SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12

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Nynaeve

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Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Poor swasan..
Battling between mind and heart..

I loved the him when he confessed and loved it more when swara was comparing it with past dialogues...

Amazing update dear..

Thanks

Dear Bhardwaj,

And it was indeed a battle between the mind and heart, Sanskaar unable to understand how he could grow to love someone so quickly and so deeply, while Swara is trying to convince her heart not to give in, again.

Swara could not help it could she, she did get what she wanted, the first time exactly what she wished for and the second time, was the actual answer to her wish.

Glad you liked the update,

Best,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: piccola1
That was heartbreaking. You've made me cry.
And heart-stoppingly beautiful. Will not write more until I have re read it at least another 5 times to be able to give this masterpiece a worthy comment !👏

Back to the forum after aeons and read all your updates in 1 go...am glad in a way, because I got the supreme satisfaction of reading them all together !

Lovin it !🤗
Pic.

Dear Pic,

I was missing you and am glad to "see" you😳. But then when you mention that you liked it, I am even more glad. And as a writer, when you say that I could make you cry, believe it is the greatest compliment I could get.😳😳

And yes, I too agree, at times, it is very satisfying to read all the updates in one go, almost makes up for not being able to read as each update was made.

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: showrav24
nice update dear
but I don't like swara here like in the show she don't trust sanskar & his love infact her love also.first she flew cuz he lost his memory she flew just becuz he not remember her I don't like this atlest u can try once & if u around him may be his memory return long back.
But update is good continue soon.
Bye.

Dear Showrav,

I agree with you, fully, that Swara is not completely right in, as you put it, 'running away' from Sanskaar. At that moment, three years ago, when she made that decision, she was too stunned to really think it through and did what was the best for those circumstances.

Now, she is scared, not that she cannot trust Sanskaar, but because she does not trust her destiny. This is intentional, now that there is only the final chapter, I can tell you, Swara will have to be brave enough to realise the Destiny does not always determine our actions or the outcome.

The Swara in the show, is an absolute write off for me😡

One more part, will update soon.

Best,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Tooo good

Thanks, Kritz😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb.. 👏

Thanks, Sneha

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#416

Nyna, done reading all the chapters you posted so far, just now and again...In a Go.
To be honest, I am at loss of words to put a comment. I will do that a little later.
But meanwhile, I loved it. You seem to be determined to make fall for your every update. You always manage a beautiful flow of your words and scenes. When are you updating next one?? I cannot wait longer, please.

love
- Harshada

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res for ch-6 Nyna, will try to unres soon. 😳
Unresed dear. 😃
Superb update! Brilliant! 👏 👏
The pain, anguish, loneliness, jealousy, romance, etc., everything of SwaSan was beautifully penned by u dear!! 😃 Loved SwaSan moments. 😳 So Swara misunderstood Sanskar and Tanushri, thinking them to be a couple, right?? 😕 Good that Tanushri cleared the MU for Swara. 😳 And although Sanskar can't remember his past with Swara, he fell in love with her, again. 😉 Waiting to know more. 😛 Update soon. Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Dear Aheli,

Those SwaSan moments were nice, right, I loved writing them out, actually this tale was quite a breeze to write.

Swara, completely misunderstood Sanskaar and Tanu, partly because of the reasons she thinks and partly because she is not ready to believe that she could have a chance at love again. Sanskaar will always fall in love with Swara, she just has to realise that.

Just one more chapter to go, will update soon - draft done, just a few connecting events / dialogues are holding it up

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Hey my cappuccino. Sorry for late.. I k ow you'll forgive me.. okay..

Okay.. I'm must accept I'm flushed with that kiss.. wow.. uhhh Sss.. soo hot.. soo our hero heart proved his love for her.. yayyyeee.. I'm partying..

Yes, how could Sanskaar not fall for her, it does not matter that his mind does nor remember, his heart knows.

I loved the whole thing.. I can't say specifically.. from the start where he is feeling uneasy with her cold behavior.. then their deal.. then spending more times together.. then that kiss.. ekkksss.. soo romantic.. then Tanushree.. I know she must be his friend.. and swara.. the jealous Swara.. and tanu Swara talks in washroom..

That deal was nice, right, there was no way Swara could refuse. Tanushree, it was clear to all of us, but then Swara is still scared for trusting fate when it comes to love, so she would misunderstand quite a few things. But a jealous Swara is nice, pity, the serial makes it a jealous Sanskaar😡

Then comes the highlight... Wow love confession in drunken state.. ohh mardala mujhe.. just loved it baby...

That drunken confession is one of my favourite scene, I loved it for the spontaneity of it, the way Sanskaar does not want to say it, but ends up saying it anyway How could I not use it?

Just want to ask you.. did I did anything wrong. I can feel that you're distancing from me... I don't know.. when.. your replies and your comments on my threads were soo formal... Not casual as we do before... Just wanted to ask you... I'm sorry again.. I'm a cashew nut..

I already replied to the above😊 and I love cashew nuts🤗

Update soon...

Will update soon, draft already done, just a couple of dialogues / connecting events to be firmed out

Love you a loads..

Kam...

Dear Kam,

Replied in blue above.

love,

Nyna

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#419

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Aheli,

Those SwaSan moments were nice, right, I loved writing them out, actually this tale was quite a breeze to write.
Swara, completely misunderstood Sanskaar and Tanu, partly because of the reasons she thinks and partly because she is not ready to believe that she could have a chance at love again. Sanskaar will always fall in love with Swara, she just has to realise that.

Just one more chapter to go, will update soon - draft done, just a few connecting events / dialogues are holding it up

love,
Nyna

Only one chapter left?? 😲 I'm feeling so sad that this beautiful SS will come to its end! 😭 But we will get to read new SwaSan stories from u, right?? 😉
And about updating the next chapter, don't worry, take ur time to update Nynu dear. 🤗

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Only one chapter left?? 😲 I'm feeling so sad that this beautiful SS will come to its end! 😭 But we will get to read new SwaSan stories from u, right?? 😉
And about updating the next chapter, don't worry, take ur time to update Nynu dear. 🤗

New SwaSan stories, 😕 Considering Swara's rude, arrogant behaviour towards Sanskaar and absolutely no regret for what she has done, I am sorely tempted to write stories where Sanskaar refuses to accept Swara and moves on. A couple more episodes with this obnoxious Swara and if she actually blames Sanskaar for laksh's death - I might do it too.😡

Have to get into the mood to finish off the last chapter, she is being difficult for all of us.😭