SWASAN OS - HIS CHOCOLATE

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Harshada,
Hey dear Nyna🤗

It feels awesome to have your feedback over this work.

A very lovely OS - one that combines the innocence of a childhood sweetness and the slow blooming love - Sanskaar is slowly growing aware of his love for Swara and yet is willing to give her time to understand his and her feelings. He is already so understanding of Swara and really does know her quite well, where she would be, how she would be and trusts her fully.

Thank you so very much😳

Glad you enjoyed reading this os.

Innocence of childhood sweetness and the slow gradually deepening love is something I love the most...in reading and writing as well.

Sanskar Maheshwari...the name itself enough to define what unbreakable trust and understanding it

Lakshya - well - he is truly a piece of work - and once Sanskaar works on him - I wonder how many pieces he would be.😆

😆 Well said Nyna...Once Sanskar's eyes catches Laksh...I am sure he would be found in n number of pieces😉😆

It is indeed a very nice chocolately tale.

Thank you so much😳

love,
Nyna

PS - I have read your other OS too - will comment on that soon, please bear with me.

No problem dear...take your time.

You dont know how guilty I am for not being able to comment on sweet deals from long😭

I am struggling in between my college and my health issues badly...but hopefully will do asap

Thanks for taking time to read and to leave your feedback dear.

LOVE
- Harshada

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hii dear harshda

Its really very nice os

Sanky love swara so much .he understand n pamper her so much

She is so upset of lakshya doing n ragini blame

But her sanskar handle his chocolate very well

She also has special feeling for him

But she is too young to understand it.n he will wait.

Whole concept nicely written n list lines too good

Do write more

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Helee
aww that was so cute and beautiful...I just love the concept of childhood sweethearts...its so cute... loved it. 😳

Thank you so much dear Helee.
Glad you liked it

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hi Harshada,😊
This was such a sweet OS.😳 Really loved the bonding between SwaSan.😃 Really, nobody can support, love, care, etc., for Swara as much as Sanskar does.😳 Loved this concept of childhood sweetheart.😉 Such a beautiful update. Loved it.❤️ And thanks to Mukta for the PM.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

awww that was so cute
such a beautiful os
loved it

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
lovely OS

Thanks a lot dear

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: virman_superhit
Hiii... Such a wonderful story ya.. Loved the friendship, trust, love and companionship in your story.. Sanskaar was as usual his lovely self and Swara her cute self.. 😊😊😃..

Hey dear🤗
Thank you so very much dear😳
Glad you liked this tale of friendship, trust, care and love between our Swasan.

Loved the way only Sanskaar knew where to find his chocolate and how bad he felt for her and angry on Ragini and Lakshya.. 😡😡.. They deserve the anger and Lakshya deserves a punch.. 😆😆.. But love how he knew that Ragini was important to Swara.. Awww...

Only Sanskar is the one who knows everything about his chocolate.

Sanskar was well aware of the importance Ragini held in swara's life and he could never let his chocolate to lose her best friend.

But not more than him.. 😉😉😉.. Obviously.. We know.. 😉😉.. Such a cute story of friendship.. and finally she was worried that he would misunderstand her too.. 😭😭😭.. She is such a sweetheart.. And obviously Sanskaar knows how to be there for her like always.. He lovesss her so much and wants to let her enjoy her childishness and her age and ready to wait her her to fall in love.. 😳😳😳.. Who does that ... Too sweet... 👏👏👏..

Thanks a ton dear.
Sanskar can do anything which anyone else can not😆

Loved the lines where Swara knows that only he can do that for her and only he is the one who would always stand by her no matter what. She loves him too.. Beautiful friendship turned into love.. Nothing can be better than that.. 😳😳

That lines were not planned...actually I dont plan anything while writing.

It just comes with the flow.

And moreover friendship turned into love is my favourite genre in terms of reading and writing as well.

Beautiful story dear.. Keep writing..

Thank you so much dear.

I definitely will.

Hey dear,

Replied in blue above.

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: 92Sara
Aww such a Beautiful and Cute OS.
I like Childhood Friends turning into Lovers deeply,Madly and Passionately.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you so much dear sara.

Glad you liked this childhood friends turning into lovers tale.