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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi guys..! This is isn't Esha but her younger cousin sister Anumita 😊 I was reading through her fan fiction diary..when I came across this page..It was written "Rejected" on the top of this TS ..But I really liked it ...So posting it here [P.S- I know a little lot about IF because I used To write in the Saraswatichandra forum]

Part A - Our Meeting After Years

Ma'am! Ma'am! The nurse hurried ..."There's a patient for you! He's heavily wounded! Emergency!"

Ok !" take him to The observation unit and inject him The painkiller ..!" I'll come in a minute!" Dr.Swara Ordered

The Patient was taken inside the OU..

Dr.Swara came in and took of her stethoscope out her neck..She took a deep breath and came towards the wounded person..

As she saw the man..her eyes welled up and she was red thoroughly.. Understanding the surrounding around her she ordered her assistants for antiseptics,cotton,thread,medi needles, and every other thing which was required for his treatment..

he was being treated for the past two weeks and was kept on anesthesia as his wounds were deep..he wasn't even aware of being in the hospital for these many days..

Dr.Swara worked hard on giving him the proper care..Though a bad past dwelled between them..she didn't take that in her professional life..

One Fine day

he opened his dark brown hazel eyes to find himself in this ward..he saw a lady standing facing her back towards him..

she seemed to be talking to her junior about some medicines..

unable to understand why is he here? The man spoke

"Hello? Excuse Me? May I know why am I here?"

Swara turned..she frowned watching him in confusion.. she walked towards him

She still looks so angelic!" Sanskaar muttered.. He wasn't shocked because he knew his wife was to be the greatest general physician in the whole city of Kolkata..

"Mr.Maheshwari!" You were heavily injured when you were brought here..!" now you seem to be fine..you'll be discharged tomorrow !" Swara Smiled

Mr.Maheshwari? sanskaar uttered in surprise.. When did these formalities started coming in between us? He asked her

The Day you Threw me out of your house..Swara Replied Firmly.."And Yes Mr.Maheshwari..I would not appreciate discussing personal things in the hospital..!" You're Well and good now so leave!" Swara ordered..

But what about the hospital fees? Sanskaar continued..

it's OK if you don't pay it? Swara turned back..

And then..

"Mummy...Mummy!"...A chirpy voice came from the cabin..and entered a little brat inside the OU ..

Sanskaar smiled at this small brat's antics..

Samar..! Beta..! how many times I have told you not to come just like that to my office ..! Swara said sternly..

But Mummy...!

And this was enough to shock Sanskaar out his wits ..

should I continue?

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Part - B ~ Memories

He's Your Son? a shrill voice spoke up ..

the voice was of sanskaar's

Yes! He is..! Swara nodded

Mummy..! He's my dadda? He looks the same as the man you showed me the picture of..! little Samar Pointed

Yes! My Son !.. He is your Dadda... Swara Caressed her son tenderly

Sanskaar was startled at Swara's Remark..He Couldn't Believe that little tender boy of age 3 was his own blood..He was His son..

Samar Ran as fast as he could to his Handsome Dadda ..Sanskaar Quickly picked his Son up his arms and smiled wholeheartedly...

Swara Stared at the scene coldheartedly ..At this instance ..she walked towards sanskaar and took her son from his arms..

Don't Dare...!" Don't Dare to touch my son..!" You've No relations with us!" She Smirked and walked out..

Every other person was looking at sanskaar sympathetically ...

Sanskaar Closed His Eyes..And Cherished Their Happy Moments..

Flashback

Sanskaar Sing Na!" See I've bunked my extra classes to hear you sing !" Please Sing !" She pinched Him

OK Mrs.Sanskaar Maheshwari Here You Go..!" Sanskaar Grabbed His Favorite Pal "His Premium Retro Guitar" And Swara's One And Only Souten

O karam Khudaya hai

Tujhe mujhse milaya hai

Tujhpe marke hi toh

Mujhe jeena aaya hai

Swara Tenderly Kissed His hairs

O tere sang yaara

Khush rang bahara

Tu raat deewani

Main zard sitaara

They Share a Adorable Eye- Lock

O tere sang yaara

Khush rang bahara

Main tera ho jaaun

Jo tu karde ishara

Swara Squeezed His Hand feeling his unconditional Love

Kahin kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main

Teri khushboo se takraaun main

Har raat jo aata hai mujhe

Woh khwaab tu..

They Peck Each other lightly On lips

Tera mera milna Dastoor hai

Tere mere milne se mujhme noor hai

Main hoon soona sa ik aasmaan

Mehtaab tu

And There The Song Ended, Leaving Them in an Uncontrollable Hormonal Ecstasy..

As They Made Love with extreme pleasure and tenderness..Dawn Came

They Were Laid On the bed Across Each other, Cuddled Up

Swara's Eyes Brought Down Fresh Tears..Sanskaar Got horrified..

"Baby? Did it hurt So Much? I am Sorry? P..Please Forgive me..."

"Hushh..Sanskaar! You didn't hurt me at all..!" Swara Relieved Him

"It's Just How can Someone Love Me So much? When My Own Parents Disowned Me..! " Swara Wiped Her eyes..

"Swara...My Jaan..! You Know! This wasn't your fault at all..You are not the culprit of your Sister's Suicide...!" Sanskaar Caressed Her...

But Sanskaar!" How Can My Family Believe that Sahil jeeju was in adultery with me..? I hated Him ...! He betrayed Ragini Di and made me small in front of the whole family...!

Swara !" Please Forget it all!" Don't make this romantic moment a complete flop..! Come let's be ready For a second round...!" Sanskaar Winked

Sanskaar!" You..! Because of this romance ..! I missed my extra classes ..!"

Swara humphed

Oh ho!" Its Just been a month since we married and you are still into your studies..No one cares for me..!" Sanskaar made faces

oh ho mera chhota baby..! OK OK..Swara tried to manaofy his fake anger ..

But Sanskaar was a cheetah this time..He quickly Jumped up taking swara in his embrace And took on the bliss for the second time..

How Good Those days were...!" Sanskaar Murmured to himself... He was Ashamed of himself for doubting his wife of some relation with Sahil at a point of time..

He Cursed Himself For Throwing His Pious Wife for a mere misunderstanding.. He had hurted her a lot..Not knowing His wife was carrying a little life inside her..

After Sanskaar had banished her out..Swara was completely shattered and deserted.. People thought her to be a wh**e ..who was carrying a child of an unknown pleasure- seeker...They cursed her...

But Swara being extremely modest & self respected woman.. She worked hard to earn herself a name..Her College Friend Laksh helped her in this bad time...

Thus,Forgetting Everything about Sanskaar...She moved ahead...Becoming One of the most Famous General Physician of Kolkata ..Dr.Swara S Maheshwari { They Weren't Divorced So }

Sanskaar had married Swara ...When She was in the most difficult Situation.. She hadn't even imagined that her best college buddy would deceive her for a misunderstanding...

The End of Part B

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Apologies, Sincere Apologies to my dear Readers for delaying this update for so long..Actually this chapter is quite long as it's the last one :) .. And I hate typing ..With much blabbering here I present the most boring chapter :P

Chapter C : And We Confess

Next Day..

"hey Swara..!" Natasha Called out..

Hey Babe!" Morning!" Let's Have some tea first!" Swara Gasped Keeping her bag in her cabin..

"Do you know?..The man who got discharged yesterday? He's the famous neurologist of Golden Life hospital..! He got so impressed by our hospitality that he joined here as the new neurologist in replace of Dr.Prema..!" Natasha Sighed..

Who? Swara Scratched her head..She already was aware of her colleague being extremely Insane at times...

Arey He..! The Most Famous Neurologist of Golden Life Hospital...Mr...S..

"Dr.Natasha..Please Rush to the OT..The patient has been anaesthetized..!"the nurse Called..

Okee! Swara will talk later..!" Natasha waved ..

Swara Smiled..

She entered her cabin..Again!..She took out her appointment files..

A Nurse Entered..

Ma'am! The New Neurologist Is Asking for you..! If you aren't busy, Can you please Meet him? His Cabin Is in straight Right..Room 09!"

" Ah! Yes I'll Be coming!"..Swara Smiled

After Wrapping Up her work..She Went Towards The New Doctor's Cabin..

She Entered.. He was Facing his back towards Swara..

Sir?" May I come in? "

"Yes! Yes! Doctor Swara You may!" He Excitedly Accepted Still Facing His back to her..

Swara Could Make out that this voice was known by her..She brushed away her thoughts..

"Sir You Asked About Me? "

Yes I did!" I just wanted To see the face of Kolkata's best General Physician..

Haha! Sir, This is a very big compliment..!

You Deserve Nothing Else Than Love & Praises My Love..! The Man Said Turning Towards Her ...

Swara Froze In Shock... It was Him..Her Husband Once again...

You? Swara Screamed...

Hushhh..Swara this is a hospital..!"

Get Out!"

I Am been transferred From Golden Life hospital to here as a neurologist.. Sanskaar Protested Calmly..

Then Behave Cordially..You have no rights To call me Such names Like "Love" Be particular here and call me Dr.Swara or Miss. Swara..!

But..You're Married Right? You have a son? Why Should I call You Miss? Sanskaar spoke Firmly..

"OK Then, Mrs.Maheshwari"..Swara Said Unknowingly..

"OK..Mrs.Maheshwari..Your Mr.Maheshwari Will call you by this Name!"..Sanskaar Smiled..

Swara Was disgusted with him..She left instantly ..

"What does he think of himself huh? just because he's come here to work ..he thinks he'll make everything normal..that's wrong..!" I'll never let him come near Samar." Swara stumped her foot in confidence...

Days Passed,

Sanskaar's Attempts to get himself forgived and make everything better didn't go in vain..

even if swara seemed to have moved on, Sanskaar's presence made her extremely fragile and nervous as if she was a newlywed bride..

Sanskaar, Though being a neurologist would never miss the chance of sitting in the physicians's cabin for lunch..He would always sit beside swara..Having his lunch quietly.. whenever swara would cough when eating..he would be the first in passing in the glass of water..

Sanskaar proved to be one of the best neurologist within a small span of time..He had become much more caring and practical in terms of work and extremely possessive & romantic in terms of being a husband..

Sanskaar would not love swara physically but he would take each and every responsibility of his wife & child, Their needs, by shifting in the opposite flat of Swara's

Swara had slowly understood that he had realized his mistake..She being extremely emotional and affectionate..let sanskaar do every possible care of her & Samar..

Sanskaar never crossed his limits physically except a side hug or a handshake when one of the two could be successful with a case..

Swara never behaved rude in the hospital so she would always treat sanskaar as a friend...None knew about them being married..They all knew swara was a divorcee ( But trust me SwaSan never divorced )

One Day,

Swara Had enough..She was finding it difficult to keep away herself from her long lost husband and control her hormonal desires ..

She directed herself towards his cabin..He was Having a meeting..Her hands were shaking and tears were being a neverstopping stream..

Sanskaar!!..She banged the door

Dr.Swara? What? Sanskaar raised his brows.."Sorry Gentlemen Excuse Me for a minute?"

They came out of the cabin..And sanskaar dragged the door to close it..

What?

I..I..need to talk to you!" It's urgent.." Swara wiped her tears..

Hey baby..! is everything All right? Sanskaar touched her cheek in concern..

"Listen..You have hurted me a lot..You were my only support but even you betrayed me..These years, I was physically & mentally weak without you..I even wasn't sure about your whereabouts..You meant everything to me..I just couldn't live..I was dying everyday yearning for you...I needed your love..I needed you..Then I gave birth to our angel..He needed you..I just could act that I moved on..I never ever could ..so, it will be better if you leave us alone..I would be better if I could cry to myself rather than making my son habitual to you ...Go away...!"Swara Sighed

Good! you let your heart speak..! I just wanted you to expell everything you had in that paunch of urs...!" Sanskaar smiled..

Swara Turned back.."This isn't funny is it?" "You know what I am seriously not behaving like a typical hurt wife!" You know me!"

Yes! Now listen to me, I have done every possible thing to make you hurt..I know that! It's all about my misunderstanding about what I saw..You know, I was drunk that day, & I saw you hugging a man..Everything was blurry around me..! I just couldn't figure out..That!...That,he was Anupam (Swara's Brother) ..Suddenly it stroke me, why not be him sahil? could be the rumours true? my heart wasn't believing what my mind was saying.. and my mind was ruffled by intoxication..! Everything happened so quick, I dragged you..Apparently Sahil to me ( Actually Anupam) Ran away...as he ran, My doubt was cleared..I slapped you..Abused you..&..B..Banished you from our house..You went away..Next day I got a news of sahil being in the jail for the past 3 weeks for raping a girl in his neighborhood.. Then, Finally your brother visited me..He told me how he had realized his mistake of not trusting you that you weren't responsible for your sister's suicide..& Mainly, He ran away because..he was scared that i might hurt him for coming to you..I was shocked, and I froze in utter guilt..I started searching for you..But I found you nowhere..Then one day due to dehydration I fell down my bike and had an accident..And Then, I met you again.."

Please Swara ! Forgive me..I wasn't there for you when you needed me the most..I wasn't there during our son's birth..I..I..Am.

Swara cut him midway by placing her hand on his lips...

Bas..! Don't say anything else..! I love you..& The happiest thing is that SwaSan are back together..

Sanskaar Smiled, And he took her in a tight blissful embrace..they had united..

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Guys.. This was the last Chapter..The story ends here, But the Epilogue is waiting to be read..I'll be posting it...maybe, By Saturday 😳

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Edited by _Esha_ - 9 years ago