SWASAN TS:(ML Track completed) on 20/05 (HBD NUPUR)

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

res

Unres

Dear Mukta,

I am so sorry for this inexcusable delay in Unres. I so loved this TS and you have written a beautiful one. Swara missing someone whom she cannot remember and Sanskaar pining for the one he cannot forget. Their reactions when they first met was breathtaking, Swara did not "know" him but felt the rightness of being in his arms.

And Sanskaar is brilliant, taking a chance to bring back her memories because she felt lost without them.

Finally the ending, Swara taking to sleeping on her husband was both and 🤣.

Lovely TS, looking forward to more.

love,

Nyna

PS: I sort of liked Sahil in this tale especially his final realisation - "she stepped into his life as a stranger and left as a friend" A very notable sentiment - which unfortunately does not appear to be what the serial is portraying😡

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

I am so happy that you cane back. ... This story is do beautiful and the emotions shown are amazing. ...seriously it's deep meaning of love and trust is portrayed nicely...

Please pm me when you update your other stories next time. ...and hope your well...

Take care raz

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Res for part two...

Unres...

Soo they are back her man... Her memory.. It was awesome how he help her to get her memory back... He proved again he is the real man.. I'm loving it soo much.. Now I'm afraid what CVS hold for us... Thank you soo for this wonderful TS mukta..

Finally she is in his embrace how sweet... Everything back to normal in their life.. It was soo smooth... Again saahil left alone.. I don't I'm not feeling sympathy for him.. May be. My heart is thinking he is hindrance in swasan life.. But felt very little bit bad...

With love..

Kam...

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey mukta

Very nice update

Firstly I also like this song .very emotional.

So she lost her memory n a stranger save her

Finally sanky n lucky find her

N he help her to get memory

At last sahil's one sided love but he give more importance to friendship

Ohh you portray it so simply yet amazingly

Don't know why CVS ruin beautiful characters n plots by adding stupid twists.

Keep writing

Thanks for pm

PS. Happy birthday nupur.

Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nice Os..
Happy birthday Nupur.. 🥳
Thanks for pm Mukta 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

A very emotional, intense and yet subtle work, Mukta. 👏 👏

You had described Sanskaar's, Swara's and yes, Sahil's emotions too, in a very emotional and realistic manner.

Sanskaar's utter and complete joy at finding Swara alive and safe, mingled with his shock at her inability to remember him, was so well done. You also described Swara's anguish and sense of loss very well. Our sense of identity, individuality and memory is so important to our self image, our consciousness. It must have been shattering for Swara to not be able to recall anything about herself.

The way you described how Sanskaar brought her memory back, and ensured that their lives together were filled with their pure and intense love for each other, was so moving. Loved it. 😳

The Sahil in your story is someone we can all sympathize with. He had a painful past of his own, when the girl he loved betrayed him so badly. He became a true friend to Swara, supporting her and shielding her to the best of his abilities. What I liked about your portrayal, was that even though he fell in love with her, he realized that her happiness was with her husband. He never attempted to come in between them, or to claim her for himself.

Love after all, is desiring the complete happiness of the person one loves...not desiring one's own happiness, by retaining a hold on the other person at any cost. 😊 You captured that essence very well.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

P.S: Happy Birthday, Nupur my dear pal! 🤗

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Prerana

@prerulalli

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Loved it mukta 🤗

A much needed twoshot at the right time😉

Can't see my babies crying on-screen😭

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Hansika.....

@Hansika.....

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awesome;Emotional and Intense Update Mukta.
You have penned down Swara's pain very beautifully her Pain of losing her Memory,her identity,friends,relatives each and everything.
Sanskar's happiness and Joy on seeing his Swara Alive knew ni boundaries.
Finally Swara got her Memory back wid the help of Sanskar and happy in her married life.
Feeling bad for Sahil after knowing his painful past.
Thanks for the PM dear.
Happy Birthday Nupur.

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Geethu_sweetie

@Geethu_sweetie

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

That was a wonderful shot.. 👏

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lekahravi

@lekahravi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

No words to describe this work..

Nupur belated happy bday wishes...

They way you expressed their feel,present scenario..amazing mukta..
Your words has heavenly feelings...hats off dear..

Love
Lekah.

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