SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 44

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Fabulous updates
loved it ... curious to know about killer
cont soon

thnks for pm


Thanks Anu dearest🤗..Really happy to know you liked the updates..Everyone is curious about Miss X😉.. Working on the update, will try to update asap..

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Guys..I am so sorry that i am very behind the replies, i havent even responded to chapter 7 comments for some yet..So sorry..Will try to revert back asap..

Currently working on chapter 9 in an slow pace.. And i just havent decided where to stop yet..So based on that, you might get an update tomorrow or sunday


Love

Nita.



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for ch-7.😳
Unresed Nita.😃

Hi Aheli dearest.🤗.You do know how sorry i am for such a late reply back right.. 😭😭..


Part A :-
Very confusing indeed.😆 But got the point, that it might be Swara who admitted Sakshi in the hospital that day. Poor Swara. She become so confused.😳 (And me too.😆)..Okay basically this part got confusing because of me 😆..Half of the things reveled in part b was supposed to be revealed in part A,making both part have enough information but then i made the whole reveal in Part B..Thus Part A ended up to be more confusing...


Part B :-
After reading this part, I really think that Ragini is not the one who tried to kill Swara, all these time, she was lying and hiding things only to protect Swara.😳 ...Yep it was not Ragini and she did lie because she doesnt want her to go back to feeling guilty😉..


OMG! Sakshi was killed so brutally.😭 And Shomi-Shekhar died while saving Swara from getting killed bcoz Swara was the only eyewitness of Sakshi's murderer.😭 SwaSan r feeling guilty. It was nice to see both supporting each other.😳 But who killed Sakshi?? I know why the killer wanted to kill Swara,😭 but why Sakshi??😕 But got to know it! Okay, so some awfully obsessed girl was/is in love with Sanskar, so she killed innocent Sakshi and attacked Swara too when she found out that Swara was actually alive and was living in Sanskar's house!!😡..I know right,Sakshi and swara parents were killed brutally because of miss X😡...Even i hate her a whole lot now . 😆 , It kind of irony that i hate a character i wrote but i do ..Though she makes an interesting villian😉...


OMG! Those letters! And seriously? She borrowed the murder plan from Sanskar's books?? 🤢 Everyone including DP and Sujata blamed Sanskar! Poor Sanskar! Even he himself blamed him for the death of three innocent people and one person whose life is in danger.😭 ..Yep she is kind of obsessed with him and thus it transfer to the book he wrote and so she kind of decided to kill Sakshi and even the method was kind of borrowed from the books making Sanskar feel guilty 😭😭... It kind of excepted Sanskar would feel guilty..How would you feel when someone says i killed some for you, defiantly not happy ,especially when she killed the person he loved😉..


I really loved it how Swara reduced Sanskar's guiltiness so beautifully.😳 Loved their scene.😳 And Ragini also forgave Sanskar long back and she is really protective about Swara that's why wants her to come with her to New York.😳 But I really don't want Swara and RagLak to leave Sanskar alone and go to New York without solving this intertwined murder case.😭..Yeah the guilt part of both SwaSan alone was too much and but together they can lessen their pain 😳..Thus each other being the other support 😊.. Hmmm Currently Swara is kidnapped ..So let see what happens there first before worrying about new york 😆..



Okay, so if I'm not wrong, then, why RagLak r having troubled marriage part will come in ch-8, right?😛..Yep and i already posted Chapter 8😳 and i already received your lovely comment as well for which i will reply back asap😊..


And only one confusion, so that day when Swara was re-attacked in the mall, the obsessed killer already knew about her presence in the mall right?? But how did she knew that she was going to come there with Ragini???😕...That Called Suspense😆😆..Will let you know soon enough.


Thanks for Swara's timeline.😃 And congo for ur 15000th post!!🤗🥳Thank you Aheli dearest 😃.. And i replied back hundred posts later though 😭😭..


My list of suspects??
1. Uttara :-
May be she is not DP-AP real daughter and is so much in love with Sanskar that she killed Sakshi and attacked Swara coz she was the eyewitness! And also hired goons to kill Swara (but Shomi-Shekhar got killed instead) and also attacked Swara in the mall. I really don't know!😕
2. Swara :-
Swara was in love with Sanskar, that's why wanted to remove Sakshi from his life.😭
But then how come she kill her parents herself?😕 And she herself staged the attack drama in the mall that day to gain sympathy and she didn't lost her memory actually?!😕 (So confused.😆 And also don't want the killer to be Swara.😭)
3. Ragini :-
Maybe she actually loved Sanskar and not Laksh that's why killed Sakshi and also knew about Swara's love for Sanskar that's why attacked her also after finding her as the witness.😕 And also tried to attack her later in which their parents got killed?😕 And as she doesn't love Laksh, there is trouble in their marriage life?😕 (I really don't know, just assumed.😕)
4. Sanskar :-
Didn't love Sakshi and was forced to marry her that's why killed her! But why attack Swara??😕
And there is actually nothing as such those letters?😕 (I don't think its Sanskar and also don't want it to be him.😕😭)
5. Someone else (mysterious person)!!😉
And the Answer is No 5 😆.. But i really loved reading the suspects list of your Aheli dearest.. It was actually amazing that you all come up with so many theories 😳..


My darling siso, u realy manage to keep the mystery in each and every chapters.😉 Although at the starting of this chapter I got confused a li'l, but gradually understood each and everything.😆 Plzzz update the next part very soon dear, can't wait to know more about the story. And also don't keep the identity of the the killer a secret for very long.😉 Thanks for the pm.😃Sorry Aheli dearest, identity of the killer will remain an secret for some more time..😆..And i am really happy to know you understood everything..Updated 8 ,and working on 9th chapter..Will update it asap.. And Thanks once again Aheli dearest for such a lovely comment and so sorry for such a late reply back..


With love,
Aheli.

With lots of love

Nita


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Posted: 8 years ago

Finally gotten around to reply back Aheli dearest🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lol_leku_RoFl

Hi sissy how are you...

Hi Lekah dearest 🤗..I am so so so sorry for such a late reply back..😭..I hope you understand 😊

Omg seriously I'm reading thriller novel..u are great writer..just holding the suspense from starting to end of update..poor sanskar finally gathered actually what happened...i had doubt some mystery behind Sakshi murder but I never excepted you will bring twist like this..And i am seriously blushing under your compliments😳😳.. Thanks Lekah dearest..It means a lot to know you really liked it ..I am just happy that you found this one to be thrilling and suspenseful😃..I know you had doubts regarding Sakshi death and so you didnt expect this kind of twist😉..I am happy that the twist was interesting for you..


what an fate/coincidence Sakshi and swara meet up,and incident took place...im feeling why cant swara is reason behind this ...she might be sanskar's obsessed lover..coz reasons are...

1,As swara knew Arjun/sanskar is same...and she refused sanskar proposal without knowing its him right!!! Then after knowing she might felt rage or something learning sanskar is married (sorry I'm overthinking rite)

2,Why after her parents death she has to move to town where Sakshi living with her grandparents..meeting her is it coincidence or preplanned by swara...coz being elder sis she have to take care of Ragini leaving alone.. omething is missing while reading hospital incidents.coz its report given by swara... None knows its true or fake .which might be cooked up story by her

3,and her parents death its my major doubt...they might find her truth of obsession (hahha) and Sakshi murder...she wants no hurdles hehehehe..i don't know chumma my mind questioning

4,Yeah mainthing thanks for date mentioning .it is huge clue for readers..after entering MM she got his fourth book and then she stopped contacting him(mysterious girl)..coz that's it she planned to enter his house..

Sorry its my thought of doubt about swara...just her cooked up story of being memory loss patient..It not Swara dear, but your assumption could have been right..If i was supposed to make it swara😆..But nope it not swara, and regarding the fourth book, she stopped contacting him after fourth book because Sanskar asked her to stay away from his life using the book..How,will explain in the upcoming chapters😉..

Others culprits might be Ragini ..already she is obsessed lover we seen it daily soap..so some her childhood love for sanskar change into eheww..she may be handled smartly from new York and why she not sharing feelings for laksh something going between them..fighting ..for what..???not excited seeing laksh arrival..and she have to rush to new York don't even bother about in laws..is it care and concern towards swara or trying to run away from truth Well Not Ragini either but i didnt make her as an obsessed lover because the serial already beat me to it ..So it wont be any thing new right😆😆...

Uttara...i cant create doubts..coz word bhai..lets see some POV about her..and laksh bhai some personal issue with his pyari bhai..and played game in the name of love ...dont know omg my assumption are no bounds..still coming..i will stop sissy..Lekah dear, i really loved reading all your suspects and dont worry chapter 10 will introduce 6 or 5 suspects for you and you can choose from them 😉..But Uttara is also not the one 😆

..Great thrilling writer sissy... Keep going...hats off awesome storyThanks Lekah dearest, really happy to know you liked the update ..And i love you for such a lovely comment..Keep them coming because that my motivation factor.

Love

Lekah

Lots of Love

Nita


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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys.. I think I finally gotten around to reply back to all comments from chapter 7 except two comments from Geetha dear and isaritha dear.. As it was for both chapters together.. So if I missed anyone else kindly let me know.. So I can rectify it ASAP.. Please guys your comments means a lot to me and I don't want to miss out on replying to anyone.. Though I am late I still want to reply back to all the comments I have received as their are my biggest motivation and source of happiness..

With love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Nita 🤗

I think we've discussed how much I like the mystery/ thriller genre. Agatha Christie, Erle Stanley Gardener, Sidney Sheldon, Georgette Hayer...all are favorites of mine. I'm just loving the way you're spinning this tale with so many twists and turns, clues, red herrings, hints and suspense. ⭐️👏👏

Will be back with a more detailed take soonest I can. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nita 🤗

I think we've discussed how much I like the mystery/ thriller genre. Agatha Christie, Erle Stanley Gardener, Sidney Sheldon, Georgette Hayer...all are favorites of mine. I'm just loving the way you're spinning this tale with so many twists and turns, clues, red herrings, hints and suspense. ⭐️👏👏

Will be back with a more detailed take soonest I can. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji



Hi Viji dearest🤗



I am just happy to see you back dear..Missed you a lot 🤗..Take your time with the comments, i am happy you liked it and that is the only thing that matters to me 😳...


Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nita .. 🤗
My dear .. sorry for being late ..
Un-Res at page 54

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Khushi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: isaritha

Lovely Update Nita 👏

This is a combined comment for ur last 2 chapters... Have been lil busy in life so couldn't comment last time I read ur previous chapter... As usual I am more more curious to know who d killer is & the beautiful confession (face to face) of SwaSan
What next gonna happen in SwaSan life, their being together , their further love story... The phone convo of SwaSan was soo beautiful it gives the feels yaar

Now pls update the next part soon... Can't wait to know who d obsessed pyscho girl is 😆



Thanks Isaritha dearest🤗..Really happy to know you liked the updates..And i understand how busy life can get ..😭.. Who the killer is the main reveal it wont happen soon but the progress of really finiding her will start from Chapter 10..Beautiful confession ,SwaSan are unique and i will try my best to give them a nice reunion face to face i honestly dont know if i will succeed in it or not.. And i am glad to know you liked the phone conversation 😳😳.. What gonna happen next, lot of twists 😉..


Sorry yaar, Chapter 9 is the shortest update of mine,yet it taking me longer time that i intially thought..Struggling a bit with it as it kind of making me emotional ..And i am editing,adding then editing it always..Hopefully i will somehow finish it today..Once again Thanks Isaritha dearest for the lovely comment and for letting me know you liked the updates


Love

Nita

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