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Ragini: (monologue) Sanskar, now only u can save her. Again she needs. But still I have question if whole family is behind jail, then what is need to kill them. Oh God again I have read the diary.
Diary

Swara pov
Now one month is passed. Everything is sought out. Laksh is also behind jail this time due to solid proof, no one able to come out. Ma is living with us from past month. Sometimes I am really jealous of Sanskar, he snatch my mom from she love him from than me. Sometimes we both had cute fights over it. I know from that day my Sanskar is only living like dead one. His sadness can be seen in his eyes. I really want him bring out from this sadness. After 1 week is Sanskar birthday, I will plan some surprises for him.
POV end

Someone silently entered in room and shouted in swara ears. Due to it she became frightened and started to hit him from her hands. Her eyes are still closed in fear. Listening swara's shouting shomi also reach there. That person is only standing there adoring her.
Shomi: swara, why you shouted? ( she saw she is hitting someone) swara you don't have values, does anyone hit her own husband.
Sanskar started to shed fake tears.
Sanskar: ma, u don't know your daughter always do it. This time she is only beating me with hands but ma many times she beat me with belts. See there are several mark on my body. ( he tried to open his shirt).
Swara also open her eyes, she becomes shocked seeing her husband acting skills. If anyone see him today no one able to deny it really his wife is doing harassment on him.
Shomi again question her.
Swara give death glare to Sanskar,

Sanskar: ma see how she is looking at me? Like she is going to eat me.
Swara: ma , he is doing drama.
Sanskar: ma,your daughter now blaming me. You your self saw na how she was hitting me.
Swara; ma, he was at mistake. He woo in my ears, due it I become frightened. So I started to hitting him.

Shomi understand their cute antics. She goes to Sanskar and hold his ears.
Shomi: Sanskar bad habits, don't always irritate her.
Sanskar: ma leave na, my ears are paining. Ma you don't know your daughter always...
Swara: don't listen him he again going to start new drama.
Shomi: you both shut up. now listen me I am going Varanasi for one month.
Sanskar: but ma why sudden?

Shomi: beta, I just want some peace. For someday
if I live far away from all these it will be good for me. And I also want give you some space. You both are newly married. Just spend sometime with each other.
Swara: but ma how will you manage?
Sanskar; ha ma, you even not know anyone there.
Shomi; oh! Oh!, how much you both speak? My friend is living there I will live with her. Sanskar, I always consider you my own son. Don't u fulfil your mother wish.
Sanskar nodded in yes,
Shomi; That's like my good son.

Swara again become irked by seeing their love.
Swara: ma, if your love end for your son then give some love to this girl also.( pointed toward herself)
Sanskar: ma, there is some smell( he started to squeezing nose). Ya I get it someone is burning in jealousy.
Swara: I am not jealous.

Sanskar: I don't take anyone name.
Swara again going to speak something, shomi stopped her.
Shomi: you both will never stop fighting na. If you will keep this fighting always then how can you able to gift me.
Sanskar; do you want something? Tell me I will bring it from anywhere.
Swara: yes ma, atleast tell us na.
Shomi: that thing I want only you both will able to give me when you guys will stop fighting.
Sanskar; ma, don't give us puzzle.
Shomi: I want someone who can call me nani .
Sanskar: only this, I will give you many ones who can call you nani . just tell your daughter to cooperate with me.
Swara become shy listening it, she hitted Sanskar with her elbow.
Swara: Sanskar you,
Sanskar: ma, see her she always ready to fight with me.
Due to shyness swara run away by giving some excuse.
Shomi also went from there. In evening shomi leave the house for varansi.
Same night
Swasan are resting with each other.
Swara: Sanskar, are u missing ma.

Sanskar: yes swara, I am missing her very much. She never make me feel I am her son in law not son.
Swara: Sanskar I am asking about your ma.
Sanskar: swara I don't wanna discuss about it.
Swara: par Sanskar
Sanskar stand from there and started to going toward door.
Swara: where are you leaving?
Sanskar; you sleep I will come in sometimes

Swara: but Sanskar...
Without listening further, he went from there.
Swara also become sad seeing Sanskar leaving.
Swara : ( monologue) again I hurted him. I have to do something for make up his mood.( she started to think about how she will do it, soon her face light up)
She started to doing something in room.
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Study room
Sanskar is silently sitting there , his eyes are red due to crying. In his hand there is one family pic.
Sanskar monologue
Why dad?, for some money u all stop so low. You never thought about me na. How I will feel when I get to know everything. It will be better if I died in childhood or I am like you. So today I don't get this much pain. I am missing all of you, specially mom. How she always used to feed me with her own hands. But you all destroy it. Now I started to hate you. Do you listen I Sanskar maheswari is hating his family.
His trances are broken by swara's scream
Listening swara scream he immediately run there.
Sanskar reached there , he become more afraid seeing dark. He started to take her name.
Someone patted him from back, he immediately turned that side. Light also turn on , seeing that person he become speechless. He lost his all sense. He managed to speak only swara'
Swara is there standing in red saree. She is looking like breath taking.
Soon Sanskar come in sense and tightly hug her.
Sanskar: ( with crying voice) swara are you fine? , why you shouted?
Swara also respond him,
Swara: I am aboustely fine. This was my plan to call you.
Listening it, he become mad on her. He separated her from himself.

Sanskar; swara, are you thinking everything as game ? You even can't imagine , listening your scream for some moments I became mad but you always do childish thing. He jerked her shoulder.
Listening it, swara eyes turned moist tears start flow from her eyes.only she managed to speak" I am sorry" saying it she run away from there. Soon Sanskar reliases he almost shouted on her. After seeing room that is fully decorated he started to feel guilty.
He started to call her but she is not giving any response.
He began to search her everywhere, at last he founded her in kitchen. There she angrily eating chocolate.First seeing her this side he little smile again he becomes angry on himself. Tears are continuously flowing her eyes. He started to feel guilt.
Sanskar; princess , I am sorry.

Swara don't even give him single look. She continue her work.
He turned her to his side, first he wipe her tears. But she don't looked at him.
Sanskar: sorry na, swara. I promise I never shout at you.
She is giving him popular treatment that's silent treatment.he continuously pleading her to speak something but she continue her treatment. Now he is also losing his control. He immediately captured her lips. He started to kiss her passionately seeing it swara become shocked first later she also started response him. They broke their kiss after 10 minutes. Swara become shy after it, she started to go from there. But Sanskar stop her holding her hand he go toward her ears and silently wishper " we shouldn't waste your work" saying it he lift her and go inside there room.
Lights off..
Next week, Sanskar birthday
Whole mansion is decorated with sanskar favourite flower. Sanskar doesn't have any ideas about his wife surprise. Due to sudden meeting Sanskar is out of station , he supposed to come today.
Diary end.
Ragini started to become ready to meet someone. She covered herself fully. Only her eyes are seen. She silently leave from back gate.
At unknown place
A girl is lying there lifelessly. Slowly she is opening her eyes. Her body attached to wire she started to remember that evening which changes her life

Flashback...
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At anytime Sanskar supposed to come. Swara is becoming ready for him. After becoming ready she saw time , now it's 6:00 pm. She closes all lights. Now she is desperately waiting for him.
Soon she heard some foot step. She on the light for giving him surprised . instead of giving him surprised she her self become surprised.
She become frightened seeing scenario in front of her.
Laksh, ap, dp, sahil and shekhar are standing there.

She began to go backward , all of them also coming toward her. Before she run away from there laksh catches her.
Swara started to struggle to comeout from his grip. She bite his hand due to it his grip become loose, she started to run from there but this time Ap holded her and slap her tightly .
She fall there, all of them make circle around her.
Laksh: oh god baby doll, you are looking stunning in this attire.( she is wearing blue knee length dress)
Sahil: laksh , how can you speak like this in front of her brother.
Laksh: ups, sry sahil but I can't stop my self . that time I don't able to complete my work due to my brother.
Shekhar: This time you can complete all of your work.But before this we all want our revenge.
Ap goes toward her and stared to slap her. Her cheeks become red due it. They all tied her in chair.

She began to struggle to save herself but all going in vain. Her legs and hands started to bleed.
This also not give them rest, now all of them started to torture her more.
Sahil started to give her cuts on her hands. Ap continue her slapping work. Shekhar and dp silently watching them with smiling face. Laksh bring out some electric wire. He touch that to her chair that is giving shocks to her. Her body to started to become numb. Now shekhar bring salt from kitchen and put it on her cuts. She shouted in pain. She plead them to leave her, but none of them listening it.
Sanskar s side.
He is taking flower for swara. He buy her favorite chocolates and a pendant. He smilingly sitted in car and started to drive.
Swara's side

All are still torturing her.
Dp: I already warn you, but u don't listen us. Now see the result of your deeds.
Shekhar: I always considered you as a princess but u send us jail.
Saying it he slap her once more. Her whole bad has several marks. Whole parts are bleeding continuously.
Laksh again started to give her shocks, now after this much pain she finally faint. Her lips are also bleeding. They give her injection.
They heard car horn, they all become panic. Ap bring kerosene from store room and spread it on floor. Shekhar lit lighter and throw it there. All of them run from back door.
Fb end
That girl again closes her eyes.
Jail

Sanskar restlessly waiting for someone.
He Started to think that life changing moment.
Fb begins
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Sanskar happily entered in mansion with chocolate and flower.
His smile faded seeing fire is whole mansion. All things fall down from his hands. Everywhere there is fire, whole house is burning. He started to shout swara name.
No response.
Somehow he managed to enter inside and become shocked seeing the scenario.
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Precap: swasan pain

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Anniya dear...

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

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Awesome part dear

Liked swasan n shomi Bonding n cute fights...

But then all the family trying to kill swara...😡n laksh n sahil most disgusting people... None the r dp ao n shekhar but really.. how can Sahil even stand laksh who is commenting on his sister n n. N have tried to force her..🤢

Hate them to the core...😡

Oh.. I wonder what's the next... Pls update soon

Loads of love

Harshita

Thanks..
Ya, they are really disgusting...
Yup, I will update as soon as possible..

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Anniya dear...

Marvellous update...

First half was so sweet shomi n swasan their cute bonding..swasan small fight n lovey dovey moments too...loved it..

Secong half gave me chills..so painful part... those criminals free from jail..n their torture to swara..it was horrible ...sanky on way to home..i was prating he reach soon...waiting for his reaction to swara condition...n how he will take revenge from those...excited.. waiting

Talia

Thanks...
His way of revenge will more dangerous than them...
#anni

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His gaze fell upon lifless girl, who was lifelessly sitted on chair. Her whole body is bleeding, not even single part where she has not got cut. His mind become numb seeing it. He don't getting any idea how to save her. Fire is not letting him to reach near her. Time is slipping by his hands . He again take step to reach near her but again he only get faliure. Her condition is also becoming worse by passing time. Somehow he managed to reach near her. Her face is showing how much she had got pain. There is not even single place from where blood is not flowing. His condition is also not different from her, by seeing his life in that condition he even not able to take breath properly. He open all the knots with so difficulties due current is passing from chair. He doesn't want waste even single second to find out current source. After opening all knots he pick her in his arms. His hands are becoming wet due to blood. Now biggest problem is how to espace from fire. Fire is again stopping his ways. He put her down on floor. He opened his blazer and cover her with it. He manage to escape from fire. His own body is burning due to heat. His feet started to tumbling. But all ignoring his pain he bring her outside the mansion. He put her on some bench. He tried to awake her. All are getting in vain.

IN YOUR LOVE (SWASAN TS) Part 7 Pain
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His gaze fell upon lifless girl, who was lifelessly sitted on chair. Her whole body is bleeding, not even single part where she has not got cut. His mind become numb seeing it. He don't getting any idea how to save her. Fire is not letting him to reach near her. Time is slipping by his hands . He again take step to reach near her but again he only get faliure. Girl's condition is also becoming worse by passing time. Somehow he managed to reach near her. Her face is showing how much she had got pain. There is not even single place from where blood is not flowing. His condition is also not different from her, by seeing his life in that condition he even not able to take breath properly. He open all the knots with so difficulties due current is passing from chair. He doesn't want waste even single second to find out current source. After opening all knots he pick her in his arms. His hands are becoming wet due to blood. Now biggest problem is how to espace from fire. Fire is again stopping his ways. He put her down on floor. He opened his blazer and cover her with it. He manage to escape from fire. His own body is burning due to heat. His feet started to tumbling. But all ignoring his pain he bring her outside the mansion. He put her on some bench. He tried to awake her. All are getting in vain.

princess see na who has come, don't you wish your prince happy birthday. Wake na princess and wish me. I want to celebrate my birthday with you.
He patted her face but nothing is happening. Several people stand their to see that scenario but no one is helping him. One girl came near him with water bottle.

Uncle take this, if u sprinkle water na aunty will become alright .
He snatch bottle from her hand and started to sprinkle it. Finally she open her eyes. He started kiss her face. Seeing it she give him little smile.
" Sanskar, don't leave them."
Saying it she again closes her eyes. Someone had called ambulance, ambulance arrived there but he denied them.
" I don't need it, u may go. I will manage"

They all tried to convince him but he don't listen them. Seeing his sturnboness all went from there expect little girl.
" uncle why don't you let them take aunty."
He again give glanced to her. He is no mood in talking to her. Still he answer her.
" you will not understand. I just need your little help. I am calling someone until I don't finish my talk don't leave her. "
He also don't know why he is trusting this little girl just his heart is allowing him to trust her.
She nodded in yes, he called kabir and give him all instruction for her treatment. Soon one ambulance arrived there. They take her inside. He also started to go inside. But he back off and go toward girl.
" Thanks"

She give him assured smile and run away from there. He become confuse seeing her act but he don't want to waste his time thinking about it. He sitted inside ambulance.
After 30 minutes they finally reach some isolated place. There is only one building. He took her there. Inside that building a mini hospital is there. Kabir had already arranged room for her treatment. He put her there.
After 2 hours
Kabir come out from icu. Sanskar rushes there.
Sanskar: is she fine( with little hope.)
Kabir: Sanskar, her condition is worse. Even anyone can't torture animal like this the way she being tortured . I can't say anything. Now only your prayer and her will power can save her.
Sanskar: can I meet her?
Kabir nodded in positive.
Sanskar entered there, he held her hand.

Sanskar: princess you know how much it's paining here( pointed toward his heart) I promise I will never leave you. Whatever you will say I will fulfil your all wishes. Just you come to me, I will also let you do oiling.
She slowly opened her eyes, he started to call kabir but she signed him in no.
Swara: Sanskar, I love you. Happy birthday, sry I don't able to give you any gift. They destroyed all thing sanskar. I am going far away from you , you will never forget me na and move on.
Sanskar: stop rubbish talking, you are not going anywhere. Do you understand? If you will leave me na I will die.
She tried to put her finger on his lip but due to pain she can't able to do it.
Swara: shh, don't speak like this. If you will die who will send them jail. Do you not give me justice. They destroyed many lives Sanskar , all want justice. Plz give them justice na. Don't leave anyone.

Sanskar: not only I , you will also punish them. First you become alright.
Swara: now this not possible Sanskar, I want go from here. This pain is beyond my limit. You have live for our love.
Sanskar: yes swara I will live for your love. I know nothing will happen to you. You also have comeback to me for our love. Listen swara, now Sanskar will cross every limit " in your love"
Kabir reaches there, he started to check her.
Sanskar is still blabbering.
Kabir jerked him, then he reliases her eyes are still close. He don't know whom he till talked.
Kabir: sry Sanskar, she is in coma. Now only we can wait for correct time.
Sanskar: when will she wake up?( in stern voice)
Kabir; I don't know. May be after 2 minutes or never.
Sanskar give him smile. He become confuse seeing it.
Kabir; why are you smiling?
Sanskar: she will comeback for my love until she don't come let me cross every limit" in her love"
Kabir: what do you mean?
Sanskar; nothing, can I aso get treatment?

He nodded in yes, he started to take him from there.
Sanskar: plz give treatment here itself. I don't know when I will see her again . I don't want waste even single moment.
Seeing his condition, kabir agree to give him treatment there.
Kabir: Sanskar what are you going to do?
Sanskar: don't worry about me. Just you take care of my life. Can you leave me alone for sometime I wanna talk her.
He nodded in yes and went away.
Sanskar: princess I know you are listening me. Today I want you give some promises to you.
1. I will destroy everyone who are reason of your pain.
2. Until I don't take my revenge I will not even drink water.
3. I will wait for you my entire life.
Now I am going, you should take care of yourself. One more thing princess the day you will leave this world that day will also last day for me.
Last time he give her glance and went outside.
Kabir: Sanskar, where are you going. You can't leave from here. They may harm you.
Sanskar: Don't worry nothing will happen to me.
Kabir: don't act being foolish.
Sanskar: I am going to give them same and more torture of their deeds.
Kabir: do you even have any idea. Where they are?
Sanskar: no

Kabir; Sanskar,we will go to police. We will fire FIR they will find them.
Sanskar: no kabir, I can't trust anyone expect you. You pls take care of her. She is my everything. One more thing one day a girl will come here. Give this diary to her.
Kabir: who?
Sanskar: ragini, her best friend.
Kabir: Sanskar, in bad time all friends and relative leave people. I challenge you she will not come.
Sanskar: she will
Saying it he handed diary to him and went away.
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After two days
Sanskar is standing at some unknown place. There on every wall Swara pictures are hanged. Middle of room there is one punching bag. He is continuously punching on that.
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
While punching, he remembering their first meeting where he is more nervous than her.

Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..

He remembering how on his confession she told her truth. How he give her shock. How she accepted his love.
Remembering it smile come on his face.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

Their marriage, her fights, her cute antics, her condition when laksh tried to molest her. This raises his anger, he started to punch more harder.

Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..

How he don't listen when she was telling about his parents. How he slap her.
He started to punch more harder and harder.
Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan.
Her jealousy, his drama, her shyness.
Again he smiled little.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)

His shouting, her tears, her anger, her silent treatment,their kiss, finally their marriage consumption.
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Lakeeran vich likh di judaai

Her condition in mansion, her pale face, her bleeding body, her last word.
" punish them, I want justice"
He fell down on ground
" swara" he shouted. He started to cry loudly
He stop crying after listening ring. He picked the call.
Caller: sir we founded them. Expect sahil, everyone is with us. You can come and see them.
Sanskar: torture them until I don't come. Send some of your man to find sahil also. This time no one should escape.
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Precap: I am not giving you, you may guess.
Give ur ideas to torture all of them.
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Bye, take care and love you all...

Hi Ahana

Anniya dear...

Read all part in one go.
Love the concept.
Waiting for next update

A very heartbreaking story anniya. I have been following it in TU but never got time to give my feedback. Thanks a ton for posting it in IF now I can give my reviews on it. I seriously hate swara and sanskar's family except for shomi. How can sanskar's family behave with swara like this especially ap.