Swasan OS { page number : 1 and 3} - Page 2

Originally posted by: Harmony...

Thanks a lot😃

I was out.. Soo I couldn't give proper comment for your writing dear.. I loved it dear your description about Sanskaar pain.. Swaras inner turmoil.. Were superb.. That final touch.. He calling her name.. She find solace in it just 👏 ...

Simply loved it...

With love...

Kam..

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

I was out.. Soo I couldn't give proper comment for your writing dear.. I loved it dear your description about Sanskaar pain.. Swaras inner turmoil.. Were superb.. That final touch.. He calling her name.. She find solace in it just 👏 ...

Simply loved it...

With love...

Kam..

Very beautiful and heart-touching os...write more...😊

@Akluvstory and @ria

Thanks for all the likes and comments in previous OS 😳

This OS is a light funny one.. I had posted this one in Swasan AT. Posting it here for my friend Aparna.. sorry I am a little late 😊

Do share your likes or dislikes about it.
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Situation : Same as the current track. Swara is having amnesia. She is staying in Maheshwari house.

Swasan room


Sanskaar is sleeping on the couch and Swara is shamelessly staring at him..

Swara ( in her mind) - waise dikhne mein itna bura nahi hai.. body achi hai, height achi hai, handsome hai, cute hai...

Suddenly she hears Sanskaar voice

Sanskaar- Ghurna band karo

Swara- Mera dimag kharab hai kya jo mein tumhe ghoorongi...Mein ghoor nahi rahi thi.. mein toh couch ke design ko dekh rahi thi.. acha hai
Sanskaar- * smiles sarcastically *

Swara ( thinking) - Apne aap ko pata nahi kya samajhta hai? waise mom ka chora handsome lagta hai smile karte waqt

Sanskaar- Bol do Mujhe pata hai ki mein handsome hoon.. aaj bhi ladkiyo ki line lagti hai mere piche . Tumse kahi zyada beautiful ladkiyo and bina nakre wali ladkiyo ki

Swara - Stop it Sanskaar. Tum aur Handsome.. mere daadaji tumse zyada handsome hai. aur mujhe to nhi dikh rhi koi ladkiyo ki line

Sanskaar - Oh really

Swara - Yes

Sanskaar- waise baki ladkiyon ki baat chodo, tum bhi to ladki ho, aur pichle 1 ghante se agar 1 ladki kisi ladke ko stare karegi toh yah woh ladka bahut handsome hai, ya toh us ladki ko use pyaar hai , ya to woh ladki pagal hai... ab pyaar to tum mujhse karti nahi.. handsome mein tumhe lagta nahi.. so only 3rd option bacha.. ki tum puri pagal ho.

Swara ( in full angry mode) - abhi patati hoon mein tumhe ki kaun pagal hai.. ruko tum abhi

She takes a pillow and hits him on face. and then they do a pillow fight while running like tom and jerry in their room.
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thanks for reading

Awesome part 😆
Loved it
I wish this same shows 😳

Originally posted by: sneharay

Lovely 😊

thank you for reading :)

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome part 😆
Loved it
I wish this same shows 😳

thanks 😳 I wish they show something much better than this.. thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Heart touching os

thank you :)