SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48 - Page 46

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Viji dearest,🤗
U left me speechless again with this wonderful update.😳 Just mindblowing!!!😉 I'm in SwaSan dreamland right now with is dreamy epilogue. And the places u mentioned in Thailand, OMG!!! They r so spectacular and breathtaking!!! While reading this part, I was googling the places, and it left me awestruck!!!😳 SwaSan part was so heart touching, specially those parts, where Swara was making Sanskar understand and when Sanskar recollected the memory of his proposal.😳 And their moments were..☺️☺️ Loved this update sooo muchhh!!!!!😳😃 RagLak were also nice.😊 Update soon. Can't wait.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love and loads of hugs!!🤗🤗
Aheli.

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Viji 🤗

Nandu my dear pal🤗🤗

When I saw the title I was a bit sad that it's the epilogue and that the story is coming to an end. Then you said it's epilogue part one. I can't tell you how happy I'm that I don't have to let go of them just yet.😳

😳 I am having a rather tough and emotional time letting them go myself, I must tell you. 😉 I've been all emotional and teary right from the end of Chapter 5...sometimes I get so upset with myself! But this is how I usually am, after I finish a fic. Thanks so much, your warm and lovely comment made me feel so much better that day.🤗

I absolutely loved how swara stood firm by sanskar and helped him get over his guilt. It's always Sanskar who is shown as the caring understanding partner who would stand by his love even if the world turns against him and although it is evident that swara too loves him as deeply it is still wonderful to read it rather than know it but never see it, as it happens in the show.

Sanskars guilt and his penance were all beautifully written.

He, ever logical, chose action rather than simply stewing in his guilt.

His sincerity to the things ( or people ) he's passionate about is so impressive that I can't help but foolishly fan girl over him.

I wanted to show that aspect of Swara---her standing steadfastly and determinedly by Sanskaar. I agree with you that in the show, they show Sanskaar's love as being more caring, more steadfast. While we know that Swara loves him just as much, in the show they do shortchange that portrayal a wee bit. I wanted to show an equal intensity from her side, too---and I am so very glad that you loved this.

Sanskaar---he is just so resolute, focused and determined na? That's one of the best things about him. True to his nature, to his inherent integrity and sincerity, he feels tremendous remorse at his plotting (albeit amnesia driven) of the past several weeks. But logical and driven as ever, he realizes that just wallowing in his remorse is pointless. Instead, he channelizes that into something tremendously positive---taking their firm to ever greater heights.

The bit where Sanskar talks to her about his lost memoris and her promising him that they can make new ones together was so sweet.

I'm a sucker for all things fluffy and that has to be my favorite part in this update.

(Yep. It's won over the honeymoon special parts. I know, I'm surprised too.😆)

😳 😉 🤗 So very glad you loved that part---I was quite emotional while writing it. Again, I wanted to show how Swara determinedly stands by him. She comforts and reassures him, that they can always make new, wonderful memories in their lives together from now on. And he can always view those precious memories of their past, through her eyes, with her as his witness.

His joy at remembering a part of their past was so contagious I myself was smiling like a idiot here.

Sigh. My babies are finally happy.

🤗 🤗 So very happy to hear that. As a huge SwaSan fan, it is a huge compliment for me when you say reading this could make you feel so intensely.

You've done, as always, a wonderful job. If anything they get better and better.

I can't wait for more.

Thanks so much yaar, Nandu. The warmth of your comments is so very motivating. 🤗

Lots of love

Nandini

PS: The descriptions on Thailand was really great too. I'm going to use it as reference when I visit the place.😉

😳 So glad you loved them. I really enjoyed myself on my visit to Thailand a couple of years back. And poured all those affectionate memories into the setting descriptions. 😊

Originally posted by: -CRJ-

EDITED!

Viji dearsest, the epilogue part one is awesome!

Thanks so much, Konpal my dear pal. 🤗

Sanskaar always go to great lengths to redeem himself.

Yeah, that's one of the most marvelous things about Sanskaar na. He never does anything in half measures. He puts all his dedication, resolve and passion into everything he does. And here, he certainly poured every ounce of his formidable will, into ensuring that their firm went to ever greater heights.

Thre trip. What do I say about it?

Sanskaar really got some great plans up his sleeves, and sure he executes them perfectly 😛😳

😳 ☺️ Sanskaar has unleashed his passionate, naughty side. 😉 He certainly has wonderful plans for their honeymoon---and executes them perfectly, too. 😆 😳

Hope we get this sanskaar in show, but alas, they are more focused on swara kidnapping, paragini drama n what not 🤢

Atleast we are gonna get some swasan romance before swara's kidnapping 😳

Swara's thoughts on their marriage is so lovely to read.

And then he remembers the proposal. That was one of the best proposal I've ever watched on Indian tele 😳

Those dialogues were a pleasure to read.

Thanks so much dear. 🤗 So very glad you loved those SwaSan moments in this chapter.

Love ya Viji dearest for such a good epilogue 🤗

Love you yaar, for such a warm and motivating comment. You really made my day. 🤗

Keep writing 😳

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Viji!!🤗 When the epilogue is so blissful one cant complain about the story ending... It was sooo romantic n cuddly.. Fictional sanskar(s) are getting bolder day by day😆 The best part was how Swara described what marriage means.. Being and having a witness to a life.. Wow!! I mean that was so very beautiful! So much said in a few words!👏

I love reading your pieces for this very reason.. Waiting for the next epilogue😃

Much love,

Akshata😊

Originally posted by: virman_superhit

Hiii... Sorryyy for the late reply and not commenting on your beautiful stories for a lonnggg time dear... 😭😭... Was really busy... So the delay... Just read your wonderful story and liked the parts...

Hey dear 🤗 🤗

No sorry's needed whatsoever, yaar. I understand "offline life" 😊 pressures of work and family commitments perfectly. Hope all is well with you.

So happy to hear that you loved all the parts of this Fic.

Oh My God... What a beautiful story filled with so many emotions... Love, Romance, hurt, confusion, the dark side of Sanskaar back again.. remorse once again.. just loved to read it... I dont have words to express how wonderfully you have written the entire story... Sheer brilliance and i must say amazing thoughts while penning down this story... I cant even imagine how much thought and how much time ur beautiful stories take.. And you still write them.. 👏👏👏... Just awesome.. You are a great writer and you should continue writing... Trust me while reading the story i could react and feel the emotions.. Fantabulous story.. 👏...

I am just so deeply touched and humbled by your words yaar. Truly, you made me feel immensely blessed, such a privilege and pleasure to have your feedback.

Really overjoyed that you loved all the elements and threads of this tale. Sanskaar being one of the most layered characters, with a whole lot of depth, shades and angles to his nature; its an immense compliment to hear that you were thrilled with his portrayal. Thanks yaar.🤗

Loved how this time in your story it was Ragini who wanted to stop Sanskaar from going on a wrong path.. That was beautiful touch to the story,, 👏👏

So very glad you loved Ragini's portrayal. Next only to Sanskaar, she is a very intriguing and fascinating character. Again, with a lot of layers and shades to her nature. I wanted to show her sincere repentance for her past deeds, and her resolve to ensure SwaSan's happiness and peace of mind.

Now to come to Sanskaar and Swara.. Awww... Just loved the story... His confusion, attraction, once again realising her nature and her love, Swara's understanding for Sanskaar and her undying love... Beautifully written.. 😳😳😳.. Loved how she loves and understands that he had doubts about their relation but she was just happy to have him back.. Typical reaction of a girl in love.. Awww.. and the romance was awesome.. there feel and need for each other.. 👏.. Wish we could see that in show too.. 😆😆😆.. But atleast got to read that in ur story.. 😆.. Loved how Sanskaar again went into his remorse... Awww.. and he thinks he can never come out of his dark side.. Poor thing.. 😭😭.. But why fear when Swara is here.. Loved her understanding and her love.. My god..

Once again, I am so immensely humbled and touched by your words. As a huge SwaSan fan, it is a massive compliment to know that you loved their portrayal here. Sanskaar had a heart versus mind battle initially; but where Swara is concerned, his heart will always have a clear edge. 😳 He just cannot resist that mesmeric pull towards her, the deep connection that they share. She has seeped inexorably and irrevocably into his very heart and soul after all. And Swara, too, loves him with such passionate intensity. She realized that he had some doubts and misgivings when he came back, but she was supremely confident that their love would see them through.

Sanskaar has so much integrity, dedication and sincerity. When he realized how wrong he'd been, his remorse was very deep and heartfelt. He felt utterly anguished at his plotting (albeit amnesia driven) of the past several weeks. But Swara stood steadfast by his side, made him understand that he would never really have done anything to harm her or her parents or unborn sibling. And for that matter, his bitterness and vindictiveness were never as sharp as they had been those years ago, because of the strength and warmth of their potent love for each other.

Thank YOUUU... For this story.. Will keep reading it.. I just loveee it... 😳😳...

I am so happy to hear that yaar...really thrilled to know that you loved it so much. 🤗 🤗

Sorryyy for the delay again.. 😭😭😭.. And thank you for the PM.. :)

Please don't say any more sorry's. 😊 No more allowed between pals!

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Unres-ed on page 60😊

Originally posted by: aamias

hi viji,

sorry for late reply sorry sorry

viji i am not able to read some of the ff really busy with studies but yesterday i read ur storyand as i would say u write better than CVs. the whole track from memory loss to redemption left me intrigued with the story . i am grateful to know read ur ffs

Originally posted by: rafafan

Viji 🤗

Just lost for words dear. You are simply superb. So talented, creative and your imagination...God bless. You deserve a standing ovation for this, hands down you are the best author I have ever come across in this forum or anywhere on IF. 👏👏

I am just stunned by the way you perfectly analysed your characters, gave them a background story and progression. For SwaSan and RagLak of course, but even for Nakul! There is so much depth and elegance to your plot development and character portrayal. The way you describe the setting and your characters' emotions and thoughts 👏👏 You transport us right there into your story.

I love each and every one of your fics, this one probably is my favorite now, along with your elements and Mahabharata series, Saudade, old sins cast long shadows, second chances and ek chutki sindhoor. Actually I loved your music of the soul series, toska--kairos--baby makes 4 os series, colors of love, and the sweet scent of petrichor as well. 😊 Impossible to choose between your works!

Always keep writing, and God bless. Keep smiling my dear!