New FF:Hidden in your HEARTBEATS! (Chapter 3-Page 3 UPDATED)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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As I said that I will soon be starting a new FF.. so here it goes...enjoy...😉


HIDDEN IN YOUR HEARTBEATS...!

Plot..

Sanskar Maheshwari, the carefree and often referred to, by his father, as the useless boy meets the beautiful, smart and cunning, Swara Singhania who gives him a reason to live and completely changes his world. Starting their journey with immense hatred as their parents tend to be the known as the most popular business rivals who are always at loggerheads with each other. Born to hate but destined to love they face tremendous difficulties when their love becomes a curse for their family. Faced by constant pain yet their love remains inseparable...until...
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The real story begins which marks the end yet the beginning of another story...
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THE STORY OF LOVE, REVENGE AND DESTINY...

Now it lies upon them to find out...What is HIDDEN in their HEARTBEATS????
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So. here I am presenting the plot of my first FF...
Do tell me did u all like it?😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index

Plot- Page 1
Chapter 1- Page 2
Chapter 2- Page 3
Edited by swaragini7 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow very interesing Intro..what happened six years ago eagerly waiting for the next.if possible PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kushimian89

wow very interesing Intro..what happened six years ago eagerly waiting for the next.if possible PM me

Thanks for likingg it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Quite a different concept but interesting too. Update Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start 😊 Update soon can't wait to know what happened 6 years ago
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It's simply awesome great start and different concept excited to read ahead
Plz do continue and plz pm me the next parts if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start !!!

Do PM when u update next!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

The Journney of love begins...

"SANSKAR MAHESHWARI...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", Ram Prasad called out to his 23 year old son. By the look on his face, u could say that he is extremely angry. He was wearing a sherwani and was followed by his elder brother, Durga Prasad Maheshwari. Hearing his shout, AP and Sujata come out and asks him nervously as both the brothers looked angry and sad. Just then they look at the stairs and see Laksh standing their with a depressed look.

They both get more tensed and ask their respective husbands as what happened?

RP- Kya Hua? Where is Ur Son? Kaha hai voh Kutte ki aulaad...!!
Suju- Are yeh kya ji.. Apne aap ko aisa math bola kijiye.. Sanskar bahaar gaya hai..apne ek meeting keliye.
RP- Accha. Toh tumne bataya nahi ki tumhaare bete ki meeting Agarwals ke ghar mein thi jahan hum Laksh ka rishta lekar gaye the..
AP- Yeh aap kya bol rahe hai.
DP- Joh bol raha hai bilkul thik bol raha hai. Agarwals hamaare bachpan ke dost the. Kitni umeed se unhone apni beti ka rishta Laksh se karvaya tha lekin aeem moke par Sanskar ne aake sab kuch barbaad kar diya.
Suju- Ka kiya Maahra Chhore ne?
RP- Yeh tum apne nikamme bete se hi puche lo. Kahan hai voh bandar ka baccha.
Suju- Jee aap firse apne aap ko aisa mat kaha kijiye..
RP- Tum meri baat chodo aur abhi isi waqt apne awaara, lafanga, loafer bete ko phone karo aur kaho use ki abhi ghar aaye. Voh bhi JALD SE JALD!!!

Suju gets scared and dials Sanskar no. But he doesn't pick up the call.

Suju- Jee voh phone nahi utha raha hai.
RP- Toh thik hai, Laksh!
Laksh- Jee Chacha ji..
RP- Beta tu abhi isi waqt jaa aur usse lekar aa..
Laksh- Jee.

Laksh comes out of MM and thinks, "Bhai, tu kahan hai yaar, aur aise bekaar ke kaam kyun karta hai ki khud hi musibat mein par jaaye. Kahaan hai tu?" he starts fake crying and gets in his car and drives away.

Location: On a dance club

A young boy was busy flirting with some of the dancers when all of a sudden his friend calls out his name, " Oye Sanskar, tere Baap ka temper high hai. Abhi abhi Laksh ka call aaya tha. Tujhe jald se jald ghar bulaaya hai"
Yes! it is our Hero Sanskar Maheshwari!!
Sanskar- Arre, kyun fikr kar raha hai . Voh mere papa hai aur unhe bhi pata hai ki chahe woh jitni bhi koshish kar le apna gussa chupaane ki lekin mein unhi ka beta hoon aur tab tak ghar nahi jaunga jab tak unka gussa thanda nahi ho jaata"

Location; Outside dance club

A girl dressed in a lehenga with a shawl covering the top part of her dress and covering her head says to another girl, "Tu sure hai na ki woh yehi hai?"
2nd girl- Haa bilkul mein 100 percent sure hoon Swara ki woh yahi hai. Tu plz mera kaam kar de. Plz...tu jaanti hai na ki agar main wahan gayi toh mera bhai mujhe dekh lega aur fir papa mujhe pure mahine ke liye kamre mein bandh karke rakhege. Tu plz kisi bhi tarah yeh phone Shewta ko deke aa plz warna woh bhi musibat mei par jaayegi"
Swara- Acha acha thik hai...lekin agar mein pakdi gayi na toh tujhe nahi chodungi..

Saying this she covers her face with the shawl and goes in.

Location- Inside the club

Sanskar is talking with his friends when a lady comes and tries to flirt with him. He teases her and she smiles and moves away. Sanskar once again calls her and asks her to dance and she gives him salaam and goes away on the stage and starts dancing on the song "Ghaagra". After sometime Sanskar too joins her and they both start dancing joyfully.

In between Swara meets Shewta and gives her the phone. Shewta hugs her and thanks. Swara smiles and starts going away.

She comes down and sees the whole club joyfully enjoying Sanskar and the lady's dance. She stops for sometime and stares at them and then once again covers her head and starts going while Sanskar keeps on dancing merrily.
The screen freezes on Sanskar, Swara and Laksh's faces.

Precap:

RP- 'Teri wajah se tere bhai ki Shaadi tuti hai ab tu hi apne bhai ke liye Dulhan dhundke laayega.'
Sanskar and all the other family members stand shocked.

Swara and Sanskar meet.

Ragini's entry.

Laksh leaves the house.
Edited by swaragini7 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome dear... 👍🏼
Rp & suju's conversation about sanky was hilarious.
Update the nxt oart soon.

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