SwaSan SS: Crossover *Part 1 Page 5* - Page 5

Thank u sooo much for such a lovely chapter vaishavi

Woah dude!! I just loved this chapter. The prologue had gripped me and I was curious to know how the wedding will be called off!! Amazing update. I just love Swara's character. A girl who can make many sacrifices for her relations and values them the most but then asks for the same in return with due respect and dignity.
Loved Sanskaar too here, a practical guy who is not that flirty sorts, has manners and genuine generosity.
Love at first sight!! Woww...Now this is gonna be interesting! Sanskaar has fallen for her and she is her neighbour. Brilliant development!!
Update soonerish please!!
Sakshi

Dear vaishnavi... It was superb... 👏

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res vaishu..

Unres...

Vaish... 🤗 ... Its good strat man I k ow Swara saahil Marriage won't happen after all it's a swasan story you're a swasan fan... Like me.. 😉 .. But I wonder how..???? It was an awesome way to stop a marriage man... Every women will sacrifice herself for true love and affection... But for sympathy big no... Soo true.. I loved it... The way you portrayed it was soo good.. 👏 .. Self-respect is more important for a girl.. You showed it well..

Sanskaar.. What can I say about him here.. Mmmawh... Lots of love for you... Casual type not soo expectation about his future wife just few... 😃 ... His convo with luck was too good and hilarious too... Swara next to his villa.. Aww soo excited.. Waiting for that...

Update soon...

With love...

Kam...

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Vaishu,

You're developing the story really well. The characterizations of Swara and Sanskaar are so good: we get to see a determined Swara, standing up for her self respect and identity. She is willing to give a whole lot to her relationship, and truly goes out of her way in that regard. But she also rightly feels that respect and trust is a 2 way Street. Sahil and especially his mom, never valued Swara's feelings at all.

So Sanskaar is pretty much bowled over by Swara's good heart and sincerity, her strength of character. And he has moved next door to her too. 😉😳 Sparks are sure to fly, given how much he's attracted to her.

And with SwaSan now being neighbors, am sure Ragini and Lakshya would also be thrown together. A second love story in the offing too. 😉

Thanks for the pm, waiting for the next chapter.

Cheers

Viji

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update..
Swara and sahil marriage didn't happened.. Great
Sanskaar is in love at first sight with swara..its awesome
Thanks for pm
Update soon

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res
Unres
Yipee swara and sahil are not married 🥳
Felt bad for swara 😭
But sanskar will make her smile for sure 😉
The way you have written it is perfect 👏
Seriously i loved it
Now sanskar like swara nature 😳
But sanlak bonding is so cool 😎
I hope swasan will fall in love soon 😳
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Vishnavi,
Thanks for the PM, otherwise I would have missed out on such a charming read. For a moment I thought was this a typical Dulha swap but nah, that wasn't even near what you had in mind for them.
So, finally it seems Sanskar's highly unattainable list of qualities has found a match in none other than his new neighbor. How exciting is that?
I won't waste words on Kamini who has most definitely missed some crucial lessons on humanity, or the seemingly ma ka laadla Sahil.
Felt bad for Swara. Hopefully she will reach the silver line of this dark cloud soon.
Continue soon.
Love,
Sakura

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hiya...Thanks for the pm and the 1st chapter was a pleasure to read just like the prologue...

Seems like sanskaar is intrigued with his new neighbour and attachment at first sight was a nice touch...so happy to read that sahil and swara were not married and it was not a redemption track after divorce of worse case dulha swap...

Man I really believed that sail mom needs a lesson in manors but was truly touching was the you kept swara bose character intact...wonder when swansan will meet and how even though the neighbours I hope lakshs helps him with this meet. ..like his character very much in this story. ..

Thanks for pm and update soon..

Raz

Originally posted by: Vini224

Wonderful update.

Love at first sight for Sanskar😳

And Swara is his neighbor now.

Waiting for Swasan moments.

Thanks for the PM.