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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Interesting :)

Continue soon :)
Thanks for the PM :)


Originally posted by: bilvyina

Nice update..beautiful discription..loved it


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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: suwas

Nice start.Eager to see how Sanskar becomes Dulha & steals the dulhan.

Am glad that you liked it!
Sanskaar becoming dulha gonna take time 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb start 👏
Loved it
Now it will be interesting to see how sanskar became dulha 😉

am Glad that You liked it!
sanskaar becoming dulha gonna take time😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

First of all hi ...

When I recieved your pm I Was like where you saw me as I don't remember meeting you anywhere
But thanks I got such an intriguing story ..

Prologue was awesome superbly written

Swara weds Sahil ..oh my I was just shocked reading this ...I was expecting Sanskaar but also felt how prologue would start with SwaSan marriage ..?!

But you nailed it ...the way you described sanskaar I am just falling in love with him all over again ..he is my all time favorite ..

I would really love to know how the story proceeds ...

Update soon and PM me pls ..don't forget 😃

Cheers

Soundharya..

Hello Soundharya!
AM glad that you liked it 😃
Yes i love Varun as well as Sanskaar!
will surely PM! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: raaz19

Good start please update soon...and please pm me when next update...

Wow sahil and swara wedding...mmm wonder how swansan come together?

Raz

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Vini224

Very interesting start with Sanskar being a guest at Swara's wedding.

Eager to read more.Please update soon
Thanks for the PM.

Thanks
Am Glad that YOu liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

What flim.. Are you south Indian.. I am.. From chennai...

Nice meeting you vaish...

Its Anand, a telugu film
am from Hyd! :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Heartbeats..


Its Anand, a telugu film
am from Hyd! :D



I don't have knowledge about Telugu movies yaar.. But very Eagar to read this.. Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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New concept loved the prologue plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello all am back again!
Here is the part 1!
Hope you all like it! :D

Part 1!

"What is this Swara? Who said you to wear this Bengali type of sari! It looks so old fashioned and filthy! Go take this royal Lehanga of ours and get ready according to our tradition" ordered Kamini, Sahil's self obsessed mother.

Swara gulped in to gather courage to talk against her. Ragini encouraged her to speak up by tapping her shoulder!

"Maa Ji this is my Mom's sari! By wearing this I would feel my mom's presence that's why..."

"I don't care. You have to dress up according to our tradition and it's my order"

"But it's my mom's last wish..."

Kamini's gave one final glare stopped Swara from further! Swara felt a shudder through her spine. For the first time she was scared of this marriage. She was scared of losing her identity to her mother in law. Tears started flowing through her eyes. Kamini then left in a fit of anger.

"Ragini it was my mom's last wish!" Swara explained to her friend amidst tears.

"I know Swara, don't worry I will talk to Sahil and come, am sure he will understand" with that Ragini left.

"So what decision of mine was disturbing you?" asked Sanskaar while walking through the corridors of wedding hall.

"Aunty told me you rejected Kavita's proposal too! Bhai! I thought you gelled with her easily"

"She is a fake person! All she aims is my fame and money"

"And why did you reject natashas's proposal?"

"she is a very dependent woman. Before marriage she was dependent on her dad and after marriage would depend on me. I want a wife who stands equal to me in terms of self respect and not one huge Bhoj!"

"Okay what about that Aanchal khurrana? I thought she looked quite independent too!"

"She gives no preference to her parents forget about taking care of mine after marriage!"

"Bhai! What kinds of a girl do you exactly want?" Laksh asked Sanskaar emitting out his frustration over his friend cum bhai's choice of woman.

"Well!" Sanskaar started with a dreamy expression on his face."I want a girl who is beautiful , intelligent , bold, independent and the one who gives her priorities to relations instead of fame and wealth"

"Wah! Bhai! You are wishing for the idealistic" Laksh said by patting his shoulder. Just then they heard a voice, a male voice apparently.

"Stop arguing Swara! Just listen to Mom's words"

Sanskaar and laksh peeped through the window from which the voice was coming. There were a bunch of people in the room and a lady with full of anger on her face standing beside the man who seemed to be the groom There were two girls standing before them and their backs to the window. From their attire one could easily tell it was bride and her some friend.

"Come Laksh lets go. Eavesdropping is not manners" said Sanskaar pulling laks'a arm. "Stay bhai! Swara is bride's name and it looks the marriage before happening is in trouble"

"Before marriage itself this bride of yours is arguing with me! After marriage Tauba Tauba!" Overacted the groom's mother. "You said she is an orphan and will listen to all my orders without any hesitation, but this girl is so shame less, she can't even compromise in wearing our Lehanga, and upon that she argues with me in front of everyone."

"It's not about sari Maa Ji,its my mother's last wish. " She gulped in and added, "I gave up my job ,my tradition, my hobbies in fact i completely gave up my self respect and ambition just to satisfy you and your mother" she said to Sahil.

"After all that I come here only to listen you are marrying just because you sympathize me as an orphan and it's not love. Tell me one thing Sahil is this marriage for love or sympathy on me" the bride looking girl asked the groom

Before he could say anything Kamini came between them. "Its only because of sympathy he has on you. You think Sahil is blind not to see girls who are more rich and beautiful in our community." Said Kamini proudly.

The bride cleared her tears on her face and smile at Sahil and Said "Thanks for the sympathy Mr.Sahil! Good Bye!" before she could leave Sahil caught her hand and looked into her eyes with pain, but in vain the damage has been done.

"Swara no.."he started but went dead with his mom's glare

With that she ran out of the room.

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To say shocked or astonished would be small word. Sanskaar was taken aback by the brides bold stand. He has never seen such a girl who has taken the best decision of her life so easily. Clearly he could see how she felt cheated by the groom. Every girl expects her mate to be the support of life and not a mother's son.

"How sad of the bride, she broke her marriage for a sari!" Laksh loosely commented as they started walking through the corridor.

Sanskaar looked at him with anguish, as to how judgemental one can be.

"I didn't expect you to be so narrow minded Laksh!"

"Its not me,its the the crowd in here are gossiping that" Before Sanskaar could reply, his phone started vibrating. "Yes Mr. Prasad. Hello? Hello? Can u here me!" shouted Sanskaar into the phone while walking through the corridor trying to catch the signals.

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When you get insulted by the person whom you have been fond of, it is no less than a stab in your heart. Yes Swara was hurt; it was not because of Sahil's mother but because of Sahil's indifference towards her. She had known him since years, trusted him and depended on him. And now he ended up trashing all her married life dreams. Although she never loved him to the fullest, but she was attached to him.

She ran as fast as she could into her room and collapsed on the floor. She now couldn't control her tears and started sobbing openly after the humiliation. At that point of time she really missed her parents, she really did.

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"Yes sir, now I can hear you. I just called you to inform that the new villa has been cleaned neatly and you can shift at any minute Mr. Khan."

Sanskaar was about to answer Prasad, but stopped when he heard a girl's sobs in the adjacent room.

"Um... Mr. Prasad I will talk to you later" with that he hung up the phone.

"Ma Baba I miss u so badly...Please come back... Please Ma... Plea...se..." It was the voice of the same girl, it was the voice of the bride. He felt extremely sorry for the poor girl. He peeped through the window, couldn't see her.

He walked up to the opened door pushed it silently ensuring not to disturb the girl. What he saw in front of his eyes, took his breath away. There was the most beautiful girl he has ever seen, who was weeping badly. As he kept staring at her, her dupatta from her head slipped, which made her hair dance in its own way. She was beyond beautiful. Her innocent face, stirred something in his heart. He was just mesmerized. As if in a trance he was about to step into the room, but stopped when he felt a tug on his shoulder. It was Laksh

"Sanskaar what are you doing here, did you forget you had to shift to the new house?"

"Oh yeah... Let's go!" with that he turned to leave after praying for the girl's well being.

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"Nice house Sanskaar! How did you find it by the way?" Laksh asked while unpacking the furniture.

"Just the local broker"

"Don't you think this house is too small for your range?" asked Laksh.

Sanskaar looked around, it was a cozy house with just three rooms in total. Although not big as Sanskaar's own house, still it had its beauty in it.

"Its more than enough for me Laksh" Answered Sanskaar while moving a table.

"Hmm... Any idea who stays in those two villas and especially the one adjacent to you?" Laksh said while peeping into the neighbourhood. This guy will never change, thought Sanskaar.

"Some girl it seems, the broker told me"

"GIRL? Man you're lucky!" he said while jumping on his feet.

Sanskaar rolled his eyes over his friend's eagerness and pulled him by the shoulder and warned not to do any mischief.

"I guess we are done, so Good night Bro meet you later, Ma must be waiting!" said Laksh while giving a brotherly hug to Sanskaar.

"Good night! Drive safe!" with that he closed the door.

He then cleaned the mess and dialed his Ma to tell that he has shifted to the new house. After that he prepared a mug of coffee and settled himself in the balcony. It was already midnight and the streets were deserted. The adjacent villa had still lights in one room, the room dead opposite to his balcony. He could easily see varied things in that room. He then suddenly saw a woman sitting beside the bed and hugging her knees. Her face wasn't clear; he stood up from his couch to get a better view. As he saw the girls face, he was spellbound.

Well you would surely be spell bound if your neighbour is none other than the girl, for whom you had developed a strange feeling on your first sight itself.

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A/N: Ignore the mistakes coz i didnt check

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with Love Vaishnavi!

Edited by Heartbeats.. - 9 years ago

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