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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Nimmi dear🤗

Need to say, that you are awesome and some more👏👏👏. It seriously needed great control to stop yourself from not appreciating your work the moment you read it.

NAKUL caught our insta liking too. He is such a caring personality and the way he care for sanskar is like he is his wife. After swara he has taken that duty happily. The bond SANSKAR and NAKUL share is so sweet.

THE DARK KNIGHT is something i wished to see in sanskar in serial and after reading your work I feel so happy that you did justice to the character. The way he is around swara and the way he tackle her is 👏👏. Not telling the beautiful yet painful phase of their journey just to protect HIS PRINCESS is such a caring gesture.

SWARA that think from the heart and then take decision, I am loving this character. I missed this phase of her personality in the serial but thanks to you and the way you describe her is 👏👏.

The last conversation between SWASAN was awesome.The way he tease her and her reaction to his words🤣🤣. SHE indeed is a wildcat. THE SITUATION and THE LOCATION and THE TOPIC they were discussing🤣🤣.

Love to read the further proceedings. Eagerly waiting for your next update.

LOTS OF LOVE
KIARA

Edited by Kiara.25 - 9 years ago

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treta

@tr_eta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

All the updates were amazing as usual.,haye i love d knight sanskaar & this swara is awesome as well & loved the moments between swasan how swara would get some of the memory back living d same scenes again and sahil well I am sure sanskaar will take good care of him and please continue soon

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rithikakharban

@rithikakharban

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I always had been a silent reader but seriously love dis is story. plz pm me also wen u write other parts

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Krishna Priya

@bilvyina

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nimmu dr
all update are just awesome dr... Lv al of them...swara gradualy c some of their sweet memories... I alwayz loved the way u portray sanskar.. He is the perfect man in every girlz dream.. I realy adore your sanskar...he is so cool... Continue soon ..
Love u dr..
Krishna

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Ah dear your writing is just fantabulous 🤗

I have hols from coll and am home all the time. when I first saw you reposted the starting parts, I started reading again and then continued to the other.

I was so excited that swara was with sanky that I WAITED 2 freaky hours, never leaving my lappy and then you posted the next part. I was like yipiee!

I really had fun reading it, as much as sanky had fun spending time with swara 🤗

And the last line of your last part (for now) is the best for me 👍🏼

Update soon!

Me waiting waiting, next part wanting wanting. 😳

Edited by -CRJ- - 9 years ago

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Saumya

@Saumya2102

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Nimmi..!!🤗

The story is going awesome!! The lat part has me hooked.. no seriously open mouthed!! Those scratches and bites.. and my dirty mimd. And I just remembered the SwaSan convo in Angel!!😆

Angel still has its hangover on me but then this one's surely gonna have a special place.

Waiting

Saumya

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This is fantastic and favulous. Thanks Nimmy, what can I ask for more than these writings. You have touched my poor, sad soul so tenderly after it being bruised by the horrendous episodes. Love you ----- Aparna 😳

Edited by Apudeep - 9 years ago

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anuja

@princess2791

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

all parts are marvellous excellent. waiting for next update.

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

res darlin 😛...whoa my weekend is packed ..back to back😳 ..can I ask for more

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Nimmi

I am in a shock. For I always pray to get lengthy chapters of my favourite writers and I was happy since the first one was so long. But then back to back chapters , it's a treat dear. Thank you so much.

Coming to the chapters your writing skill is so unique with so much humour in a romantic story. I was laughing at your dialogues and my husband who was driving was wondering whether I have gone crazy.

Nimmi let me list out the portions I loved the most

- Nakul on how many times he has been fired from the job

- Again Nakul on how sanskar can burn even water

- How she could sense his scent in the room

-The way you laid out THE moments...pillow, AC, dish washing

-His preference to be drug lord Rd, mafia king over khooni

-Most hilarious being Kolkata police and panditji erecting tents near Maheswari mansion

And above everything HIM, , ,the awareness you bring by highlighting the simple word

AND Dark Knight( my first love in this forum)

Too good nimmi, waiting for the next exciting part

Edited by blindassassin - 9 years ago