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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey dearest Nyna,🤗
Awesome update!!!👍🏼 Loved RagLak's moment.😊 Finally Ragini forgave Laksh.😉 Their kiss.😳 Ragini's reason not to have a joint wedding was so good and touchy.😃😳 RagLak again kissed.😆☺️ Liked them teasing each other.😆 Loved they way Sanskar made Ragini understood her fear that AP doesn't like her so much.😳 Now finally my SwaSan.😃 SwaSan had a lovely conversation.😃 O wow!!!! Sanskar saw Swara at party and instantly was attracted towards her!!!😃😳 But Dadi!! He couldn't meet her due to Dadi.😆 SwaSan r indeed soulmate!!!😳 And loved their kiss at the end!!!😳☺️☺️ Loved the update so much!!❤️ Update the epilogue soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.


Dear Aheli,

Glad to know you loved the update and the RagLak moments😊. Ragini had to forgive Lakshya, he was a changed leaf and everyone had already forgiven him, but then he never held that against her, just waited patiently for her, so how much longer could she hold back😉.
Ragini not wanting a joint wedding, I so hated that in the show and now since this is my story, I decided not to have a joint wedding. And then she had to kiss Lakshya as he was not happy having to wait for her, which did work😆
Sanskaar and Ragini are good friends so obviously he would understand her fears and was the best person to allay them.
Sanskaar and Swara - whether you call it the soulmate bond or a cosmic connect, they are meant to be together - whether somebody comes in between or the circumstances are not right.

Epilogue - maximum over the weekend.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nyna

I have been postponing my comment since yday. Goodbyes are very painful dear. I hate to comment on the last chapter of any work. Wish it goes on and on...
Nyna what can I say, the SS was as sweet as the recipes and title , it had. An altogether fresh plot different from the series, interestingly laid out with a sweet swara, sanskar and Ragini. All the characters be it the spoil brat laksh ,strict dadi or even the toughest devil all had some innate goodness in them. None of the characters were evil. Yet you managed to keep our attention glued to it. I loved the way you ended each chapter.Calm and serene.I am sure you are a person who are as sweet as the characters in the story.please write more.
Love you, Veena.


Dear Veena,

Goodbyes are hard - that it true- but then they mean we could meet again - over a story you write or maybe a tale I pen or a fable that is woven by the brilliant writers in this forum.😊

And I am on the top of the world when you say the story was as sweet as the title, because that is exactly what I had intended, everyone in my tale had to be sweet, loads of it or maybe a pinch of it, but sweet they had to be. We have enough bitterness in real lives and the serial has downright evil senseless characters😆
Calm and serene - I am 😳☺️😳☺️

Writing more - yup - currently drafting out another SS/FF - Forgotten Memories - will start posting after I have a draft of the complete story in place.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Nyna 🤗

So we have come to the end of this story😭 but chalo at least we have the epilogue to look forward to😃

Yes - the end of the tale - and the Epilogue to completely wrap it up😊

OK now tell me Nyna, do you love Ragz more than Swara? (current show scenario doesnt count -_-) Because I loved how you have portrayed Ragz in this SS. In fact forget Swara, I liked her more than Sunny!😲😆 What a genuine girl...I cannot stop myself from repeating this😳 I loved her for asking for some time & then asking SwaSan to not wait for her in the last chapter & just when I thought she couldnt get any more perfect in this chapter she refuses to have a joint wedding. And the reasons she gives...👏 I love her...thats all I can say at this moment😆

Do I love Ragini more than Swara - that is a very difficult question😆 - but yes I find her layered complex character very very very fascinating- (completely overlooking most of her characterisation in the serial - she has been butchered beyond recognition) and unpredictable too - especially when compared to the sweet and selfless Swara with her always ready to forgive attitude (an admirable virtue but sometimes very exasperating one - if you get my drift😉) So I let myself go when I wrote this tale and as I wrote on Shru's post, a part of me wondered if I was writing a little too much about Ragini for a tale that was supposed to be only about SwaSan😊 But it is the ultimate compliment I can get, as a writer, when someone like you says that you liked Ragini more than Sunnyboy☺️☺️

Her reasons for the joint wedding were irrefutable and her not wanting one was what any girl would want - a rare minority would want to share their very special day with another couple


So I was right😡 Had Daadi not come that day SwaSan would have met so many years ago😡 Daadi 😡 😡 😡 And then neither of them would have had the painful experiences of Kavita & Lakshya & could have crooned about being each other's first & everlasting love😳 But chalo, like the song goes, mil jaate hai jo bane ek duje ke vaaste!😳

Oh, yes, and so says Sunny boy also - if Dadi had not come when she did, they would have known each other a little longer - but then they were not the people they are now, so maybe they might not have even clicked - sometimes even when the people are right the timing is not - so I think if they had met then, they would still have a longer and tougher journey to reach where they have reached today. But as the Bard says - "All is well that ends well," and they finally are where they belong - with each other😊


Dear Shruti,

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love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bennet.Lizzy

Res🤗

Dear Nyna 🤗

Thankyou. For chapter 11. Have been waiting for it badly. Though I'm not so happy for it indicates the approaching end of some really delectable servings from Nyna's Kitchen. 😳 They will be really missed.
I'm sure in the coming days whenever I chance upon a hot cup of cappuccino/fresh bake of cookies/ those iced cupcakes I'll always remember this place. With rows of tables, bathing in ambient sunlight, a touch of rain, mixed with aromas of coffee, cocoa, butter, vanilla and strawberries. These will be forever cherished.
And so will be your Swasan and raglak. May be ill even look at the those serving ladies too and find for any semblance to a particular Mrs Das. 😊
Believe me, I have this image of the place so strongly printed into my memory. 😊

And when I read the above (actually re read it, a number of times😳) I had a big goofy smile plastered over my face and this is how I have spent the last couple of days:


After all, there can be no greater compliment that being told that my tale is imprinted in your mind, in a nice way too.😳

And now coming to the tale.

Ragini needs to be applauded here undoubtedly. Firstly, for the way she stood up against the idea of a shared wedding and secondly for putting it out so aptly and with measured words as to why she is not okay with it. She is such a sweet heart and I can't stop loving her more everytime she does one of those bold moves of hers.

Ragini - I am absolutely fascinated with her (notwithstanding that it is SwaSan that I ship😉) and detested the way the serial butchered her. She became unbearable to watch from that malkin track. True to her character, she has grown from being girl who silently bemoaned her life at Dadi's house to a mature woman who knows what she wants and what needs to be done - a very balanced individual who is indeed quite lovable. And her reasons for not wanting a joint wedding, nobody could refute them😆

She really loves swara a lot. And Sanskaar is much more than a friend or jethji. It's a brotherly bond. This Sanskaar and Ragini bond doesn't ever stop to sweetly surprise me everytime you bring them into picture. The way he saw right into her apprehension and picked up the right words to lay off her insecurities while not flinching away from giving her the facts and also reassuring her that till then , till Annapoorna accepts her for what she is, she has them who love her so much. Such a sweet brother Sanskaar is. Lovely piece of conversation that was.

Ragini here loves her sister above everything else, maybe excepting Sanksaar. For her, he is a best friend, a brother and a father figure all rolled into one - and one that is completely reciprocated by him. Which is why he knew why she was scared and also what to tell her to put her mind at ease. That is the best bond two people can share - honesty to state the facts and empathy to instill courage to face the truth. Most would have simply brushed off her concerns in a bid to allay her fears, but admitting that she is right and yet giving her the courage to understand that her fears, though not baseless, would be overcome with time and the love of the other family members - that is something only Sanskaar could do.

Lakshya did come a long way again. Knowing exactly what to do. Proving himself as sanskar's bro. I loved how Ragini said that to her self. And the monologue remembering sanskar's words. The woman is so strong. Cvs should take a leaf I say. Really commendable .

Lakshya has come a long way - made a little easy as he had a role model in Sanskaar to emulate and a very strong reason - he had win over Ragini. And Ragini, how could she not do what her best friend says, once she realised that Lakshya had redeemed himself, all she had to do was to let him know that he was forgiven. Guess she took the saying, "read my lips" as a literal way of letting him know what she wanted.😉

I loved the Swasan conversation. They way he divulged the little secret he carried around all these days, just a day before wedding. the hole conversation reminded me of the dialogue Sanskaar says to shomi on the night of karwachauth. "These little things bring happiness to us. we do them out of love , So in that case why would I not believe in them". He didn't believe in soulmate but deep with in he knew that she is the one. And if agreeing to her theory brings her happiness he would then happily do it. But still he would have been happier to have met them the same day too.. But swara immediately jumps in taking away that little disappointment, stating that may be they are destined to meet this way after learning from their mistakes. I observe that try are so complementing here. In there reassurances while the words themselves reflect how deeply they love each other.

The SwaSan conversation - it did bring so many possibilities - right? What would have happened if they had met that day? Maybe if Dadi had dragged Ragini out first, would she have fallen for Lakshya ? What would that mean? So many questions ???
And Sanskaar's disbelief in the soulmate concept is a reflection of him - practical and down to earth. But then he will never deny that both he and Swara are where they are meant to be - together. So it would be more of a disagreement on a conceptual basis. And as you rightly noted, the moment Sanskaar states wistfully that if only they had met earlier, an echo of her soulmate concept, Swara turns out to be practical and comments that even if they did, they might have had an even more arduous journey to reach where they are today. So maybe they should simply be glad that they are finally together.

Is there a chapter on wedding. Can't we have a wedding and then an epilogue?? I'll miss these Nyna .. So badly.. But again I tell myself may be there a chocolate fudge cake coming. Or even a death by chocolate. Or may be both. What say??

No chapter on weddings (too many details and dresses to be described, which is way beyond me) will wrap up with the epilogue - what would that be - wait for the weekend

Wanting more. Will always be

Love
N

Ps. Typed from my mobile, ignore typos.


Dear Nalini,

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love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

nynu bangaram🤗

res

gave a quick read 😛..but I just loved it esp sunny had his eyes for swara before kavita..that was master stroke sweety 👏.😳.will revert for a detailed one, hitting off bed right now

love
lucky


Nynu..🤗🤗

Spice of life ..❤️

Let me start with titles ..How do manage to get those ..to the T for each chapter..👍🏼that definitely makes your writings / works much more special ..and quotes..I cant thank you and I wont as well ..I don't like breaking rules often😆 ..Rumi..How much I love them and its all bcos of you .🤗 I had no clue who he was and your quotes at start of every chapter, that's one more special thing which I love about your writings ..They carry so much depth and ,meaning ..⭐️👏👏 and apt ..totally ..⭐️

Ragini - I liked her more ..May be a bit more than swara esp in this update ..I loved how you evolved her character and our awww god LM got his due😆 ..and I so loved her " NO" on joint wedding ..Thank god we are spared at least here ..and that bit about vixen and tail..lol 😆..thats was awesome ra ..😳

and that bit between sanskaar and ragini ..they are always cool together ..and now comes my fav part ..Soul mate ..I think of DTPH whenever that concept comes into mind but now its swasan mostly .😳.and like I said what a master stroke and such a beautiful one ⭐️.Anjan gupta and swara .. god ..I would have never ever thought ..such a pleasant and lovely bit it was and swara's lines at last .😊.I loved everything about the scene

I loved how you explored equation between 4 leads ..in such an outstanding way making it lovely read

A befitting ending to such a sweet deal..Can it get more sweeter?? but with a bit of spice and I so loved this treat..😉

Love
Lucky


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Posted: 9 years ago
Lucky🤗
Post 1400 for you😊

Wil reply, once I get time with my laptop - hate doing it from my iPad

Loads of love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Nynu..🤗🤗

Spice of life ..❤️

Let me start with titles ..How do manage to get those ..to the T for each chapter..👍🏼that definitely makes your writings / works much more special ..and quotes..I cant thank you and I wont as well ..I don't like breaking rules often😆 ..Rumi..How much I love them and its all bcos of you .🤗 I had no clue who he was and your quotes at start of every chapter, that's one more special thing which I love about your writings ..They carry so much depth and ,meaning ..⭐️👏👏 and apt ..totally ..⭐️

Lucky - I am so thrilled that you love the titles - as I mentioned I have a fetish for the tittles and accompanying quotes and spent quite some time on them. In fact, I find it difficult to draft the chapter itself in the absence of a title (which is quite eccentric, I agree, but then that is how things are 😆). So when anyone says they love the titles, I am thrilled beyond words😳😳

Ragini - I liked her more ..May be a bit more than swara esp in this update ..I loved how you evolved her character and our awww god LM got his due😆 ..and I so loved her " NO" on joint wedding ..Thank god we are spared at least here ..and that bit about vixen and tail..lol 😆..thats was awesome ra ..😳

Ragini - I am never tired of saying how fascinating I find Ragini and how disgusted I am with how the CVs shaped up her character. So I guess that spills over into my tale, which in spite of being a SwaSan tale, has a very strong Ragini. Which is why I had her say no to a joint wedding - Swara is too selfless and Sanskaar does not care even if it was one of those "saamukha vivaha" as long he was getting married to Swara.
That vixen bit - a twist and take off on the telugu idiom - vaadu adrushtavantudu - nakka tokka tuki vachedu - guess it is not prevalent in other languages. You got it.👏


and that bit between sanskaar and ragini ..they are always cool together ..and now comes my fav part ..Soul mate ..I think of DTPH whenever that concept comes into mind but now its swasan mostly .😳.and like I said what a master stroke and such a beautiful one ⭐️.Anjan gupta and swara .. god ..I would have never ever thought ..such a pleasant and lovely bit it was and swara's lines at last .😊.I loved everything about the scene

Ragini and Sanskaar - even Amma used to like their friendship in the early days (which I actually never saw) but the glimpses that I got, I felt it was a beautiful one before it was completely ruing with that molestation accusation.🤢 I just could not let that friendship die here.
And that Anjan Gupta / Sanskaar noticing Swara that day, feeling a connect and yet unable to do anything about it - nice twist, right? He carried that secret for so long, so much so that he must have recognised her the first time he saw her in the bakery and this time decided to act. He left that note for her and the rest, you know😉
Swara and Sanskaar know each other so well, both have different theories about love and soul mates but agree that they are meant to be together.

I loved how you explored equation between 4 leads ..in such an outstanding way making it lovely read

A befitting ending to such a sweet deal..Can it get more sweeter?? but with a bit of spice and I so loved this treat..😉

It is reading such compliments that make my day and make me glad that I took a chance to write and post this story.🤗☺️🤗☺️🤗☺️🤗☺️🤗

Love
Lucky



Dear Lucky,

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love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Lucky🤗

Post 1400 for you😊

Wil reply, once I get time with my laptop - hate doing it from my iPad

Loads of love,
Nyna


wow... 😛😛 congo on 1400 posts ..aha emi na bhagya mu😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nynu 🤗🤗

When do you plan to post the epilogue...😊😳. Waiting eagerly. As I said before, I'm literally drooling imagining what delectable title you would have chosen. 😉 The sweetest deal of all, to round off sweet deals? 😊

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Nynu 🤗🤗

When do you plan to post the epilogue...😊😳. Waiting eagerly. As I said before, I'm literally drooling imagining what delectable title you would have chosen. 😉 The sweetest deal of all, to round off sweet deals? 😊

Loads of Love

Viji


Dear Viji,

Epilogue over the weekend - now you have me really worried I just hope it lives up to the expectations

Loads of love,
Nyna

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