SwaSan OS : Gathering Scattered Pieces - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb OS Kirti👍🏼Loved reading it😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update barbie.Yaar, you have rescued me from jhahil torture very soon. Liked it very much 😊👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Kirti,😊
Awesome update dear.👏 Really loved Shomi and Ragini's effort to make Swara understand and telling her the truth about her and Sanskar and what happened on that fateful day.😃 Sahil was acting as a good person but was actually brainwashing Swara against Sanskar.😡 Poor Sanskar.😭 Swara again misunderstood him.😭 But slowly with his efforts and love, she understood him and cleared all her confusions regarding him.😳 She was ready to give a chance to their relationship.😃 But Sahil again tried to provoke her against Sanskar.😡 But this time she believed Sanskar.😉 Really loved Laksh's advice to Sanskar when Sanskar was giving explanations to Sahil.😉 Haha! Sahil's reaction!! Serves him ri8!!😆 Eying someone's else's wife!! Cheapo!!🤢 Really loved this OS very much. U have saved me from the daily torture of the show.😆 God knows when Swara will know the truth and get back her memory?!😕😭 Thanks for the pm dear.😃
With love,🤗
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Hey🤗
Amazing plot. All they have to do is talk and a little trust. This concept was awesome. And sanskar is really a gem of person.
Your writings are superb.
Love
Kiara
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊 Kirti barbie dear amazing os loved it!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Its awsm.
Shomi&ragini finaly did smthng gd.
Most beautiful part swasan convo..
Love it.parke sukun mila.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice os...
Swara's misunderstanding about sanskar was cleared in a nice way.sharmista and ragini did a wonderful job by saying the whole truth to swara with proof.
The last swasan sequence was beautiful...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kriti what an awesome story u wrote. I wish we could have seen this much maturity from swara in the show, atleast she is listening to her mom here. Loved your shomi, she was explaining swara with so much patience. So cute little boy returns, for change he was not irritated, afterall he can do anything for swara's happiness even if that involves her calling him cute. Lastly i can pherfectly imagine kinara consuming alcohol & m loving laksh ji nowadays both in the show & stories.
You are an amazing writer kriti. Do keep on writing, hv read all your stories till now & thanks for the pm & aage chalke kabhi story likho don't u dare to forget sending me pm 😊
Edited by swakriti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Superb dear... 👏 loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os ⭐️

u did so much better job in showing swara's POV than sr cvs

really wished aise hote par humari poti kismat


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