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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

Oh and you used Revenge quotes... Emily is bae


And I think using them was a mistake - the story would be nothing like Revenge, I used them because they suited the intent of the plot summary.

I would have to give a disclaimer to this effect now😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Dear Khushi,

Yes, this is the one - I had a lot of time, I started this in April / May, so each time I ran into a block, I would read and ended with a huge pile of research😳

I hope you will like it.

Regarding the plot / concept - there are two - one is in the backdrop - a tiny thread running through the main story - that is of revenge for a crime committed almost two decades ago and which casts its shadows on the present- which is the SwaRagini leads and their siblings. The main story is of course about the FL who has ML - Chapter 1 will give the incidents from the start to near present, and the story with names / introduction would start from Chapter 2.
The mystery would never be a clear cut theme, but it would be like an undercurrent, sometimes sweeping the leads along and sometimes quietly flowing.

Do let me know if I have managed to confuse you more.😉😉

Take care of your health and work.

love,
Nyna


Nynu 🤗

I just read it again ..
I am sure I will fall in love with this story very hard ..

I loved the concept .. I am no more confused .. 😆
I can't wait ..

I am doing fine now just the seasonal sickness .. thanks for concern sweetheart ..
And work don't ask 🤢 .. I have the worst supervisor ever , we call her Dolores Umbridge ( i.e the character from Harry Potter )
Thank God I am off today ..

Love
Khushi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Can I res?
I have a exam to rush for, will be back here once I get back to home.

PS: I loved the title. It gave me a very beautiful feeling when I read 'forgotten memories'
Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: StarySKY


Nynu 🤗

I just read it again ..
I am sure I will fall in love with this story very hard ..

I loved the concept .. I am no more confused .. 😆
I can't wait ..

I am doing fine now just the seasonal sickness .. thanks for concern sweetheart ..
And work don't ask 🤢 .. I have the worst supervisor ever , we call her Dolores Umbridge ( i.e the character from Harry Potter )
Thank God I am off today ..

Love
Khushi


Dear Khushi,

I am so glad for the vote of confidence and even happier to note that your are fine now. Regarding work and bosses - we do end up with the worst ever. That reminds me, someday I would have to find out what my team thinks of me😕😕. Hope you enjoyed your day off.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Can I res?

I have a exam to rush for, will be back here once I get back to home.

PS: I loved the title. It gave me a very beautiful feeling when I read 'forgotten memories'


Dear Harshada,

Go ahead and res - no issues😊 Hope your exam went well.

The title is lovely, right? (an oxymoron, which is what attracted me to it) And that is why I opened this thread way back in June😳😳

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Yes it is he indeed, I do not know how famous he is, but that pic appealed so I used it.

Now that vote of confidence somehow makes me nervous.😳

That blog does not gives tips how to write crime scenes, it is more like collation of articles about forensics, postmortem, causes of death etc. But if you need medical help for a scene, you can write to him and he would reply. He did, for me.



I can safely say he's a heartthrob in here though I see zero appeal😆 also a vocal supporter of mamta didi and MLA as well😆 Ah don't be nervous, we the readers should be as to what kind of shock you will give. I read amaranthine last night too, ripped my heart why don't you😡😆 now that's a opposite attracts pair...we have seen science literature or beliver skeptic (Mulder Sculpt haye) but maths and lit 👏 makes so much sense, different yet so in character.


He replied?! Wow that's great! After I res here I stalked his blog and some others😆😆 I can't resist researching. Very interesting points on GSW poisons time of death and stuff. I love crime shows and forensic aspects so it was really interesting. And also what's better than reading serial killer at 3am eh😆



Originally posted by: Nynaeve


And I think using them was a mistake - the story would be nothing like Revenge, I used them because they suited the intent of the plot summary.

I would have to give a disclaimer to this effect now😆



The quotes gave an essence. Doesn't matter if its nothing like Revenge. Not many here follow USA shows so you are safe. Just update now I am dying to read first chapter.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nyna dearest...

Im at loss of adjectives to describe how much i loved your initial synopsis ...locations detailing..overall first look...incredible...so much research... im sooo lucky that i met u guys...my good luck..that by chance i came across this forum...never been active..just somehow watched swaragini...got madly in love with swasan..n till nowmy obsession is growing..now active only in swaragini forum...not a day pass withoutmy visit here..i just love u guys..your dedication...hardwork...devotion is commendable..kudos...clappsss...whistle for u all writers...

It is such profuse appreciation that keeps us writers going on. As I mentioned in the preface to Amaranthine, however much we would like to repeat to ourselves that we write because we love writing, it is you readers who make us writers. 😳😳

Story seems captivating and intriguing...with hint if suspense ..thriller...OMG...kept me on edge of seat... it has revenge theme..wow...i just love revenge based stories...for this fact i was attracted to swaragini show..now...im very excited for this new journey...too

It will be based on a revenge motive but that would not be the main theme, I am unable to expand without giving away the even little bit of suspense, so keep reading.

Have u watched revenge tv series?? I loved it..i had little crush on Aiden mattis ( barry sloanes)in that..hehe...

I did not watch, I saw the first few episodes but somehow could never "connect" with Emily, so gave up. I used the quotes for they fitted very well with the theme for the plot - loss/betrayal, destiny and trust.

N yaaa...thank u soo much for your acknowledgement..love..kisses n hugs for that...muahhh

You deserve it, your pms that you were looking forward to it really helped me plod on.😳😳
Love
Talia


Dear Talia,

Replied in blue above,

Love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: NitaReid

I have to find another word now ... So this is your work so i will steal your words for the time being..I will be back Nyna dear



Unres😃


Hi Nyna

Well i am not gonna say anything except i want to read all the 21 chapter like right now..Can i get it soon..I dont think i can wait patiently or be satisifed with just one update per week😆.. I am being greedty and demanding but i cant help it ..

Well, I won't be able to do that, simple reason - some chapters (two of them) have less than 1000 words drafted😉. So I cannot even promise to be regular🤢

Dont ask me for an update in return i will just go like this 😭 ...But i would still demand you to update this one soon.. Because i so want to read it like now.. I am so excited for this one Nyna dear.. Cant wait... You really did just tease me with the first look ,it was so captivating...You better post it soon.. I will be waiting

I will not ask, I think I am going to demand and then throw a tantrum for an update. I will post the prologue and chapter 1 quickly.


Lots of love

Nita


Dear Nita,

Replied in blue above.

Regards,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: .Avengers.


I can safely say he's a heartthrob in here though I see zero appeal😆 also a vocal supporter of mamta didi and MLA as well😆 Ah don't be nervous, we the readers should be as to what kind of shock you will give. I read amaranthine last night too, ripped my heart why don't you😡😆 now that's a opposite attracts pair...we have seen science literature or beliver skeptic (Mulder Sculpt haye) but maths and lit 👏 makes so much sense, different yet so in character.


He replied?! Wow that's great! After I res here I stalked his blog and some others😆😆 I can't resist researching. Very interesting points on GSW poisons time of death and stuff. I love crime shows and forensic aspects so it was really interesting. And also what's better than reading serial killer at 3am eh😆

The quotes gave an essence. Doesn't matter if its nothing like Revenge. Not many here follow USA shows so you are safe. Just update now I am dying to read first chapter.


Well, now that you said that about his political leanings, I am😡😡. But then I shall let you in the secret😉, I had described a character as a "person who vaguely reminds Sanskaar of an English Bulldog" and though Dev does not have an undershot jaw he somehow seemed to fit the detailed description I gave, which is why I said the pic had appeal.😆😆 And considering his political views, he does seem to have the unwanted canine qualities too.🤣

Amaranthine - Maths and Literature - I love that combination, my favourite subjects, though I did find some aspect of Mathematics (trignometry especially) boring and disgusting. Literature, I loved.

Will update soon - max by weekend.

Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear all,
Finally updated the prologue, first post on page 2. Hope you like it and praying I do not ruin your Sunday so do let me know. I shall try updating Chapter 1 quickly, it is almost done, I just have to collate the footnotes and references which are scattered all over the place (folders in my laptop).

Will send pms in a while.

love,
Nyna

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