SwaSan SS : When Someone Loves YOU {chapter 3 updated page 1} - Page 4

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

Awesome start dear..

Loved it ...update asap!

thank u dear😳😳

Awesome Update Keertu!
Loved how u have portrayed Swara's Character from a Cheerful girl to Lonely girl.
Feeling bad for Swara at the age wen a Child needs Her/His Parents mostly she was away from her parents resulting her to become a complete lone person in life .
Waiting to see how this Goa trip is going to change Her Life.
Thanks for the PM dear.

hey kirti ..!

This is an amazing story, loved your characterization of Swara. Waiting for your next update & thanks for the PM.

Awesome Introduction & 1st Part Kirti👍🏼
Thanks For The PM😳 PLZ do inform me when you update next part😃

Awesome start Kriti :)

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Kirti dear,😊
Chapter 1 is so beautifully written.👏 For me its a SwaSan story and according to me, this chapter was all about Swara's life as childhood and her present lifestyle.😉 Looking forward to the next part. Plzz update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Thank u so much aheli😳😳...yeah its swasan story only and I am thinking from next part owards to include names too😳...will try to update soon😃😃

Originally posted by: Helee

kirtu...just read the first chapter and trust me it wasn't boring... 😳 it was necessary to understand swara's character ( for me she is Swara) and I can guess swara is going to have very complex character in this story n this goa trip is going to change her life upside down...( my guess work) 😆

n when will our hero come? ( when it comes to him I m very impatient you know that...😉 just kidding)

loved it. can't wait for the next chapter... 😳and thanks for the pm.😊

lots of love, Helee.

Helee🤗...thanks dear...and I am glad u dint find it boring😳😳...and yeah it was neccessary to understand swara's character...and next part onwards will include names too...so now its definately swara😆😆...

your guess work is offcourse right😉😆...how does it change that is to be seen😉

Hero will come in next to next part😉😉😆...just one more part without him😆😆

Thanks for the lovely comment helee...will try to update soon😳

Originally posted by: 92Sara

Awesome Update Keertu!
Loved how u have portrayed Swara's Character from a Cheerful girl to Lonely girl.
Feeling bad for Swara at the age wen a Child needs Her/His Parents mostly she was away from her parents resulting her to become a complete lone person in life .
Waiting to see how this Goa trip is going to change Her Life.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank u so much sara love for beautiful commnet...🤗
Swara has suffered a lot in life and now she has came to some conclusions which are somehow right and somehow wrong too...lets see how her fate and thoughts change from this goa trip😉😉😉

Again thank u sara...glad u liked it😳😳

Beautiful dear... Loved it.. 😳