SwaSan Drabble OS: When Hearts Speak and Psyches Converse.

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Only you can make a simple enough hug seem so much more

And Sanskar!! I swear I almost died imagining that head tilt and the boyish smile. Uff 🤪

I love how he reads her so well. And Swara, she fell right where he wanted her. 😆

Lovely piece viji🤗

Edited by ...Penknife... - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

My Dearest Shru, Nandini 🤗 🤗

Thanks for the lovely comments...so touched that you did so even before I sent out pm's. And they gave me such a high. Wondering how I'll go to bed now, feeling so thrilled. 😊

And thanks Akku, Lucky, Piya, Nupur, Konpal, Nynu, Saku and Sujay for the laser fast res's. When I'd just marked the topic slot and hadn't even posted the OS yet. 😊

I'll reply to your comments tomorrow dears.

Love you all

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Do I res or do I not - might as well do, hopefully, I unres a least one of those on your other tale before you update this one.

Part unres,

And that my dear Viji, is an amazingly beautiful tale, of the battle of heart and mind, a battle of wits and detective skills (not the Swara has much, though she loves to think she does) and a victory for the love and soulmates that they are.

Will unres for a detailed comment (I will, just cannot promise when) but now I am off to read it again.

love,

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Thanks Nynu 🤗

Will reply in detail tomorrow.

Love

Viji

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wow!
Very beautiful & rmntc.
Lv ths mischevious flirty sanskar &swasan convo.
An awsm drabble.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Guys...will be sending out pm's shortly. 🤗 🤗 Thanks for all the lovely comments and likes already in, and please bear with me for slight delays in replying individually.

I would need to do a couple of pending Un Res's on my pals' threads, and also finishing the last of my individual replies on Chapter 4 of my ongoing SwaSan 5S " The Postern of Fate ". Will be taking up my individual reverts on this thread after that. Trust you would understand. 🤗 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Hey Viji... Thanks for the PM
This one was short but definitely an excellent piece of writing. It's good you have adapted the Olv hug scene this way. Your story was far logical and Lovable... Seriously whenever Swara screams the khooni jaap on the show it's unbearable to watch, that nobody cares to clarify her with the true events that unfolded that fateful day...

Loved that Sanskar could realise Swara's real feelings which makes him laugh. It's obvious for any hubby to feel elated and laugh at his wife for getting attracted to him...😆 The conversation that followed after that was too good. It makes me turn critical on the show makers way of story telling! Can't they offer something logical like this for a change?
Impressive job... Keep it up👍🏼

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treta

@tr_eta

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

amazing...,all the emotions are beautifully portrayed

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Viji 🤗

I must appreciate everyone who can weave some sense into anything that is being shown currently😛 So yes 👏 for that😆

Waise this is definitely not a mini shot😆 It is a complete OS.

Loved how you described the fury of nature. I love thunderstorms & have never quite understood why the heroine is always hugging the heroes at such times rather than enjoying nature's light & sound display...but then how do we get our dose of romance in our shows otherwise😆

Swara is one loony nut. One hand she continues with her khooni jaap & then in the next moment is hugging him. What is the poor guy supposed to think? Of course he thinks its his imagination😆 And then to top it all she accuses him of doing what he was doing?😲🤣 What is the poor guy supposed to do Swara? Tum hi bata do! Kuch kare toh bhi mushkil, kuch na kare toh bhi mushkil 🤣 Sanskaar is naturally too smart to let go of such a god sent opportunity & teases her mercilessly, trying to get her to relax her guard a bit so that he can knock some sense into the empty space between her ears...and...mission accomplished

Thank You for this Viji. I am not sure any of this will happen in the show so THANK YOU 🤗

Edit: I have read Chapter 5 of your SS Viji. I will reply there in a day or two because atm I am sulking thanks to the show & hence wont be able to do justice to that piece of beauty you have written😳

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago