke aata hoon.( ok swara. U go and sit inside the car I will bring the luggage)
Badi maa- swara sanskar tum dono kahi jaa rahe ho kya.( swara sanskar are u both going some where)
Swara- haan badi maa hum dono is ghar ko chodke jaa rahe hain( yes badi maa we are leaving this house)
Badi maa- beta tum dono kaise jaa sakte ho yaha se. Ye ghar tumhara bhi hai ( beta how can u both leave from here. This house belongs to u also)
Sanskar- I'm sorry badi maa Lekin jis ghar mein we were insulted like hell hum log waha kabhi nahi reh sakte.
Badi maa- parivaron mein aksar jhagde to hoti rehti hain iska matlab ye to nahi parivar ko chodke chale jaye. Aadarsh aur parineeta ko apni galtiyon ka ehsaas ho Gaya hai. Ab hum sab mil jul ke ek sath ek parivar ki tarah rehenge( there will always be some problems in families but that doesn't mean leave the house and go. Aadarsh and parineeta have realized their mistakes. Now we all can live like a happy family)
Swara- tum jaldi luggage leke aana sanskar. I'm waiting for u outside.
Sanskar- ok.
Sanskar goes up stairs to bring their suitcases. Sujata and ram were silent because they knew it is high time for them to take a stand for their self respect because water has reached the head. They both were sure that swasan will lead a normal life after leaving the house. So they were not opposing them.
Ragini- tum aise nahi kar sakti swara. Tum hum sab ko chodke kaise jaa sakti ho swara. Mana ki humse galti hui hai Lekin us galti ki itni badi saja mat do swara. tum nahi jaa sakti yaha se. Swara ke bina ragini adhuri hai (u can't do this swara. U can't leave all of us and go swara. I admit I made a mistake but plz don't give this much big punishment swara. U can't go from here swara. Ragini is incomplete without Swara)
Sanskar while coming down says- tum Hume kis haq se rok rahi ho ragini. Ab humara tumhare ya tumhare parivar ke sath koi rishta nahi hai.( with which right are u stopping us ragini. Now we don't have any relation with u or ur family)
Laksh- bhai aise mat kaho. Tu is parivar ka beta hai aur swara is ghar ki ( bhai plz don't say like this. Ur the son of this house and swara is dil of the house)
Swara- seriously laksh. Beta aur bahu. Aur wo bhi hum. When were we treated like that laksh could u plz care to explain. When everything is fine we are respected but when something bad falls upon the family We will be blamed unnecessarily. We will be called as dhokebaaz. And when we prove ourselves as innocents we will be asked sorry and we are expected to forgive everyone. This is never ending cycle laksh.
Bade papa- theek hai tum jaa sakte ho Lekin yaad rakhna ye ghar tum dono ke bina suna rehega. yaad rakhna ki is ghar ke darwaze tum dono ke liye humesha khule rehenge.( okay u both can leave but remember that without u both the house will be empty. And remember doors of this house is always open to u)
Swasan- thanks bade papa.
They both take his blessings and go ramta and take their blessings and they both left the house. They both know it very well that it would not be easy for them but they also knew one more thing that by each other beside they can achieve anything in their life. That is how love is ever ready to support each other.
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Guys here u go with the first part. I don't know how is it written because I have not pre viewed it. I just went on with the flow and took out all my bhadas through swasan. Plz do read if time permits.
Love u all so much
Nivi





Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one. Come on girl. Let them taste what they spit
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pari_1995

The trailer was good, something that caught my interest & now i won't let u live in peace till u complete d whole story...😆

Eagerly waiting 4 u 2 continue & please if tme permits do complete ur last story too 😊

Will continue that story also pari. I actually have bigger plans for that one.
Love
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's really nice nivi
I loved the starting
Keep it up
Will be waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nivi.. 🤗.. first give me kiss sissy..
I hate to read any stories about upcoming track.. it'll disappoint me very much.. if it never happen in the show... Now I'm all in.. at least I can imagine now...

Coming to update just fabulous... Loved it dear... Ragini adhuri thee adhuri hai rahengi.. phew.. I think I'm right... If. Not correct me...


Love you sissy...

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