SwaSan Drabble OS: When Hearts Speak and Psyches Converse.

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more than u.. it's me happy to unres in just a day... yayyy 😆
hopefully I will be unreserving other reserves soon...
okay let's start with the start...
I was sure u will attempt something on rain nd bonfire... nd m so glad u did it viji... the excitement for notched up a bit more up.. thanks to you...
I loved the way u described the human psychology regarding fear
..more so.. thunderstorms nd all... I personally m not afraid of them.. I love them... of course not surprised ones.. 😆
moving ahead ...sanskar thanking Almighty that fear of thunderstorm is still there in swara... so sanskar like 😆
then the confrontation part... very mildly nd as if tired of all the charade... he asked her how can she think like that without actually thinking... the very basic characteristic of swara is that she forgives ...forgives very easily... she sees through the matter nd then passes judgement...
like sanskar said... in this case she is victim lawyer nd judge... all in one... rightly so, why not to give sanskar a chance to prove himself??
then the surprised hug... it was BEAUTIFULLY explained...
marvellous picturisation...
I was confused whether m hugging swara or m hugging sanskar...
swara felt safe nd comfortable... that's soul mate bond... amazingly described..
aah the intelligent sanskar is back... he read her again... easily... attack is the best way to defend... .
nd I loved how swara didn't fight him on that... sensible swara gave me peek at that...
again sanskar asked her to bring her inner detective out... ravishing Mrs. marple... I loved how u kept the conversation intense yet light at the same time...
surely sanskar also deserves a second chance too... leave sanskar... it's swara herself who deserves it...
believe whatever unjust she is doing or could hv had done to sanskar... the consequences are same if not more for her...
good that u kept it open ended...
really wonderful drabble viji... totally in love with this...
keep writing... u are gifted [>:D <]

Do I res or do I not - might as well do, hopefully, I unres a least one of those on your other tale before you update this one.

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That was an absolutely heartbreakingly beautiful update..
When I watched the olvs and pics..I knew it would be relieving to watch then finally coming together..but your version has took it an altogether different level..I want the CVS to show this kind of intensity and chemistry between them..

The beginning was beautiful..Sanskar tolerance finally giving up and bringing her forcefully to that hut to make him listen to her..I m not at all finding it even a little bit wrong that he kidnapped Swara..coz they needed this very much..a lace where there will be only two of them and can finally talk..Swara will be ablt to read the agony and love for her in his eyes..which I m assured she is not able to read at the moment..The thunderstorms always frighten everyone at some place or the other..but using it so expertly..only you could have done some thing so amazing..Swara didn't even realized when she came up in his arms and hugged him as if it is the only safest place in the universe..she was at last in her home..not only Sanskar but also thank the nature and God for making the thunderstorms..

Sanskar's outlet of his emotion was awesome..the intensity of his pain could be very well heard when he asked Swara how could she even think that he can ever hurt her..even in his dreams..I still remember the way he hold on to the pendent as he is holding his very life..that if he left it even in his unconscious state..his Swara will drift away from him..tearing leaking from the corners if his eyes in that horrible state was so very painful..still he held in to her every second..when everyone gave up..and she still thinks he can harm her..

That retort of Swara was heartbreaking..how even Sanskar takes it all..any normal man will be ripped away piece by piece..by these silent blows..Obviously he would have thought that he has conjured Swara in his arms..whatever Swara say..she knows deep inside he is her anchor..her heart is just not attracted to him..it adores him..beats for him..when they were in each other arms..it was mesmerizing.. They belong to each other and that smile of his could have lighted away the whole world..why would she not fit in his arms..they have been made just for her..that was beautifully written..

Teasing and mischievous Sanskar makes her heart beat more..that was so funny when she cutely says that's not true when her hearts says otherwise..she did felt safe..Seriously why is she not using the Sherlock caps of hers..then it wouldn't have been so difficult for Sanskar..she would have find out everything by herself..and also realized why he could see right through her..he is the mirror of her would how he cannot..not just Swara's but I think every girl's heart race like a jet..when he smiles like that..gosh his voice is so sensual and intense..have the ability to raise goosebumps..anyways his theory was every correct..only she can find the truth..and for that she ought to give them a chance..trust him even a little bit would cast away the dark shadows to bring light in their lives like the born fire..

The romance at the climax was so amazing..she checking him out..and as always he caught her..surely nothing ever misses his eyes..very rightly said she has every right to check him out..she has the haq..and then the teasing of his by giving his jacket..Sanskar is not only cute but also very naughty..but when she wraps the jacket around her..it is very well clear she has started accepting him..his warmth have the power to heal her..bring her real self back..finally she read his eyes which contained nothing but love for her and that to deep..her mind also finally came to know that she would regret if she let him go..and that was so true because it will destroy not only him but her as well..as said by you they are not entwined just by their heart but their souls..

Another amazing piece if writing by you..you have brought the scene alive..I don't know about the show but you successfully won our hearts as this was just beautiful..

Piya