SwaSan SS : When Someone Loves YOU {chapter 3 updated page 1} - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res...unresing will be late as this is my exam week..sorry😒
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Heyy kirti, sorry again buddy for this extreme late unres, i read all 3 chapters together just yesterday...and all chapters are great...the first two chappy were interesting too as it explained swara's character and her emotions beautifully...here swara has quite a different character unlike the show or many other ffs...we are used to see her as a bubbly,chirpy girl...but here she is different and that is more intriguing...and third chapter ultimately introduced the hero😳...and what a musical entry he had in his heroine's life😉...i loved it...ishq bulava is one of my fav songs but yes it comes after manchala(i guess u can understand the reason😉)...and duet performance of swasan is delicious...mujhe show me bhi jald se jald chahiye swasan's duet performance..😳...now wondering how they will meet again...so update soon dear and i will try to unres my comment faster next time..pakka
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

hey kirti ..!

it was awesome update ..
the protrayal of swara from cheerful to lonely was beautifully described...lets see how this Goa trip shapes ..

Thank u so much dear😳...I dont know your name😆...may I know it😆...glad u liked it...😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: swakriti

This is an amazing story, loved your characterization of Swara. Waiting for your next update & thanks for the PM.

Thank u so much pari di😳😳...glad u liked it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Fariii

Awesome Introduction & 1st Part Kirti👍🏼
Thanks For The PM😳 PLZ do inform me when you update next part😃

Thank u so much fari😳...glad u liked it...and I will do pm u next update too😆😆😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Awesome start Kriti :)

Your described Swara's transformation beautifully!
Now waiting for Sanskaar's entry!
It's a SwaSan SS as title suggests, so plz use names :)
Plz update soon & PM me if possible!

Thank u so much nupur😃😃...glad u liked it😳😳

Sanskar will enter after one more chapter😳...and next part onwards I will be using names too😃...will pm u😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sia08

beautiful beginning

do update soon

Thank u so much sia😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Beautiful dear... Loved it.. 😳

Thank u kavitha😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ria.april18

Res...unresing will be late as this is my exam week..sorry😒

Dont say sorry dear...take your time😃😃...and all the very best for your exams👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update.
Swara is really very Confused Soul and must say she shares Beautiful Bond wid Orphange Kids.
Loved the Family get together and how Swara was feeling Happy to be wid Family after a Long Time.
Waiting for SwaSan meeting.
Thanks for the PM dear.
Edited by 92Sara - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
will u believe me if i say I somewhat relate to swara... it happens with me all the time. yes sometimes we just don't know what we actually need and sometimes our needs changes according to time... at the end we all need only love and someone to love but we need it in our own conditions...but can love happen with conditions...? and sometimes we just over think the matters and complicate the simple feelings... I don't know I m making sense or not but that's what I thought after reading swara's POV. she is so complex character but at the same time I can relate to her... its crazy right.. ?

my guess work is so high right now I m having feeling that sanskar will have a strong POV about these things too ( actually I m thinking a bit too much but I won't share it here and now) I just love the stories where I have to decode the characters and their characteristics...! lots of love 😳

p.s - loved it. will wait for the next.

pps - sorry for this weird comment...! 😆
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago

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