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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Haldai

The story is really a new concept..
Love to read more n know what will happen next
Thanks for the pm..


Thank u harshita 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 2
Swasan entered in swaras room n closed the door ... swara sat on bed n wait for sanskar ...sanskar slowly came close to her
Swara : (monologue) n again one more night come in my life ... again an unknown person will attack on my dignity ...every night I pray 4rom god that I dont want this life but even god does not listen to me
Sanskar came near bed n sat before her on floor ... swara gave him a weired look
Swara : y u sat on floor???
Sanskar : because I want to see u ????? U know wht hussan aara ji u r very beautiful I cant describe ur beauty in words
Swara smiled : tell me something new ... I got these type of compliments every night
Sanskar laugh : by the way I love ur voice ... when u were singing I forgot about the world ... can u sing a song for me???
Swara widened her eyes : song here
Sanskar : yes song y r u so surprise
Swara : actually u r first who want to listen a song 4rom me in this room
Sanskar : really gud then sing na
Swara : (monologue ) directly nai bol sakta k charge hona hai all the man r actors in this world
Sanskar : Im waiting hussan aara ji
Swara stood up n started ther song ... she slightly remove her duppata
Raat akeeli hai
Then she blow the candle
Bujh gye diye
She came near sanskar
A k mere pass
Kano mein mere
She rested her head on his shoulder
Jo bhi chahe kahiye
Jo bhi chahe kahiye
Sanskar was feeling nervous to saw her ... he stood up n swara caught his hand
Tum aj mere liye ruk jao
Rut bhi hai fursat bhi hai
Tum mujh se kaho na zara
Mujhe tum se muhabat hai
She pushed him on bed n came on his top ... she jerked her hairs
Muhabat ki ijazat hai
Tu chup kyun rahiye
Jo bhi chahe kahiye
Swara gave a pack on his cheek ... sanskar felt current passed in his body... then she jerked her hairs to other side n gave a pack to his other cheek ... sanskar was like statue he sid not know wht to do ... this was the feeling which he had never felt in his life he remember his girl friend when she kissed him first time ... then swara moved towards his lips ... she was so closed ... n was about to kiss him
Sanskar immediately got up : stay away
Swara was shock to saw his behaviour : wht happened y r u behaving like this
Sanskar : mein yaahan yeh sab karne nai aya
Swara looked at his confuse face n laughed : haahhahahaha yahan sab isiliye hi aate hai Mr. Whtever u r
Sanskar : sanskar maheshwari
Swara : ohhh name ka asar hai gud I like it... sanskari bacha
Sanskar : really they all were biding for this
Swara : hmmm ao u come first time here
Sanskar : thats y u were crying when that lady said she is all urs
Swara got up : I did not cry
Sanskar : I have seen tears in ur eyes like u dont want all this
Swara : leave all that n tell me y u paid 2.5 lacs for this night
Sanskar : because ur voice was making me crazy n ur song was giving me peace
Swara : ahan so u just want to listen my song
Sanskar : yes because I was tens n ur voice was releasing y tension
Swara : thats mean u r so rich ???
Sanskar : yes Im a businessman
Swara : arey wah
Sanskar : rahul told me about u ... he said only u can finish my grief
Swara : how ???
Sanskar : dont know ... but when I came here n listen ur voice I said he was right ... plzz sing a song
Swara : hum tumhein pagal lagte hain kya
Sanskar : wht ???
Swara : like u do ur business na its my business n u r inserting my business
Sanskar : I did not mean that hussan aara ji u r getting me wrong ... actually my girl friend left me
Swara : ohh ishq prob hai aisa bolo na
Sanskar smiled : yes now u got me
Swara : but y she left u ???? I mean u r so handsome n a businessman still she ditched u y???
Sanskar : dont know may be she got some one better than then me... I need a friend with whom I can share my all prob ... will u be my friend
Swara gave him a smile : yes of course
They shook their hands
Swara : ok first tell me ur story then I will give u solution
Sanskar : yaa ok ... actually she was my class fellow her name was kavya... I met her before six months when we both become partner for an assignment
Flash Back

Six months ago...

A boy is sitting on first bench nd was copying notes...when teacher enter in class...

All students greet him

Sir:- so students u have given one aassignment...nd for that assignment u all will works in group...

Aur aise hi mein aur kavya ek group me hogye( sanskar says to Swara in present)

kavya come an sit near sanskar...

kavya:- hey..
sanskar: hey
kavya: so till we dont complete our assignment can i sit with u...if u r kk...
sanskar:- ya sure...it is for assignment na so no problem...

(note:- kavya having crush on sanskar from last 3 nd half yrs...means from first day of college but sanskar never look at her)

Kavya is happy that finally sanskar notice her first time in this 3 nd half year...

Kavya:- friends(she forward her hand)
sanskar(thinks for awhile then smile nd forward his hand): friends

kavya : btw i m kavya...kavya shelgil...
sanskar:- i m sanskar... sanskar maheshwari...hmm...so lets start with our assignment

Sanskar to Swara in present: we both become friend nd start doing our assignment... time guzarta rha aur humari dosti gheri hoti rhi...we become best friends...kavya mujhe pyaar krti thi..but i only think her as my best friends..nd one day...

Swara:- one day kya...

sanskar thinks..

fb..3 months after there friendship...

sanskar:kavya kavya where r u taking me...
kavya : uff sanskar so mch questions... bas chlo mere saath...
sanskar: uff u will not gonna listen na
kavya smiles..nd say yes...

kavya : sanskar now open your eyes...

sanskar open his eyes...nd saw kavya sitting in front of him on her knees...

Sanskar:- kav..
Kavya:shhh sanskar listem me now...sanskar i love u..

sanskar is shocked...
kavya continued: yes sanskar i love u not from today but from the first day of college...when i say u want time i fall for u...i dont want to be your friend i want to be your girl friend...will u accept me..

sanskar is nervous..nd shocked..because he dont love her..or never think about kavya in that way

Sanskar nodded in yes...
kavya gets excited nd hugs him

Swara in present: what u accept her proposal...but u dont love her na

sanskar:- yes i dont love her...but she was my best friend...mujhe lga kya hua agar mein usse pyaar nhi krta lekin woh meri dost thi..sbse achi dost...mein uska dil nhi todna chata tha...issliye...

Swara smiles with teary eyes Seeing his pure heart...

Swara: phir kya hua

sanskar: time nikalta rha aur dhekte hi dekhte humare realation ko 2 months ho gye...mein kavya ki har choti bdi icha puri krta tha...woh bahut khush thi...woh mujhse jo bhi mangti thi mein de deta tha...lekin achanak dad ko bussiness me loss hogya...aur usne mujhse i phone manga...lekin uss samay mein i phone afford nhi kar skta tha...phir

Swara: phir kya

fb...

kavya: sanskar mujhe kch nhi pta mujhe ek i phone chaiye tum meri kbhi bhi nhi sunte ho...i just hate u...tum mujhe ek i phone bhi nhi de skte na

sanskar : kavya abhi dad ko bussiness me nuksaan ho rha h...i cant afford it but tumhe kch samay baad zarror dunga

kavya: just get lost sanskar..
agar tumhare dad ko nuksaan ho rha h toh mein kya kru...tumse acha toh raj h woh meri har icha puri krta h...meri hu glti thi jo maine tumse phone manga agar mein raj se mangti toh woh mujhe zaror deta

sanskar get furious and slap her...

kavya: what the hell...how dare u to slap me...

sanskar realize what he done...
sanskar:sorry sorry..woh actually glti se...mereko maaf krdo

kavya: get lost...i m breaking up with u Rgt now
sanskar:- no kavya u cant u cant do this to me...for a phone u r breaking our friendship... u love me na...then how can u
kavya: love my foot...i never loved u...i only loved your money... but now u dont have money so whats the need for this friendship...

sanskar is shocked

sanskar: what!!! how can u kavya...plz say this is a lie...i beg in front of u...dont say like this..

kavya smirks nd turns to go when she heard a laugh...

EPISODE END...

precap:- Sanskar again come to meet Swara...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update 👏
I hope sanskar will give real love to swara soon which she deserves it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...wow why does sanky always get pain because he has no money...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Hadi,
Awesome update.👏 Loved Swara and Sanskar.😉 Felt bad for Sanskar for his painful past.😭 Kavya!!!😡 Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb update 👏
I hope sanskar will give real love to swara soon which she deserves it


Thanx 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Nice update...wow why does sanky always get pain because he has no money...

Update soon


Even I dont know 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Hadi,
Awesome update.👏 Loved Swara and Sanskar.😉 Felt bad for Sanskar for his painful past.😭 Kavya!!!😡 Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.


Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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EPISODE-3...
Kavya turns back to go when she hear laughing sound...
She is shocked!! nd turns back...nd see
Sanskar laughing...
kavya:-(shouts) What the!!!..u..u r laughing...don't u have any shame or what...I ditched u instead of crying u r laughing...I said I don't love u...then why r u laughing...u should cry na because your love ditch u...stupid boy...
Sanskar:-.. why should I cry...I m happy that u yourself tell your truth to me...I m lucky that I come to know your truth now only...thanks alot kavya for saving me from such a girl who don't have any value of friendship in her eyes...and one more thing what u were!!!! umm! u were saying something about love na!! oo my god..(he laughs) u were thinking I love u...lol!! if u think this then listen I don't love u...(kavya shocked) yes...u listen rgt i never loved u...nd I will never love u..I only accepted this relation because of our friendship... because I don't want to break your heart...but I should thank that u break this unwanted relation...nd finally u showed me your true colour...no just get lost from here...get losttt...
Kavya get furious by his reply...nd stamp her foot...nd leaves from there having anger in her eyes...
As soon as kavya leaves...Sanskar fall on his knees nd burst out crying
Sanskar- (crying) why kavya...why u played with our friendship... I have think u r my best Friend... nd truly love me but no u...u just want..mo..Mon..ey... I hate u kavya... u didn't only betrayed me..even u insult the pious bond of friends...I will never forgive u for insulating the word friends...
Sanskar in present - after that my friends tell me about u...so I come here...
he turns back...
Nd see swara who was having years in her eyes..
Sanskar- are why r u crying!! ha...
Swara:- ha..! aa a why will I cry...I m not crying
Sanskar- acha then why r u having tears in your eyes..
Swara:- ohh this!! umm this r not tears...this is water...actually dust has fallen in my eyes that's why...nothing else OK na...
sanskar laughs...
swara:- are why r u laughing... I said na its just water
Sanskar:- kk kk I believe u..happy now!! BTW should I say one thing...
Swara:- hmm say
Sanskar:- u r too innocent swara
Swara look on shocked...
swara:- what do u mean...I m not innocent..(try to avoid eye contact)...BTW u paid a huge amount... don't u want to do..the work...(speak hesitantly) I mean don't u want to do for which people come here...for which u paid moneys...
She said this while avoiding eye contact...nd with tears in her eyes...
Sanskar sees her nd feels bad...
Sanskar:- (teasingly) yupp sure I will do it na...come on
Swara( thinks):- I have think he is Innocent..but no all boys r same...
Sanskar leans toward her...swara close her eyes...
sanskar observe her beautiful yet innocent face...her innocence is clearly shown on her face...
Sanskar cups her face...Swara holds her cloths tightly...nd having tears in her eyes...but the next thing shocked her...
Sanskar kiss her forehead...swara open her eyes in shocked...sanskar smiles nd turns nd go to sleep in left side of bed...
Sanskar(while laying on bed):- miss swara..if u want u can sleep on my right side...don't worry I will not do anything with u...I have put pillow walls between us...u sleep on right side...I will sleep on this side...kk...now gud ngt...
Swara is standing there motionlessly...nd is amazed to see sanskar...
Swara(thinks):- What type of a guys he is...I have never seen any boy like this... such a pious soul he is...people crave to touch me nd he..he didn't even...(She smiles proudly happily emotionally while having tears in her eyes)...
agar is duniya me Sab log iski tarah honge na toh kbhi kisi swara ko HUSAN ARRA nhi bnna padega...(if everyone will be like him then no swara will become husan aara)...tears were making a way out from her eyes...
She go nd sleep on right side of bed...
Next Morning
Sun rays fell on swaras face n she woke she checked the time it was 6 o clock she got up with a jerk
Swara : omg if apa bi see sanskar here she will beat me
She went towards him n tried to awake him
Swara : sanskar plzzz get up ... come on sanskar apa bi will kill me plzzz get up
Sanskar got up n sorry let me go ... he was about to open the door swara stooped him
Swara : no no not 4rom here lets go 4rom this window because she dont know that we were here
Sanskar : ok boss
They opened the window n went out 4rom the house then swara settled her self n n say bye to sanskar... then she moved back
Swara : sanskar where is the rent of room
Sanskar : sorry I forgot how much????
Swara : 3000 for one night.
Sanskar : ok
He gave her 3000 ... she went inside n sanskar left
swara tied that money in her dupata n was silently moving towards the room at that time some one called her n she became scare That was apa bi
Apa bi : u r half hour late ... I know that guy was handsome but money is everything next time dont give extra time to anyone
Swara : ok apa bi next time I will take care
Apa bi : its gud for u ... other wise u know me very well
Swara node ok n ran to her room... before entering she looked here n there n took a deep breath then she moved towards her cupboard n took out her saving box ... she opened the money box n count all the money inside it then she add that 3000 in it
Swara : waoo now I have 20000 but still I need 80000 more to ran 4rom here
while she was talking to herself some one called her n swara turned back
Swara : ahhh amaa bi u scared me
Amaa bi smiled : how much money have u saved ????
Swara : 20000 ... only 80000 more then I will run 4rom this prison ... u will come with me na
Amaa bi : no swara I cant leave apa bi
Swara : but y she is so cruel she always beat me n scold u ... its final now u r coming with me
Amaa bi : time will tell
Swara was so happy n smiling n amaa bi noticed her smile
Amaa bi : y r u so happy n today u r not tiered also whts the reason ???? Dont u wanna sleep today????
Swara : no because after 6 years I slept full night
Amaa bi widened her eyes : really how ????? I mean u were with that guy na???
Swara : yes n he said me to sleep he too slept on this bed
Amaa bi : I cant believe this he paid 2.5 lac for one night how is it possible
Swara : even I did not believe when he said me to sleep
Amaa bi : then y he paid this much amount for night
Swara : he was depressed he needs a friend so he asked me to be his friend ... u know wht amaa bi he was the first person who gave me respect
Amaa bi : whts his name ????
Swara : sanskar
Amaa bi : ahan he shows the effect of his name
Swara : yup
Maheshwari Mention
Sanskar came back to home n look at the picture of his late parents he took their blessings n moved towards his room ... he sat on the bed n remember last night... he remember how swara kissed him a smile appeared on his face
Sanskar : hussan aara ... wht a beauty I have seen so many creatures of God but u r the most beautiful u r big n deep eyes made me crazy n I know u r hiding something 4rom me ... dont worry will meet u tonight again
Then he got ready n went to his office
In office
Rahul n his friend came inside his cabin
Rahul : oh hello Mr. Maheshwari how r u feeling???
Sanskar : ohh hi come sit
Rahul : leave all this n tell me how was ur night ??? I mean u n hussan aara n full night
Sanskar : she is so innocent
Rahul : innocent ... sanskar she is a prostitute so she cant be innocent n second these type of people only love money
Sanskar : rahul everyone in this world love money n the difference between us n them is that they openly accept it n we pretend that we dont love ... I think they r more honest than us
Rahul : omg she made u crazy in only one night ... wht u both done
Sanskar : we talked for some time n after that we slept
Rahul : wht u did nothing then y u spend 2 lac on her
Sanskar : because Im in love with her
Rahul : wht r u made sanskar she is a garbage
Sanskar clench his fist n hold his collar : next time dont call her garbage she is an innocent girl n I know she helpless thats y she is doing all this ... but not 4rom now I will save her every night 4rom all this n will give her a respectful life
He pushed him : get out 4rom my office now
He angrily left 4rom there ... sanskar sat on his chair n remember swaras tears he felt pity on her n again started his work
At Night
Swara again became ready according to her routine ... after some time apaa bi took her out ... all the man was waiting for her she start her dance ... at that time sanskar entered inside
Swara : yeh kis ki hai aahat
Yeh kis ka saaya
Hui dil pe dastak
Yahan ko aya
She turned an saw sanskar there ... she felt relief to saw him n stood up
Hum pe yeh kis ne
Hara rang dala
Khushi ne humari hamein
She fell in sanskars feet
Mar dalaa Allah
Mar dalaa Allah
Sanskar made her to stand up (eye lock)
All were throwing money on her she again start her dance
After that finishing her dance she sat in middle ... again all started biding for the night
1st : 15000
2nd : 25000
swara closed her eyes n tightly hold her dress
At that time sanskars voice made everyone silent
Sanskar : 2.5 lac
Apaa bi looked at her : ohh again u its nice ... anyone else
No one gave answer
Apaa bi : take her she is again urs for tonight
Swara opened her eyes n looked at sanskar who hold her hand n was asking her to come
After that they went in swaras room again ... swara sat on bed n sanskar kept his head on swaras lap ... swara was shock
Sanskar : y r u looking at me???
Swara : nothing
Sanskar : actually today I so tiered
Swara caresses his hairs : y ???
Sanskar : I have doe so much work in office
Swara : ohh ... u r life very nice na ... u r independent u can go any where ... where ever u want
Sanskar : hmm u r right n I love my life
Swara : I wish I can see the world but I have never seen this city also ... who came he took me to the his room or flat nothing else
Sanskar : do u wanna see the city
Swara : yes I want
Sanskar : dont worry tomorrow I will take u out
Swara became happy : really paka promise na
Sanskar : ha paka promise ... we will eat ice cream I will show u all the beautiful places of city
Swara became happy n they they both slept in each other embrace
Precap : sanskar took swara out to show her the city

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Hadi,😊
So amazing and heart touching update.👏 Really loved both Swara and Sanskar.😃 So Sanskar is falling in love with Swara??😉 Hope Swara gets all the happiness with Sanskar, which she deserves.😳 Loved each and every moments of SwaSan.😳 Precap is nice.😳 Update soon and thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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