ANGEL VS CUNNING BUSINESS MAN-[EPISODE 3 UPDATED IN PAGE 4]

Hello frnds... I m Shanmathi... I m new to india forums... I have read many of ur ffs here... So thought to update my ff here... I have already updated it in tu and fb... My fav all time pair is swasan so this ff s also based on swasan... So pls encourage me frnds...

Intro:

Head of d family Shekar Malhotra... Age 54... Works n a reputed company... Right hand of his boss Kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi(played by badi malik of udaan)...without shekar kamal narayanan wont breath...

Sharmistha Malhotra... Age 50 Wife of Shekar... Worships her husband as a god... She wont do anything against her husband...

All the family members portray him as a loyal man and they know he wont go against his values...

Shekar and Sharmistha has 3 daughters... They both had a wish for son nd thought to get another child but they got frightened that 4th child will also be a girl... So they stopped...

Ragini Sharma... Age 27... She s d first child of Shekar and Sharmistha...Beautiful,very talented but very adamant... Just behaves like a military woman... Whole family even her parents gets afraid of her... This behaviour s just due to the surrounding she faced till now... That s from school to college she got strict behaviour towards her... So she too turned very strict...

As ragini s d first child of her parents Shekar loves ragini a lot but sometimes Sharmistha gets frustrated due to her strict nature...

Ragini finished her post graduate and works in a reputed company... Then she got married to Laksh Sharma...

When raglak got married ragini put 1000 conditions nd then married him... Laksh doesn't have parents... He has a sister who got married and settled in foreign...

Now both are living in a seperate house... Due to the strict behaviour and adamant character of ragini Laksh bought a new house as she dont want to live in a rented house... During her pregnancy time ragini decided to leave the job as she wants to rise the child on her own...

Laksh wont say anything to ragini as he dont want to create pblm between them plus sometimes she is correct so he wont speak anything...

Laksh works as a project manger in an it company...

Raglak have a 3 year son named Tarun Sharma...

Swara Malhotra age 24... Second child of Shekar and Sharmistha... Very beautiful kind-hearted sweet but at the same time very straight forward... If she finds anything wrong or if someone does wrong even it is her family member she wont leave them...

Due to this kind of behaviour Sharmistha is pissed of with her... Swara always behaves as a boy... Due to her this habit many problems comes so Sharmistha always scolds her to behave like a girl... Shekar wont say anything as he knows what she s doing s very correct...

Deepika Malhotra(played by tina of udaan) age 21 studying in a college... Opposite to both ragini and swara... A very punctual lovable at the same time naughty girl... Does many pranks...

Due to her naughtiness only house seems to b happy as ragini always being strict and swara too bring problems bcoz of her straight forward nature... So always Deepika makes some pranks as a result it gives happiness to the family...

Now comes the villian of this story...

Kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi age 57... A very big bussiness man... He has lot of bussiness... He has different shades in the society... He is a very big bussiness man in front of the whole world... But behind it he s the king of illegal bussiness... Nobody knows this... Only few very few knows this... Shekar too knows about it as he s d right hand of Kamal Narayanan... He is also known as god of poor people as he helps them in front of world...

Swara doesn't leave anyone who does wrong... What she will do when she comes to know about the real face of kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi???? When she comes to know that her father s d right hand of kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi king of illegal bussiness... What she will do??? How shekar family will react as they portray him as a very loyal man who will not do any wrong???? Whether swara will be a hurdle to kamal Narayanan and his illegal bussiness ???? Then what he will do??? How swara will handle all this??? To know everything read my ff guys...

Our hero introduction will be in the next chap...

Hope u will like it... Pls comment and express ur views... Though its negative or positive u can comment... All are welcomed...


Part-1:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4670240&TPN=2
Part-2:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4670240&TPN=2&#p135529684
Part-3:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4670240&TPN=4

Hey Shanmathi dear... Nice character sketch and prologue... post first part soon..

Hey shanmathi.. do continue i already read ur updates in facebook intrsting concept!!

hi shan.. Welcome to swaragini forum.. update soon dear

Hey shanmathi
Superb start
Do continue soon
Pm me please

Thanks for ur comment guys... Support me till last...

Frnds here is the 1st part of my ff... Pls do comment and share ur views...

Epispde 1

In ragini's house laksh is getting ready for his morning walk... This morning walk has become his habit after his marriage... As ragini wants laksh to b healthy... So even she wont allow him to eat non veg chats fast food... Ragini had planned a diet for him not only for him but for all 3 including their son... She wont allow her child to eat anything outside...

They haven't eaten in hotel even once as ragini restricted to eat outside food... Overall its a mini military camp...

Laksh too wont object as he dont want problems in their life... Sometimes he feel bad when she says anything to Tarun(their child)... But he cant do anything...

So he got ready went to morning walk... After that he came back home got ready and went to office after finishing his tasteless food...

Tarun's school bus will come near their home... So ragini will leave him in the bus... After that she will finish the works... This s d daily routine of this family...

There in Shekar's house... All are getting ready for their office and college... Sharmistha s preparing breakfast and lunch for all...

Swara got ready in her room and came down... As usual Sharmistha start to scold her as yesterday she went out to solve someone's problem...

Swara:ma whatever u say i wont back off from this...
Shomi:swara dont behave like a boy... Keep in mind that u r a girl... Shekarji say something to her...
Shekar:shomi leave her... Whatever she s doing is correct... But swara dont get into all the problems...
Swara:papa u too...
Shekar:swara u know our society... Its a corrupted one... U alone cant change anything... I m not saying u not to do anything like ur ma... But c to it that by helping someone or making someone realise their mistake u dont get into problems...
Swara:papa u dont worry...
Shomi:shekarji if u too support her she wont change... Ask her to stop all this...
Shekar:shomi she is not a small kid... She knows everything...
Shomi:hope nothing happens to u... K where s deepu???
Deepika:ma i m here...
Shomi:k all come and eat ur breakfast... Anyways my words wont go into ur mind...

After that eveyone went and finished the breakfast... Swara has a habit of going to temple before going to her office...

So she took her scooty left deepu in bus stop and went to the temple...

She reached the temple... Bought a pooja plate and she went inside leaving her slippers out...

The temple priest knows swara well as she is d daily visitor... By seeing her coming priest came near her with smile and extended his hands to get the plate from her...

At the same time a bmw car came and stopped at the entrance of the temple... By seeing the car the priest left swara and went to receive them...

An old man came down from the car... Behind his car another car came and from that an young man came out... They both enter inside the temple followed by the bodyguards...

The temple priest welcomed them and extended his hands to get the pooja plate... At that time swara saw all this and cant accept that...

Swara:priestji i came first... So do my prayer first...
Priest:swara wait for few minutes... After his prayers i will do it for u... He s a big business man...
Swara:whoever may be... But this s temple... In front of god all are equal... So ask him to wait as he came late...

By hearing her talks priest got afraid of that old man... He tried to convince her but she was adamant even all the people there supported her... By seeing this the old man felt insulted and got angry and went out...

The young man smiled seeing her but he too left behind the old man... Swara didn't c his smile...

Then the priest lightly scolded swara and does her prayer... After that she went out and took her scooty as nothing happens and went to her office...

But a bike followed her wherever she goes... In d bike there were two men... Swara didn't notice it...

Swara entered an office and went inside... Both men too entered the office and got all the information of swara from reception by using their status...

The old man is none other than Mr.Kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi... Both mens who followed swara were his people... And the young man is none other than our hero Sanskar Rajvanshi...

Sanskar Rajvanshi age 28 son of Mr. Kamal Narayanan Rajvanshi...

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So now what will happen when kamal Narayanan comes to know about swara????
Will he take revenge for his insult or will leave her after knowing she s shekar's daughter????
Sanskar will b frnd or enemy for swara????
Think it guys...
Now tata...

Awesome update 👏
Swara rocks 😎
I hope sanskar will save swara 😉

Hey dear.. shanmathi... it was awesome... soo Swara is nettri kan thirapinum. Kutram. Kutrame. Type ah... interesting soo Sanskaar is Kamal narayan. son... good... waiting for next part...

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey dear.. shanmathi... it was awesome... soo Swara is nettri kan thirapinum. Kutram. Kutrame. Type ah... interesting soo Sanskaar is Kamal narayan. son... good... waiting for next part...

With love...

Kam...