SWASAN OS - HIS CHOCOLATE

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HIS CHOCOLATE


"Hello Sanskar, beta Swara tumhare sath hai kya?" Sharmishtha asked in a worried tone to Sanskar who was on the other side of receiver half asleep as it was 7 in the morning.


As soon as he heard her, his sleep vanished and getting alert, he sat straight on the bed and answered "What? No aunty"


"Accha? Pata nahi ye ladki kaha chali gayi subah subah. Kal se hi weird behave kar rahi thi wo, mujhe tension ho rahi hai Sanskar" Sharmishtha told Sanskar about reason of her panic.



Sanskar thought for a while about the place where Swara could be.



"Aunty, you don't worry. I know wo abhi kaha hogi. I will go and talk to her. You don't stress yourself okay, I will handle her" Sanskar said assuring Sharmishtha that he would talk to Swara and will take care of her.



"I know beta, thank you, wo ese bhi tumhari hi baat sunti hai" Sharmishtha said closing her eyes in relief as she was well aware of the fact that only Sanskar can handle her daughter in her upset or angry state.



"Aunty, aap tension mat lo. Mai uss se baat kar ke use ghar drop kardunga" Sanskar assured Sharmishtha once again before putting the receiver down.



Sanskar got ready as fast as he could. Picking up his blazer from the bed, he almost ran outside of his home answering to Sujata who asked him where he was going early morning, "Mom, Swara".



Sujata didn't question him anymore knowing very well what importance Swara held in her son's life. Swara was more like a daughter to her than her friend's daughter. She always adored them together.



Starting the bike, he drove in the direction where he knew Swara must be. After driving through crowded roads of Kolkata, he turned his bike towards he stopped his bike near a tree and took off the helmet while getting down the bike.



Setting his messed up hairs due to helmet, he roamed his eyes getting a glimpse of her. She was sitting near the lake which was around 10 minutes away from her home. Since it was in between the trees, very few people knew about that lake, so it used to be very quiet and lonely. Swara used to be there whenever she used to be upset or angry.



He smiled to himself and appreciated himself mentally for knowing her too well to be wrong at anything related to her. Slowly taking steps towards her, taking utmost care not to make any sound, he settled down beside her. She was too lost in herself to acknowledge his presence.



Sanskar was somewhat shocked and surprised to see his chatter box quite today. He soon noticed the tears which were rolling down her whitish cheeks making them to turn reddish. Worry instantly took over him. Placing his hand on her shoulder, he softly whispered, "Chocolate".



Hearing his voice, Swara turned her face towards him. She smiled through her tears knowing no matter what he would always be there for her whenever she would need him and today he proved her right once again.



Sanskar's worried expression was about to change into a relieved one but her next act made his worries double. Seeing him, her rolling tears turned into sobs and sobs turned into hysterical cries. Before he could ask her anything, she wrapped her arms around his neck and started weeping badly.



Sanskar immediately encircled his hands around her protectively taking her in his embrace. He asked caressing her hairs, "What happened Chocolate? Why are you crying?"




She didn't answer anything but with every passing second her sobbing was increasing and so as his tension. Sanskar started rubbing her back to calm her down. For him, calming her down was more important at that point of time. Once she relaxes a bit, he would deal with the reason of her tears.



He could feel his shirt was getting drenched by her tears. He couldn't take her tears anymore. It was piercing him in his heart seeing her vulnerable condition.



He forcefully pulled her out of hug as she wasn't ready to leave him. He wiped her tears and softly called out for her, "Chocolate". She was not in condition to respond him. Her eyes continued shedding tears. Wiping her tears again, Sanskar held her face by keeping his both palms on her cheeks and made her look towards him, "Look at me, Chocolate look at me please".




Though only he knew the extent of anger bubbling inside him seeing her in that condition, but he knew, he had to handle the matter softly and patiently. She was just 16 and too sensitive to witness his anger. He was 20... four years older than her. Right from her birth, when he was just 4, he had been protecting and pampering her. He never ever raised his voice in front of her neither he did let anyone else to do so, nor even to her parents. But today's her condition had awaken the beast in him. Whatever or whoever the reason of her condition, her tears was... now would see the worst in him.



Swara was calming down slowly hearing his soothing voice. He was no less than a magic for her. He cupped her cheek assuring her, "I am here na Chocolate. Please stop crying princess. You do know that I can't see you crying right?" Swara nodded her head in agreement.



"That's like my chocolate. Now no more crying, okay?" He told her looking into her eyes. "And now tell me what's wrong with you? Aunty told me you were behaving weird from yesterday". As soon as he finished his sentence, he received a smack on his shoulder by Swara for calling her behavior weird.



He chuckled a little seeing the cute frown on her face. She was glaring at him angrily. He bowed down in surrender saying, "Okay okay... sorry I mean why were you crying?" making an apologetic face.


"Ragini" she finally uttered something. He was somewhat happy, at least she said something.




Sanskar asked her, "Ragini what Chocolate?"


"Ragini is not talking to me. Laksh was misbehaving with me. He forcefully hugged me in school and when Ragini came, he told her that I was hugging him and I am trying to snatch him from her. [ Ragini and Laksh were in relationship]. Sanskar tum...tumhe lagta hai mai esa kar sakti hu? Mujhe to wo pasand bhi nahi hai. Ragini broke our friendship and she... she said so many things to me. Sh...she said that I am really mean and selfish. An...and she said I can't see the people close to me happy. Le...lekin Sanskar... maine kuch nahi kiya... sachhi..." Swara said swearing to god. Her voice was shaking and words were stammering.




"I... I didn't do anything... Sanskar... you trust me na?" she asked him by holding his hand tightly. Her mind was twirling with insecurities and questions. She just wanted to hear from him that she is not bad.



He was all red in anger as Swara told him about Laksh's disgusting act and Ragini's accusations. Sanskar was well aware of Swara and Ragini's friendship. Ragini was Swara's best friend... of course after him. But he could see how much Ragini's accusations had hurt her. She had started thinking that she is bad, she snatches other's happiness and much more.




"Of course I trust you Chocolate. Ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai? And ye sab bakwas hai. Don't think about all this. You are not bad. Ragini must have said that in anger. I am sure she didn't mean that." He was trying his best to convince her about Ragini's intentions though he was very angry at her for saying all this rubbish to Swara but he knew Ragini was a nice girl, Laksh must had influenced her and more importantly Ragini mattered to Swara very much, and Sanskar could move earth and heaven for happiness.




"And listen, aaj bol diya lekin fir kabhi mat bolna. You... you can never snatch anyone's happiness. You are the sole reason of my happiness. You are the reason of my smile. And I can do anything for your happiness, got it?" he said keeping his hand on hers. She smiled a little hearing his assurance about her goodness.




She hugged him feeling safe and protective in his arms. Though she was too young to understand the growing feelings inside her, but her heart very well knew...





NOBODY CAN TRUST HER THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN SUPPORT HER THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN CONSOLE HER THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN PAMPER HER THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN CARE FOR HER THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN CALM HER DOWN THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN MAKE HER FEEL SAFE THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN FIGHT FOR HER THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN BEAR HER TANTRUMS THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN MAKE HER FEEL SPECIAL THE WAY HE DOES


NOBODY CAN LOVE HER THE WAY HE DOES



Sanskar too was aware of Swara's special feelings towards him. But he would wait... he would wait till his little lady gets mature and sensible enough to completely understand his love. He would never like her innocence to fade by his hurry. But one thing was for sure, she would be his and only his one day.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harshu sweetheart 🤗 🤗

I was going to un res my slot on your previous OS, when this piece caught my eye on Page 1 of the forum. 😳

So romantic, so touching...the love and care between Sanskaar and Swara...the way he protects and shields her from the hurt and harshness of this world; the way she trusts and relies on him. Loved it. 😊

This combines two genres of love stories I adore: the childhood sweethearts type and the friendship growing into love type. 😳 So nice to see the budding of a young love between SwaSan...they know in their hearts that they are very special to each other, but giving themselves the time to grow a bit. 😳

Loved the way Sanskaar pacified and comforted Swara...how he never ever doubted her for a second. How he felt rage at Lakshya, and also consoled Swara that Ragini must have said all those harsh words in anger. He assured Swara that her friend would soon realize the truth and not be angry with her anymore. Anyway, Sunny would ensure to make a bharta out of Lakshya now. 😆😉

Nicely done.

Loads of Love

Viji
Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Viji Dearest 😳
Thank you ...Thank you so much .

Will reply to your beautiful feedback tomorrow...as right now typing from phone and almost off to sleep 😆... Had extremely tiring day.

But you just made my night 😳


LOVE
- Harshada
Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago
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Wow harshada...
Superb os.. 👏 Liked it a lot.
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Dear Harshada,
A very lovely OS - one that combines the innocence of a childhood sweetness and the slow blooming love - Sanskaar is slowly growing aware of his love for Swara and yet is willing to give her time to understand his and her feelings. He is already so understanding of Swara and really does know her quite well, where she would be, how she would be and trusts her fully.

Lakshya - well - he is truly a piece of work - and once Sanskaar works on him - I wonder how many pieces he would be.😆

It is indeed a very nice chocolately tale.

love,
Nyna

PS - I have read your other OS too - will comment on that soon, please bear with me.

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aww that was so cute and beautiful...I just love the concept of childhood sweethearts...its so cute... loved it. 😳
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Hiii... Such a wonderful story ya.. Loved the friendship, trust, love and companionship in your story.. Sanskaar was as usual his lovely self and Swara her cute self.. 😊😊😃..
Loved the way only Sanskaar knew where to find his chocolate and how bad he felt for her and angry on Ragini and Lakshya.. 😡😡.. They deserve the anger and Lakshya deserves a punch.. 😆😆.. But love how he knew that Ragini was important to Swara.. Awww...

But not more than him.. 😉😉😉.. Obviously.. We know.. 😉😉.. Such a cute story of friendship.. and finally she was worried that he would misunderstand her too.. 😭😭😭.. She is such a sweetheart.. And obviously Sanskaar knows how to be there for her like always.. He lovesss her so much and wants to let her enjoy her childishness and her age and ready to wait her her to fall in love.. 😳😳😳.. Who does that ... Too sweet... 👏👏👏..

Loved the lines where Swara knows that only he can do that for her and only he is the one who would always stand by her no matter what. She loves him too.. Beautiful friendship turned into love.. Nothing can be better than that.. 😳😳

Beautiful story dear.. Keep writing..
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Harshu sweetheart 🤗 🤗


Viji Dearest 🤗🤗

I was going to un res my slot on your previous OS, when this piece caught my eye on Page 1 of the forum. 😳

This was super quick and that too without PM😳
You are such a sweetheart ❤️

So romantic, so touching...the love and care between Sanskaar and Swara...the way he protects and shields her from the hurt and harshness of this world; the way she trusts and relies on him. Loved it. 😊

Thank you so very much dear.

Sanskar and his care I am a fan of Sanskar's care for Swara in the serial too.

Glad you liked the he being a rock in front of every storm coming her way.

This combines two genres of love stories I adore: the childhood sweethearts type and the friendship growing into love type. 😳 So nice to see the budding of a young love between SwaSan...they know in their hearts that they are very special to each other, but giving themselves the time to grow a bit. 😳

Yeah I guess we have talked about this. I know childhood sweethearts and love after friendship are your favourite genres😳 and mine too🤗


Loved the way Sanskaar pacified and comforted Swara...how he never ever doubted her for a second. How he felt rage at Lakshya, and also consoled Swara that Ragini must have said all those harsh words in anger. He assured Swara that her friend would soon realize the truth and not be angry with her anymore. Anyway, Sunny would ensure to make a bharta out of Lakshya now. 😆😉

Sanskar and his unbreakable trust over his Swara is amazing, isnt it?

Ohh yes, I wanted to show Ragini being influenced by mean Laksh😆 and since she held extreme importance in Swara's life, Sanskar could do anything to save Swaragini's friendship.

For sure, Sanskar would surely make sure to cut Laksh into pieces for trying to harm his Swara😆😉

Nicely done.

Thank you so much dear Viji🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

Lots and lots of love

- Harshada

Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
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Aww such a Beautiful and Cute OS.
I like Childhood Friends turning into Lovers deeply,Madly and Passionately.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Wow harshada...

Superb os.. 👏Liked it a lot.




Thank you so much dear Kaveetha.
Glad you liked it

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