OS:: HOLDING ON TO HOPE

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Geethu_sweetie

@Geethu_sweetie

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hi Mukta..This is an amazing work..I just loved it..Stay blessed and keep smiling..😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Dear Mukta,

I am late to this but hope you'll forgive me:). What a soulful and deep OS from you once more! Really profound in terms of the way you described love. And of course who can love more powerfully, more wholeheartedly and indeed more heartbreakingly than Sanskaar Maheshwari? His agony felt and lived in those terrible days of his whole reason for life who also loved him as much but has forgotten, came through in spades and rocked me. Sanskaar is such a mesmerising character that seeing things though him is almost always rather humbling and here you really achieve that. I could literally feel his agony and sadness and despite that his immense bravery leap off the screen to emevelop me in his side of this tale. Very nicely done. In addition to the obvious SwaSan equation of pain what this so perfectly brought out was what I so wanted to see in the show but was hugely disappointed with. The role Shomi played in this deserves an ovation! I loved that and thanks for writing this as I genuinely didn't get how the show chose instead to embroil is in the senseless pregnancy drama but totally missed the mother daughter bond we expect. Loved the lines you made shomi repeat as originally spoken by Sanskaar- lovely touch and very apt.

A very moving OS Mukta, thanks for the PM:)

Lots of love

Shru X

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Gangaaaaaaa

@SanaHolic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

its Owsum...
not only dis one all tht u write...
read all ur pms...
finally getting the time to reply...
jst luv the way yyou write and express urself...

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Muktai

Terrific OS...i just adore sansku n sharmishta bond..this son in law n mother in law duo are amazing..she understood his agony..n gave him hope which he needed most..which he was losing fastly..they talked ..n it was awesome..new spark of hope alight in sansku life..he will win swara back...

Enjoyed it baby

Love

Talia

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Hansika.....

@Hansika.....

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Superb and Emotional OS.
Loved the determined Sanskar to win back his LadyLove.
Thanks for the PM

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hey Mukta darling 🤗 🤗

A very intense and emotional OS. The depth of the anguish and sorrow in Sanskaar's heart, mind and soul was very well portrayed. I couldn't help but shed a few tears at the scene when he cried out in agony. That raw, powerful grief was deftly presented.

Loved Shomi in this. The way she considers Sanskaar as her own son, and not just as a son in law. The way she gave him the much needed emotional and moral support, reassured him that everything would be fine, that his pure and intense love for Swara would see them through this temporary misunderstanding and separation caused by Swara's memory loss.

And the end...Sanskaar's determined and resolute monologue...about how Swara would definitely fall in love with him all over again. 👏👏 That's Sanskaar, through and through. So focused and courageous.

Nice work sweetie. Missing you, hope all well at your end.

Lots of Love

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good os..

THANK YOU SO MUCH MYSTIC...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hey Mukta,😊
Such a beautiful OS.👏 Loved it.😃😃 Thanks for the pm.😳
With love,
Aheli.

THANK YOU SO MUCH AHELI...🤗

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

AND YOU ARE ALWAYS WELCOME FOR PM😳

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01
Awesome OS ... ! Mukta
Simple yet beautiful
Do write more !

THANK YOU SO MUCH SOUNDHARYA🤗

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

YEAH WILL TRY TO...

Originally posted by: Anusha62
Loved it muktai 😊

THANK YOU SO MUCH ANUSHA🤗

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

Originally posted by: Amrtina
Nice OS

THANK YOU SO MUCH AMRITNA🤗

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

Originally posted by: sur1911
Awesome os
you know right know I am not watching any serial so don't know what is going on
But your os is very well written
Sanky is the man whose character touch all the sides of emotions like revenge love heart broken , companionship respect fight against evil n odds like warrior many more.
Here you show a heart broken then determined sanky
Loved each n every point written by you .
Shomi sanky talk so nice
Thanks for pm

THANK YOU SO MUCH MINI🤗

YAAR ME TOO NOT WATCHING ANY SERIAL...I TOO LOST TRACK OF THEM...BUT THANKS TO MY SISTER SHE KEEPS ME GIVING TABS...

THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR WARM AND LOVELY WORDS

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
Amazing amazing loved it...

THANK YOU SO MUCH CHANDANA🤗

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome OS
beautifully written sanskar pov
loved it

thnks for pm

THANK YOU SO MUCH ANU🤗

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT😊

YOU ARE WELCOME FOR PMS😊😳

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sakura24
This is tiny, yet beautiful and complete on its own. Glad you shared it with us dear, loved reading it. Sorry for the short comment but I have a busy schedule at the moment...yet had to comment and let you know I adore it. Thanks for the PM too.
Love,
Sakura

Thank you so much Sakura...🤗

Glad to know despite of its length you felt it was complete and you liked reading this.

Don't say sorry yaar...I completely understand how hectic life can be. I m glad that you read and liked this. And thanks for letting me know.😊

Love,

Mukta

Edited by muktai - 9 years ago

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Mukta

***hugs***

I love you for this. The exquisite beauty of pain just rolled out of your pen and aligned itself in beautiful words.

Ever since the start of ml track I have hoped and hoped to see this angle between sharmishta and sanskaar. Thank you a million for this marvellous piece.

I loved her every line here and his extreme need for that very reassurance. How well they both fit the roles of mother and son when it comes to swara. They both love her so deeply. Truly I have never been able to equate sanskar's love for swara to any others' but sharmishta's and durga prasad's. These three people have a strong relation ship with each other. Its really a treat to read them and I'm a fool to have taken time to come here. I cant say enough on how well you put forth the emotions here. Fantabulous.

You rock as always.

Love
N

Edited by bennetlizzy - 9 years ago

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie
Hi Mukta..This is an amazing work..I just loved it..Stay blessed and keep smiling..😊

Thank you so much sweety😊

Glad to know you liked this shot.

Stay blessed and keep smiling

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
nice os

Thank you so much Prachi😊

Glad to know you liked this shot.

Originally posted by: SanaHolic
its Owsum...
not only dis one all tht u write...
read all ur pms...
finally getting the time to reply...
jst luv the way yyou write and express urself...

Welcome back Ganga...🤗

I seriously missed you alot and having your reverts on thread.

Thank you so much 😊

Glad to know you liked this shot.

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Muktai
Terrific OS...i just adore sansku n sharmishta bond..this son in law n mother in law duo are amazing..she understood his agony..n gave him hope which he needed most..which he was losing fastly..they talked ..n it was awesome..new spark of hope alight in sansku life..he will win swara back...

Enjoyed it baby

Love
Talia

Eid Mubarak Talia...

Thank you so much Talia😊

Glad to know you liked this shot.I badly wanted to see Sanskar and Shomi's bond coz I feel there is much more to explore what they shares. Glad that you liked the portrayal. Yeah Sanskar promised himself to make her fall for him once again.