Swasan SS Humdard Teaser One

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Hi guys this is me hadi u all know me because of my ff Koi Mill gaya n Mere Ajnabi Thanx to giving such an awesome response on koi mill gaya n with me my sister samaira u all know her as a prank master n she wrote a ff one body two soul on another page but she is a wonderful writer we r besties people call us karan arjun :-P
Hope u all will like our chemistry will wait for ur comments on our ss ...

...TEASAR...Humdard ss
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A boy is going somewhere nd enters at a place...

the place is Chubara...he sees many girls dancing there...in short dresses...nd also see many old mens nd young boys touching girls...in bad places...there womens and girls...r not felling anytype of hesitation...the boy started to feel wierd by seeing the environment.. nd is moving back..when someone hold him...he gets shocked to see the person.

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A boy is seen crying in front of a girl...

boy- plz dont do this...dont leave me..how can u do this...ppz say that u r joking plz

girl laughs evilly...nd replies back- stop your drama baby...nd why will i lie when i dont love u...i just love your kojey nothing else...get lost now...

the girl turns to leave..but stopped hearing a laugh from behind...

boy stand up while wiping his tears...nd starts laughing

the girls is shocked...

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A man is seen giving money to a person...nd the person in return gives him a girl...

girl:- no plz baba plz dont do tgis..i will die plz...Mujhe iss insaan k pass kat bhejo...baba mein kch bhi karlungi...but plz dont do this

the girl fall in his feel

the man make her stand nd give her a tight slap

man- shut up..jbse paida hui tbse naak me dam kar rkha..nikal ja yha se...kbhi apni shakal bhi man dikhao hume...

the person who gives money laughs nd shakes hand with man nd take that girl with him forcefully

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Character sketch...intro
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Sanskar maheshwari- he a handsome young boy...always care about other...betrayed in love

Swara bose:- a beautiful cute girl...very innocent...but because of tragic past her life changes fully...now she is a prostitute
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Who is the boy in First scene...why he go there...nd why he shocked...

who is the girl nd boy in Second scene...why that boy laugh suddenly when he was crying nd pleading to that girl one mint before...

who is that person,man nd girl in last scene...why that girl was pleading man..nd refering him as baba...who is that person who is dragging that girl...

to know all these question stay tuned to our ff #Humdard...

by Samaira nd hadi...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow an amazing start guys...update soon..
Thanks for pm...
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Interesting
Thanks for the pm
Updated asap


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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow dear
its very interesting
do continue soon
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Continue soon. Excited to read.
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Interesting dear.
Update soon.
Thnks for the pm. 😃
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Interesting teaser.👏 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago
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Thanx 😊
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome
Do continue soon


Thanx 😊

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