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Hello guys, I am here again with one new shot.


Hope you guys will like it.


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Rain



The dark clouds ever so slowly gathered in sky blocking the slowly rising sun in process making it look like evening when in reality it was morning. Cold wind started blowing spreading the chillness all over.

It was month of June and raining heavily outside. Swara was standing taking support of window staring outside at the falling raindrops from sky touching ground. Swara startled the soon she felt two hands getting wrapped around her waist.

"So my dear wifey is enjoying rains?" Sanskar asked Swara making his hold on her waist tighter pulling her closer. He placed his chin on her shoulder whispering into her ears, "Without her husband?"



Swara placed her hands over his while closing her eyes. A crimson red blush appeared on her cheeks. It's almost one year to their marriage but he still had the same effect on her.

"Someone is becoming red" Sanskar giggled naughtily. Swara smacked lightly on his hand trying to control her blush, "Sanskar please"

"Okay baba, no more teasing now, happy?" Sanskar said assuring her.

"So tell me, why my sweetheart is up so early?" Sanskar questioned her snuggling his face in crook of her neck.

"Nothing bas ese hi... Sanskar... it's raining outside. Rain is really special for me and you do know the reason. This rain had witnessed our love confession, had witnessed our union, and had witnessed you and me getting us" she said turning towards him putting her hands around his neck.


Sanskar pulled her by her waist and said, "Of course I do sweetheart."

Swara lips curved into a beautiful smile. "I love you Sanskar" she uttered those words hiding her face in his chest.

Sanskar could only smile at his innocent wife's love confession and wonder what he had done to deserve her... She was so beautiful... so innocent... so divine...so cute and at the same time so shy... she was his princess... his shy princess. She was the reason of his everything. She introduced him to his soul.

FLASHBACK:

She was waiting for her bus to come after leaving from her office when it started raining heavily. She wasn't even carrying an umbrella. Raindrops started colliding with her body making her clothes to get drenched in water. She held her bag above her head trying to protect herself from the rain.

Her attention shifted towards the car which had stopped near her. She narrowed her eyes staring at the car in confusion. The glass of the window slide down and a voice hit her ears leaving her stunned, "Want lift?"

Momentarily her eyes closed in accordance to his voice that fell into her ears immediately recognising the owner of it. Her heart started breathing faster crossing its original pace. She opened her eyes to see the person in the car and she just couldn't stop smiling after glancing at him once.


"Sanskar" she could only utter his name. Sanskar gave her, his that reserved charming smile. He felt heavenly hearing his name from her after so long.

"Get inside" he reminded her to get in the car when he noticed she was too lost in him to realize that she was getting wet.

She nodded positively and quickly got inside. He switched off the AC realizing she was completely drenched and she might catch cold due to AC. She was smiling at his caring nature thinking in her mind, "He is still the same. He hadn't change".

"What were you doing here?...In this rain?" he asked her when she was busy in playing with raindrops outside her window.

"Was waiting for my bus to come" she answered him very casually.



He immediately applied breaks as he heard her making car to stop with a jerk. She asked him turning towards him with quite shocked and surprised expression, "What happened?"


"Why were you waiting for bus? You have your own..." he questioned her with shock evident on his face


"No I don't Sanskar." She answered very calmly.

"What do you mean?" Sanskar asked unable to understand anything.



"Papa had an accident before 2 years and he... " she couldn't complete herself as her throat chocked remembering the worst phase of her life again.

Sanskar closed his eyes in regret... in regret that he wasn't there for her when she needed him the most.


She continued, "Uncle took my sign unknowing to me on the property papers... and he took everything what I used to own..."

Sanskar clenched his fist in anger and disgust for Swara's uncle. He never liked him from the start. He was very well aware of how mean as a person he was. But he could stoop so low...he really didn't expect at least this much.


"But you could have used law to take everything back" Sanskar said in feeble voice.

"But I didn't want to..." she said very causally surprising Sanskar to the core.



"Materialistic things never mattered to me Sanskar. I have never seen my mom as she left this world just after my birth. After that, Papa was my only life and before 2 years it also ended. What would have I done with those money? They don't matter to me... they never did. Love and my relations are the only thing what always mattered to me and will matter to me. Uncle is happy by taking my property... it's okay... at least he is happy... so its fine... I am also happy. Now I do job in a company and I earn enough for myself. I don't need more than that" Swara spoke her heart out to Sanskar.

Sanskar was just quietly listening to her, staring at her calm face. She never really failed to amaze him. She had faced so much in her life still she wasn't complaining anything about her life. She wasn't angry at god or destiny for giving her the cruel life which she didn't deserve at all. Her uncle...who took everything from her, cheated on her and she...she doesn't even hold any grudge on him. In fact she was delighted that her money could make him happy. The girl, who had so many maids at her home from her birth that she never did need to take even a glass of water for herself, now is doing a job in a company. She was a billionaire's daughter who had just lived in AC and her huge mansion like home, was now living a common life and still the girl had not even a slightest line of complaint over her face. How can one be so innocent, so selfless, so loving and so understanding at this much young age?


A lone tear escaped from his eye by imagining how much she must had suffered in those 2 years. Before the tear drop could make his way from his cheek to ground, Swara wiped it giving him a soft smile saying, "It's okay Sanskar. It's not your fault." She tried making him understand that it wasn't his mistake, as she knew he must be blaming and holding himself responsible for everything.


"It is... It is my fault Swara... I wasn't here when you needed me the most. If...if I would have been here...it wouldn't have happened... it's my fault...it's all my fault" Sanskar shouted loudly in agony and pain while banging his head on the car steering. He wanted to punish himself...wanted to hurt himself as much as Swara had suffered, as much as she had to bear the pain. His head didn't pain as before his head could reach to steering Swara placed her palm in between the steering and his head.

Lifting himself up, he stared at her thinking, "This girl is surely not from this planet. She is an angel. No matter how much she was herself hurt... no matter in how much pain she was... she didn't let him get hurt... she could not see him hurt... Why god had to do all the evil things with such a pure soul????"

Within a moment, he pulled her in a hug tightly wrapping his arms around her and started sobbing like a child asking her for forgiveness, "I am sorry Swara, I am so sorry. I... I wasn't here for you when I need to be...you...you had to face so much alone...I am very bad...very very bad... I... I am so very sorry..."

Swara's eyes started filling with tears. Before they could fall on Sanskar's back, she wiped them, not wanting Sanskar to feel more guilty.


She started rubbing his back in order to calm him down, "Shh... Sanskar don't cry, please... It's okay... You are not at fault... This is just my destiny."


Sanskar slowly pulled himself out of the hug and wiped his tears. Swara passed a weak smile to him.

"Will you marry me Swara?" Sanskar proposed her for marriage taking her hand in his soft grip leaving a shocked Swara behind. Her face turned into a confused one and soon it fell down.


She tried taking her hand back saying, "Sanskar please... You don't have to do all this. I don't need your pity. I can take care of..." She couldn't complete himself as he placed his finger on her lips indicating her to shut up.


"Shut up Swara. How can you even think something like that...I am not doing this by feeling pity on you...I can never...you are a very strong girl...you don't need anyone's pity...I want to marry you because...because I love you...I love you Swara...and I was going to your home only, to confess to you...to propose you" Sanskar told Swara about his feelings for her, by handing her over the bouquet of beautiful roses from back seat of car, with a lovely note on it written "I LOVE YOU" over it.

Sanskar's love confession left Swara stunned and dumbstruck. She couldn't understand what to do. "So Ms Swara Bose, will you allow me to hold your hand forever?...will you allow me to take care of you for the rest of your life?"

She took the bouquet from his hand and fixed her gaze on them for a moment. Looking up at him she encircled her arms around his neck, "I love you too Sanskar..."



Sanskar smiled taking a sigh of relief. It wasn't like he didn't know that she too loves him as much as he does, from their college days. But she was too shy to confess. He was stunned to see the girl who used to be so shy earlier, had now became so independent and confident enough to live her life on her own without needing anyone's help. Happening in her life so far had definitely changed her.

He was leaving before two years to USA for his MBA. He thought he would confess his love to her once he gets back from USA and gets financially stable because he wanted to give her all those comfort what she had been getting from her childhood being a billionaire's daughter. Now he wasn't a billionaire like Swara's dad, but he was definitely a millionaire and he could definitely give Swara all the comforts and luxuries she deserves to get. He wanted to treat her like a princess because she was a princess... his princess. In past two years in USA, along with his MBA Sanskar started his own business and it expanded so much in these two years, that he was the most successful young businessman.

He could feel her tears on his back. Pulling her out of hug, he wiped her tears away. Sanskar cupped her cheek saying lovingly, "No more crying Swara. It's over now. You have faced every worst thing till now, from now onwards, your life will always be filled of happiness and of my love. Nothing wrong will happen now." He kissed her forehead as a symbol of assurance and love...pure and unconditional love.

They had a simple wedding in a Mandir as it was Swara's wish to keep everything simple and they started their beautiful marital life with each other. With each passing day, Swara once again became the cute and shy girl what she once used to be with Sanskar's love, care and his pampering.

FLASHBACK ENDS:

"Thank you for coming into my life Sanskar" Swara expressed her gratitude to him while pulling herself out of the hug.

Gently pecking her lips, Sanskar placed his palm on her cheek, "Thank You Swara... for entering my life...for accepting me...for loving me...for everything...You don't know how lucky and blessed I am to have you in my life...I love you...I love you a lot...a lot more than myself."

All what Swara could do was to smile and adore her husband. They both were meant to be together. No matter what circumstances were, no matter how much they have suffered but they were destined to be. It was their destiny who brought two beautiful souls together making them one and blessing both of them with each other.

THE END




Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww... Such an awesome os.. 👏 👏 .. Love ur stories ya.. They are always so sweet and cute.. M glad to read such scenes thru ur stories.. We don't get any such normal conversation or hugs and smiles in the show now.. 😆 😆 ...

So Swara suffered so much.. Awww... She is actually so sweet still.. Even with that uncle.. 😡 😡 .. She deserves Sanskaar and his love for sure.. So he was going to propose her and met her on the way .. Lol.. Coincidence.. 😆 😆 .. But loved how he wanted to give her all the luxuries and then marry her.. Sooo cute and thoughtful.. 😳 😳 ..

Sanskaar and Swara in ur stories are a treat to read ya.. Truly made for each other and a very lovely couple.. 👏 👏 .. With all the drama in the show, such stories are a great respite to read and gives so much peach.. 😳 😳 .. Only Sanskaar can love her so much and only she can return it back with the same intensity and love.. 😳 😉 .. They actually have some relationship goals .. Lol.. But loveee ur stories.. Please keep writing and we all will keep reading and commenting on them... Waiting to read more.. U r an amazing writer.. 👏 👏
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You made me cry... yeah such people exist like swara uncle disgusting... like sanskaar who are always there to cute our wounds... i have witnessed both in my life...
Awesome os...


With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dearie...harshada😊
Once again..round of applause for this OS..you are giving such cute n sweet swasan stories..u took my heart away...thank for this..will wait for more..👏

Love..😛
Talia😉
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This was sooo awesome. Hats off to u girl u did an splendid job. I always like ur stories, they are amazing. Swara and Sanskaar in ur stories are so cute, they love each other from the core and its visible through ur writing. Cute Mr. & Mrs. Maheshwari are treat to read. Swara is shy and Sanskaar is so caring. I just love them. Keep writing more. U r a fab writer. Stay blessed :-) <3
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Originally posted by: virman_superhit

Wowww... Such an awesome os.. 👏 👏 .. Love ur stories ya.. They are always so sweet and cute.. M glad to read such scenes thru ur stories.. We don't get any such normal conversation or hugs and smiles in the show now.. 😆 😆 ...


Hey dear 🤗

So glad to receive your amazing feedback once again😳
Thank you so very much dear.
Pleased to know you enjoyed reading this one😊
Yeah actually now we dont but still whatever Swasan scenes we get to see in the serial, they are amazingly beautiful and adorable
Swasan never fails to make me fall for them with their each scene


So Swara suffered so much.. Awww... She is actually so sweet still.. Even with that uncle.. 😡 😡 .. She deserves Sanskaar and his love for sure.. So he was going to propose her and met her on the way .. Lol.. Coincidence.. 😆 😆 .. But loved how he wanted to give her all the luxuries and then marry her.. Sooo cute and thoughtful.. 😳 😳 ..




Swara is a pure soul.
Even after suffering so much in her life and losing her everything, she doesnt hold anything against anyone...neither against her uncle nor against god or her destiny.
Swara deserved to be with sanskar they way Sanskar only and only deserve Swara.
They both are meant for each other.
Such coincidence are beautiful, arent they?😳
Yes,,,,,,,,,,,,Sanskar was in love with her from long but he wanted to make sure he get settle well enough to give swara all the comfort she deserves to get.
Glad you find that thoughtful😊




Sanskaar and Swara in ur stories are a treat to read ya.. Truly made for each other and a very lovely couple.. 👏 👏 .. With all the drama in the show, such stories are a great respite to read and gives so much peach.. 😳 😳 .. Only Sanskaar can love her so much and only she can return it back with the same intensity and love.. 😳 😉 .. They actually have some relationship goals .. Lol.. But loveee ur stories.. Please keep writing and we all will keep reading and commenting on them... Waiting to read more.. U r an amazing writer.. 👏 👏



Your words are making me go 😳
Thats so really sweet of you.🤗
I am glad you like to read swasan in my stories.
Thank you so much😳
Hopefully will keep writing and keep posting dear.
Well honestly I dont think I am even a writer😆 but I will take it as a complement from you😳
I am extremely grateful to you for this amazingly lovely feedback.

Stay blessed
- Harshada

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Thank you so much ahana
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

You made me cry... yeah such people exist like swara uncle disgusting... like sanskaar who are always there to cute our wounds... i have witnessed both in my life...

Awesome os...


With love...

Kam...



Hey dear Kamila🤗
So sorry for making you cry dear.

Yeah such people do exist.
But if there are such evil ones, so does exist the pure and nice humans like our Sanskar😊
Sanskar Maheshwari...a name itself is enough to define what unconditional, pure and true love is.

I really dont know what to say about you being witnessed both in your life.
But I am hopeful about good phase lasting in your life forever after your upsetting one.😳

Thank you so very much dear 😳
Glad to know you enjoyed reading this shot.

Love
- Harshada

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Originally posted by: sneharay

Beautiful os.. 😊




Thank you so much dear
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Thanks a lot dear

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