A Swara-Sahil scribble - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pitaji, fantastic job 👏👏
I didn't know you wrote poems.
And the beauty of unrequited love Perfectly described 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyna we can only hope otherwise sahil won't be any different from ragini nd kavita...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve


@bold above, with the track record of the CVs, I do not think such nuances can be handled. 😆

Achieving a balance between genuine efforts to have one's love returned (thus leading to somewhat slightly desperate acts to win the person's affections ) and an unhealthy fixation at obtaining the person of your desire is not within the CV's grasp.

I think most of us are ''jumping the gun' (no puns intended😉) but then I have very low expectations from the CVs.😭 Maybe we would be pleasantly surprised (A girl can hope😆)

Nyna



Indeed! Problem is there is no shade of grey...either you have stark white or pitch black...there are no in between, at least here on Indian soaps!

I for one would love if Sahil is grey, loves Swara to the moon and back but also has the balls to let her go towards her destination keeping behind only her memories! As you said Nyna...a girl can hope!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Pitaji, fantastic job 👏👏
I didn't know you wrote poems.
And the beauty of unrequited love Perfectly described 😃



I do write poetry my putri...but that is dwindles in single digits as I find paraphrasing easier! Anyways thank you Sru for reading this one!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

nyna we can only hope otherwise sahil won't be any different from ragini nd kavita...

True 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved this!! If well executed, this track would be very interesting. I agree that Sahil being grey rather than black would be a change. I don't want him to be another Ragini or Kavita.
I am looking forward to this track!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssroomani

I loved this!! If well executed, this track would be very interesting. I agree that Sahil being grey rather than black would be a change. I don't want him to be another Ragini or Kavita.

I am looking forward to this track!



Thank you for liking it so! Indeed if the track is well executed it will be a treat to watch for incomplete love stories have their own charm!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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To be candid , it is a post I had nearly decided not to give even a perfunctory glance to avoid the anger which might build up against sahil
But on reading I couldn't help thanking the serendipity that I happened to have read this and of course couldn't resist commenting either.
It is a gripping and poignant one...great job , and after reading this even I realized that I don't hate sahil at all ..till the cvs give a credible build-up for his obsession ( unlike the groundless one in case of lucky) and swara does not fall for him.

An agonizing and deep creation!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana_cool

To be candid , it is a post I had nearly decided not to give even a perfunctory glance to avoid the anger which might build up against sahil
But on reading I couldn't help thanking the serendipity that I happened to have read this and of course couldn't resist commenting either.
It is a gripping and poignant one...great job , and after reading this even I realized that I don't hate sahil at all ..till the cvs give a credible build-up for his obsession ( unlike the groundless one in case of lucky) and swara does not fall for him.

An agonizing and deep creation!👏


😆😆Well I could almost be poetic and put up a conclusion that this would have happened given the awesome-blossom title that I have put up! But truth be said it will be a refreshing change to see Sahil fall for Swara and then having it in him to let her go for her own sake! Anuj is brilliant actor and I believe it'll look great if Cv's indeed give him a character such as this!


One can love a person to the point of obsession but that doesn't necessarily means that they have to end up being all dark and evil! On a personal note I'd like to see a bitter-sweet story here!


Thank you for having liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meself


😆😆Well I could almost be poetic and put up a conclusion that this would have happened given the awesome-blossom title that I have put up! But truth be said it will be a refreshing change to see Sahil fall for Swara and then having it in him to let her go for her own sake! Anuj is brilliant actor and I believe it'll look great if Cv's indeed give him a character such as this!


One can love a person to the point of obsession but that doesn't necessarily means that they have to end up being all dark and evil! On a personal note I'd like to see a bitter-sweet story here!


Thank you for having liked it!



LOL...you are right..such terrible assumptions are a direct consequence of dangerous title🤣
never mind..every writer has a right to express himself/herself!

I second you...would love to see something different here...even grey sahil would suffice!
I hopelessly dig black( a prominent reason for my attraction to sanskar) but the condition is that the character has to be black(like ragini of maa -baba days) and not muddy brown!(like ragini of malkin drama)

Gave the examples just to elucidate my point further!😆

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