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Swara POV..
Somehow I managed to enter in his cabin. His back is facing me. His cabin is really worse than dustbin.All files are here and there, paper balls are on floor. I called him but it seems he is lost in his own world. This time I nearly shouted sir', due to my act he turn toward me. His face is full of sweat, more than me he is looking nervous. Like I am boss and he has come to give interview. I sided my thoughts, he take my file and offered me seat. Someone knocked on door, a boy enter in cabin, ya he is laksh maheswari. I quickly recognized him due to mostly he is news headlines. May be this time he doesn't notice me, he directly began to talk to sanskar. There conversation really give me a big shock. How can any one know about it.I began to think about it. After conversation laksh go out from his cabin but this time he notice me and give smile. I really wanna break his jaws. I can easily conclude after seeing him medias report about him is not wrong. He is really womanizer. I again shifted my gaze toward Sanskar, he is again lost in dream world.

Sanskar monologue
My heart is still beating fast. I heard knock on door , I quickly turn other side. I sense her presence in my cabin, still I don't turn toward her. She called me I again lost in her voice. She again called me this time loud,I turn toward her. Just like her name ,she is damm beautiful. Anyone can fall for her, I sense her gaze. I offer her seat. Suddenly laksh enter in my cabin like storm. His statement give me big shock to me, how can any media people entered in office. He informed me a girl from media came here for job. I assure him I will check everyone profile with full concentration. But again I lost in swara thought. This girl is making me crazy really.Swara monologue

I again shouted sir, he started to seeing my file. By seeing his expression I can easily conclude that he is impress. Now I am staring him just like idiot. I am fully lost in his charm. He also began to stare me. It's like that we both r lost in each other, our eyelock break by another knock. One peon come give him coffee, he began to ask me some question. I answered all of them with confident. Nearly after 30 minutes I leave the cabin.

Next day, Swara home...
I received phone call from Krama industries, I got selected. This is my first step toward my success. I went there to receive appointment letter, but my bad luck or I say my good luck. I dashes with SM. I close my eyes in fear.

Sanskar monologue
Whole night I don't able to sleep, I am lost in swara thought. She is really perfect girl beauty with brain. By seeing her knowledge I am impressed by her. I selected her as my pa. While coming office I am just praying god , it seems god also want to fulfill my wish now she is in arms. I again became loss in her eyes. Due to sounds we came in sense. I made her stand.
" vo sry I didn't notice u' swara
" it's okay " Sanskar

Swara monologue

After composing my self , I went from there. Omg , I should say thanks to him. I cursed my self for this behavior. I decided to say thanks tomorrow.
Next day...
I reach office, I began scan it. Really office atmosphere is diff. I directly went Sanskar cabin.
" sir, I wanna say something" swara
" what" sanky

" Thanks 4 saving me yesterday" swara
" I am not going to accept ur thanks" Sanky
" why" swara
" if u become my frnd then I will think" sanky
After thinking sometime I finally say yes but again his answer give me shock.
" still I am not going to accept ur thanks" Sanky
" Why it so, I have accepted ur frndship. Now u should also accept my thanks" swara

" it seems u don't know rule of frndship , in frndship no sorry no thank u. Still u wanna say thanks u can give me coffee treat." Sanskar
" kk sir, no thank u. After office coffee treat from my side." Swara
" I should also call u mam." Sanskar

" why sir" swara
" swara we r frnds na then call me by my name." sanky

" oh, that's then u should call me mam. " swara
" why, u don't like my name " sanky
" no I didn't in fact I love ur name sanskar." Swara
" no one can say u r so mischievous" Sanskar
" yup, ya I am. Kk now I am going . if any work u have call me." Swara
After 1 month...

Swara monologue

Many things are change in this one month, my and Sanskar frndship turn into love, we both confessed each other. Our all small moments made us so close to each other. Knowingly he always used to call me , I also love his company. When we both fell in love we also don't know, still I don't tell him anything about my media connection, I have fear after knowing truth he may think as traitor. One thing also I got to know things are not like that it seems, I mean laksh and Sanskar
are totally opposite side of coin. I come to know Sanskar is really clueless about his brother activities. I gather many proof against laksh, first I decided to show sanskar. So , I can saw him true face of his brother and also I wanna tell him about my identity. I hope he understand.

Sanskar monologue

One month is completed of swara coming in my life. Now I am totally love with her. Today I decided to propose her for marriage, I don't want any delay in it. I can't trust my fate..
Same day, evening
I reached at park where I had called swara. I saw her coming toward me, this is first time I saw her nervous. Now she is near me, I simply kneel down and proposed her for marriage, I saw her face now she is more nervous. I stand up hold her by shoulder, I ask her tell the matter that making her nervous.
Swara monologue

Today Sanskar called me at park, when I reached there by seeing arrangement I really become shocked. When he proposed me for marriage, only one thought come in my mind I AM JOURNALIST. He sense my nervousness, he ask me the matter. I just close my eyes I told him I am journalist, I only came his office for my mission. His grip on my shoulder become loose but his answer give me biggest shock." I knew it, from first day I know ur real identity"

I asked him with shocked expressions then why not u exposed me and how u come to know about it.
He simply replied, when laksh told me about a media girl is coming for job I sense fear at ur face but also honesty in your eyes. Then I decided to keep eyes on u without ur knowledge, from my informer I come to know about it. Not only this but also u r daughter of our biggest rival shekhar gadodia. That time I really become angry, I wanna kick out from my office but ur honesty that I have seen that day don't let me take this action. I started to know u, from that I come to know whatever u r doing it must have some reason. My love and respect toward u increase day by day, only one thing I want. U ur self come to me and tell me ur identity. Now see my trust on you is won. Yet I love u, do u accept me as ur husband.

Swara monologue
I nodded yes, I say I am ready to become ur wife.I decided not to tell him about his brother. We both decided to tell at our home.
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Sanskar home,
When I tell dad, about my love and swara motive he quickly denied me but my lovely brother convince him about swara. I hug my bro and say thanks to both of them..
Swara home,
My Hitler bro is taking my side, he is fighting with dad for my love. I thought before I faint I should go to room, when I turned to go my dad says yes for alliance. I hug both of them, I really felt bad thinking wrong about them.
I informed Sanskar about yes from my family side , he also told me same answer. Now I again going to faint, totally unexpected.
After one week...

Marriage day...
Now we both are married, I am going to start new life with my sanskar. Before going to change I decided to talk to my MIL. When I reached there, I again received shock...
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Precap: real reason of agreeing for marriage from both side, molestation,fight began for love...

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Wohoo anniya..

Awesome concept and amazing update

Wow.
Sanky knew about Swara from day one..
But he trust her..
Finally they are gonna get married soon.

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Wohoo anniya..

Brilliant update...so you are going to change the TS into SS...i enjoyed this part loads.swasan meeting n journey of love in office was terrificly written..sansku knows everything about her...n still proposed n she accepts ..made me glad..families also accept that was shocking..feeling something fishy...update next quickly..

Talia

Thanks..
Ya it will be ss now.
You will soon come to know reliaty...
Don't worry only today itself I am going to update next one...

IN YOUR LOVE (SWASAN TS) Part 3
Hii guys ,First big sry to all of u,I know I am so late , what to do , many of u know I am writing ff , so totally become busy in that.
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From this part is you will see different writing style.
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Swara reaches outside Dp's room
Dp: laksh , can u now explain me why u made us agree for marriage.
Laksh; dad relax, I only told u say yes to this marriage because we have profit in it.
Ap: explain us clearly, I seriously hate that girl. U know na she is journalist, if she come to know our real identity. We all are gone. And most importantly she is our rival daughter.
Dp: He has not only rival in our business but also in our illegal activities.
Laksh: dad and mom, just relax just think now swara is married to Sanskar. Shekhar gadodia not able to harm us now. Now if he make any plan we may use swara against them. Not only this even we can blackmail for partnership. He will become our puppet, whatever we want he will not able to deny it.
Dp: do you think it is so easy? As much I know him he will never agree for marriage without any profit. He must have some own plan.
Ap: laksh ur dad is saying right, how can you forget sahil. He is main player.Do you ever think if Swara ever come to know anything? Our all hard work will destroy.
Laksh: relax mom, bhai never came to know anything . Then how is possible that girl who has come now will be dangerous for us.
Dp: you should never ignore sometimes even an ant is dangerous for elephant.
Laksh: dad u r thinking so much. In any case if she come to know anything then we will remove her from our way.
Dp; okay, now go to ur room and do u send Sanskar out or not?
Laksh; ya, dad don't worry they will not to come close. I am going now.
Laksh went from there, Swara hide behind wall. After Laksh going , she also went in her room.
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Swasan room
Swara: ( monologue) I can't even believe that they all together. Which work they all are doing? Dad and sahil also involve in that kind of work. I have to tell all this to but if he not believe me then, I can't take any risk. First I have to know about which work they all are talking.
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Next day...
Swara: (monologue) where is Sanskar? I hope he is fine. Mom and dad also not at home, whom I ask? Swara u r really an idiot. U have good opportunity, no one is at home. I can find something against them.
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Ap and Dp room..
Swara began to search that room.
Swara : (monologue) They are so clever, not even single proof in this room. Now where I check. May be in store room I will get something. God help me in finding truth.
Store room
Yes, finally I find some proof. How can anyone stop so low for money. They are well known drug seller not only this even they have business of woman trafficking. Now I have many proof, I will their true face to world. First I have to know truth of dad.
Someone shouted from behind
" so u finally come to know everything. Dad was saying I should made them agree for marriage. But u don't worry I will not disclose anything . how can I loose this chance.
Swara: u don't worry about me laksh. I will not only disclose ur real face to Sanskar even to this world. U should think about ur self.
Laksh; oh common bhabhi, do u think so, I will let u win so easy.
Swara: I have proof against u and ur family.
Laksh: till now I thought u r strong player. But u proof me wrong , if u will dispose us then think about ur dad.
Swara: what do u mean?( confuse)
Laksh; oh common baby, don't act like this u don't know anything about ur family. If anything happen to us even ur family will suffer.
Swara: I don't mind, If they will get punishment for their deeds.
Laksh: ( coming closer to her) and ur mom?
Swara: ( moving backward) nothing will happen to my mom.
Laksh: ( moving more closer to her) u r forgetting ur mom is heart patients. How will she react after knowing her daughter in laws are involved in illegal things and her husband whom she always worship like god and most importantly her son. I think she will surely die after knowing all this.
Swara : ( moving backward, now her back is touching wall) u don't know my mom. She is strong lady, she always stand with justice. She will surely understand.
Laksh: so u are like ur mom, but one u don't know till now. My real reason behind this marriage.( touching her shoulder sensuously.)
Swara: ( in weak voice due to so closeness) I know everything, u wanna partnership na.
Laksh : babes, this is not real reason.
Swara : (trying to push him) then what u want?
Laksh: ( pull her more closer) you
Swara: ( more struggling to free herself form his strong grip) do you even know , what r u talking? I am your bro wife.
Laksh; so what?, I always want you on my bed but my bed luck u never give me look. When I got to know ur love story, that I felt like killing Sanskar. How can he even eye on my property.
Swara: I am not any property. Sanskar is far better than u. U r really disgusting one. I hate you.
Laksh: ( now there is not even single gap for passing air also) Sanskar, Sanskar always . what is in him that I don't have?( shouted)
Swara: ( push him with all energy, he fall on floor) you will never understand.
Laksh: ( hold her pallu) after today no one able to accept you even Sanskar.
Swara; what do u mean?
Laksh: (tear her blouses from both sides) I am going to satisfy my self.
He dig her head on her neck,
Swara : ( trying to free herself form his clutches) I said leave me. Sanskar plz save me( tears starts to flow)
Laksh began to kiss her neck wildly
Swara: laksh, plz leave me( trying hard to push him) Sanskar plz come ur swara need u( loudly)
Laksh: oh common baby , he will not come to save u. Let me enjoy myself.
Someone hold laksh coller started to punch him.
Guy; how dare u laksh to touch her. Whenever swara needs her Sanskar, he will definitely come to save her.
Laksh: Sanky, she herself invite me.
Sanskar: no words against her Laksh, before I forget u r my brother leave this house.
Laksh: believe me Sanskar, okay ask her what she is doing here?
Sanskar see toward swara, swara is not in any state to answer him.
Sanskar; see toward her. Her tears are saying u r at fault. I don't need her answer I can believe my swara . I am finally give u warning just go away from here now. Warna I will not even think even for single second to kill u.
Laksh run from there, giving warning to swara through eyes
Sanskar: swara I am sorry , I don't able to fulfill my duty as husband to protect u.( he cover her with his blazer)
Swara; no sanskar, if today you don't reach on time I don't know..( put his finger on her lips)
Sanskar; forget all thing. I assure u laksh will get punishment. ( he kiss her on forehead)Come with me, I will do your first aid.

Fb end..
Due to sudden sound, ragini stop reading further.
Kabir; sry to disturb u, but we need to check her now.
Ragini; it's kk, if u don't mind can I take this diary with me.
Kabir; ya, I don't have any problem.
Ragini; I am going, if you need anything regarding her treatment just infrom me.
Kabir; kk
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Ragini ;( monologue) how lovely Sanskar is, he go against his brother to save swara. But what happen further he have to kill his family. And about Swara's family also not anyone know, I am sure they also has some major role in it.
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Precap; Sanky slap swara, attempt to murder,
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Ragini reaches her home, find thing fishy there. She quickly run her eyes everywhere. She finds some shadow on walls. Without wasting single second she leave the house.
Ragini pov
I don't know who are they but it seems to very dangerous. I can't let them catch me, I need to be safe for swasan. They both need me. First I have to find some secret place. ( she started to think) I remember, Sanskar house will be safe for me. No one able to think I am there and may be I find some clue also there.
POV end.
After half an hour,

She reached at mm. She again start to read diary.
DIARY...

Sanskar take swara with him in their room.
He was very guilty, when his princess was struggling with his brother . He was not there to save her from his evil brother.
Swara sense his condition, she cupped his face and looked straight into his eyes. His eyes are full of guilt.
He tried to speak something, but she places her finger on his lips.
Swara says while removing her finger from his lips " Sanskar, don't need to be guilty. It's not your fault, you save me like always. Plz I want my prince back not this crying baby. Now smile na( she wipes his tears). "
Sanskar slightly smiles. He also wipe her tears.
Sanskar :now u also smile and let me do ur first aid.
Swara also smiles and seated on couch. He bring first aid box and started to dressing her wounds. There are several nails marks on shoulder and hands. Even on her neck there are marks.
She don't want to show him, how much it's paining her. Without her saying any words he understand her feeling.

He gently kiss her hands and shoulder before applying antiseptic.
Now he started to clean neck's wound. She moron in pain.
He blow air on it, He again kiss her there.
Sanskar: princess, now it's paining.
She nodded in negative.
Sanskar: Swara now u sleep, I going to freshen up.
He began to stand, but she hold his hand.

Swara: Don't leave me alone.
Sanskar seated in front of her and cups her face.


Sanskar: I am not leaving you. I will always stand with you. I will soon come na( still she don't leave his hand). Okay I am not going anywhere, are u now happy?
She nodded in positive and places her head in his lap. He began to caresses her hair. Soon she sleep in his lap itself. His legs started paining, but it doesn't matter to him. He also sleep in that position itself.
After 3 hours,
Everyone came home, laksh told everything to them.
Dp slap him hard, seeing his father slapping him. He stand in disbelief.
Dp: how could you do it? Can't u control ur lust? Now for some days u underground, soon when Sanskar anger become cool . I will call you.
Laksh: but dad, why I should leave house?

Dp: I don't know anything. If u want to live just run away from there.
Laksh: kk dad, par dad there is one problem. Now swara knows everything, if she tell bhai then.
Dp: she will not, what she will tell?

Ap: exactly, even her family is in this business. Moreover Sanskar trust us like god.
Laksh: dad u are doing mistake which I had done. She is really girl with moral value more than truth nothing matter to her not even her family.
All started thinking something, soon all face lit up like bulb
Dp: Now her family will only help her to us from swara.
All began to laugh, laksh went from there.
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Swasan room
Both are still sleeping in same position. Soon swara sleep disturb due to Sanskar's movement. She open her eyelids and start to stare Sanskar lovingly.
Swara Stand up and began to go from there. Soon she felt someone is holding her hand.
Swara: Sanskar, leave my hand. I need to go.
His eyes are still closed, he tighten his grip more on her wrist.
Swara: Sanskar, I know you are not sleeping. Stop your drama.
He open his eyes, and pull her. Due to his sudden action she land up in his lap.
Sanskar: not fare princess, without giving my gift you are going.
Swara: Gift?, but why? Today is not your birthday.
He remove her hair from one side and keep his face on it.
Sanskar: who said we only give gift on birthdays? , arre u slept on my lap na now give my gift also.
Swara: oh , so my patidev want gift from me.
He nodded in positive.
Before she can answer, someone knocked on door, hearing knock Sanskar started to make faces.
Sanskar; my enemies.
Swara: go and open door.
She went in washroom.
Sanskar open the door. Ap come inside with tears.
Sanskar: ma, what happen?, why are you crying mom?
Soon swara also comes there, Ap directly hug her tightly.
Ap: I am sry beta,I don't knew laksh will stop so low.
He keeps hand on AP's shoulder.

Sanky: Mom, its not ur fault. No one knew what is inside the person. Don't blame yourself. Swara say na something.
Ap is still hugging swara,she slightly wishper in her ears not to disclose their truth warna conscious will be bad.
Listening her threat, she become little frightened. Ap parted herself for swara. She joined her hands in front of her.

Ap: swara, plz forgive me . I am not good mother. Today I am really feeling ashamed on myself, laksh is my son. I fail to give him good upbringing.
Saying it, she again started cry loudly. Swara still stranded all numb not knowing how to react on it.
Sanskar hold AP's hand. And wipes her tears. Ap again started her melodrama.
Ap; not today beta, let them flow.
Sanskar: no mom, don't cry. Swara pls say na something.
Sanskar's eyes also turned moist.
Swara come in sense after listening Sanskar loud voice.
Swara: vo mom, u don't need to be guilty. It's not your mistake.
This time she hug ap and whisper in her ears, you will not able to save ur son , husband and yourself from this melodrama. It will be better if you stop ur first class acting in front of me atleast I will not melt by your stupid acting.
Ap also mocked her and wishper again you will not able to do anything.
Don't worry sasu mom, time will show it. Who will win or who will loose.
Let's see.
Ap: beta, now u both take rest I am leaving.
Before leaving she again passes death glares to swara which is unnoticed by Sanskar. Sanskar again hug swara.
After 3 hours.

Evening
Swara is in kitchen preparing tea for everyone. Just then ap and dp come there.
Swara: do u need anything.
Dp: don't act like u don't know anything.
Swara: come into point.
Dp: That's like good girl. Let's us make deal.
Swara: what kind of deal?
Dp: you will not open your mouth in front of sanskar
Swara: and y u are thinking like I will obey you.
Someone shouted from behind" because u have to."
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Present
Ragini trances broken by some sounds.
She began to go in that direction. She found vase is broken.
Ragini: ( monologue) it must be broken by due to wind. Now let me cook something for me.
She went in kitchen and started to find something eatable. She open the freeze and become shocked.

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Precap: same as previous

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