New FF:Hidden in your HEARTBEATS! (Chapter 3-Page 3 UPDATED) - Page 2

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RP was pacing around the MM hall and waiting for Sanskar impatiently.

RP (to Sujata)- Kahan hai tumhaara nalaayak beta?

Suju- AAjayega jee, aap zara shaant ho jaaie.

Rp- Dekho Sujata agar wo jald se jald nahi aaya toh mein...

"Toh Kya?", they here Sanskar's voice and turn to look at the stairs and see Sanskar along with Laksh standing there.

Both the brothers come down.

Rp- Toh aagaya tu? Chal thik hai ab bata ki subah jo tune tamasha khada kiya tha uske liye tujhe kya saza di jaaye?

Suddenly, Sanskar gets tensed and looks at Laksh who looks down.

Suju- Lekin kiya kya isne.

DP- Mein batata hoon...

They look at Dp as he descends down the stairs..(DP BG music place😆)

Dp- Aaj Agarwals ke ghar mei...

Dp and Rp along with Laksh are in the Agarwal villa and Mr. Agarwal and Dp are talking.

DP- Toh hum iss rishtey ko pakka samjhe>?

Mr. Agarwal- Jee agar aapki taraf se haan hai toh...

Just then they are stopped by a girl's voice calling Laksh. They look at the door and see a girl standing there and emotionally looking at Laksh. Laksh gets shocked and stands up. (Yellow flash on everyone's face😆). The girl comes running and hugs Laksh and says...

The girl- Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho Laksh. Tum mujhse vada kiya tha ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho aur mujhi se shaadi karoge. Tumne mujhe itna bara dhoka kyun diya.

Laksh is completely bewildered and looks at Ayesha (The girl who Laksh had come to see) whomis looking at him with teary eyes. The girl keeps on talking emotionally and telling Laksh to not betray her as she loves him so much). Laksh looks at DP and nods his head in NO!

Just then Sanskar enters followed by Ayesha's mom.

Sanskar- Kya Laksh? Tu aisa kaise kar sakta hai kam se kam iss bechari ke baare mei toh soch leta.

Saying this he goes and sits in the sofa where Ayesha is sitting. He caresses her face and says..

Sanskar- Dekh toh iss bichari ko kitni masoom kitni sweet hai. (Then he faces Ayesha and says) Waise tum itni beautiful ho toh Laksh ke piche kyun padi ho. Tumhe toh koi bhi accha ladka mil jayega toh phir is Bina Laksh wale Laksh ke piche kyun pade ho.

Ayesha jerks Sanskar and stands up..

Ayesha- Thats it. Laksh mujhe tumse aisi umeed nahi thi. I m gettin out of here.

Ayesha leaves. Mr. Agarwal turns to Sanskar who is drining the juice given to RP.

Mr. Agarwal- Waise beta mujhe puri kahaani samajh mei aagayi hai. Aur bilkul thik kahan tumne meri beti ko aur bhi kayi aache ladke mil jaayenge. (turns to DP) Maaf kar dijiyega Durga Prasad jee! Lekin hum aapke bete se apni beti ka rishta nahi jod sakte..

Black and Whitre light with thunderstorms in DP and RP's face...😆 While Sanskar looks at the girl clinging on Laksh and feels strange and tells her to leave Laksh. She leaves him..

The camera showa the faces of all family members looking at Sanskar in awe. Just then Suju speaks.

Suju- Toh phir kahan hai woh ladki?

RP- Are ladki toh tab milti na agar uska Laksh ke saath koi rishta hota!

Uttara- Matlab?

RP- Matlab ki woh ladki sirf ek set-up thi Laksh ka rishta tudwaane ke liye. Aur woh set-up ka idea mere uss bete ka tha jo meri aan, maan aur shaan...bilkul nahi hai!

Sanskar looks down. RP turns to him.

RP- Tune apne bhai ka rishta tudwaaya hai na ab tu hi uske liye dulhan dhundke layega..

Yellow light on Sanskar, Laksh, Uttara, DP, AP, Suju, Adarsh and Parineeta's face...😆

Suju- yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? Mera beta koi matrimonial site hai kya jo ab ladki dhundne jaayega?

RP- nahi jaa skta na toh thik hai ab yeh ghar se bahar jaayega.

Sanskar is shocked as RP holds his arm and pushes him towards the stair and he falls down. Laksh unable to see anymore says.

Laksh- Ruk jaayiye Chacha ji!

Again yellow light on everyone's face😆

Laksh- Bhai ne kuch nahi kiya! Meine hi usse madad maangi thi kyunki mujhe yeh shaadi nahi karni thi.

AP- Yeh tu kya keh raha hai bata?

Laksh- Bilkul sahi keh raha hoon Maa. (Goes to DP and joins his hands) I m sorry papa, lekin mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni. Mujhe kamyaab banna hai bilkul aapke aur chacha jee ki tarah.

DP now gets completely angry and his volcano bursts.

DP- Tum dono bhaio ne iss ghar ko aur mujhe samajh ke kya rakha hai. Ek mere faisle ke khilaap jaata hai aur dusra uski baat maanne ke liye bhari mehfil mei meri naak kata ke aata hai. (Turning to Laksh) Tujhe kaamyaab banna hai na. Toh thik hai aajse tu apni zindagi khud jiyega. Asjse tu Laksh Maheshwari nahi sirf Laksh hai. Kya lagta hai tujhe ki kaamyaab banna itna aasaan hai? Toh thik hai banke dikha kaamyaab. Do mahine, sirf do mahino mei mujhe 20000 hazaar rapee kamake dikha mein maan lunga ki tujhme kaamyaab banne ki himmat hain.

Laksh is shocked for sometime and then says- Thik hai papa.

Saying this he goes towards his room.

Sanskar- Yeh galat hai badepapa, galti meine ki hai saza mujhe milni chaihiye toh mere hisse ki saza Laksh ko kyun de rahe ho aap.

Just then Laksh returns and all get shocked to see him carry a travel bag. he comes to DP and says.

Laksh- Chinta mat kijiye papa. Iss bag mei sirf kuch kapde hai. Aapke ek bhi paise leke nahi jaa raha hoon mein. Vada karta hoon ki jab agli baar iss ghar mei lautunga toh apni mehnat ki kamayi apne saath lekar hi lautunga. Bye papa.

Saying tjis he takes blessings from DP, AP, RP and Suju and leaves while AP looks proudly. Sanskar doesn't feel it right and leaves too.

Sanskar is frantically driving his car and thinking of the recent events. He looks down feeling irritated. Just then an old lady comes infront of his car and Sanskar tries to stop his car. But it doesn't but as soon as it nears the lady. A girl comes and pushes the lady away from the car and just then Sanskar's car stops. He comes out and asks the lady and the girl whether they r fine?

The girl turns and it is Swara! Swara looks angrily at him and gets angry.

Swara- Excuse me Mister, agar aapko gaadi chalaani nahi aati toh chalaate kyun hai aap?

Sanskar- I m sorry.

Swara- Sorry? Sorry keh dene se aapki driving sudhar jaayegi kya? Aapko pata hai? Aap jaise logon ki wajah se naa hamaare desh mei accidents badh rahe hain. Waise isme galti aapki nahi hai, aapki parents ki hai jo bachho ki quality dekhe bager unhe car ya bike kharid ke dete hain.

Sanskar gets angry- Dekho tum personal ho rahi ho!

Swara- Toh kya karenge aap? Gaadi aap galat chalaao aur galti meri are aap jaise logon ke tarak toh aankh uthake bhi nahi dekhti mein. Personal hone ki baat toh dur hai.

Saying this she helps the old lady get up and turns to go but once again turns to Sanskar and says, "Waise Mister, agli baar agar ho sake toh gaadi dhere se chalaayiega kyunki auro ki baat toh baadme aati hain lekin apni jaan ki chinta sabko karni chahiye. Overspeeding se sabse zyada khatra aapki jaan ko hi hoga.."

Saying this she goes away along with the old lady while Sanskar stands angry as well as surprised seeing her getting angry at him and at the same time showing concern for him.

Laksh is walking and at the same time speaking to Sanskar on his phone.

Laksh- Nahi yaar! Abhi tak koi rehne ki jagah nahi mili.

Sanskar- Tu kahe toh mein kuch madad kar du?

Laksh- Nahi yaar, teri madad lete lete bore ho chuka hoon. Ab khud kuch karna chahta hoon, Accha thik hai bohut raat hogayi hai tu so ja. Good night!

Sanskar- Good Night!

Laksh keeps the phone starts walking again when he sees a girl standing near a bridge and concludes that she is going to suicide. He runs towards her and pulls her and she lands on his arms in bridal style. She looks at him irritatingly while Laksh gets mesmerised by her beauty.

Screen freezes on Laksh's face.

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So here is chapter 2, hope u all like it!😉

Laksh keeps on staring at the girl until she shouts at him to put her down. He comes back to his senses and leaves her and she falls on the ground. The girl gets up.

Girl- How dare u? tumhaari himmat kaise hui mujhe niche giraana ki?

Laksh- I m sorry Miss..

Girl- Ragini.

Laksh- Miss Ragini. Mein toh aapko bas bachaane ki koshish kar raha tha.

Ragini- Bachane ki?

Laksh- haan woh aap suicide karne jaa rahi thi na?

Ragini (laughs)- Mein suicide nahi kar rahi thi, woh actually mein aise hi yahaan khadi kuch soch rahi thi, thodi pareshaan thi. Meri bachpan ki aadat hai.

Laksh (feeling strange)- Oh aacha, I am sorry. Galti ho gayi.

Ragini- It's OK!

Laksh- By the way, aap pareshaan thi hi kyun?

Ragini- Woh kya hai na mere papa ko ek paying guest chahiye, woh hamaari thodi financial problems chal rahi hai toh isliye mein subha se unke liye paying guest dhoond rahi thi lekin mujhe koi mila hi nahi.

Laksh- Kya? Paying Guest? AApke Papa ko sachme paying guest chahiye?

Ragini- Haan.

Laksh- Toh mein hoon na, actually mujhe bhi ek ghar ki talaash thi. Mein banunga aapka Paying guest.

Ragini- Sach. Deal...

She forwards her hand for a handshake.

Laksh shakes her hand and says "Done".

Ragini- Toh der kis baat ki, aap chaliye na mere saath. Lekin haan, mere ghar ko dekh ke shock mat hojayiye ga OK?

Laksh thinks that her house must be some humble dwellings and then prays to God to support him and tells "OK" and goes along with Ragini.

Sanskar is sitting in his room and thinking about the recent events and Laksh leaving the house. Just then, RP enters his room and sits besides him.

RP- Kya soch rahe ho Sanku?

Sanskar- Dad, kuch nahi bas yeh ki aaj jo kuch bhi hua wo thik nahi tha. I mean Laksh ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Aur waise bhi, galti toh meri bhi thi na? Toh sirf Laksh ko saza kyun mili?

RP- tu kehna kya chahta hai?

Sanskar- Dad, I mean, pure din mein ghar se bahar rehta hoon. Awargi karta phirta hoon aur Laksh...woh toh hamesha aap sabki baat maanta hai. Bussiness sambhaalta hai. Toh use apne pariwaar se door rahne ki itni bari saza kyun mili?

RP-Toh thik hai, tu bhi zimedaar ban jaa.

Sanskar- matlab?

RP- Matlab kal se Office join kar le. Laksh ki jagah tu bussiness sambhaal.

Sanskar- par Dad, mujhse yeh sab nahi hoga.

RP- kyun?

Sanskar- Agar mein nahi kar paya toh?

RP stands up and goes toward Sanskar who is standing near the window.

RP- Beta, tu mera beta hain, tu zaroor kar payega mujhe tujhpe pura bharosa hain.

Sanskar huns RP and says- Thanks Dad.

RP breaks the hug and puts his head on Sanskar's head and says- Tu kamyaab ban beta, tera yeh Dad, hamesha tere saath rahega. Promise.

Sanskar smiles. RP wishes him Good Night and leaves. Sanskar looks out of the window.

Ragini brings Laksh near her house gate and saya- This is my house!

Laksh gets shocked seeing such a huge haveli and is in awe. Ragini notices him.

Ragini- mujhe pata hain tum kya soch rahe ho. Lekin is ghar ko dekh hamaara financial status conclude ma karo. Actually yeh mere pardada ke pardada ka ghar hain. Matlab hamaara khaandaani ghar. Lekin andar se yeh bilkul middle class type hain. Chalo.

Ragini pulls Laksh and gets him in.

Ragini- Ma! Papa! Dekhi mein kise laayi hoon.

Shekhar and Shomi come down and get surprised to see Laksh.

Shomi- Bata yeh kon hai?

Ragini- Paying Guest!

Shekhar- Paying Guest?

He comes towards Laksh whereas Laksh is scared to see Shekhar's strict face and lowers his eyes and looks towards the ground.

Shekar- Kon ho tum?

Laksh forwards his hand and says- Laksh Ma...mera matlab Laksh Mathur.

Shekhar- Karte kya ho tum?

Laksh- Jee mein yahaan job dhoondne aaya hoon.

Shekhar- Sirf job dhundne aaye ho ya kuch aur bhi baat hain?

LAksh looks at Ragini.

Ragini- Offo Papa, aap bhi na. Kya enquiry karne lag gaye hain. Chodiye na. Main baat yeh hain ki yeh aapka paying guest banne ko taiyaar hain. Aur kya chahiye?

Shekhar calms down and says- thik hain! Meri beti ne keh diya hain toh tum yahaan reh sakte ho.

Mishti, isse aska kamra dikha do. Aur haan (he turns towards LAksh ) Sirf PAying Guest banke hi rehna. usse zyada aur kuch nahi, samjhe.

Shekhar leaves. Ragini too. Shomi comes towards Laksh and says- Chalo.

Tey are on the way towards Laksh's room.

Shomi- tOh job dhoondne aaye ho tum na?

LAksh- Haan.

Shomi- Waise tumhaare Papa kya karte hain?

LAksh gets tensed and says- Woh ek mechanic hai.

After telling this he imagines DP hitting him with a rad and shakes his head.

By the time they reach the room.

Shomi- yeh raha tumhaara kamra. Yahaan pe tumhe tumhaare zaroorat ki saari cheezen mil jayengi. Good Night.

She leaves. LAksh enters the room and locks the door.

LAksh- Mechanic? Seriously? Papa aur mechanic? Pagal hogaya hain tu Laksh. Kya zaroorat thi jhoot bole ki jo tune aapne Bussiness Tycoon baap ko Mechanic bana diya.

Laksh kicks the bed and hurts his foot and shouts.

Laksh- Lagta hain aajka din hi kharaab hain. NO problem!! U will manage it or...not!

Saying this he lies down on the bed and sleeps instantly.

AP and Sujata are in a temple. They finish their prayers and come out. Just as AP is about to wear her sandals, her lag slips and she is about to fall but a girl and Sujata hols her. The girl is Swara. Swara makes her stand and brings her snadsls and her makes her wear it. AP smiles.

Swara- Aap thik toh hain na Aunty?

AP- Jee beta, bohut bohut shukriya.

Swara- Arey, Thanks kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain , aap toh meri MAa jaisi ho.

AP and Sujata both get impressed with her. The three of them come down the temple and start walking but as AP has hurt her foot a little so Suju and Swara help her to get to the car. Swara makes AP sit in the car. AP once again tells her thanks and she nods her head and goes away.

Suju- Kitni pyaari ladki hain na woh jiji.

AP- Haan Sujata, bilkul sahi. Bhagwaan uska bhala kare.

Sanskar is getting ready for office the first time. He comes down for breakfat. All her shocked to see him except RP.

Sanskar- Kya sab aise muh khol ke kya dekh rahe ho. Meine office jaane ke laayak nahi hoon kya.

Everyone nods in yes. Sanskar ignores them and sit sbesides RP and has his breakfast.

RP- Toh taiyaar.

Sanskar- Yes Dad!

The father-son duo leaves for office along with DP and Adarsh.

Suju sits down on the sofa holding her head- Jiji' aaj suraj kahaan se utha hain? Mera beta office gaya hain!

Parineeta- Haan Chachi, mujhe bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hain ki SANSKAR office gaya hain.

AP- Mujhe toh ab tak yakeen nahi ho raha hain ki yeh sab sach hain.

Uttara- Yeh zaroor koi sapna hain. Please koi mujhe pinch karo.

Parineeta pinchs her.

Uttara- AAh!! Itni bhi zor se pinch karne ko nahi bola.

All of them have a laugh and hugs Uttara.

The screen freezes on their smiling faces.

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