SwaSan OS- The Flatmates

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hello all.. hope u guys r doing well.. im here posting something after ages tht too an OS on SwaSn i wrote this story last year randomly on 2 imaginary characters but now i felt helly shah as swara & varun kapoor as sanskar ll suit well in this story its a very short & sweet story ( at least i felt) hope u guys ll like it too



P.S, im not good in writing, not even good in describing or expressing emotions still i feel like sharing with u all so here it is



This is a story about a girl named Swara (Helly Shah) who is from pune & went to Mumbai for higher studies & about a boy named Sanskar (Varun Kapoor) who is from Delhi but is living mumbai for his career &study, both r strangers to each other, now lets see how the meet & what happen next J


Pune, 8.00 am in the morning

A girl is getting ready to step into a new world, in a new city, a city of dreams, a city where, people from different states come to live their dreams, some get succeed, & some get lost in the crowd of this city called "Mumbai". A lady of middle age came calling that girl's name, Swara Swara.. how long u ll take to hv breakfast? Jaldi kar

Swara: ai ma..

She went down stair & saw her mom , serving the breakfast & looking very upset, she went there & hug her from back,

Swara: mom, meri pyari mom, pls don't b sad, ap agar aise udas rahegi to mai Mumbai kaise ja paongi?

Mom: udas kaise na hoo? Tu pehli bar ghar se itni dur ja rahi hai, waha who bhi akele, fikar to hogi na?

Swara: don't worry mom aur bhi log jate hai na? & u knw Roshni is there frm last 2 years so she ll help me out, aur pune Mumbai se bohat dur thori hai? Jab bhi ap ki yaad ayegi I will come running ,

Hearing this the lady smiled & caress her daughter's hair & said,

Mom: tujse bato mei koi nehi jeet sakta

Swara I know.. both smiled, after having breakfast she went & complete her packing & the start her journey to a totally new & unknown world.

In Mumbai, Roshni is waiting in the station to pick her up , Swara came out of the train, both saw each other & waved then come near & give a tight hug to each other, both bcom so happy to meet each other after soo long,

Roshni: its so good to see u after such long time

Swara: same here, kaisi hai tu?

Roshni: thek hi hoo, tu apni bata?

Swara: main bhi, achha tune mere rehna ka inteza kaha kiya

Roshni(felt guilty, lowering her eyes): who actually Swara.. mujhe apne hostel me extra seat nehi mili

Swara (shocked): what? To pehle kyun nehi bataya??

Roshni: but u don't worry, I hv talked with some brokers they ll find & said ll call, but paise thode jiada lagenge L

Swara: oh god! Pehle info kiya to better hota, kal mera admission hai aur if I don't get a house by tonight what ll I do??

Roshni: don't worry yaar, main hoo na, I ll do something

Swara: tere varose hi to yaha ai hoo L

Both sit into a coffee shop & discussing about the prob, when Roshni's phone rang, she picks it up & talked thanked someone & cut the phone happily,

Swara: what happen yaha tension k mare meri jaan nikal rahi hai & tujhe hasi suj rahi hai *Angry*

Roshni: are ek broker ka phone aya tha, tera kam hogaya, u got a house

Swara: really omg, thts great! Kaha, chal wahi pe bulaya hai,

They went to tht address & a man instruct them, like how much they hv to pay & all, Swara got happy & thanked him & they went to the house, after done with the old arrangements, roshni went to her hostel & Swara also went to hv some sleep.

it was late at night, when she woke up hearing some noise, she got scared & then took a stick & went in the hall, nervously , in the hall, she saw a shadow & hit tht person, the person tried to protest after the first hit & then get hold on her, then he switched on the light & they look at each other & scream together, chor chor chor!!

The guy: chor to tum ho y u r shouting??

Swara: ek to khud mere ghar me ghusgaye adhi raat ko & now calling me chor?

The guy: hello madam, it my house, tum yaha adhi raat ko ghusi ho

Swara: what rubbish!! Its my house aj hi yaha rehne ai hoon

The guy laughed : aaj & im staying frm last 5 months!

Swara: what!! U r lying, its my house , maine 20000 advance + 8000 rent dekhe liya hai

The guy laughed loudeSw: 8000 rent?? 8000 yeh ghar kaun rent pe dega I live here 10000 mein

Swara: jhoot, y should I trust u? u stranger!!

The guy: I also don't trust,

Swara: ok let me call sharmaji (the broker) Sanskar dudh ka dudh aur pani ka pani hojaye ga

Sharmaji came, along with roshni, & they both(the guy & Swara) start their argument

The guy: Achha hua sharmaji ap agaye, ab ap hi bata dijiye, yeh ghar kiska hai, im staying here for last 5 months,

Swara: no u give me house in rent

The guy: no me,

Swara: no me, both togethet, ab ap hi bataiye

Sharmaji: dono ka

Both :dekha & then got shocked & said together

WHAT??

The guy: par ap aisa kaise kar sakte hai? Mai to pehle se yah ape rehta hoo, without letting me knw how could u??

Sharmaji: dekho Sanskar! Agar yeh ghar ,mai ek family ko rent deta mujhe 20-25 thousand milte , but as u r frm my hometown tumhe I give in less but thts not enough for me, aur mujhe paiso ki zaroorat thi so I thought to get another person for rent,

Swara: par mujhe ye bat kyu nehi batai otherwise I wont give u the money, now I wont stay here give my money back

Sharmaji: sorry who to ab wapas nehi ho sakta, I already used tht money I need time to get it.

Swara : u.. about to hit tht man whn roshni stopped,

Roshni: jst relax yaar, hum kuch nehi kar sakte , ab to paise bhi nehi to get another place & mere hostel mein bhi place nehi, so plz pagal pan mat kar we hv no option

Swara looked at Sanskar in a weird way, he also not interested to share his rented flat with her,

Swara: but I cant stay with that stranger! Pata nehi kaisa hoga

Sanskar: ap se to behtar hi hoon madam jo bina inquiry kiya kisi k ghar mei bhi rehne k liye agai

Swara: U.. samajh te kiya ho apnea p ko free main nehi ai hoon, I gave money okey?? Mere sath dhoka hua hai & its his good luck im not going to police bcos yeh mere Friend k pehchan wale hai, but what he did was the worst, give a disgusted look to sharmaji , he felt guilty

Sharmaji: I knw I did wrong but mujhe urgent paise chahiye the & im telling u by next month I ll get ur money back & tab tak ap yehi adjust karlo,

Swara looked at roshni, she also said the same, as in mumbai its very difficult to get good place in cheap rate, then she looked at Sanskar he gave a like he might try to adjust & Swara said

SwarSSa: ok, but mere kuch shart hai, he wont come on my way & should stay away frm me & my room

SanskaSw: huh? I cant believe this mere ghar pe ake u r binding me with restrictions?? & mujhe bhi koi shok nehi tumhare paas ane ka, I agreed bcos sharmaji mere hometown k hai & if mere thoda adjust ment se inka vala ho I ll do, but don't think im interested in u & ur stuff

SwarSSa: Same here im also not

So it was decided that Swara & Sanskar ll b sharing this flat till Swara don't get the money back also a new place to live...

Part2

Though she agreed to stay at tht place, she was also has many questions, like what ll happened whn her mom dad will get to knw, how they ll react? She doesn't find anything wrong on tht, but the society? Where they live, cant take such things easily but she cant help it as in Mumbai, getting a new place isn't that easy, moreover she doesn't hv enough money get a new place.

On the other hand, Sanskar was thinking how smooth his life was going & now ths thunder named Swara came, he has no prob as both hv their own place but still sharing a flat with a girl? Don't knw how its gonna be

Next morning, both wr on the kitchen,Sanskar was preparing bread toast for him & Swara made alo ka paratha, the aroma of those paratha was amazing, that make Sanskar feel "kash I could hv those" he really miss his ghar ka khana & in Mumbai he doesn't get enough time to learn & make so he was expecting Swara to offer him & Swara also could sense he was willing to hv so she asked,

SwarSSa: u want to hv it?

Sanskar(in mind, I know she would ask): if u don't mind, y not

SwarSSa: then khud banalo , saying this she took a bite of tht paratha & put one more on the stove, but by this time her phone rang & she went

Sanskar was super upset as the way she offered & then refused, he thought he wont let her eat peacefully so he, increase the stove temperature which caused the paratha to get burnt, whn Swara came she was shocked & saying like, " Yeh kaise hua"

Sanskar was hving a naughty smile on his face & Swara knew it was him only,

SanskaSw: hmmm, parathe to jaal gaye, now wht u ll have?? Huh? Want to hv my toast,

Swara was going to take it whn he put it on his mouth & said

SanskaSw: make by urself & wink,

Swara was like u r impossible

At Swara's collage, Swara & roshni wr hving lunch,

SwarSSa: tht guy is impossible!! samajhta hai kiya apne ap ko?? Mere parathe jala diye dont knw who ll I manage?

Roshni: tu use thoda de deti to aisa nehi hota.

SwarSSa: mai kyu du? Kaunsa mere pehchan wala hai??

Roshni: jan pehchan to karni paregi after all u guys hv to stay there for a month at least, dekh jab tak paise nehi milte aur ghar u hv to adjust, lar jhhagar k rehne ka koi matlab hi nehi banta

SwarSSa: mil jul k rehne ki bhi koi zaroorat mujhe mehsoos nehi hoti , who jaye apne raste mai jao apne,

Roshni: to phir itne pange kyu leti rehti hai use?

SwarSSa: kiya karu uska chehra samne ate hi, I got mad

Roshni: but I don't think he is a bad guy

SwarSSa: aha bada pyar ara hai uspe, baat kiya hai

Roshni: nothing yaar, u knw I hv a bf, im saying generally Mumbai jaise seher mein akele ghar mei he cn do anything but usne aisi waisi koi harkat nehi ki thts what me feel he is a decent guy,

SwarSSa: rehne de im staying so I know it better, ok bye hv to go for my next class.

Roshni: ok

At home, Swara entered the flat & was mad to see, Sanskar's few cloths were on the floor, they looked so dirty, actually he was cleaning his room, so throwing out those cloths & other stuff which he needs to give in laundry, Swara was walking through frm them, whn something fall on her feet, she gave a disgusting look as it was his "Chaddi (underwear [:">])" she went to his room;s door & start to shout,

SwarSSa: what is thi??

SanskaSw: what is what??

Then she throw that chaddi on his face,

Sw: this? Don't u have any manners? Aise koi apne personal chize idhar udhar rakhta hai kiya?

SA(was embarrassed , still to cover up he said) : mera ghar , meri marzi, jaha chahe waha rakhu, tumhe matlab?

SW: yeh TUMHARA ghar tha ab mera bhi ghar hai, so tum ab aise kahi bhi kuch bhi nehi rakhsakhte

SA: achha?? (leaning toward her ) But for ur kind information, is ghar pe mera haq ziada hai as Im living frm last few months & also give more rent than u, he didn't realize but he came very close to her, which make her nervous & she said,

SW: whatever but u have to b more cautious about ur THINGS, kyunki ab ek ladki bhi rehti hai tumhare yaha so, its better for u, saying this she went to her room & closed the door

Few days later, Swara fall asleep while studying in the hall, Sanskar came from his office & saw her sleeping like an angel, a smile crept on his lips, he said to himself., Shant hoti hai to utni buri bhi nehi lagti, some hair locks where troubling her & he was going to remove whn she opened her eyes both got shocked, Sanskar felt shy & took his hands on back, Swara sit properly & ask,

SW: Tum?/ what u wr trying to do?

SSA: nothing, u wr sleeping mai to bas uthane aya tha

SW: oh, kuch kam tha?

SSA: yeah, ek request thi,aj mere kuch friends ll come over to complete a group assignment , they don't knw that u r staying here & don't knw how they ll react to see, pata nehi kiya soche, so agar tum aj raat ko apne kamre me hi raho, bahar na nklo tht ll b a big favor

SW: and why should I listen to u?

SSA: bcos im requesting for our betterment, hum yaha ek sath kisi majburi k wajah se reh rahe hai but how many of the outsider ll understand it? Hope tum samajh rahi ho & waise bhi thori der mei u ll sleep & then by the morning all ll live so don't think it ll b a prob.

SW: ok, done. & she went to her room

Sanskar's friends came & went to his room & working on their assignment, it was like 1.30 am Swara got awake, she was feeling thirsty, she look at the water container & found it to b empty , she recalled Sanskar's word & thought not to go outside to get water, she again tried to sleep but it wasn't able to so she decide to go to the kitchen to get water, but b4 tht she checked the hall, no one is there so she slowly went out to get water, by this time one of Sanskar's friend came out to hv something frm the kitchen & his eyes fall on Swara & he hold her hand tightly & called others,

Frnd: hey guys come & check what I found

All came out Sanskar was shocked to see his friend holding , Swara's hand,

Friend: yar Sanskar u didn't told us, u have something to entertained us?

SSA: jst stop rubbish & let her go..

Frnd: ooo, tujhe bura laga? Teri personal property hai? Akele akele maza lega hume nehi dega, Swara;s eyes got teary hearing all this

SSA: mind your language, or else mai tera moh tor dunga, he came forward & remove his grip frm Swara, now he was standing infrnt of her, covering her

Another guy said: teri itni jal kyu rahi hai? Sach hi to keh raha hai, itni rat ko ek bachelor k ghar mei kaun ache ghar ki ladki ayegi

SSA: jo bat jante nehi use kehna nehi chahiye, she is also a staying her & that with full rent & I respect her a lot but shayad tum log yeh bat nehi samjhoge, now get lost

Friends: Achha bachu, ladki dekha to dosto ko vul gaye, thek hai dekh lenge tujhe

SSA: haan dekhlena

All left & he locked the door he was about to console Swara but she run crying went to her room, Sanskar was feeling guilty still went & knocked at her door, she was crying sitting on her bed, whn she saw him, she wipe her tears & said com him, he sit infront of her & said

SSA: im so so sorry, I didn't knew yeh sab hojayega, mujhe pata tha k mere yeh dost thore narrow mind hai, but who apne sare limits cross kar jayege nehi socha tha , all is my fault, but u don't worry aj k bad I ll never let thm come here

SW: no need of that, mai kal hi yaha se ja rahi hoon aur isme tumhari koi galti nehi hai, tumne to mujhe warn kiya tha it was my fault

At first he was feeling hesitation to hold her hand later he hold & said,

SSA: where u ll go & y ? u hv the right to stay as u r paying aur logo ka kiya hai they ll keep saying, but tum aur mai to jante hai na k we give each other space & never did anything wrong? Then y u ll leave? If u ll leave they ll think they are right, agar kuch galat kiya hi nehi to kis bat ki guilt,

Swara was speechless by this gesture of Sanskar, she never thought the guy with whom she fight all the time & give gali, uska mind itna broad hai, and the respect, protection & care he give her, it was something she get frm her family, tears roll down from her eyes, he hold tht tears & said,

SSA: they r very precious, don't waste them like this, now wipe all ur tears, y fear whn im here & both start to laugh.

Start of a new day with a new Swara, for the first time she prepared breakfast for Sanskar as well, Sanskar was surprised & happy,

SSA: achanak yeh meherbani kaise, oh I know,kal rat k liye mujhe thanks kehne k liye right??

Swara jst smiled,

SA: waise iski koi zarorat nehi thi the pleasure was all mine,

Swara was about to taking the plate away when he hold it & said,

SSA: ab pyar se banaya hoga to waste kyu kare kha hi lete hai, both laughed & had their breakfast.

At night also they had dinner together & also talk about their like/ dis like & all, both got surprised to know there is so much common in them, but they never get to know about it as they never talked b4 like this, with in few days they become best of friends, they always help out each other & also pull leg whn its required.. there was a time with Swara need to complete a project but she got stuck somewhere, & Sanskar was there to help, they did the project work together & fall asleep in the hall, in the morning, when she opened her eyes, she found her head was resting on his shoulder & he was sleepling leaning his back on sofa's corner, she slowly woke up but couldn't get out as her hair got such beneath his head, she tried hard to get them out without disturbing his sleep but failed, he got awake, both had an eye lock,there was something different about that moment, both felt something new & strange, Swara felt shy & excused herself & left a confused Sanskar behind her.

At night, Swara was very happy as bcos of Sanskar's help in the proj she scored high, she was super happy & decided to give a small treat to him, after dinner, they sit & Swara said

SwarSSa: Sanskar??

SSA: hmm

SW: r u free on ths Sunday evening??

SSA: yeah, but y??

SW: bcos I want to take u out..

A(surprised): on a date, he winked & which make her blush

SW: no yaar, bcos of ur help I scored high in my project work

SSA: oh wow!! Thts great & yeh tum mujhe ab bata rahe ho? Congrats

SW: sirf congo se kam nehi chalega, I want to give u a treat so, Sunday ko khud ko free rakhna

SSA: as u say maam

On Sunday evening both went to juhu beach, had gol gappe & panipuri, chat & then walk on the beach & then sit for a while

SSA: thanks, this is the best hang out I did in Mumbai waise to Mumbai aye, almost 2 months hogaye but never thought to b here, its so peaceful & beautiful

SW: kyun na ho??akhir choice kis ki hai,

SSA: yeah yeah maam u r too good

SW: who to mai hoon

SSA: now lets leave otherwish jiada andekha hogaya to this place might get risky,

: yeah lets leave

He stand first & then forwarded his and toward her, she looked into his eyes & hold tht hand tight, both smile & went back to their home

Next day

It was getting late, Sanskar didn't come home yet, Swara got so worried he never did tht much late b4 don't knw what happen to him today, whats wrong, she trying to call but the num is switched off which increased her worries, finaly the bell rang & she went to open it, & yeah it was him, it seems she get back her life & didn't think of anything & jst hugged him tight ,he got surprised at first then later hugged her back & asked what happen)

SW: kaha the tum itne der?pata hai how scared I was! U never did so late

SSA: oh im sorry actually ek urgent meeting bula li thi boss ne so got late,

SW: ek phone to kar diya hota, I was trying hard to call but ur num was unreachable

SSA: im so so sorry yaar, phone ki battery bhi khatam hogai & I didn't know tum itna pareshan hojaogi or else ll inform, actually adat nehi hai na , didn't thought yaha Mumbai mei ghar pe koi hoga who ll b waiting for ME, they look into each other eyes, & he said, im going to get fresh.

SW: ok, later she asked this ques to herself y she bcom so restless & worried for him, she never did something like this & what she feel for him is something she never felt for anyone else, by this time Sanskar came in the hall & said lets hv dinner, both sit to hv whn Swara's friend Roshini called

Ro: hy Swara kaisi hai??

SW: im good, tu bata

Ro: im also fine, achha sun I hv a gr8 news for u,

R(excited ): what

Ro: I got a new house for u

SW: hearing this her smile got vanished

Ro: rent bhi is wale se kam hi hai,

SW: acha but sharmaji k paise (searching excuses to stay hre)

Ro: unse bhi baat hogai hai, asked to collect tomorrow morning frm his office , as u stayed here for a month 1 mahine ta kiraya kat k jitna hoga he ll return

R(sad): hmm ok bye, see u tomorrow,

While talking to Roshni, Sanskar was continuously looking at her expression, as she cut the phone, he sai

SSA:what she was saying? U look very upset, is everything ok?

Sw(lowering her head, playing with the spoon, as don't want to met her eyes with him,he ll noticed her moist eyes L) she found a new place for me & sharmaji also returning the money so I hv to leave tomorrow

Now this was something which make him sadder than her, he doesn't know what to say how to react, he jst excused himself & went to his room, Swara didn't get what happen to him, at night both in their rooms,

Swara packing her stuffs & remembering the moment spend with Sanskar, she said to herself, itne kam waqt me who itne karib agaya that I don't know how I ll survive without him,

Sanskar in his room,she will leave tomorrow! why I cant take it easily ? mjhe to pata tha tht she wont stay for long then uske jane ki baat sunke y I cant accept it, kyu aisa lag raha hai k my life is going.. im dying y?? whole night both thinking about each other.

In the morning, Swara decided to leave without letting him knw as she doesn't hv the courage to say good bye by facing him, she was about to leave whn she felt someone is holding her hand, she looked surprisingly to found Sanskar standing there

SSA: u r leaving? Mujhe bina bataye

SW(couldn't meet her eyes, her voice bcom heavy as she was tying to hide her tears): who roshni ka urgent call aya so thought to leave & I thought u wr sleeping so I shouldn't disturb

SSA: is it only the reason or u r hiding something frm me?

He make her face him & look into his eyes,

SSA: tell me the truth can u live with out me? Ans me? Tum shayad reh sakti to but I cant, hearing this Swara got surprised & make her eyes big

SSA: yeah this is the fact! Tumhare jane ki baat sunke I realize that tum mere liye kiya ho, he went into his knees, closed his eyes , holding her hand &said

SSA: bohat himmat jutake aye ho let me say, agr aj nehi kaha to kabhi nehi keh paonga, I LOVE YOU SWARA, I really do, tumse milne se pehle my life was useless, tumhe pake I got a family in Mumbai, & I really don't want to lose you, pls don't go, tumhe jitna time lena hai lo, mom dad ko batana hai batao, I hv no prob I will b waiting for u always but pls mujhe chhor k mat jao.

Tear rolls down from her cheeks, she also went to her knees & hugged him tight & said I LOVE YOU SANSKAR, agar tum mujhe na rokte tab bhi mai nehi ja pati, bcos mai jana hi nehi chahti thi, par yaha ruk ne ki koi bahana nehi mil raha tha but tumne yeh bat keh k meri sari hesitation dor kar di, ll never leave u.. want to spend my entire life with you , both stand on their feet, look into each other eyes, Sanskar was about to kiss her, whn she blushed & seeing her blush he smiled & placed a soft kiss on her forehead , again both look into each other eyes & then give a tight hug ...

Pyar tune kiya kiya khwab dil ko naya de diya... <3 <3 <3 in love with the song & the music

End of my story J


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Liana its so gud to see u back...that too with mindblowing one shot...seriously loved it
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Liana its so gud to see u back...that too with mindblowing one shot...seriously loved it
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thank u so much for remembering me dr 😳 & eally happy to knw tht u enjoyed reading this os.. was thinking to post it for long but couldnt get time earlier 😊
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It was a cute os.enjoyed reading it


thanks for reding & glad to knw tht u liked it 😃 means a lot
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wonderful OS...really loved it⭐️


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