swasan ff: ek chooti si bhool part 5 updated pg.11 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res tani. Jaldi Unres karungi.😊
Unres
Thai is so awesome tani. Is it similar to the show. Want to know why did laksh leave swara. It's so nice sanskar ne swara ko mangalsutra aur sindoor pehenaya. Waiting for the next update eagerly.
Love u
Nivi
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Res.. Tani darling. Will unres tomorrow.. pakka.
Unres... Tani..🤗...

This is just amazing dear... I hope everything go well... Hope Ragini didn't play her trick in Kheer... What's wrong with suju..???

With love...

Kam..
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Superb update tani.. Loved it.
Specially liked where sanskaar wears her mangalsutra and apply vermillon on her parting.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Res tani. Jaldi Unres karungi.😊

Unres
Thai is so awesome tani. Is it similar to the show. Want to know why did laksh leave swara. It's so nice sanskar ne swara ko mangalsutra aur sindoor pehenaya. Waiting for the next update eagerly.
Love u
Nivi


Tnx...nivi 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res.. Tani darling. Will unres tomorrow.. pakka.

Unres... Tani..🤗...

This is just amazing dear... I hope everything go well... Hope Ragini didn't play her trick in Kheer... What's wrong with suju..???

With love...

Kam..

Tnx...kam di😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68
Part 5
You have to let people go. Everyone who is in your life are meant to be in your journey, but not all of them are meant to be till last.


Dp- swara beta kheer bahut acchi bani hai...
(Swara kheer is tasting awesome)

Sw- thanks bade papa

R- kheer acchi bani hai..???

Sw- kyu ragini kheer me kuch gadbad lagi kya tumhe...lo tum bhi chaak ke batao
(What happened ragini do you think there's something wrong with kheer...wait first taste it then tell )

R- nai swara aisa kuch nai...hum to baas...
( No swara it's not like that...I was just )

Sw- ooo...tumhe laga hoga ki maine phir se kheer me namak Mila di hai pichli baar ki tarah...
( Ooo I guess you must be thinking that I mixed salt instead of sugar this time also )

Dp- swara beta ye lo tumhari neg
( Swara...here is your prize )

Sw- thanks bade papa

Sa- swara... congrats kheer saach me bahut acchi bani hai
(Congrats swara you have seriously made awesome kheer)

Sw- thanks sanskaar...

Dp- sanskaar...aaj office aaoge kya tum..
(Sanskaar Would you accompany us to office today)

Sa- jee bade papa...mai aaunga
(Yes bade papa..I will come)

Dp- hume tumse yahi ummed thi
( I was expecting this only from you)

Sa- mera Mobile...shayad kamre me the gaya
(My mobile...I think I left it in my room itself)

Sw- mai le aati hu
(I will bring)

Sa- ruko swara mai bhi chahta hu
(Wait...I will also come)

Sw- hmmm

At room...

Sw- sanskaar ye lo tumhara Mobile
(Sanskaar here's your mobile)

Sa- thanks swara...

Sw- sanskaar ye tumhare haath me chot kaise lag gai...
(Sanskaar how did you got your hand injured)

S- kuch nai swara wo baas thodi si lag gai tum chinta mat karo mai thik hu...
(Nothing major swara it's a small bruise only...you don't need to worry )

Sw- thik hai mujhse saach chupa rahe ho
(It's alright I know you are trying to hide truth )

S- wo swara...byee
(Swara byee)


I am sorry swara...I can't tell you the truth...if I would have told you that I hated myself for hurting you that's why I hurted myself...it would have hurted you more and I can't see you in pain anymore I had promised myself that I will find out the truth behind all this is happening...and I hope today I will complete my promise to you and myself


Do you think I am that blind and idiot that I can't see what's going on your mind...no sanskaar I know you hurted yourself for hurting me again just like you did in past why...why sanskaar why do you love me soo much when you know that I don't love you...I can't see you hurting yourself more...I know sanskaar I am the reason of your misery...I will not let you spoil your life more on me... I promise sanskaar I will clear this mess soon and will sort out everything between us I feel her beh avior is really strange but I know there's no use of asking he...she won't tell me the truth just like that...there must be something swara which you are missing just think swara think let's just start from the starting...but how to recollect those memories... Wait a second sanskaar used to write diary he told me once it's his way to pour his heart out...but where to find it...I guess he can only tell me...oh GOD why isn't he picking up my call... maybe he is busy in some work... but his assistant told me he has gone somewhere to attend an extremely urgent meeting...but he could have once picked up my call...why am I feeling he is in some kind of trouble... swara don't think too much negative nothing's gonna happen...oh GOD just keep him safe...but know how to find the diary... let me guess maybe she could help me...

At call...

Sw- hello...uttara

Ut- hello swara...

Sw- uttara kaha ho tum...
(Uttara... where are you)

Ut- mai abhi bahar hu swara...kya hua kuch kaam hai kya
(I am not at home swara... what happened anything urgent)

Sw- nai wo baas kamre ko thik karne me tumhari madad chahiye
(Nothing major only wanted your help in fixing this messy room)

Ut- don't worry swara...baas adhe ghante me ghar pahuch rahi hu
(Don't worry swara...I am coming back home in half an hour)

Sw- okay...I will wait for you...byee

Ut- byee

After an hour...

Ut- swara... oops bhabhi...

Sw- uttara tum mujhe bhabhi bulao ya swara isse koi farak nai padta hum to dost hai pehle...
(Uttara... you call me bhabhi or swara it doesn't matter after all we're friends first)

Ut- nai swara mujhe tumhari jaisi bhabhi mili...mai bahut khush hu isiliye mai to tumhe bhabhi hi bulaungi...
(No swara I am really lucky to have a bhabhi like you... that's why I will call you bhabhi only)

Sw- thik hai... chalo kaam pe lagte hai...
(It's ok... let's get back to work)

Ut- ok bhabhi...

Sw- waise uttara tumhe pata hai sanskaar apni personal diary kaha rakhta hai...
(Uttara do you know where to find sanskaar personal diary...)

Ut- wo to bhai bahut sambhal ke locker me rakhta hai...kissi ko bhi chune nai dete hai...pur tum kyun puch rahi ho...
(He keeps it in the locker...and doesn't let anybody touch it why are asking about the diary swara)

Sw- nai wo aise hi...
(No nothing)

Ut- chalo tumhare kamra to thik ho gaya...byee
( It looks like our work is done...your room is now out of mess... byee)

Sw- byee..

so the diary is in locker of this wardrobe...but how to open this...maybe I can find the key somewhere here only...OH GOD...I have searched every possible place...now what...wait a minute... maybe this hairpin could work...so finally I cracked this locker... let's see where is the diary...oh here it is...sorry sanskaar I am reaching your diary without your permission...but it's the only way I can find out the truth... finally... now let's open it...oh I must say he has handled this diary very well...


Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Health not going smooth guys...try to understand 😳will update fully in 2 days...sorry😳

So guys done with the update...well again sorry for being late...😳 hope it has reached to your expectatios... from the very next part fb will start...just tell me through your comments if I can improve anywhere... waiting for your replies...😳

Tani
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Guys I am still updating...don't comment and read this part...just close your eyes😛

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