Bhar do jholi meri - swasan OS - Ml track - finding her.... Completed.

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Prologue- sanskaar lost swara on a cliff. She was assumed dead by all but sanskaar still believed that she is alright, she is alive, she is waiting for him. There on the other hand swara was with sahi. She could feel every time that someone loves her madly. She closed her eyes and could see his Charming eyes, his smile always made her heart beat faster but there was always his partial face seen she wanted to know him who was he, she always felt displeasant on her inability to see him.
It has been a month sanskaar tried to search for swara. People and even his own family considered him mad. Many times laksh have given him medicines secretly and took him home with him, in unconscious state.

Both of them now felt broken and one day sanskaar reaches the end of the river in search for swara where he ended up entering a mosque on advice of a fakir baba. Swara too comes there so as to pray for her mental peace..


Here we go...

Tere darbaar mein dil thaam ke woh aata hai
Jisko tu chaahe, hey Nabi tu bulaata hai
Tere dar pe sar jhukaaye main bhi aaya hoon
Jiski bigdi haaye Nabi chaahe tu banata hai

Sanskaar entered the mosque, he felt that today he will definitely find her .. He felt it was a message of God .. He had come here by chance to he will get his swara... Thinking this he entered there with devotion for the all mighty and trust on his love in his heart

Bhar do jholi meri ya Muhammad,
Laut kar main naa jaaunga khali (x4)

He sat with all other joining his hands... Waiting for this omnipresent power to resonpond to his continuous prayers..

Band deedon mein bhar daale aansu
Sil diye maine dardo ko dil mein (x2)

He closed his eyes and tears escaped from them telling the tail of pain, telling a tail of loosing his love all over again.. Telling a tail of his broken heart...

Jab talak tu bana de na tu bigdi
Dar se tere na jaaye sawaali

Although he had been suffering for long but this place seemed to have some vibes giving him signals of some things good that was going to happen...

Bhar do jholi meri ya Muhammad,
Laut kar main naa jaaunga khali
Khaali...

There were could forming in the sky, may be the heaven was preparing for the meeting of 2 lovers or may be was crying due to there long separation and pain.

Bhar do jholi.. aaka ji
Bhar do jholi.. hum sab ki
Bhar do jholi.. Nabi ji
Bhar do jholi meri Sarkar-e-Medina
Laut kar main naa jaaunga khali

He was there sitting and waiting for him to take away his pain.. And give what he deserved IE. To meet his love either here on earth or may be there in skies close him

Khojte khojte tujhko dekho
Kya se kya, ya Nabi ho gaya (x2)

He was changed now all his charm happiness brightness was gone... The day he lost her , he lost himself all over again...

Bekhabar dar-ba-dar phir raha hoon
Main yahan se wahan ho gaya hoon (x2)

He have been searching for her since long on the banks of the river and this was one of them.. It seemed like the end..

De de ya Nabi mere dil ko dilaasa
Aaya hoon door se main hoke ruhaasa (x2)

He had an intuition, either he will be getting her or will meet her in skies...

But he felt the Almighty hinting him this is the end...

End of this worst face of his life... In either way...

Kar de karam Nabi, mujhpe bhi zara sa
Jab talak tu.. jab talak tu..
Panaah de na dil ki
Dar se tere na jaaye sawaali

He had decided today this omnipresent power have to answer his questions.. Have to put an end to his suffering... Have to stop punishing him for no reasons ... And till he won't be answered he was not going to back off ...

Bhar do jholi meri ya Muhammad
Laut kar main na jaaunga khaali

Today it seems his love was winning over fate .. She entered here.. God was listening to his prayers...

Bhar do jholi meri Tajdaar-e-Medina
Laut kar main na jaaunga khaali

She was too here to question this power about her unknown pain.. Her dreams which r troubling her .. Aching her heart...

Bhar do jholi meri ya Muhammad
Laut kar main na jaaunga khaali

Today these two had bombarded h with questions.. And were waiting for him to answer...

Jaanta hai na tu kya hai dil mein mere
Bin sune gin rahaa hai na tu dhadkane (x2)

Winds blew faster now ... The atmosphere turned dusty... Seems he is testing them once more...

Aah nikli hai toh chand tak jaayegi
Tere taaron se meri duaa aayegi (x2)

There hearts had pain.. They were already broken by Strom's bigger than this ... They had enough courage to make him answer at any cost ... There pain pinched him as well...

Aye Nabi haan kabhi toh subah aayegi
Jab talak tu sunega na dil ki
Dar se tere na jaaye sawaali

This time they were winning their love was winning over their fate... Clouds started roaring.. Lightning was striking... It started raining ... But neither he moved ab inch nor she moved back...

Bhar do jholi meri ya Muhammad
Laut kar main na jaaunga khaali

She entered there n sat next to sanskaar.. He felt the winds moving faster.. She felt shivers...

De taras kha taras mujhpe aaka
Ab lagaa le tu mujhko bhi dil se (x2)

People around saw them getting drenched and hence shouted breaking their question answer session with the Almighty..

Jab talak tu mila de na bichhdi
Darr se tere na jaaye sawaali
Bhar do jholi meri ya Muhammad
Laut kar main na jaaunga khaali

They both got up heavy heartedly but her leg sliped due to the wetness, they collided and fell on the hard floor below them.. Her hair covered her face , when she noticed his eyes ... They were same as her dream man... She removed her hair from her face n his lips curled into a smile... Yes it matched with the smile of the man of her dreams.. They were thanking him for this.. She slowly was trying to complete the face .. Her eyes had a light..

Bhar do jholi.. aaka ji
Bhar do jholi.. hum sab ki
Bhar do jholi.. Nabi ji
Bhar do jholi meri Sarkar-e-Medina
Laut kar main naa jaaunga khali

His condition was no different he cupped her face , happiness evident from his eyes... She was about to complete the face, her heart felt dancing when she fainted in his arms ... He lifted her up .. And left for MM ... He was more than happy to see her back.. He thanked God for returning her to him.. Unaware of the surprises planned for him... The pain which was waiting for him .. He drove with her... All happy to get her back...

Dum dum Ali Ali dum Ali Ali
Dum Ali Ali dum Ali Ali...


So guys this was something from my side on ml track .. Pls Do read n leave ur comments they matter a lot..
❤️
Harshita...




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Brilliant os harshita 👏
Loved it
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Brilliant os harshita 👏
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Mind blowing!!!Awesome!! Amazing OS!! 👏 Could feel the pain of both Sanskar and Swara.😭 And my heart was dancing with joy when the met each other!!!Loved this OS so much!!! And thanks for the PM.😃
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beautiful story. loved it. 😳
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Lovely os 👏 ... n thanx for the pm

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